/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2560947
was to draw weeb shit*

you're gonna make it

>>2560952
This is better compared to my other drawings, and that's saying a lot, so yeah, still need a lot of help

what help do you want nobody can help you with a drawing you did 10 years ago

>>2560956
>10 years ago
?
Well I guess I'm asking for advice on how to draw manga faces

>>2560957
I think he's asking for a more recent drawing from you.

>>2560959
Recently a lot of my art has been garbage, but here's one

>>2560961
As a beginner myself, I say that's is a mighty fine D.VA there bud

>>2560961
>ywn bury your face between d.vas buttcheeks

>>2560979
Sad days are upon us...

You guys flatter me, but I still need advice haha

>>2560984
Judging from the second picture you need to work on hand placement for sure, her right hand specifically looks very uncomfortable, other than that maybe the anatomy, I'm not an anatomy fag so idk, but the legs look a bit short

>>2560961
looks like chicken scratch city - work on line confidence and draw more.

If you have it, post up your drawings from the beginning of the year till now instead of just 2 cherry picked pieces. Even posting one from each week would be more useful.

>>2560988
Dann I would have never noticed that, thanks

>>2560989
How do you work on line confidence?

Also do y'all have any advice or tutorials that help with drawing faces?

i was in the other thread, i can help if you wan t>>2560947

>>2560998

>>2560998
You know any good references or tutorials to draw faces?

Pixiv, just go to pixiv and practice.. and go to niconico live and watch some broadcasters.. My dream is to become a pro anime/manga illustrator

>>2560993
Make long, quick, strong lines over and over throughout your drawings. It will feel very daunting and unnatural at first but that's the point.

and twitters accounts from the pros like https://twitter.com/ugume3732
>>2561005
>>2561002

>>2561005
By "go to pixiv and practice", do you mean there's tutorials there or that I should try to replicate what I see there?

Yes, there is some tutorials , and you can take references from there
>>2561015

There you go ;D
>>2561015
http://spotlight.pics/en/a/1376

I'll be happy if you check this >>2561020

>>2561020
>>2561021
Thanks these are really good, even in Japanese I should be able to learn a lot

Do you have blog twitter or something to talk about it? Of course, im not a pro but i can give you some advices
>>2560947
>>2561002

>>2561008
This guy's Twitter is great, it's half his art and half his cat.

>>2560961
The shoulder and the arm connecting from it are thin (noticibly) and possibly slightly too long but almost unnoticablyou so. Maybe look at some posing so you can get the back-into-butt to look a bit more natural.

>>2561028
I don't have any, but I can make a twitter

Yeah his cat is really cute
>>2561033
Of course, make it and then i pass my twitter

>>2561035
I have no idea how this thing works, but my Twitter account is Nomeah_

>>2561038
i guess you need to fallow me to pm u

>>2560961
>overwatch
fuck off

>>2561041
Ah what's your account?
>>2561042
I don't even play the game I just thought the character was cute

What ever you want draw (anime or etc)draw real person first, that's a great practice, drawing from life or photo ref what ever something(but before draw a box or non human thing first for month)
There are many resource you can learn art I recommend vilppu if you're on self learning

Good luck

>>2561044
@dajoubf33

>>2561047
I'll try to follow that advice, thanks

>>2561008
>first thing I see is a slit wrist
man, what the fuck.

>>2561055
That's his cat's doing

>>2560947
>I've never drawn before but
See, this is when I knew you are full of shit. Not because I looked at your art but because of that statement. Everybody draws at a young age.

>>2561068
Of course everyone has drawn something before, but this year was the first time I've drawn with the intention to make it look good and to improve. All the drawings I've done as a kid stopped at like 5 or something

>>2561069
It doesn't matter if I believe you or not. (You always learn). There are no prodigies in art, only hard work. Example: You don't learn how to draw a photo realistic human from imagination without first having studied the anatomy or how the light falls. The thing is that some just done those things naturally in their past while others needs to make a conscious choice to do so.

People who believe in talent or care about time spend learning the craft are usually the ones who are not going to make it. It's a great attention tool on the gullible though. You could easily get stuck at the point you are now like so many before you if you start believing in that shit.

>>2561077
Got it, thanks

>>2561088
OP, do you want to become a pro Anime illustrator? or just...

>>2561093
Honestly, I'm not sure. Maybe if I get good enough to the point where I can focus more on creating a story rather than just improving.

>>2560989

>looks like chicken scratch city

Do you know what chicken scratch is? I don't see any chicken scratch.

>>2560961
Did you take a photo of your monitor.

>>2561127
Took a photo of my tablet, sorry

>>2561151
I'm still a beginner myself but I'd recommend to iterate A LOT. Don't try to do pretty drawings (or not too much at least), for example if you feel like you're having troubles with something then draw it over and over again while changing something every time until you start drawing things you start liking.

Of course as others said you should study properly too. I recommend 'Hampton - Figure Drawing'.

>>2561153
Got it, thanks

>>2560961
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>>2561694

>>2561694
Try more gestures, got it

>>2561694
>G E S T U R E S
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What did anon mean by that?

>>2561710
Not that anon, but he probably meant that your figure looks stiff as fuck and you should practice gesture drawing

just keep doing it, quantity is more important then content. If you keep cranking shit out, after a while it won't be shit anymore

>>2561042
you seem upset
I bet you just are farming for overwatch porn aren't you

>>2561153
I cannot believe this became a meme

Emulate favorite artist, apply loomis meme, done

>>2564785

>kodyboy

>>2560947
As even more of a beginner than you OP, I can't give you any help but could you help me by giving a bit more information about your progression? I'm really liking your drawings especially since you say you've never drawn before.

How did you start? What kinds of things did you initially learn? How much drawing and what kinds of drawing do you do each day?

>>2565683
Don't forget Vilppu.

>>2565730
I started drawing random anime characters, and then my friend recommended me to try and imitate art styles. I try to draw something I'm satisfied with everyday, but sometimes that doesn't happen, so instead I spend an hour a day drawing.

>>2565683
What's the loomis meme?

>>2568413
Literally just study Loomis books.

>>2560947
>>2568411
Not >>2565730 but I just started getting into drawing this week and I've been having a hell of a time. You said you've been drawing some every day? You wouldn't happen to have some of your stuff from earlier in the year would you? I'd really like to see some of your progression. I don't have a very trained eye for artsy stuff yet but the stuff you posted looks ace to me.

>>2568866
This was like two months into the year. Still as bad as I remember it.

>>2569578
Aside from the fivehead it doesn't look that bad. Was that done on a tablet?

>>2570667
Yeah, it was done on the cheapest Wacom I could afford

>>2569578
cute

>>2561020

Can't really internalize the advice cuz its all in nip :/

But thnx anyways

You need Loomis