/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Looking good so far. I like the linework on the nipples. Going to color it?

from the last thread >>2489925
hope to get some opinions

I haven't drawn since my mother died in September, and I decided to try and draw on paper again. I may go over it digitally and fix it later, but I was wondering if there are any serious issues, it was drawn in pen so I know the little guy on top isn't as good as I wanted, this was done in one sitting with a no name brand pen and some chink colored pencils. Ive also never drawn anything remotely pornographic, and my arts normally a western kind of pseudo realism.

>>2490009
And some sketches I did of a friends character.

Any opinions on this? I worked on the color but Im not entirely happy about it :(

>>2490269
it's apolished turd. you don't have a clue what foreshortening, perspective and construction are. your basics are shit. all you know to do is add color and polish a turd.

>>2490294
Thats a really incredible constructive criticism anon. Lots of words but nothing of use.
You really need to relax lol

>>2490310
Not that anon, but< he did say to work on foreshortening, by which he means perspective, and by extension I believe hes also saying your anatomy is shit (which it is, sorry).

>>2490310
The part
>Your basics are shit
Was pretty accurate.
Nothing to say, out of your league with this.
Do something simpler that doesn't involved multiple levels of depth.

>>2490310

Honestly tracing would have been better than what you really did, and thats fucking sad.

>>2490310
he means to say don't bite off more than you can chew

it's fucking /ic/ what do you expect

Will mods ban me for lewd demons?

>>2490646
That's disturbingly good.

>>2490646
ugh this is so good
I have a feeling you suck at rendering though

>>2490646
I fucking chuckled. Jesus this is way too good to be real
If I had the money I would pay you to keep making this shit

>>2490656
heh..........(I do)

>>2490656
He's slowly getting better at that too.

>>2489998
outline is done

>>2490681

If those are pectoral muscles overlapping his arm, be sure that that's how they would interact. It's impossible for them to balloon out like that, especially to the point where they completely obscure the arm's connection to the torso. Even in extreme body types, it isn't as simple as having the pectoral muscles just extend straight outwards from the torso.

>>2490692
I'm ashamed to admit that was my dick drawing... muscle moobs is my fetish
I know it's not realistic at all but... does it look bad?

>>2490646
IMAGINE ALL THE POO POO PARTICLES IN THE WRINKLES

his left leg looks fucked up in this shaded version, but the original linework looks fine, so I don't know where Im going wrong

>>2490714
reminds me of keyman

>>2490646
your linework is really good, but, oh boy, does your perspective suck in comparison. you should really work on that, gabe.

>>2490681
the perspective of the armor on the right lower hand is fucked up. same goes for the foreshortening of both knees.

what do you think about this girl?

noob here - really want you guys to tear me apart. I know things are wrong but can only guess at this point. kthx

>>2490646
Noice

>>2491090
Sorry but you're going to have to study fundamentals before you even consider posting for critiques. Anatomy and perpective are out of whack bruh

>>2491065
She has fake breasts.

>>2491065
work fingers.
dont copy faces/hair.
her head seems attached by a line.

>>2491065
What you lack the most is perspective knowledge. I suggest you to do some in depth perspective training, so that you can start adding some real depth to your drawings. Now everything is way too flat. Your overall anatomy isn't as bad, since you seem to know general proportions and you can draw cute symbol faces, but as soon as you go into details (feet, hands, muscle and bone structure and hierarchy) I can tell you are pretty much guessing.

>>2491113
fake boobs are underrated
sigh, i need better boobs

>>2491127
worked on the hand
changed the face
i didn't copy or used reference

>>2491140
thanks, you're right. And yeah, most of my work is guesswork. I started reading Perspective Made Easy but dropped the book halfway through...

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more grills

>>2491145
Use references

are these tits better? one is larger than the other, isn't it?

>>2491145
>>2491173
>>2491090
>>2491065
>>2490714
garbage you need lesson from a true master of the craft

>>2491185
You really need to work your lineart and hair better.

>>2491173
Did you even look at the reference I showed you? It says to make the breasts look youthful the nipples are inverted upwards right now the breasts look like they are artificial.

>>2491173
>>2491190
I disagree they look fine as far as shape goes now, but they don't rest properly on the ribcage. As the other anon pointed out, this is due to his faulty perspective.
>nipples are inverted upwards
Definitely not a rule. You're just trying to push your own taste now.

>>2491191
>but they don't rest properly on the ribcage

Hence why I said they look artificial as if they're fake.

>Definitely not a rule.

Your youth has long passed you filthy cougar stop projecting.

>>2491185
gtfo cancer

>>2491193
>>2491191
>>2491190
i'm still learning how to boob
ugh
i changed them some more. how do they look?

Porn of which franchise will bring me views on tumblr the fastest?

>>2491232
Furries

>>2491233
Except furries I forgot to add.

>>2491226
The issue lies in the ribcage.

>>2491242
i tried, mikufag
no more edits for this piece.

thanks for the feedback everyone, though i'd still like to hear what you think about the other two drawings.

>>2491258
Are my lines really that recognizable this is starting to get scary.

>>2490331
nice 2,5x3,2k reaction pic. you did well.

>>2491258
which brush/settings are you using anon? also, resolution of your canvas? those lines look nice instead of the usual 'standard hard round' brush from PS

>>2491270
thanks, I like them as well. it's manga studio 5.
I'm currently working at 1191 x 1684 at 144ppi, I'll probably increase my resolution soon.

>>2491185
the perspective on the hair is off with the rest of the body
looks really frizzy too like it belongs on a barbie doll

>>2491262
The arm gave it away.

is there any use of making reddit account as a porn artist ?

I mean what i can use this for ? do porn artist have their own subreddits ?
I dont know much about reddit, people sometimes post my pictures there.

opinions plz.

>>2491314
ask reddit.

>>2491454
>Nose "I am a shartist so I comment on internet faux pas 24/7 instead of drawing" Bro
best nosefag description ever kek

>>2491262
When you've been consistently bad at something for years people do notice, yes.

>>2490009
>>2490015
It should have been you, not her.
>my friends character
you probably love undertale you tumblr fag

I want to continue work on this one like putting the details on the helmet, some twilight realm tiles in the bg etc. but before that'd like to ask for some feedback since I'm rather new to shading.

>>2492177
nice rendering. the shading isn't problematic at all imo. the problems lie in the anatomy/perspective of the limbs. her right leg looks broken at the thigh and unnaturally bent at the lower leg and at the foot. her left knee seems dislocated. her right hand is badly foreshortened and her left forearm is too long.
finally the breasts are badly placed on the ribcage. the left one isn't so bad, but you misplaced the nipple.

whats wrong so far ?

>>2492177
You have a blog?
Sorry I can't give any critique I'm just a shitter

>>2492485
you are covering one of the best parts of the artwork with the guys arm (and gut). draw his upper body more upright and let him lean just with one hand on her head.

>>2492525
i will make the arm transparent

>>2492485
what the heck is with her mouth

>>2492543
Just draw him holding his side

>>2492485
the girls face
and I don't see a dick attached to her so I must be on reddit

>>2492627
>>2492614
she has panties in them
and i like her face.

>>2492635
those look like giant bacon lips

>>2492543
ruining an artwork with transparency is just stupid imo.

How can I be Kyle?

>>2492793
acquire feet fetish

>>2492485
>>2492793
you can't, every last one of you is garbage stop wasting my time

>>2492814
Jesus, why are you such a dick Kyle?

>>2492814
You're such a faggot.

>>2492814
Kill yourself Kyle.

>>2492814
Fuck off Kyle.

>>2492814
You're such a piece of shit Kyle. Overrated artist.

>>2492814
you suck dick for nickels faggot. Go whore yourself out somewhere else.

>>2492814
I fucking hate you, why the fuck do you even post here? You're not that good.

Kill yourself Kyle.

>>2492814
>>2492881
>>2492887
>>2492889
>>2492893
>>2492897
>>2492901
>>2492905
please, go kill yourself, you samefagging piece of cancerous shit.
learn to draw instead of being this fucking jelly.

>>2492925
Hello Kyle, I'll kill myself right after you do

Where did I go wrong?

>>2492925
Kyle, I can already draw way better than you but I wont lower myself to your degenerate level. You're an amateur artist and the only thing worse than the abominations you draw is your horrible toxic personality. Please fuck off and jump off the nearest cliff, do not pass go and do not collect your $200. faggot

>>2492938
the anatomical left buttcheek seems to stick out a bit too much.

>>2492992
Your right. I started drawing in another perspective but thought the current one was more interesting and I guess forgot to change that part.

>>2492543
that's such a half-assed and lazy solution

>>2492871
Love the faces, but the thighs on the left are WAYY too short. The hands could do to look a bit more realistic, and the butt seems kinda fake, try to work on it.

I wish I could draw face like you can.

>>2492940

You can? Post work

>>2492814
dudes, that guy posing drawings that are old as fuck isn't me. I'm a nice guy, I swear.

>>2493098
No shit Sherlock, it's pretty obvious someone samefagged hard because they have a hateboner for you. You are already a meme in case you didn't notice. This is far beyond your control now.

>>2493110

Who cares. I like Kyle's art personally. "Oh some guy is shitposting on /ic/ pretending to be Kyle!" whoop-de-fucking-doo big deal

>>2493110
>every decent artist that has ever visited this board is a meme
You fags are the worst.

>>2493118

For everyone who realizes it's not him I bet you two people will jump on the shitpost wagon thinking he's an asshole.

Skilled artists generally get shit on and harassed until they pack up and stop bothering to post their work here.

>>2490646
It's kinda sad that this awesome detailed ink will turn into a damn shiny picture with awful and distracting glowing rainbow sparkles background and stuff

>>2493098
This shit is old as fuck too what the fuck are you trying to do?

>>2493110
what kind of reverse bait trolling is this?

>>2493205
Everyone starts somewhere anon. You have to ruin some pieces until you're good.

>>2493142
This, so much. /ic/ is toxic as fuck.

>>2492929
>>2492940
GTFO JELLYFAG CANCER

>>2493428
reminder mods would rather ban content from the porn thread wich was never a problem in the first place rather than deal with rampant shitposters
How can a relatively small board be so fucking cancerous that even /v/ feels better to browse is beyond me

>>2493525
Hello Kyle

>>2493529
this amount of jelly kek

Thoughts on body? The drapery needs to be redone..

>>2493525
welcome to /ic/

You won't enjoy your stay.

>>2493532
Kill yourself Kyle.

>>2493709
gtfo cancer.
instead of wasting your time trolling out of jelly towards better artists, spend it to improve your own craft, you dumb idiot.

>>2493568
horrible execution, good idea.

>>2493752
>it wasn't even my idea ;_;

>>2493755
the ribbons are good and the babydoll isn't bad. You have no clue where to start and end your lines.

These porn threads are a cancer.

>>2489871
Am I the only one who was disappointed to realize that this is a TFA fanart and not a picture of a sexy naga?

I'm going to make comedy porn series

This is a concept arts of my heroine

Which face is better?

>>2493788
I don't like either design. They're both rather ugly.

>>2493788
You're off to a good start, this art is hilariously bad

>>2492814
Hurry up on rendering those milking cups m8

>>2494069
That drawing is almost 3 years old bro

>>2494103
that'sthejoke.jpg

>>2494103
Kyle honestly doesn't do shit. Ever check out his gallery. There is no work, he doesn't do anything.

>>2494120
>3 years worth of images
>only 2 pages

What a lazy cunt.

>>2494120
>>2494122
can you believe it? this lazy and still better than all of you. all my keks.

>>2494132
Post your work

>>2494133
Not that guy, but him being bad won't magically make you not dogshit. Half you faggots forgot your trips.

>>2494133
that's how this works. first you have to kill yourself, and then I post my work. you need to be useful if you want me to be useful.

>>2494286
>...and then it farts!

>>2494286
You're gross but I still want to be you

>>2494286
this has to be covered in the furry or guro rule. get out.

>>2494314
>demons are furry
>guro
Are you retarded?

>>2494314
> This offends me so I want it out.

>>2494314
GTFO cancer.

>>2494318
>>2494337
>>2494342
>morals are relative so i'm not really a degenerate guys

xD

>>2494363
If you don't want any degenerancy, you shouldn't browse the porn thread, maybe?

>>2494363
look at the thread you're in

>>2494363
it doesn't matter if you find that degenerated or not. if you have a functional brain, you can focus on the technique alone. but I guess dickbrains like you must find this concept pretty difficult to grasp, right?

>>2494363
> My superior morals should guide what people draw and enjoy.
> On the Artwork board.
> On the porn thread.

>>2494363
>xD
You must be 18+ old to be in this thread, let alone this site.

>>2494286
That asshole looks like it would literally melt a human dick. I'm into it.

>>2494390
>you will never have your cock roughly milked by the massive asshole of a smug demon 4x your size solely via clenching

will i get banned on tumblr if i draw schoolgirls havin some sexin ?

>>2494691
tp get banned on tumblr you have to be known. to be known you have to have good art.
no, you won't get banned on tumblr.

>>2494755
is 3k followers a known person ?

>>2494286
I feel bad for the red guy, it's like he wants to go all in, but I feel like his horns will keep him from just burying his face in anus

>>2494798
lol, not even close
20k+ maybe
50k+ most definitely

crit pls??

>>2494818
>>2494798
mfw not even 100 followers and im one of the best here

He's a alien man.

>>2494844
Is his holding a joint or his dick?

>>2494845
His dick.

>>2490646
Why do you do this anon? Is it making a lot of money or do you like lewd demons sucking giant ass?

I'd like some names or examples of NSFW artists that are good with x-ray shots (penetration) that don't just make them look like dry anatomical charts. If anyone could help, that'd be awesome.

>>2489871
could really use some help
ive had this problem for a long time where i draw with thick brushes, this is because it's much easier for me to sculpt and feel out the form of my drawing, when i use thin lines to draw it's not impossible for me to come out with a good drawing or anything but it feels very technical and unnatural. This is fine for black and white drawings, but to start painting in my colors, i need very precise lines. How do i prep a sketch like pic related for coloring

>>2491185
>>2492814
>>2493098
>>2493217

Who is this and where can I find more of your/his art?

>>2494890
would love a reply from gay muscular demon guy.
>>2490646

you're getting real good my man from when i last saw your stuff

>>2494894
how did you scroll past those pictures without reading a single word in between.

>>2494841
sure you are buddy, sure you are.

thanks for the keks.

>>2494901
very simple anon. he's a dickbrain.

>>2494844
>He's a badly drawn alien man.
fiksed

>>2494848
both
>>2494890
>>2494896
I ink between sketching and coloring so idk. I use a similarly thin brush when sketching too. It might be harder, but thats just because super thick lines let you kinda cheat. your eyes will fill in the best shape, might as well just have a harder time starting out so when you polish it the flaws are less blatant.

>>2495121
You are so fucking gay.

>>2495137
Ikr, he's so gay and so much better than you at the same time. god must be on vacation or something.
pleas go kill yourself, you creationist redneck.

>>2495121
great stuff man. keep it up.

>>2495152
>what is joking and poking fun

Lighten up Francis.

>>2495152
Not him, but this is how it begins. The GIDF is in effect as of now thanks to this buttflustered faggot over a silly comment over his favorite Artist, you fanboys are the cancer that is ravaging this place.

>>2495163
See
>>2495162
This is fucking 4chan, a site where 80% of people suck dick or jerk off to penis.

>>2495167
>this is fucking 4chan xDDDD

Please go back to whatever cancerous shithole you crawled out from jesus christ.

>>2495163
I don't even like this kind of stuff. I don't like these themes and I don't like the way the lighting. but this doesn't mean I can't appreciate his skill.
if that was a joke, then thank god. maybe next time that anon should make it more obvious. this place is full of homophobic racists.

>>2495174
>>2495174
This might be the dumbest green text I've ever seen. There is no need for it.

>>2495189
>this place is full of homophobic racists

Like Keppok

>>2495121
Gabe, are you actually into this stuff or do you do it for the shekels?

I admire your stuff even though I am not a gay myself.

>>2494890
Drawing with thick brushes isn't inherently bad.
I do it too, and the most noticeable thing that happens when I go into lining it, is that there are shape/perspective changes.

Just constantly flip between your lines/your sketch and see if anything "moves". Preferably you'd want to keep the original gesture of the sketch.

more blood elves

>>2495361
>New Canvas
triggered

>>2494286
I'm both repulsed by the demonic butt hole and drawn in by the shiny squishyness of the butt cheeks... Your rendering is improving, Gabe!

>>2495189
Go blog about it on tumblr

>>2494945
you again.

>>2495189
homosexuality is a mental illness and racism dosent exist.

the more you know.

>>2495361
Kyle do you play WoW? You draw a ton from it.

>>2495385
nah, I'll rather clean this place of shitheads like you and your homophobic friends.

>>2495422
yeah, me again. gtfo dickbrain.

>>2495423
oh look, another creationist redneck. next thing you'll say is probably that god exists kek.

>>2495632
None of those people, but I don't even know how to reply to someone like you, because you come off as a parody of an SJW. I honestly can't tell if you're trolling, or if you're really that dense.

>>2490779
I changed that part of the armor. The legs are not facing forward, I changed them up a bit so it reads better.

>>2495361
There's something really off about her torso. The shading is wrong and the sense of form is completely lacking. It doesn't look like it has volume. It's strange, considering your ability to show volume is usually one of your strengths.
Her arm also seems to serve no purpose sticking out like that, and it also doesn't look like her body is actually resting on the chair. She's just oddly balancing on top of it.

>>2495361
The upper body suggests that she's leaning back...but her pussy suggests that shes sitting upright. I'd angle the pussy up a bit more to match the upper body and maybe add a hint of the asshole cause it looks like shes got a droopy pussy. Arms look weird cause the pauldrons are cutting them off in a bad place. Maybe drop the shoulders/clavicles a bit and rotate the pauldrons back?

>>2495632
>homophobic
>creationist redneck


Isn't there a Trump rally you should be protesting right about now?

>>2495674
>but her pussy suggests that shes sitting upright
Not really, you wouldn't see all those beef curtains if she were sitting upright. The vagina isn't supposed to have the opening on the front plane in the natural positon so if it does it means the pelvis is tilted.

>>2495121
I was worried that the thick lines were spoiling me, alright thanks.

>>2495683
>falling for bait

>>2495657
penis isn't centered properly and these colors suck, I hope that is just the flat colors, the fuck is going on with this chest on the left?

you need more practice, this is how you color

>>2495657
This is what anon meant with the perspective of the armor being off imo.

>>2495842
I wish I hadn't erased part of my sketch that showed where exactly the penis was placed... Maybe it'll read better once it's rendered?
And the colors were a conscious decision, I usually render the way they do it in the picture you posted but since I'm gonna have him facing away from the light but having a direct light source in front of him I wanted to create a stronger contrast by wonder form dark to light.

I usually keep it very pastel-y if I start from medium then place the shadows and highlights.

>>2495866
Woah, thanks for this, I kinda forgot that his arms were raised a bit so the perspective was different than the rest of the body.

Also this redline is really pretty, so much more anatomical construction than what I did... I'll make some changes based on this, again thank you!

>>2495887
>wonder
I meant working

>>2495866
who are you? got a gallery? your anatomy is amazing!

>>2495657
>>2495866
/sweating intensifies

f-fug

>>2495932
>your anatomy is amazing!

it's lumpy and broken stop giving people like that credit

>>2496010
do a better redline, jellyfag. let's see.

>>2491268
It's still shit

>>2495466
I played in highschool 2007

>>2490646
http://hydra-media.cursecdn.com/dota2.gamepedia.com/7/7e/Doom_move_07.mp3

>>2495361
>blood elf
Nigga, that's a high elf. Blood elves have fel-corrupted green eyes.

>>2496074
Why do you like to draw for yourself other than WOW?

You don't talk much do you man?

the torso is a bit too long, and the right ones right arm is fucked up, but Im not sure how to fix this

what I have so far...

>>2496214
That pose is a litte super impossible, try it out yourself? I can't get my shoulders that way, the most i can bend them back is like in the sketch attached

>>2495932
it's bbc chan

Pretty much the only decent thing in Inquisition.

Also a shitty WIP that might never get finished.

>>2496230
ah, thanks. looks like I was making him bend too much at the shoulder instead of the elbow

>>2496247

>>2496247
don't trace references.

>>2496297
its the best way for learning, they told that in another /ic/ thread

>>2496105
wow is really popular. Lots of people commission me to draw their characters.

>>2496302
it's a good way to learn musculature and shapes, yeah. but this means you do studies, not stuff like this.
tracing photos trying to sell it as your own stuff is just retarded, because you can tell it's traced. you give none of your personal style to the artwork this way.

>>2496306
what about if they ask you to create a parody out of a known show/anime while keeping its original style?

>>2496311
then good luck with inventing the pose and everything without needing to trace a fucking photo. learn to draw and express yourself through your art, and stop being a scrub.
and trust me, tracing photos because you are bad at anatomy won't help you mimic any known styles.

>>2490646
This is awesome. Good job.

>>2491185
It's like the body is a dream and the hair & face a nightmare.

>>2496297
I didn't use refs, though.

If I did the chest are would probably look better, 'cause I had heck of a time locating the damn muscles.

>>2496549
Correction, *didn't trace

I used refs for the face

>>2496549
then I suggest you start adding some style to the whole thing. this looks traced/over referenced and because of that is boring.

>>2491185
how2render smooth skin like kairu-senpai? He had a tutorial but I wonder if he changed his technique a bit.

>>2496567
Will do.

Suggestions?

>>2496214

Just curious, are you bi?

>>2496568
there's this thing called learning process. I suggest you try it some times.

>>2496582
simplify lineart and do tons of gesture training. this will help you stop thinking about how you are drawing and instead you'll start thinking only about what you want to draw..

>>2496010
>>2496013
silenced in a second kek

*Disclaimer*

Fictional 25 year old mature legal aged consenting adult...

:^)

>>2496927
Except it's IkaMusume and you can't decide that.
But I guess she doesn't have an age cause she's a squid.

Wow, everyone is getting so much better. There's a lot of pretty good art in this thread.

>>2496936
Except you can't decide that it isn't his o/c :^)

>>2496927
Why is your lineart so unflattering all the time?

>>2496311
Who the fuck taught you it was okay to trace photos and sell them as your own? Dobson?

>>2497001
Hard round brush.

>>2496585
yep

can i get some advice on drawing the shower water? i don't really want lines on his face but i still want water hitting his face so i'm a bit stuck

>>2497056
I would think you can take artistic liberty with that. I would think the brain can fill in the details.
Seems more awkward that there's no water on his body and the floor.

>>2497070
yeah i'm not quite done yet, i was planning on drawing some on his body and around the drain. thanks for the advice

>>2497056
I think the shower is really bland and the pose is stiff.

>>2497077
great, just how i like it

>>2497086
yeah, show everyone what a salty butthurt little bitch you are.
this artwork is basically utter shit.
the pov is uninteresting, the pose is stiff because of the bad perspective and gesture and the lineart and construction have no depth and dinamicity.
spend another couple of years by studying fundamentals if you want to draw appealing porn. right now you are beginner tier bullcrap.

Reminder that >>2497434 is a liar and a shit poster who should be reported and ignored.

fat

>>2497434
wow anon another post trying to discourage a future porn artist. is that what they said to you or its just you spent all your life studying basics and cant get a straight line out of it?
Its like every time you see a new guy around wanting to make porn you rage about it

>>2497479
the shower is boring though. The painting has absolutely no interest in it at all. The walls are fucked and lack any understanding of perspective. The figure it just... awkward to put it best. It looks like a cheap drawing of Archer. The fingers look like they have no bone structure at all like frumpy hotdogs. The middle finger on the left arm looks like it's swollen. This is because the linework on the drawing is incredibly bad and the artist clearly doesn't know what they are doing. The lines go from thin to thick in randomly with no purpose to their changing thickness. Linework should be use to help build form and indicate changes in light values.

It's just a bad drawing in every possible way.

One of the drawings I did for a Goth girl thread on /i/. Fun was had

Testing, probably banned again.

How fucked is my perspective?

>>2495361
>blood elf
>blue eyes

I don't think so.

how do I get gud fast?
I want to draw something that I can enjoy
I've been doing the "boring" shit for the past couple of weeks also

>>2491185
thats pretty poor boob placement for someone critiquing fake lookin boobs. lol

>>2497594
Reposting with censorship, and reiterating that it's a fictional 20-something year old.

>>2497657
I'd reiterate what another anon said here, I'd do something about those lines, even if it's intentional, it wouldn't hurt just to give them more depth to look more appealing. The pose itself is rather "cute", nothing else about it though is special.

>>2497507
>What is minimalism.
What a fucking useless critique, just jump off a bridge.
Holy shit are you a fucking idiot, seriously.

End
Your
Life.

>>2497660
If it's poorly executed, "muh minimalism" is absolutely no excuse.

>>2497657
>that it's a fictional 20-something year old.
*in squid years

>>2497657
her hands look like rat claws

trying to draw without ref, can i get a crit?

>>2497769
>'trying to draw without ref'
>uses the OP image as a ref

?????

>>2497056
Nothing in this catches the eye, the dick is gross af, extremely unsexy and boring.

>>2496214
Do you have a tumblr of something? Hot as shit.

>>2497822
I think anon was implying he did the sketch first and now is showing the OP image to compare. I guess.

Basically got told I need more Loomis on HF lmao. Oh well.

>>2497855
Post your work.

>>2497829
thanks! blogs on the self promo thread >>2490826

>>2497629
very and the foot is the wrong way

>>2497657
cute ika-chan
try drawing more butts

>>2490646
yikes. in a good way

>>2490694
Bara tiddies can be kind of squishy, but they still wouldn't interact with the arm like that. They'd flatten out and contour with the arm while bulging up more in the middle of the chest. They're far more rigid than a woman's boobs (which is what they look like in your drawing)
The knees aren't that bad imo, but the armor of his bracer (as another anon pointed out) is way out of perspective.

>>2495866
damn. i'm turned on

>>2497769
>keep working with arms and hands

>>2497479
of course I do. porn is something that beginners shouldn't eve try drawing as long as they're still beginners. and I love how you other beginners rage when you realize my posts are aimed at you too. top keks.

>>2497507
this anon knows what he's talking about. props.

>>2497567
very crappy stuff.

>>2497629
your bigger problem is anatomy, that is pretty much guessed.

>>2497660
so much butthurt, because you don't realize you are shit at drawing/judging art.

>>2498098
>>2498101
>>2498107
>>2498108
>>2498112
You can stop now.

>>2498135
Yeah, don't bother. Whether you like it or not, and some parts may seem harsh to you, they all have a point. Just keep trying the basics and work harder before trying something interesting with porn.

>>2498112
But everything you criticize can be appreciated by someone.
The idea that it is all blatantly wrong is entirely false.
If polished all of the drawings are presentable and the idea that only a master can do pornography is fucking idiotic.

>>2498152

I'd love for you guys who are doing ultra picky criticisms to post your work.
But I know you won't because you have nothing other than your failed ambitions.

Here are useful criticisms.
You can just fuck off and never post here again.
You're not even an artist

>>2497567
Problems with anatomy.
Primarily the face and hands.

>>2497629
Anatomy is fine. No one cares.
If you want to be picky about perspective it's your call.

>>2497507
>the shower is boring though.
It's not.
>The painting has absolutely no interest in it at all.
It's a WIP
>The walls are fucked and lack any understanding of perspective.
As if anyone cares about that.
> The figure it just... awkward to put it best. It looks like a cheap drawing of Archer.
Fair
>he fingers look like they have no bone structure at all like frumpy hotdogs.
Fair
>middle finger on the left arm looks like it's swollen.
No one cares
>his is because the linework on the drawing is incredibly bad and the artist clearly doesn't know what they are doing.
Incredibly ? Why are you putting your emotions into a critique ?
>The lines go from thin to thick in randomly with no purpose to their changing thickness.
So what, he'll improve over time when he draws more.
>Linework should be use to help build form and indicate changes in light values.
Fair, but see above.

>It's just a bad drawing in every possible way.
This is just subjective and unnecessary. You didn't even try to like the drawing and indicates you were biased from the start into hating the guys work.

>>2498135
why would I. so that scrubs can get self complacent? kek.

>>2498152
I'm not talking about masters. I'm talking about advanced artist that aren't total beginners.

>>2498175
you really have no clue what you are talking about. probably you don't draw or you are just another one of the beginners I was talking about earlier. but thanks for the keks.

/ic/ I had more faith in you than this. I told you to ignore this shitposter from the start and you all took the bait anyway. Shame.

>>2498206
You must be new here.

>>2498211
I've been here long enough to see this happen a thousand times. I really thought people would learn not to fall for it after the millionth.

>>2498216
>I really thought people would learn not to fall for it after the millionth.

You've clearly not been here long enough.

>>2498206
>>2498216
can you please stop being this fucking butthurt, just because someone told you the truth about your art being shitty.

>>2498225
Never once has anyone called my art shit on the rare occasion I've posted it in these threads. You have no idea who I am or what you're taking about. The only truth here is that you're only out to cause trouble and you're throwing shots blindly hoping you rile someone up. Everyone should only look at your posts long enough to report them then hide them.

>>2498242
Is this a ruse?

>>2494286
Looks like Nezumin my man. Good shit.

>>2498242
I thought you were the poster or one of the people I called out for having shit art, because of the butthurt. if you are not, then you probably just recognize yourself in my posts because you are a beginner or probably something along those lines.

>>2498581
it's gabe

>>2498242
just passing through, post art. im curious

>>2497859
I'm not saying I don't need it, I just found it funny.

>>2492258 Thanks for the feedback. Comments like this make /ic/ worthwhile!
I while reusing some of their parts I mostly repainted all the limbs as they indeed vere very troublesome and tried to fix some other parts too.
>>2492493 http://shmutzig.tumblr.com/

>>2498773
that's indeed so much better.

>>2498706
I'm not a beginner and haven't been for a long time. The only thing I recognize in your words is a compulsive liar and a desperately insecure attention-seeker.
>>2498709
>just passing through
Oh I'm sure. Between this Dunning-Krueger Dunce and the ass who doxxed BBC and keeps spamming about Kyle, if they're not all one person, these threads have become a minefield. But you probably already knew that since you're probably that same ass trying your hardest to ruin these threads any way you can. I come here to see what people are up to and offer advice but I'll not be posting my art here again anytime soon.

>>2499008
Stop being so butthurt and get over it.

>>2499008
how does bashing shit tier artists make me a liar and attention seeker exactly?
I'd really like to hear your response. preferably without butthurt tinted glasses.
also, two artist's which skill I genuinely respect here are BBC and Kyle, so wrong assumption.

>>2499152
are you known? do you have a patreon? are you skilled? or are you just a frustrated artist

>>2499152
You've already gotten more response than you deserve. Just know that I'll be reporting every single one of your disruptive shitposts from now on and I hope other anons will do the same.

>>2499152
>BBC and Kyle
If those two are your standards, then why are you even here? As great as those two are, they barely have any reason to post their work here for critique since they are already high leveled and the lesser leveled art posted here should be questioned for quality in general. Redlines by the likes of BBC is fine for guidance, but we'd do better not having high standards to compare others work, to just be better than shit to average.

I used to get a boner out of these threads. Now the only good thing was a bara redline.

/ic/ continues the tradition of keeping only the absolute worse around, soon as you're good jellyfags make it insufferable and in the end it's just detrimental to the actual noobs trying to learn something that they only get to co-exist with shitposters.

I hope me coming here less often ever month means I'm actually gonna make it unlike all of you.

Never posted my art here, Im just a rookie trying to learn but as far as I saw at least in the last 3 nswf threads, I think its far better for beginners to post in another boards instead of /ic/. They also get critique but while being polite.
These nsfw threads had become quite disgusting, a hole for people trying to demotivate the newer ones and not thinking about trying in drawing.

>>2499743
beginners should post in the beginners thread and that's fucking it.

When did the "thin at the base and end and thick in the middle" style of cock became fashionable in nsfw art? They look fucking retarded.

>>2500856
being able to draw any kind of dick is okay. if you think that some shapes of dicks are more retarded than others, then I have bad news for you kid.

>>2500856
I think they look nice.

does the coloring look interesting or sloppy?

>>2500962
the coloring, as all the other elements of the artwork, looks pretty much like shit.