/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Would anyone get horny with a finished version of this? If so i guess my work is done here

Also any tips/critiques highly appreciated

>>2588519
Wtf is wrong with her eyes?
Nice sketch though.

>>2588500
uninteresting pov and very little sex appeal. looks more like a concept art drawing than a nsfw centered illustration. if you want to draw hot stuff get the viewer closer to the action and emphasize what is erotic about the human figure and the act of sex.

>>2588519
as I said in the other thread, learn to draw if you want to make appealing porn or art in general. what you are showing here is complete garbage.

>>2588538
Yeah i'm working on anatomy studies. Some day anon, some day

some quick doodles

>>2588543
Those are nice.
How long did it take?

>>2588543
CUTE
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the arms are kind of big tho, but you seems to make them work so I'll assume it's part of your style, also the left girl's face is off

>>2588500
>inb4 you dont know your fundamentals

>>2588543
nice stuff, but if you don't want to be labeled a pedo start drawing a tad smaller heads and longer torsos.

>>2588559
if you know that already, then why are you posting this crap?

>>2588581
Post your work

>>2588553
30-40 minutes

>>2588556
thanks bud, yeah rushed some stuff

>>2588580
don't care about being labelled anything lol, I'm posting on 4chan. non-anonymous people like joël jurion, norasuko and fdseason have done toddlercon and never got in trouble

>>2588651
kill yourself

>>2588652
it was a douchebag way to tell you to get your proportions correct, dumbass. who the fuck cares about your reputation.

>>2588659

You don't need to hold my hand while commenting on my stuff. I won't run away crying because you don't like it.

Are you getting a erection by being all out negative? At least people here are trying to put money where their mouth is. Even when showing mediocre stuff. They know they have a long way to go.

Either show your superior artistic skill and prove you are better or stop being aggressive cunt. All bark no bite.

>>2588659
I don't think he meant that though, those proportions aren't that off, and I wasn't talking about myself, just making a point

>>2588559
>>2588671
hey, don't waste your time on /ic/ trolls. here's what I can say about your art: the first impression I get is it looks overworked and stiff. you obviously know your anatomy, but here you should be focusing on making a solid image, not showing off what you know. it's experience and practice that'll make you improve in the end, so I'd recommend experimenting and doing multiple poses/gestures before settling on one and rendering that. flat colours are fine, but in this case somewhat unnecessary. your line work is good overall, but as I said before you overwork small details like fingers, ears, nails with virtually no line weight, look at the way doxy or incase draw hands, they're getting good material done in a short amount of time. lastly about anatomy, the face and neck look very awkward and unsettling. it's a weird mix of loomis-like correct anatomy and generic manga. if it's a style you wish to pursue, then go ahead but at least try to make it unique, and maybe avoid those 90s anime eyes and eyebrows. proportions are stylized in a way that I can see people finding attractive, not to my taste but here are some things I can point out: the arme lacks the curves it should have, the left boob should be visible and the shoulder looks out of place. the collarbones also look weird.

hope this was helpful

>>2588703

I'm not the guy who you posted a critique at. Got into a thread to see what is up and this guy pushed my buttons. From time to time I forget this is 4chan and social media in general.

>>2588559
You should look at: >>2588543

His work isn't finished but he deals better with the arms and "ass-showing" poses. His look much more dynamic as well. Despite both or your anatomy being off, there is more life in what he does.
Also the way you drew her torso is wrong. Where is her second shoulder? Where is her other boob? What is that white line between two pink areas? What is that pink bulge that isn't a shoulder? What.

>>2588671
how about no

>>2588708
then stop posting meaningless posts, moron. maybe also get a job or something.

>>2588580

>>2588757
MODS!

>>2588519
the eyes are terrifying but i could fap to this

>>2588559
something about dat ass seems off

thanks for the feedback guys

>>2588519
lazily painted it. It's meh

>>2589441
learn muscle attachment and stop pillow shading. the pectoral muscle attaches to the forearm underneath the bicep and the forms are badly defined because you don't know how to define the correct shadows.

>>2589453
it was shit before you painted it and I must say this is even shittier now. instead of polishing a turd, you managed to smear all of our faces. bravo.

>>2589441
learn muscle attachment and stop pillow shading. the pectoral muscle attaches to the forearm underneath the bicep and the forms are badly defined because you don't know how to use light and shadows.

>>2589453
this was already a pile of shit before you colored it and I must say it is even shittier now. instead of polishing a turd, you managed to smear it on all of our faces. bravo.

Rough blocking a muscle doge. Ain't no Loomis though.

>>2589513
>pillow shading

futa commission

>>2589513
do not listen to this idiot.

>>2588500
This looks as if the viewer was just awkwardly standing there uninvolved which makes it look more like a storyboard panel than anything.
If you want some atmosphere and intimacy to it, you should use fancy tricks like dynamic perspective, closer point of view or those curtains to flow around your composition to your advantage. Just sayin'.

>>2589570
Not him, but could you point out what you disagree with about that comment, or are you just an armchair critic?

>>2589604
There's no pillow shading. Calling the other artist's attempt shit etc etc shit etc etc. Nothing but negativity. I know, this is /ic/, have a thick skin.MUH UNFILTERED HONESTY.

It's pure shit posting and of no use whatsoever.

>>2589648
>There's no pillow shading.
you dear retard, have no idea what you are talking about. the pillow shading might not be evident because there are some spots that are properly addressed, like her boob, but the shading on her face and butt is fucking horrible. this person clearly has no idea how to properly give 3d form with shading. NO IDEA.
I mean, fucking look at that bicep there. it's like it's half an inch in thickness.
this is a clear example of BADLY polished turd.

grow some fucking balls you poor delicate flower. also gtfo and kill yourself in the process maybe.

>>2589648
Yea, sure. This nigger just decided to have 4+ light sources, not a pillow shading at all.

Give me a break.

>>2589658
finally someone that is not a complete idiot. god bless you anon.

>>2588500
OP, I don't think scat is allowed in /ic/. Just so you know.

>>2589693
haha fag, it's allowed.

>>2588659
> Tells someone to change something so anon doesn't get labeled pedo
> Goes on saying it doesn't have anything to do with others opinions about said work
Way to shoot yourself in the foot there fuckwad. If no one but your faggot ass cares about that, then your opinion means jack shit.

>>2589946
this style looks really familiar
blog?

>>2589658
The one on the left is just you nitpicking one area where the indentation of the shoulder and arm is wonky, you know exactly what is going on with the shoulder what they're trying to do, the light source is obviously coming from above and the right.
That is not pillowshading at all but inaccurate shadows on the form, you're just being spiteful.
>>2589692
>god bless you anon
Really? Are you replying to yourself?

>>2589648
You're right, but forget the faggot, don't get so offended by the shitposting, it's what he wants. And yes you're right, that's not pillowshading, pic related is. What's wrong about >>2589441 is the lack of surface distribution with the shadows, making them look plain and flat, and he needs better color theory knowledge, as the same warm-ish colors makes it the drawing look muddy. I know how many people love muh render style of art, but unless you have a better understanding of proper render shading, using cel shading would make for a better approach.

not quite sure what I'm doing
the whole refining process has been a struggle

i've desperately been trying to tweak this so the girl doesn't look like a loli. she's just smol

>>2589952
he just mocked him for drawing heads that are too big. and he's not wrong. stop projecting, dumbass.

>>2589958
>Really? Are you replying to yourself?
oh wow, stop being so butthurt, just because you don't know jackshit about what it means to draw self shading and cast shadows, bumbass.
on this piece of shit artwork there are areas that are addressed correctly (even though the lighting is all over the place as the other anon correctly pointed out already) and areas that are pillow shaded. please, just stop posting, I am feeling only pity for you, seriously.

>>2589963
your biggest problem is line confidence. do a lot of gesture drawing if you want to improve that. secondly learn to draw hands.

>>2589965
How about you stop defending when someone asks something, implying everyone thinks the same, bitch. If unless you're a fucking newfag, >>2588543 is hardly anything "loli", not everything 18+ is amazon woman proportioned, that's fine as is.

>>2589991
And between real life, things can get more dynamic and stylized.

>>2589991
MODS!

>>2589991
kek at the bow

>>2589441
I don't agree with the other anon who says you are "pillow shading". How ever, try adding some color to your lines as well, and get rid of that very dark rectangle in the background or make it another color (try pink or something). Right now it's stealing all the darkest values from the figure.

>>2589991
his proportions are off. heads and arms too big and torsos too short. that's all there is to that.

>>2589992
muh style argument and fucking beginners. just go die in a fire, tardo.

>>2590010
pillow shading is the result of not having a firmly defined light setup in the scene. as this anon pointed out >>2589658 the lights in this artwork are a kekking mess.

>>2590021
> Pillow shading is when one shades from the outline inward. It's called "pillow-shading" because it looks pillowy and undefined.
http://www.thedollpalace.com/forum/doll-creation/18784-what-does-pillow-shading-mean.html

> Pillow shading makes your pixel piece look flat and fake due to the center position of the light source.
http://thepixelpalace.deviantart.com/journal/IJ-Pixel-Shading-Dithering-and-Pillow-Shading-335733411

As >>2589958 and I >>2589962 fucking stated. Stop misusing terms you don't fucking understand.

>>2589979
Is this a put on? Are you merely trolling?
I hope so because I can't imagine someone being so pathetic.

>51replies
>22posters
It's you isn't it, many of the posts are in a very similar style to yours.

gotta love the friendly environment
thanks for the feedback again, i will keep it in mind for pic related

>>2590074
Stop drawing anime. Start drawing gestures, grind fundamentals. I am sick and tired of the same cookie cutter crap that is regurgitated with no creativity.

>>2590074
stiff symbol driven crap.
>>2590083
this, this, this, and once more this.

>>2590054
and what makes somebody pillow shade? not understanding how to setup lights correctly, which is anon's main problem. using soft shades not adhering to one main light source is what makes the shading look like it's pillow shaded.

>>2590057
kill yourself already, butthurt princess.

>>2590083
It's time to grow up, Great Grandpa. The Renaissance Era has long since passed now.
>>2590133
> and what makes somebody pillow shade? not understanding how to setup lights correctly
Exactly. But pillow shading is not "improper shading", it's specifically just "shading around the borders of a image". If you fucking knew that from drawing/spriting for years and lurked more on the damned internet, you'd know no actual artist use the term pillow shading as improper shading.
Fuck off smartass, and fucking do your homework.

>>2590157
>It's time to grow up, Great Grandpa. The Renaissance Era has long since passed now.
it's not about the theme. it's about not having good enough fundamentals such as gesture which imo that anon lack most. and instead being stuck with symbol drawing and not understanding what the fuck they are doing.

>Fuck off smartass, and fucking do your homework.
sorry for rustling your jimmies, armchair critic.

I lost my passion about art a couple months ago with the increase of my depression and got very lost thinking about what I like to draw (was trying to gitgud to do MtG stuff but never had the courage to approach ADs) so I thought "why not start doing some nsfw stuff"...
The money is very much welcome but I still don't know if I should focus on naked pinups or explicit stuff. The theme will be fan art obviously.
Advices are welcome.

>>2590083
Not everyone wants to be the next JJ, senpai
We all have different goals desu
How is it stiff though? Mind doing a redline?

>>2590169
A redline will not help you, how about you show us some 2 minute gesture drawings.

>>2590189
Not that anon but the burden of proof is on you, nigga

>>2590165
> it's about not having good enough fundamentals such as gesture which imo that anon lack most.
As apposed to me making that comment specifically towards the "Stop drawing anime" part, you're correct about the above green text. But instead of shilling /ic/'s shit opinion of "Stop drawing anime" like the faggots this board is plagued with, you could be more useful and link >>2590074 to the appropriate thread here >>2589666.
I'm convinced it's the same horsefucker samefagging throughout this thread just to talk shit without posting his work without going "I can't because I'll get doxxed", instead of actually being useful.

>>2590166
First things first, do what you like to do is the obvious answer. If you like titty pin ups, do titty pin ups, and vice versa for whatever your preferences are. As for your work, you at least got average knowledge of body structure, at least lower body wise, for the normies a good focal point area as well. If you do at least as decent as your pic shows, you'll have a basic following especially pandering to the fanfags. Just clean up your work and study shit you don't have a clue on, and you're good.

>>2590209
Thanks m8! Been drawing fantasy and sci-fi stuff for the sake of "breaking in the industry" for so long that I started to question what I really like to draw....
I'll give it a shot on both sides and see what happens...

>>2590326
your lineart is still very flat anon. do more gesture training. try to build your shapes being as spontaneous as possible instead of trying to be as clean as possible. that's what you are doing wrong.

>>2590366
Stop projecting.

>>2590326
Why not just animate it

>>2590366
I'll keep that in mind, thanks.
>>2590384
I had thought about that when I got this far. But I was going for a manga-eque approach initially.

>>2590373
Stop using memes to convey your anger.

>>2590684
Just because someone told you to do 2 minute gesture drawings does not mean you lash out at someone else stop projecting.

Some stuff I'm working on.

>>2590724
I can fap to this. Floater girls tits are too round though.

>>2589991
What's this from?

>>2590726

She obviously zero-gravity'd them so they'll stay perky forever

>>2590373
why so butthurt?
don't you think what I said is true?
clean lineart comes with practice, not with time spent on a single pic. always remember that.

>>2590724
stop copying symbols and learn some fundamentals. your lineart is insecure and your construction and perspective are very poor. instead of trying to mimic someone else, try to improve your technique and develop your own style by doing that.

>>2589697
Wrong, I don't allow it. Eat shit (don't).

>>2589992
The last three look seriously retarded

Tips and pointers to particularly weak spots would be appreciated.

>>2590915
I really like it, great style.

>>2590917
hahaha, my sides

>>2590920
It's the highest quality of all the OC posted in thread so far at the very least.

>>2590917
>>2590926
Thank you! I'm a learning artist, and my work still has a lot of flaws, and if any one can help me pin some of them down that would be great!

I'm happy to hear you like it though, makes me feel like I'm on the right path.

>>2590074
Is that sonic girl?

i am causing a pornography to occur

>>2590926
not that I agree, but this proves what exactly? all art in this thread is shit for the exception of 2 or maybe 3 pics.
calling good something that is mediocre is one thing. saying great style after seeing a sketch is another.

>>2590933
normie dickbrains can't distinguish good art from mediocre one. as an artist I say you have potential, but your line confidence needs to be improved. you are on the right track, just grind that gesture and especially try to draw more realistic stuff. symbol driven anime furry shit gives you close to zero challenge. try to avoid that if you are still learning and you seriously want to get good. start form realism building your way up to stylization and don't take shortcuts. they are a bad thing in the long run.

Crits?

>>2591016
Aw shit, forgot to shrink, sorry.

>>2591021
dude, you don't need crits on this. it's a boring but competent naked mysteriously missing a lower leg. it's fine. go draw something else

>>2591016
do more gesture and try more dynamic poses and povs. this pose is really boring.

>>2591016
hips too high, her belly-button area looks like a stab wound, the half-drawn leg's thigh is too large in comparison to the one facing the viewer. The "highlight" on the nipple looks like a white pimple or a tiny ghost that's trying to float away. Also I would not guess it was PB without the filename.

>>2590915
Tried fixing some of the perspective flaws, not sure how I did.

>>2591016
Draw the other leg?

>>2589991

At roughly what age does the human female turn into a house plant? And back again?

>>2591319
According to that graph at rougly 35

>>2590166

>>2591191
is he bleeding from dick?

>>2591520
nah, I just used pink to outline the cum

>>2589957
its bbc chan he knows he cant hide, he once said he would leave but he knows he cant.
>>2589946
why dont you interact with us anymore? you need to grow a backbone you wuss so what that you got doxxed its not like your life was ruined grow up.

>>2590080
saved

>>2589958
>Are you replying to yourself?
Good question. The answer is no.

>nitpicking one area
Nah, it's a fundamental mistake. You don't put a cast shadow directly against the light source.
Stop posting until you'll have learned what a goddamn plane is.

Just looking for critique on the linework.

>>2591998
Stiff at, back to beginner thread

>>2591998
Well, besides what you asked, >>2592006 has a point. But as for the linework, One, avoid using absolute black colors for lineart as it makes the art look dead, especially the thicker it is. Unless you go for manga styled work >>2590391, then ignore that unless you prefer to not use black. Two, use thinner lines the further away things are from the foreground and thicker the closer the object appears. But above all else, just keep from cluttering the artwork with your lines to keep it readable, as is it's kinda a mess.

>>2591613
go die in a fire

>>2591998
please in the future don't have your background at such a close value to what you used for your lines. It takes way too much strained effort to try and decipher what is going on here.

>>2592115
Apologies.

>>2592037
>>2592006
I'd have to ask exactly what you mean by "Stiff at" The color is inconsequential and intend to change when I get to coloring it. I suppose the designs are slightly complex but thank you.

>>2592186
not the anon who said you were stiff but the eyes look like they arent part of the face the nose bridge is high in compairison to the eyes, and the pose of the girl doing the eating looks stiff , by stiff i think he means the back looks too straight,there is no looseness to the pose. those are things i see about it anyways.

lmfao pray for me

>>2592347
Good art, characters could be a little cuter but that's just my taste. Tbh anal worship is great. I'm partial to the works of Shoripurin and Noill and Nitrotitan for that reason, myself.

Also, are shotes acceptable in this board? Not like, super-shote but... Y'know. :^)

>>2590859
>copying symbols, no fundamentals, insecure line art, very poor construction and perspective.
Guess I'm not gonna make it. Feels bad man.

Thanks for the input.

I'm on a trashy kick at the moment. How's this style looking?

>>2592458
based on what I see here, I'd say you need a few more years of good practice if you want to come at least close to making it.

>>2592460
too obvious you are trying to exaggerate style to hide bad anatomy and perspective knowledge. your gesture and painting stylization are both stiff and insecure. this is what gives you off.

>>2592460

>>2592458
The colors and style look very unappealing to me, but that's more of a personal taste. Aside from that, I think you're actually well on your way to make it. Maybe just study some unironically good artists for color and technique, 'cause no one in their right mind would stroke it to this.

>>2592590
They lacks fundamentals in lineart and perspective most of all. Coloring should be their last concern imo.

here is mine!

>>2592529
could you elaborate further? I'm probably just blind but I can't really see what I'm doing wrong here.

I tried doing a quick anatomy sketch without reference to see what I'm doing wrong but I can't pick out any major inaccuracies.

>>2592631
Not him, but I don't get the feeling that there is a skeleton underneath. Pay more attention to skeletal landmarks like humerus epicondyles. On the left thigh you missed sartorius muscle completely, the muscle which creates an important separation of the thigh form. You would never do that if you knew about muscle origin and insertions.
>tl;dr: Don't guess anatomy.

>>2592648
...don't pay attention to the question marks, I thought it's a fucked up anterior view - my bad.
The rest still stands though.

>>2592653
thanks m8. I'll do more studies with your advice in mind.

relevant to the thread

>>2593094
stop stealing and making public stuff that is behind paywalls, scumbag.

me again, cc would be appreciated

>>2593212
nice line confidence. construction so so. perspective is pretty bad.

also, is this firez lol?

>>2593213
yeah just noticed that, thanks

and no I'm not firez

>>2593202
its in his HF shitbag

>>2590080
beautiful

>>2593213
How could you mistake this guy for firez. Looks nothing like his.

Is there just one guy in this thread just telling everyone to learn "fundamentals"?

I came here because I'm new and thought I could read some other people's criticism to learn from it but half the thread is some tard namedropping the fundamentals over and over.

Could someone tell me what the fundamentals even are? Sounds awfully ambiguous.

>>2593261
It's shite.
It's virtual flag waving.
It's a meme

>>2593219
expressions on the faces are the same almost lifeless dolls ones.

>>2593267
fundamentals aren't a meme, tardo.

>>2593280
It isn't, but it's shilled like one. This is what makes people avoid learning valuable shit, faggots being autistic and pissing people off.

>>2593427
That is a bit too "stylized" my dude.


If I were you, I'd go work on my fundamentals.

i have a lot of trouble with stiff/flat poses, but at the same time i find that if i don't draw things from a certain perspective i can't show everything i want to. does anyone have some advice as how to get around this? should i draw things more zoomed in, maybe? ive noticed a lot of my drawings try to encompass the entire subject and maybe that makes it look weird.

>>2593395
sure sure
then you get posts like this one >>2593427 and what would you like me to do? a redline? redraw everything from scratch? explain him how to draw?
people that post pieces of shit like this will never understand a redline or an in-depth explanation about what they should improve. all they have to do is FUCKIGN. LEARN. THEIR. FUNDAMENTALS.

and after that we can only begin to talk how to make appealing porn.

do you fucking get it?

>>2593602
> and what would you like me to do?

>>2593427
See >>2590589
There. Now you've made your point that these faggots need to get back to the damn beginner thread where they belong without sounding like a completely high Omnipotent cockmongolar. It's literally in the fucking sticky.
This is how to be more useful than you currently are.

>>2593602
> and what would you like me to do?

>>2593484
See >>2590589
There. Now you've made your point that these faggots need to get back to the damn beginner thread where they belong without sounding like a completely high Omnipotent cockmongolar. It's literally in the fucking sticky.
This is how to be more useful than you currently are.

>>2589979
i was sitting here thinking the hands were passable the whole time i was sketching this

but i see now they're not. thanks anon

>>2589992
if this is bait, fine. you got me
just PLEASE tell me you're not actually being serious about those abominations

>>2588500
Hey guys, is it easy to make money on hentai foundry? have any of you tried?
I figure the autism bucks are all there but I don't normally draw porn. I'm not against it though if its lucrative.
Have any of you experience with this?

>>2593670
show a finished piece of yours containing a character, tell me how long did it take you to make it, and I'll tell you how easy it will be for you.

>>2592186
it almost looks like you know what youre doing, and then i have to look at that face

what the hell man

>>2593692
wtf? seriously? the whole pic is the same level of shit as that face. please either get glasses or a critical eye.

>>2593670
hentai foundry? son, as long as you're drawing dicks and titties, the money will find you wherever you're posting your porn

no matter how mediocre it is

>>2593703
she draws every single character with that same autism face

>>2593703
bullshit

>>2593712
???? $1k /mo isn't much and worse artists make more than her

>>2593717
>as long as you're drawing dicks and titties, the money will find you wherever you're posting your porn
this is the bullshit part.
sorry anon, but it's not that easy.

>>2593723
oh, well you're right.

>>2593670
Sorry for the late response, I think this would take 5-6 hours for the whole thing. (drawing, lineart, color)
Thanks for helping. I can do backgrounds too but don't have an example quite in this style, I can post one in a minute.

>>2593703
I'm kind of worried that that's not the case. Somebody told me something similar about selling prints at comicon ("as long as youre drawing their waifu/husbandon they'll buy it") and I didn't do very well selling. (nobody else did either, however, was kind of a shitty con)

>>2593775
Here's one with a background but no color. I think a picture like this with color would take 15 hours, but mostly because of the weird camera angle. If it was more of a head-on illustration it would probably shave off like 3 hours.

>>2593484
If you want your poses to be less stiff throw in more tilt (see: contrapasto). Have limbs doing more stuff instead of being so static. Practice gesture. Experiment with composition and stuff. And I guess according to everyone, check sticky.

>>2592631
Definitely lacks good structure (think in tubes/boxes, see sticky, bridgman, vilppu, etc). The pinch at joints is usually too much. Also, shading is too wishy-washy. Needs definite shadow groups and separation between the dark/light before you go in for details (see frazetta, rubens, caravaggio, etc.). Did a quick redline, hopefully it helps some.

>>2590950
Woah, I think I maybe mistaking you for someone else, but you've been one of my biggest inspirations since I was in middle school! I didn't realize you browsed /ic/!

Also, I love your foreshortening in the top right panel.

>>2593775
>>2593784
You have good potential. Start putting together some finished pieces and while doing that try to make your linework and colors a bit more refined with less unnecessary details and focusing on what makes porn appealing and hot, like interesting poses, close ups and exaggerated perspective. You definitely can aim for a commissions based porn career.

>>2593775
Not bad m8, you could definitely make it. This is very rough around the edges though, makes it look kinda amateurish. Make up your mind about whether you want to keep the line work or go for painting instead. Unless you refine your technique, this hybrid style won't take you very far.

Did some late-night indie game lewds; it's nice getting to be a little more expressive.

>can't get off to own porn because of glaring mistakes

it's an uphill battle

crit please

>>2594427
Chickenscratch/10

>>2594427
>having breasts and a dick
Fix your anatomy, also your linework is terrible

getting attacked in the pooper

>>2594671
This would be great if not for the gross prolapsed anus

>>2592460
This is hot. Blog?

>>2594671
>...and then she farts!

>>2594674
It's great FOR the prolapsed anus :^)

>>2593941
thanks a million, this is actually super helpful. i will definitely start working on gesture more

>>2594006
>>2594055
Awesome, thanks guys! I will give it a try.
Yeah, you are both right about it needing to be cleaned up, I'll work on being less sloppy. I'll work on those things and I'll try and figure out a more refined style.

>>2594697
My blog is very linked to who I am. I'd rather not share it here.

Posted this in the princess thread but didn't get much response. Is this anatomy an improvement on before?

>>2595225
you should really learn some proper perspective and how does that affect muscles placement on a body. your anatomy is pretty much shit atm.

>>2594097
that looks very nice!

>>2595274
this is the thread you want to go to >>2590589

>>2595274
If you haven't traced those tits, then you need to spend more time learning everything else about the human anatomy, aka >>2595360

>>2594427
Study some anatomy and think more about structure and form (think using tubes/boxes). The leg coming towards the viewer seems especially flat. Forearms and hand seem small to me. Try incorporating more convex lines to give a sense of volume. Hopefully redline helps some.

>>2595225
I guess I can tell that most of the parts of anatomy are there, it lacks decent definition or proportion. Your shading needs to have more contrast. Right now it's pretty nebulous, do studies of higher contrast painters (frazetta, old masters, etc.) if you want to improve that. Anatomy in legs needs an especially large amount of work.

>>2595225

Guy that asked for your blog here.

The anatomy in this is a bit of a step down from the other pic you have in this thread. Both are obviously stylized, but in order to add your own spin on something. You have to first understand it. Study anatomy a bit more and familiarize yourself with the landmarks of the body and where muscles "should" go. Studies in perspective and gesture drawing will also help you with more interesting poses.

>>2589946
My favourite image on /ic/.

>>2592631
Arms too short. Torso too small. Unnatural bump to resting shoulder muscles. Belly button too low. Too much top curve to forearms.

The crook/elbows of the arms generally are at about belly button height, and the wrist is at about the crotch with the fingertips about mid thigh.

>>2596333
>>2593949
>>2592631
you all got it wrong
no worries . blueline senpai is here

>>2596366
you might have addressed some anatomy issues, but in the process you butchered his exaggerated sylization.

any crit before i polish and add bg?

>>2596680
>that foot

>>2596680
learn some perspective. you really lack in this department.

>>2588500
I did work too hard in this one.

>>2596680
Reference

>>2596382
His exaggerated stylization wasn't appealing because of the anatomy issues. Now that he has guidelines, he can make it look better than it did.

>>2596680
The breasts are really awful and looks mended to the flesh.

The back looks pointy and stuff with the pelvis going in an opposite direction.

The anus is symbol drawing and her feet looks like clubs.

What was your skeleton sketch for this? I really like to see it.

>>2589946
bouta swooce right in

Dont worry shes 1000+ years old or whatever.

>>2589946
Only issue I have with this is that it kind of looks like the guy isn't going to dick her in the butt but go right past her.

>>2597733
good artist but awful human being. shame.

>>2597733

MODS

>>2597733
>>2597942
Sorry anon, loli is against rules on this board; even for art

>>2598058
This board went to shit.

>>2597942
Is season teals disciple?

>>2598066
Season is teal's friend, they seem close enough, not sure if he is who you are replying to or if he is a disciple of teal..

>>2597922
>awful human being
why?

>>2598066
>>2598081
Who is teal?

>>2598095
better than 98% of /ic/

>>2598084
Season is a legit pedophile and faps to little kids he sees on YouTube

>>2598109
that drawing is not by season, dude.

>>2598109
>little kids he sees on YouTube
thats not illegal though

>>2597922
because child porn is cancer.

>>2598112
Woops

Still u heard it here first. Season gets off on drugged kiddies and legit children

>>2598126
hope he gets help.

>>2598128
Me too but I wouldn't be surprised if he's already pulled some nasty shit

>>2598119
>implying its not just a matter of time before it becomes accepted as faggots and transgenders

>>2598139

>implying fags and transqueers are 'accepted'

in 70 years when all the 90s kids are near dead then sure

Woo, 4chan stopped being a cunt and allowed me to post again, yay.
>>2590080
>>2590950
>>2594097
Glad to see we're alive and kicking.

R8 plz

this was something I made for my s/o

Just wanna know what /ic/ thinks of it. First time submitting.

pls be gentle.

>>2598745

>>2598745
>wolf ears
haha really

>>2598765
why is it bait?

>>2598767
It was on a small fantasy about "little red and the big bad wolf"

It's not that uncommon.

>>2598768
>>2598770
6/10 I actually can't tell if you are retarded or are baiting
Also made me reply twice

>>2598780
Could you at the very least tell me what's wrong with it instead of dicking around?

>>2598785
Her cheeks were as rosey as her blood-red jacket that draped over her pale-white body. We are vampire-like creatures, and our love comes pure (we often draw porn pictures for each other, and we also share a DA account that has a large following). I go in to sniff her peach shampoo as I slide my rugged yet gentlemanly cock into her pink putang. Our cold skin rubs against each other as I thrust my emotionless cock in her throbbing body and begin to break a sweat.
MMM…..UHNNNNN….
As I felt a warm body for the first time contrasted by the coldness of the sweat, my animalistic nature started to arise. I felt tingling sensations all over my body until I noticed that my eyes had turned red from bloodlust, and my ears had changed into a wolves.
But more beautiful than that was the dimness yet brightness that engulfed the sky. God must have used shit tons of color-dodge on this day since it seemed to effortlessly float in the fucking sky. He knows me though… because as silver as the edge of my cock, the sky was colored immaculately in grey. My immediate impulse after having spent the night alone and howling in my new werewolf body was to post my art on the place where everything about this image is fucking hated.

>>2598806
this is amazing

>>2598139
>matter of time
>what is "NAMBLA"

>>2594097
Decided to do another one for kicks; does anyone have tips on making these kinds of poses read better?

>>2598964
different line weight, more light/shadow division.

>>2599040
>Classic May.
Someone has good taste.

>>2598806
>speaking in the language of the artist
this is next level critique

>>2599244
>pillow shading

>>2599040
are you doing colors on the same layer as lines?
the little white bits you've missed everywhere look pretty bad.

>>2598806
Only place (I know of) I can come to post my art without revealing who I am and you want to be a dick about it. Thanks for the "criticism" at least.

>>2598095
Teal line guy, IIRC. He does some pretty good redlines (well teallines) and tutorials. Look him up on google, he's what brought me to this board.

>>2599287
I kinda like it. It could use more color + value definition and you're lacking at dynamic shading. Don't get distracted by the possibilities of digital media and focus on improving your fundamental skills, maybe drop the stylization for a few months until you can juggle the basics with confidence. I like it though, subject is just a matter of taste.

>>2599282
it was on separate layer but the base drawing was a pencil sketch scan that I'm too lazy to ink over and just magic wand fill color.

>>2598646
>oh look, somebody that know what they are doing
>zero critique
as always slow clap for /ic/

regarding the artwork. you have solid construction and lineart, but you'll want to work a bit more on dynamic povs and gesture, as the pose here seems pretty stiff and the pov is pretty boring and concept art-ish. keep it up.

>>2589658
You have a point, but most of these light sources are super fucking arbitrary. Do you not know how cast shadows work?

>>2599545
learn what an appealing body looks like. she has the body of an 80 year old hag.

>>2599595
>implying that is not appealing

>>2599627
>not being able to distinguish between deliberate stylization and fucked up bad anatomy.

/aco/ request stuff

>>2598058
clearly not a loli and basically you're fucking retarded. hang yourself faggot

>>2599896
t. pedo

>>2597733
>>2597922
blog/pixiv for the love of god

>>2600048
The dude used to take requests in /a/ drawthreads. Thats all Im going to say.

>>2599545
>elmyra
>futa
something I'd never thought I'd see

>>2600048
go die in a fire sicko

>>2588519
spooky

>>2600075
yep, you definitely have no idea how to do fast spontaneous lineart. your forms are all over the place and the result is bodies that look like shit.

>>2599454
whel.. yes, you are right. I need more dynamic on image.
>povs
what does it mean?

>>2600204
Povs - Point of view
Meaning from your perspective (first person)
As for the image, it looks still and rather unnatural in motion. Her right hand is kinda big.

>>2600204
Her anatomy is all broken. Go and do some studies.

>>2598058
Sorry to burst your bubble, mate. But-

>>2597942
>>2597733
Both of these girls are over 18.

>>2600252
redline

>>2600278
>redline
For reals bruh? I have more important things to do. That's entirely your problem if you cannot see your own mistakes. Allright, here's some more specific critique - her feet are in the wrong angle, the muscle attachment in the pelvic area is way off. The pose looks stiff overall, try to avoid right angles. That's only the obvious stuff, everything else work out by yourself.

>>2600204
You're that dude that goes to random picarto streams asking for this character to be drawn, aren't you?

>>2600422
nope.

>>2600276
yeah, yeah, sure they are, sure they are.
if you like this kind of shit do the world a favor and kill yourself.

>>2600189
well you are one salty fella

is there a way to get your NSFW works appear on tumblr search?

is there a way to get your NSFW works appear on tumblr search? I can't make my stuff appear despite searching with safe search turn off.

>>2600566
salty? why?

>>2600574

Make it gay lol

My second image on photoshop... Or rather, a shitty quick sketch... What can I do to not be horrible?

>>2600632
read the sticky

>>2600632
Learn anatomy and form.

>>2600618
well I post here for fun and constructive criticism. all you say is, it's shit. you don't care to explain, but you care enough to sound like a twat.

>>2600475
cant people just draw whatever they want?

Its all fictional anyway..

>>2600629
it's already is.

>>2600629
it already is

>>2600367
well for starters, her right arm's lines are wrong, it looks like her forearm is behind the sholder, when it's supposed to be in front of it. If you can't see it, I'll do a redline later

>>2597733
...c..crit?

>>2600475
Not him, but stop being so puritan, faggot. The blond chick can get a petite woman pass by me, the ginger however, horseshit.
But as I don't want to agree with the OA of those drawings, it's not fucking real, get over it.

>>2600278
Not that nigger and I can't really redline but I'm just trying to help. I hope my english is decent enough to be understandable
The first thing that I saw is there's some weird shit going on with that right arm. It seems kinda broken imo because it looks like the forearm is behind the rest of the arm. Also those lines it her right hand's palm don't really make sense.
The right leg looks out of place, in that it shouldn't be so visible from that angle. It seems as though it's way longer that the left one, and the right foot is too long also
Other than that, and the left foot being faced too much to the left, I suppose the rest is fine. I like her dress thing

>>2588500
>pls rate but no hate
>in /ic/
It´s sad. We should ask /h/, of course, but they don´t allow works there unless you´re a jap.
You better off asking /i/ or /b/.

>>2600075
You def have some nice skills involving gesture and nice fluent lines... But despite "muh stylization", the proportions are just too messed up, it ruins the overall impression and the attractiveness.

>>2600627
>mfw still no blog

>>2600959
gtfo dickbrain

>>2600819
exactly what I said, but he's too much of a delicate flower to get it.

>>2600618
oh, you got butthurt because I wasn't nice? I think you'll have to grow a bit of a thicker skin if you want to survive here, dude.

>all you say is, it's shit
o rly?
>>2600189
>you definitely have no idea how to do fast spontaneous lineart. your forms are all over the place and the result is bodies that look like shit.
so you basically skipped everything in front of "look like shit"?
seriously buddy, stop polishing turds, gtfo to the beginners thread and come back once you learn what human anatomy is and how to properly construct with gesture. and if you don't care about improving I suggest you to move to a board that doesn't have critique in its name.

>>2600670
as long as you keep it away from the public, you can draw whatever you want, my dear child lover.

>>2600970

>>2600970
yes sir, Kylo Ren, sir

>>2600145
come on, he obviously didn't post here for critiques, and everybody knows who teal and season are, I really like his style and would like to see more

>>2600959
Pretty sure that's keppok

>>2601177
No, it's not. I recognize those construction lines. That drawfag has stayed anonymous for the entire time he's posted here. First time I saw his work was in /v/ drawthreads.

>>2600959
http://watatanza.tumblr.com/

>>2601235
Praise Be

>>2600970

I can't believe the level of Dunning–Kruger you guys are gettin'

>>2601618
this probably coming from a complete scrub a.k.a. 90% of /ic/

>filename says screenshot because the original image would uploade sideways (despite being right-side-up on my phone)

Behold Cockrocket. I've been drawing on and off for a little while. Randomly had the motivation to draw a dick blasting off to space. Enjoy.

>>2601592
we really should make another internet rule

rule 34.1
>If it exists there is a dick version of it

>>2601635
See rule 63

>>2601592

gtfo to >>2600280 already

>>2598964

I really like this. Looks like you're using a mouse though?

>>2601651
or what? you hire a merc_wip to hunt down my ass?

>>2601931
no it's going to be merc_finished and you bet your ass he's going to wip the floor with you

>>2601954
dayum

>>2601931
I'll just keep stating how bad your art is until you'll give up posting or actually do something to improve.

>>2589946
>SATAN GUIDE MY COCK

>>2602078
I think drawing is a pretty good way to improve. also you seem much more butthurt than me.

>>2600574
Did you just start posting? I had a slight delay before my posts started showing up in the search and apparently it's not that uncommon to happen.

>>2602120
sure, buddy. drawing is the ONLY way to improve. but your art really has nothing to do in this thread. that's all I'm saying. first learn to draw if you want to draw something as demanding as porn. so, again, beginners thread, chop chop.

>>2602197
please provide a sample of your work. I am pretty sure you have nothing to contribute, but I am curious of what kind of excuse you will come up with.

>>2602223
don't want to get my art linked to my asshole attitude here on 4chan. I am here mostly to vent.

>>2602254
well at least you're being honest. but why so miserable?

>>2602262
not miserable at all. just trying to vent in a productive manner. that is bashing or opening the eyes of people with dunner kruger syndrome.

>>2602254
Holy shit, this is absolutely pathetic.
> I live here on 4chan to shittalk because my life's absolutely shit.
HAHAHAHAHA!

>>2602800
I haven't seen such a retarded attempt at assumption in a long time anon. Did asshole anon bash your art as well? That capital laughing at the end sounds a lot like butthurt.

>>2602846
Naw, just as much shit I've seen posted here on /ic/, that was the most hilarious thing I've ever read. You can't tell me that wasn't pure kekkles.

>>2600204
I usually like elven-type girls but she is just so unappealing. She looks like a dindu

>>2603164
haha, so fucking unappealing

>>2602254
You incredibly pathetic piece of shit.

>>2603240
but you gotta admit, it's fun. don't take everything so serious man

>>2602128
yeah, it was a new tumblr blog. it does come out now.

>>2603529
this is /ic/ and i'm commenting based on that. if he wants to post just for fun, there's /aco/

>>2603488
oh, another buttblasted scrubby.
not gonna make it.

>>2603721
man you're a joke. thinking he's somekind of a gorilla doorkeeper to a super elitelist club.

>>2603818
the funniest part is that /ic is trash, and will never make it.
all good artists here just drop by every 2 weeks or so, post a couple pictures and go back to work.

>>2600999
Why dont you check one of the r34 websites for Big Friendly Giant artwork.. you'll probably find it.

still trying to improve my inking

>>2604035
first try to improve your perspective and gesture.

>>2603818
nah, just throwing reality into your faces.

>>2603855
I'm one of them.

>>2604059
What's wrong with the perspectiv? and the character is just lifting up her skirt, what gesture are you talking about?

>>2604068
>This post.
I love this man.

>>2604109
Please, go back to >>2600280
If you can't judge why that anon mentioned how the perspective (that's not how that works) and how the gesture is shit (it looks stiff and unnatural), then you're not ready for this yet.

>>2604299
Post your flash

>>2604035
>screen tone
>hatching
>airbrushing
Pick one and stick with it if you want to show the skin being flushed, using all three looks bizarre

>>2589992
Over exadurate too much and you´ll crossover into Liefeld territory. Long leg are nice, but the last two ridiculas.

>>2589441

>chin that could cut through diamond

>>2590856

that's enough Maylasia