/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

I'd help you but I hate looking at that guy's face. Methed up jeff goldblum.

>>2578320
Those pores, you asshole.

>>2578316
sorry? seriously get the fuck out if your just going to act stupid

>>2578326
good practice :p

>>2578326
do it faget

>>2578326
Did you get triggered?

i feel like these refs are very bland and not great for study, here's one with a little more oomph

>>2578311
Finally applied perspective to drawing. More like quick doodles and obviously ellipses are wonky but I think I'm getting the hang of it finally

>>2578707

Good pic. Gonna finish it tomorrow

so far so f*cked up... wish Ilya was here to give me some advice...

>>2578778
sauce.

Gotta improve the proportions of the face. Good pratice

Fail

>>2578778
sausage

>>2579751
>>2579504
Stefania.Ferrario

>>2578681
I'm gonna see if I can render this more later. I noticed a little late that his neck is too long.

>>2579701

Keep trying, keep learning, never give up. Enjoy the journey and fuck the poser critics and you´ll be fine.

>>2580038
Sehr gut.

>>2580038
Notice how there's color in the light on his hat -- but the light on his face has no color. This makes the painting look flat. Find more of that yellow in the light on his face to make it more dimensional

>>2579701
no not a fail, just the head shape is off, his chin is flat and has a distinctive jaw line, when doing a study dont go on autopilot you need to think the entire time

>>2578311
This guys reminds me of house

>>2579881
good lord she's captivating

boomp

>>2580471

Bleh desu

>>2583703
faggot detected

quickie before bed

terrible
What should i do get get better? beside practice, you gotta be specific.

finally trying to learn how to draw women, spent an hour before going to bed.
I mostly copied art from a pdf I downloaded, I just tried to tweak a few things

I think my major problem is the face, they seem to harsh and not feminine enough, the eyes are the hardest part and also the shape of the head

>>2584005
focus on drawing instead of painting and start paying more attention to construction, proportions and form.

>>2584038
second one

>>2579500
Hair/face ratio is way off. Either scale up the face or scale down the hair. Colors you used for face are too brown and washed out. Try color picking from the ref, I see a lot more blues/pinks in there.

>>2584039

Is that really the problem? The lips are off center and there's no brow and the lines look shitty, but I feel like the drawing is kind of decent. The rendering makes it look much shittier than it really is.

Bump

>>2584005
youre like half way in between symbol drawing and drawing whats actually there. for example you drew the eyelashes on the bottom eyelid and left some space to show an eyelid should be there, but then you didn't draw the eyelid...

>>2584525
>symbol drawing
can this meme die already

>>2584529
a meme? ur fucking idiotic
>chicken scratch
can this meme die already

>>2584536
nice ad hominen

>>2584529
you know what i meant nigga. he isnt showing the amount of detail he should be

>>2584559
>>2584529
but he still has a decent grasp of what he's trying to draw. i forget to add

>>2580016

>>2580016
>>2584801
Made me wanna post mine as well.... I know my drawing's off but I was trying to focus on color!

>>2584817
very nice, If have that on my wall.

>>2584039
>>2584058
Ugh we're going nowhere.

>>2584525
Those kind of things are because I'm forgetful instead of thinking with symbols.
I almost forgot the light reflection on the eyes and the highlight on the nose.

>>2584058
>I feel like the drawing is kind of decent.
Is that because you traced it?

>>2584039
Listen to this guy. You won't be able to paint unless you understand how to draw.

I'd recommend starting with black and white drawings so you can understand edges and value.

>>2580016

>>2585165

Did these too fast I think

>>2585558

>>2584200

You colored way better than me bro. :)

>>2585482
oh god muh dick

>>2580016

>ITT we copy exactly what's on the screen like a human xerox machine without understanding how or why

baka desu senpai

>>2580016
Sorry for file size. Forgive me.

>>2580016

>>2587355
the skin looks good but the hair and cloth need hella work in the blending

>>2584038
try softer cheekbones and shorter faces, as well as rounder cheeks

>>2580016
>>2586998

>>2586807
Glad you like it

>>2578681

>>2586998
Program? Brush configuration? please senpai?

>>2585558

>>2580016

>>2585482
>>2585776
Is that you Firez? Haven't you seen here for a while

tfw got too used to animu proportions

the lips is pretty hard

>>2585558

>>2588371
Hi and yes I had not been here in awhile due to reasons

>>2588533
Her head to body proportions.

b r u h

>>2588597
Blog or something?

>>2588620
tenhit @ tumblr

>>2588367
what the hell man

>>2588597
aw man what brush is that?

>>2588624
regular ol' PS chalk brush

>>2580016

>>2588130
>>2585482
>>2585165

>posts 3 times with the same fucking image

>>2588371 of course it's none of other than Firez

So, how do studies help, exactly? I've never been too clear on that. Is it a way of figuring out how to produce the same effects from the pictures through practical work/ trial and error?

>>2578311

>>2580038
>>2584801
>>2584817

blog?

>>2588533
Are you serious?

>>2578311

This guy looks like the crazy motherfucker out of 60 Days In

>>2588533
>blaming anime
just admit it, you fucked up. it's shit.

can I get some feedback on the rendering? my painting a shit

sorry for shit colors

>>2578311

>>2585558
reposting from the drawthread

>>2591130
bretty gud, not sure about it but if that's traced you're a huge faggot and you know it

>>2590623
It would probably be easier to tell what you fucked up if you were painting a human.

>>2580016
Posting from phone so I don't know if the size is appropiate

>>2578320

>>2578681

>>2592910
Good work

>>2592910
holy shit, really good

>>2592910
proportion is slightly off on the head but other than that really great job

>>2596037
>>2596505
>>2596550

All this samefagging

>>2585558
I've not studied properly for a while, hoping to get back into daily practice again.

>>2578322
10 mins.

Teaching myself to use firealpaca. Basic brushwork feels really nice, although it doesn't seem to offer any real functionality that Krita doesn't.

>>2578681

I actually find bland faces harder to do, but this guy has such an expressive face I had to try him. Forgot to time myself on this one.

>>2578681
>>2596785
Here's another. To say I was dreading studying again I'm having a blast.

>>2596785
>>2578681
Here's another, and to say that I was dreading studying again I'm having a blast.

(reposting this because my image was a little too big, sorry!)

>>2596850
it's not bad but do it again paying attention to the proportions more. you probably have an easier time with less bland faces because you're taking note of the features more when they are more prominent.

no face is bland. give him another go paying attention to his proportions

>>2596926

Seems like I was within 10%, but it does look wrong, so I guess more accuracy is needed.

How do you judge proportions on a digital piece without cheating? For life-drawing I would measure with a thumb on the pencil at arms length, but you can't really do that on a screen.

>>2580016
pretty messy

>>2578311
>>2578681
>>2578707
Fucking around. Just focusing on color and value.

hands and tits. Good combo

>>2578681

>>2597323
trap!

>>2597322

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>>2598299
sorry for resoulotion. also now looking at the thumbnails I can see all of my fuckups

>>2597612

any good for studying? i kind of think the lighting is fucked

>>2588197
I love this, specs on brush?

Guys check out Lee Jeffries's work. He has amazing portraits on homeless people.

>>2592910
That head is way to long

>>2589163
You learn a lot of fundamentals from doing quality studies, and its a good way to review. An example would be drawing >pic related. You not only learn anatomy, but properties of light as well.

>>2578325
I have an art block.

>>2580016
I demand more like this

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