/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

After-the-Lock

>>2395310
I like this, but I feel like we shouldn't be able to see both of her eyes when that looks like a complete profile view

>>2395312
The idea is creative; that rendering is pretty brutal though, something to look into.

http://www.ctrlpaint.com/videos/sketching-value

>>2395314
I really like this. Subtle things like the glow on her finger or the way you've differentiated the material of her stockings, shoes and and shirt that are otherwise a very similar color through skillful rendering. Awesome!

That said, the background doesn't seem to live up to the rest of the piece. Those huge conspicuous brush strokes, particularly those overlapping the "vortex" that look unintentional leave a bit to be desired considering how pretty the witch is and how much care you've taken with here. Nonetheless, good work.

>>2395328
*with "her"

Fuck's sake.

>>2395314
wew

>>2395314
damn son

>>2395296
roru

>>2395314
cute stuff, blog?

>>2395305
>>2395303
Did she put pillows on her butt cheeks?

>>2395296
rall

>>2395296
rollaine

roll

>>2395296
roll

>>2395296
r0ll

>>2395296
ROLLING

Roll

r-o

roll

I can't believe it's still happening!!!

>>2397922
That's way too big. Here is smaller

>>2397927
I like it.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jo5fqwPQDwk

>>2397935
You've swayed me to color it with your lute music.

Haha just kidding I hate lute music it's not even popular like timberlake!!!

>>2397935
>>2398043
Nice.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zEoS_W35IHk

>>2395296
rolling

rollerino

>>2398043
>hating on lute
your drawing is nice but i'd still bash yer f00kin' 'ead m80

anyway roll

Rolling

>>2395296
hi hoo

rolling

>>2395314
Cute witch. How much time have you spent on this?

>>2395314
what did you trace?

>>2395744
I wonder if you can smother anons to death with butt pillows

>>2400730
Unf

>>2395305
>>2395303

Jokes are good
but some tips would be nice

>>2400774
Look into hips, my man, consider how the pelvis is shaped in real humans instead of JUST.

The hips in the second one in particular are asymmetrical, and it looks more like her legs are sprouting at different angles than it looks like her actual hips are tilted.

which pose is less shitty and why is it the first one?

>>2402026
The second one you did it poorly. The pose could be improved if the "S"curve was fixed. Try moving the back leg further and arch the back.

>>2395296
roll

>>2395296
here is my roll

>>2403106

and here's my groll

>>2403126
What in the world, son.

At least the face is kind of cute, I guess!

rool

reroll

critique pls

>>2395296
roll

lerollll

roll

>>2403326
Arms are too short, remember that the wrist lands at about the same spot as the gooch and if her arms were extended downwards I don't think they'd quite make it. The elbow should be placed a bit lower, deltoid muscles should taper off about where the bottom-third of the pectoral muscles end up, and the tits look just a bit too high.

>>2403351
Thanks, boss!

Leroolll

Reroll.

hey can we bring "fucking owned," back? Ironically.

>>2403338
Dayum. I should draw more.

>>2403386
yep!

>>2403386
holy fuck

Is it wrong that i think this look good?

Rollin!!

>>2395296
roll

>>2395296
goal

>>2403551
Sorry for being so shit, but I saw the image and those proportions etc and the weapon seemed really interesting and I tried to make something out of it.... Do you guys have any critique I can try to work with to fix how shit this pic is?

>>2403551
It could be worse, but it needs work. One thing that sticks out to me is that the angle of the iris, pupil etc. makes it look like the entire eye is t a strange downward angle.

>>2403729
You fix it with fundamentals, family. There is simply too much wrong to critique it, no offense.

LOOMIS!

>>2403729
for start stop chicken scratch, do 2 points, where you want your line to start and respectively end, and then connect them

you could also ghost line, which means doing the line a few time above the paper to get the motion

also, you could even start and go beyond those 2 points, but try to connect them with a straight line

>>2395314
I think I'll go hang myself now, no way I can compete with this.

>>2395314
>>2395310
>>2395298
>>2395299

roll

here's another roll

>>2404772
and here's another groll

>>2404180
You are seriously concentrating on the wrong thing. Two things they could do line-art if they wanted, and line-art wouldn't improve the picture, not trying to offend the artist.

>>2403729
2 ways to improve way faster.
Method 1 find something similar trace it once, then draw it yourself
Method 2 imitate the style of a cartoon or a good artist copy them until you can do it yourself

>>2404818
heh

lets see what I get

roll, once more

roll

>>2406380

groll, once more

>>2395296
rolluu moorruu

>>2402147
some progress

roll

rolling

>>2406539
Nice

>>2406539
I would advise blocking in the entire image first before starting on detailing stuff.

>>2406980
I'm just doing what I'm good at while I practice more body and hands shit
<< also lol

roll

let's do this

roll

>>2407371

ginllor

>>2407409

rollin'

Rolin

rool

>>2407407
H I P S

HNGGGG

>>2407503
My Favorite

>>2407407
Nice birb

>>2407438
the walking kawaii

>>2407568
Dat thorax tho

roll

roollll

oh ye rollin

>>2395296
Took me a while to finish this because of some other work priorities.

This was fun! Gotta make a new one soon based on my last roll. lol.

>>2410869
Can't see shit capt.

>>2410869
George K. pls stay. Wonderful stuff.

I feel the topmost eye of the topmost grill might be just a tad off center, leaning perhaps a bit too far stage left. Note how it appears to touch her eyebrow whilst the stage-right portion of the eye recedes from view.

>>2410889
Thanks for the feedback my good man.

I'll update this once I finish my shit up.

:)

rol

>>2410869
it does not read very well.
it is painted well.

>>2411490
Thank you for the output , anon. I was trying to pull a rather low contrast image on this one.

But you did give me a good point. I'll see what I can do if I revisit this again in the future.

ROLL

>>2395296
before bed roll

>>2395296
Rollio.

rollin

Roll

roll.

Probably gonna draw shit but roll anyway

>>2413055
Oh damn never rolled dubs before on tower

I ROLL

roll

>>2413065

and here :o

>>2413106
Texturebro 4 lyfe

I know you'll reveal your true power some day.

>>2413111

have a judy :3

roll

>>2410869
Looks great, love the lighting and colors. Made me want to try one with similar lighting, though I think I messed up in quite a few areas.

>>2413414
>you will never become Raider Princess' thane

I love it, though I will say that the bottom stage-left foot looks a bit wonky, like a sausage or something.

>>2413418
Thanks, I'll try and fix that.

Roll

>>2395296

rolking

>>2395296
roll

>>2395296
awfwqfQW F

>>2414373
fuck you

roll

PRINCESS GET

>>2395296
roll

Rollin'.

Rolaids

>>2395296
r-rollin

Crits appreciated.

roll

>>2414815
Chicken scratch. Stage-right hand is practically big enough to palm entire head-actually that hand might be right and the stage-left one is too small. Regardless, text is pretty laff; keep practicing family man

roll

rolling

pls be real

>>2415368
Thanks man.
Most of the chicken scratch was intended to convey fur but yea. I fall into that habit in the hands and feet(human especially) alot. I'll be paying more attention to size consistency more from now on too.
Thanks again.

Forgot to post pic related last night. skele sktch incoming.

roll

>>2395296

>>2416113
First try at these, first time really coloring a drawing as well. Still lots n lots of practice/studying to do.

>>2416182
If your intention was to make me go blind trying to see this congratulations. It's actually a decent sketch from what I can see but you're a butt hole family man

>>2416330
You got a lot of work to do, but you're doing it; keep it up.

>>2395296
roll

>>2395296
roll

>>2416344
boring black lines, happy

assassin

>>2416654
woops

>>2395296
roll

>>2416419
nice

Rollin'

ro9oll

rollin

>>2395296
ok we go

>>2417254
Amateurish but kind of endearing for some reason. Probably the ball shaped head.

>>2417258

on a scale of 1 to kingdom hearts, how bad are the feet

>>2417824

roll

>>2417943
About....a riku? Maybe?

Nah. More of a Donald.

>>2417943
How can you be competent at drawing with perspective and coloring yet so bad at feet

>>2418130

i hate that i know this but i'm pretty sure donald doesn't wear shoes in any of the games

>>2418150

every choice i have made in my entire life up until this very moment has brought me to where i am today

>>2395296
roll

Rollin

HERE WE GO!

double roll!

>>2418339

here it is

roll

>>2418187
Just look up references for a bottom view of the shoes... not that hard to fix.

>>2395296
rollen

>>2418383
done, crit?

>>2418754
no character at all

rollinh

>>2418754
Awkward pose. Flattening pattern on helmet. Gauntlet thing looks creepy and has a tangent with the stage right leg

Roll

>>2418848
Barely even tried.
What do you guys think?

>>2417853
It's the arms isn't it?
They were originally exposed but then I remembered she has gloves on so I quickly scrounged them up and thinned it out.
Also looking at it now I realize how awkward some of the shading on the dress is.

>>2395296
roll

>>2418869

why try at all if you're barely going to try, anon. at least flip the image the right way and try to make it look like you kinda care

roll

rorin garu

ghost/assassin princess

>>2419802
I love it.

Roll.

>>2419802
Love the lines.

>>2395296
roll

Rollin'

rell

rolling for a warmup

>>2395296
rollan

>>2419802
I just noticed her frontmost leg kind of creates a tangent with the dust in the foreground; it looks like a portion of her leg should be visible, too for the record. Keep up the good work

>>2395305
This is terrible.

why lord, of /ic, why do I suck so much?

>>2418826
delivery. rolling again

Rolling

>>2422623
It's not the worst thing I've ever seen but it's certainly not great. Consult Loomis!

>>2422624
Spectacular overall but my FUCKING god those hands are huge.

>>2422624
...also those feets are pretty shoddy, man. You could also get a better shadow result just by copying, pasting and skewing a silhouette of the character. It'd probably look pretty cool

>>2422643
>>2422644

I'll try that with the shadow next time, thanks! I'm not sure if you were counting this against me, but the hands are huge in the reference too. Yeah, I need to try harder with the feet, thanks for the crit.

>>2422645
You're right about the hands, I wasn't necessarily counting it against you (it was obviously intentional) but their being that size and their being portrayed as normal leather gloves she's wearing on her 6 times larger than normal hands kind of came across as strange to me in that moment. I've always read them as meaty gauntlets or something that alludes to their being a bulky extension to the hands rather than something covering giant hands. WITH THAT SAID that is my interpretation, that doesn't make it right; you have to take out of the reference what you want and be confident in yourself and your vision, my nigga

Roll

>>2395296

Rollan

>>2395296
Roll

>>2395308
super cool! love it!

Damn son, where'd you roll this?

>>2395296
Damn son, where'd you roll this?

>>2423188
Got dubs.
Can't choose.
Will draw em all

roll

Roll

>>2423377

>>2407407
hnnnngg

plez color it fampai

DO IT

>>2414390
fix her face then it will be 100x better

>>2395296
ronk

>>2416419
damn.

how long u been drawing?

>>2416593
make another layer and trace this one so it doesnt look like shit

>>2417254
her head is bulging out too much, thats not what a skeleton looks like

f hair was bigger it wuld be better

>>2418754
the way her head is on the neck is weird, the hands are tiny and the arms looks like clothing not armor.

head should be bigger and you lack joints in 90% of the armor

>>2422623
its not terrible but the lips are horrendous

learn anatomy

>>2423442
that fucking face is killing me

get rid of the blush, and practice drawing faces more, honestly the body isnt that bad

alright i done talking its time to roll

>>2395296
starting my last TG for the time being. :)

>>2423628
>>2423628

have a judy :D

>>2423677
ty senpai

now get to work

>>2423663
I really like it Ruan-sama. Her torso looks a little small to me but I'm not so sure. Great work fampai.

>>2423677
I wanna fug that wascally wabbit

>>2423792
I love that it's traditional media; or looks a hell of a lot like it. The eyes look just a tad far apart and the angle of the nose, chin and cheek kind of clashes with the eyes being straight across from one another like that. Good stuff overall.

>>2424057
Thanks man. Will update it! :DI was actually thinking that.

Can you help me on that one like a red line so I can see how it rolls?

TIA

>>2424107
Here's my interpretation. Keep in mind I'm from the outside looking in.

>>2424116
Oh shitr I'm sorry.

I'm >>2423663

>>2424122
Oh fug

>>2424116
can i have your blog ?

>>2424128
blog?

rollin

>>2424186
xnosebro.tumblr.com now give me your damn blog

>>2424198
You mean this guy I assume >>2423792 I don't have a blog to be honest family

>>2424205
im asking for the guy who did the redline.

>>2424209
Noseebro pls

I don't even

>>2395296

>>2424261

>>2424283
i have a soft spot for ridiculous boobies. bless u senpai

rollin

>>2424441
>more like a hard spot

>>2424820
are those face fins
i'll roll again

not my best but good practice

>>2422624
rolling again. the anatomy feels a little off with this one.

>>2425444
Nice trips. that angle is super tough, I don't know, it looks like the bottom part of her head is being covered by something; other then that I'm diggin' it. Try looking for a few references

>>2425446
Do you mean the collar? And yeah, I'm not sure if I'm gonna do a beast or celestial princess.

>>2395296
rollinnnn

roll!

>>2395296
rollin
hope its presentable this time

>>2425444
>>2425444

>>2425727
this is the best thing ive ever drawn no bully

here's a roll

>>2426192
I'm gonna bully the f*ck out of u n*gga

>>2426438

>>2426192
chicken scratching
pillow shading
eyes are in her forehead
mouth is in her chin
misshapen tits
midsection is a grotesquie

Keep working son

>>2426465
I love the gesture of this one, it almost looks like it was drawn by Vilppu himself. I'm really feeling it.

>>2395296
>no trap-princess

>>2426932
disregard this!
My eyes are weak and my faggotry knows no bounds!

What the fuck is this doing here? How is this not /tg/ shit?

>>2427009
are you the 4chan police?

>>2427009
where have you been anon? it's been here since forever geez

>>2427014

anyway roll

>>2425646
Sorry for the crappy lighting

rold

are you supposed to just draw your version of the towergirls on the picture or can you just make your own version of whatever you go

>>2427071
get*

>>2427071
the former
..well the latter is also okay

it's up to you really..

roll

>>2427042
hella cute, really good work

>>2427653
why does she looks so grumpy here?

>>2395296
ROLL

roll

>>2427009
Most of the original character thumbnail art was created by a /tg/ user; however he's more-or-less abandoned them for the time being.

In 18 days these threads will have been a presence on this board for an entire year. In a way these threads may be more /ic/ than /tg/ by now.

>>2427042
Adorable, excellent work; I don't have much critical to say except that it's a shame we can't really see the forms of the lower portion of the dress very well. Also her stage-right arm is slightly thicker than it ought to be given that it's further away from the viewer. Very beautiful colors and drawing overall. Love those subtle splotches of yellow on that cute little snoot.

>>2427071
Either, there's no specific rules, you can just treat the character's name as a general guide or you can use the picture as a reference. Think of them like the old rolling threads from the past.

>>2427596
Very nice sketch; I like how you've used the horns and ears to complement and suggest a subtle tilt of the head.

>>2427671

rolling

>>2427773

Progress sketch. Critique is appreciated. I feel like the legs are really off and I don't know how armor works. Also dat arm.

>>2427763
Cute but flat af tbhfam, consider pushing that beak son

>>2427814
Pretty good likeness with the posemaniacs reference but take greater care with the angles of the arm. The neck appears slightly too long, also observe the relationship between the stage-right shoulder and the back of the head. Keep workin' fampai.

>>2427956
Here's a visual example to show you what I mean about the shoulders and arm, Don't be afraid to take liberties with the reference, but certainly analyze the reference when any of those liberties you may have taken seem off to you.

>>2395296
Rollin out

rorr

>>2427985
>tauros
absolutely disgusting, reroll

>>2427814
you didnt get trips faggot
youre supposed to draw cat princes

roll

>>2427042
What tools did you use
I'm new and can't tell
Watercolor? Or those meme manga markers?

>>2428257
Meme manga markers. Though honestly working with watercolours is a lot more rewarding in my opinion

rawl

Roll

>>2395296
Moth princess

Not great but learned a few things about posing, female anatomy and drawing from reference. So that's good

>>2395296
Moth princess

Not great but learned a few things and thats what counts.

>>2428186

If you insist senpai.

>>2429571
cute cat!
you need to stop chickenscratching though

>>2427982

Lots of moth love in here

>>2429571
now color it

roll

>>2429684
moth is a slut

>>2395296
r8 my sn8k

>>2430137
took too much creative liberty with the design/10

roll

rolling

row

>>2429872
fite me

>>2395296
literally went full deviantart

sorry

>>2395296
rollin

roll daze