/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Spent about 8 hours on this using water-soluable oil paints on 18x24

Been painting since september and this piece has already been critiqued by my instructor but I haven't had time to work on it with my other classes. The one thing he didn't really critique was my colors, so if you see anything that looks off there please let me know.

>>2310918
das pretty shit senpai desu

>>2312723
Proportions are really off, and it is poorly composed. Colours are a bit hard to tell from the photo, but it looks okay. You've used a fairly limited palette which means it's hard to screw it up too bad. It's a little heavy-handed I suppose though like how you make the halftone on the cheek super red and saturated.

>>2312782
>>2312795
This isn't a critique thread you numskulls.
Post self portraits or shut the fuck up.

>>2312797
>/ic/ - artwork/CRITIQUE

>>2312833
If OP wanted a critique thread he would have stated so.
>Draw/paint a picture of yourself, then post it. Easy.
Not
>Draw/paint a picture of yourself, then post it and critique others who aren't looking for critiques.

>>2312838
>implying anyone cares

>>2312840
This
literally a bunch of babies who can't take the heat
>>2310918
whats your sheezyart account friend :^)

>>2312795

Hey thanks man - I like the saturated red too.

You are definitely right on all counts. I didn't really even think about the composition to be honest, I just snapped a picture with my phone and a lamp. But next time I will do better.

I don't mind the bants.

>>2312723
hahahaha so shit
and can't even take the bantz

>>2313159
Check the sticky.

I tried.

>>2313002
Best in the thread so far, but that's not saying much.

tried without erasing. less than 5 minutes i swear.

why are people in /ic/ so bad?

>>2313415
because people like me got kicked out. Hateful mods keep deleting my posts with my art.

>>2313415

Because usually when someone reaches a reasonable level of competence shitposters swarm around them until they stop posting their art.

This board is its own worst enemy.

>>2313422
How so? good art usually gets no replies on this site unless it's spammed.

>>2313415
dude why are you trying to hurt our feelings? it makes me so sad sometimes.

>>2312713
OOGA?
>>2312723
Why the long face?
>>2313159
Symbol drawing/ sticky as usual.
>>2313320
Jesus I hope you look nothing like that, and only half as greasy.
>>2313413
Nobody cares about the time, I like it despite it being bad.

>>2313407
heh yeah its just a quick sketch
havent done a detailed self portrait in ages but im planning on one..

from previous self portrait thread. planning to redo this one

ok

>>2310918
Stayed up till real nigga hours and drew myself in the mirror at like 2 in the morning.

>>2313864
My phone likes to make shit fucking huge.

>>2313864
>>2313867
Whatever I give up.

>>2313827
Tim is that you?

>>2313867
why would you ever sign that lol

>>2313781
neat stylization
>>2313867
give it more contrast; thine lines are too light. forehead is also a bit too short.
>>2313870
whoa how'd you know?

>>2313882
I put the date and that's it. The shit at the bottom is just a note.

>>2313887
Looks like the artstyle and kind of like the person I know.

Doodled this quickly for snapchat.
Might make a full render one in the future

dont normally draw myself

Was a class assignment. I look kind of retarded in hindsight, but oh well.

>>2315893
Pretty nice. Some things feel a bit flat though. The shoulder on the right especially looks awkward and completely flat. But also your head, like it doesn't feel like your chin is a projecting out from your neck. This would be nice if you had some brighter white chalk than you used for some more value difference, or if you used a darker paper. The hair could probably be simplified more too. Here's a drawing by Klimt that shows both of these things well, and even though it is lit by ambient light the forms are still solid, and there are some wonderful simplifications and choices being made:
http://uk.blouinartinfo.com/sites/default/files/styles/970w576h/public/klimttop.jpg

The white chalk there is used sparingly but it's very effective and complements the dark yellow paper well.

>>2315903
oh my god, just shut up please.

>>2315903
I definitely got a bit lazy on the shoulder. Thanks for the advice and image! I see what you mean with pushing a few highlights. The medium was colored pencil, not chalk, but im sure i could apply that to colored pencil.

>>2315893
would bang

>>2313002
new one wip

>>2316268
sorry resize

are you a statue or something?

>>2316484
v
>>2316270

/ic/ is breddy fuckin cute

Sorry for the snapchat text shit. It was late.

Also, I made my face longer than it actually is...on accident of course. Don't really care though.

bnup

>>2313421

kek

>>2317173
nice

>>2317181
thanks

reposting because it's my only recent one.

Reductive drawing drawn with a kneaded eraser.

Self Portrait

C&C welcome!

>>2317404
Why is your mouth so tiny?

>>2317294
you must have a small brain

>>2317173
great m8

>>2317446
It just is. About the width of my nose. I need to rework the portrait, I think, to make it better.

>>2312713
You slouching fuck. Own of my biggest let peeves is posture. Fix your spine

>>2310918
In this board, people draw pretty well, and then people who can't draw for shit call it shit.

16x20 oil from a couple of weeks ago

>>2317807
Looks amazing.

>>2317815
Pretty nice anon. Colours are nice, reminds me of some colour choices made by Russian artists. The drawing in this is weak though, the perspective of things like your nose is pretty off. I think the neck and shirt are handled well. The face feels overworked and doesn't have the ease of handling your shirt does, and the edges in your face are not controlled well.

Are you self taught or do you study somewhere?

>>2317815
>oils
>tumblr nose

y?

>>2317837
>this guy seriously thinks noses are never reddish in hue

>>2316578
i threw up

>>2310918
figure drawing in acrylic 45 secondsish

>>2312713
Gianni esu eisai?

>>2317146
Jesus, learn some perspective, it's painful to look at your drawing.

>>2313428
CHUNGA
>>2317803
Just my depressed stature. I normally stand upright when I'm feeling fine.
And my biggest pet peeve is shitty spelling.
>>2317917
I only speak English.
.

>>2317146
i love your art

Self Portrait III final revision

comment & critique are welcome

>>2317819

Post work, because you don't know what the fuck you are talking about, and are just "critiquing" for the sake of your own sense of self indulgence.

>>2317819

Post your work, because you don't know what the fuck you are talking about, and are just "critiquing" for the sake of your own sense of self indulgence and to seem knowledgeable.

>>2319405
wtf does posting his work have to do with his critique? He's right, the nose iS off perspective, actually most of the facial features are . there's no place for u in the art world if your gna be a sensitive bitch

5 hungry mins

>>2319430
Gen Zedd?

>>2315893
L O N D O N
O
N
D
O
N

>>2319453
Heh.

Well this is me

>>2319405

>merc.wip inbound

Beginner here looking for some advice. I have too much trouble drawing lips, any tips one can offer?

>>2319744
Sticky.

>>2319744


sticky, symbol drawing

top lip is generally darker than bottom lip due to lighting.

>>2317844
>everyone has a nose like Rudolph the red nose reindeer
You look like you want it up the arse from complete strangers in that self-portrait

>>2319756
I don't really understand what symbol drawing is. Could i get a better definition of symbol drawing or should i be going in the direction of what this link tells me. http://pencils.com/drawing-lessons-using-light-and-shadows-to-create-3-dimensional-shapes/

>>2315893
????????????

>>2319775
Just follow what the sticky tells you to do then you will figure it out

>>2319778
No, wrong person

>>2319775

Symbol drawing is when you draw a symbol for what you see rather than trying to draw exactly what you see.

>>2319829

MS PAINT ANON?

>>2312797
>stop posting critique on the board specifically created to critique each others' art

>>2312838

Stop bitching. I can get being irritated at someone just going "that's shit" but whining about any critique on a board about critique is just retarded.
You shouldn't just assume critique is unwelcome unless explicitly stated on a board called artwork/critique.
If OP explicitly said "leave critique for other threads" you might have a case, but even that's stupid given the purpose of the board. This isn't just an art sharing board, there are plenty of venues for that.

i've been doing a lot of self portraits using a mirror and it's been a lot harder starting out but i'm learning a lot faster. would recommend

might as well post this
ill do a realism try when i can

Pretty proud of this one

eyyy

>>2320157
i used to make weird faces too when i was 9.

Quick one of a pic I found on my phone. I don't think im ready for faces yet.

>>2319430
i dont have to flip the photo, because i can tell how shitty it is at this angle.

>>2320534
pls be my gf.

>>2320537
im a boy

>>2313427
>>2315893
>>2317404
>>2317807
>>2319397
>>2319829
nnice job

>>2320540
no you're not

>>2320208

Only really mature people act superior to strangers online for self validation...

>>2320597
ok mister gnar wolves

>>2320606

I'm not even that guy dingus.

Enjoy trying to act cool and caring what others think mr maturity.

>>2320611
ok mister maturity

>>2320618

Keep proving my point.

>>2320620
lol i'm not even the original guy you replied to

>>2320624

Sure.

>>2320597
>>2320606
>>2320611
>>2320618
>>2320620
>>2320624
>>2320628

all of you, consider going outside for a walk perhaps?
put on some attire for the season, go down to a park, maybe crunch through some leaves, snow, whatever suites your fancy.

can't you see how silly all this drama is?

>>2320551
Have you been drawing with a mouse in MSpaint?

this is my self

>>2313838
Your face is all fucked up man >>

>>2320752
yes, just too lazy to get the tablet out

>>2320858
>>2320551

are you by any chance using the latest mspaint?
i ask this because your mouse+paint pics sometimes feature filled in colors amongst lines that are anti-aliased, which leads to the white artifacts around the line edges.

the windows xp version of mspaint is quite good if you're looking to avoid this, as it doesn't do anti-aliasing by default:
http://www.softpedia.com/get/Multimedia/Graphic/Graphic-Editors/Paint-XP.shtml

>>2321341
it is because i am using the brush tool, as opposed to the pencil tool. this problem is fixed when the pencil tool is used, but i will check out your link anyways

>>2319397
are you a boy or a girl?

>>2312838
Nice samefag

>>2321365
ah, i understand now.
if only they had put in a option that just toggles drawing with smooth edges, oh how simple that would be.

>>2321392
Boy

>>2321410
if you grow your hair out you could be a girl and rip all the benefits of being a female. i'm kind of jealous.

>>2321417
I am not even gonna try because I am anatomically a male.

When I cough I make one giant monsterous noise haha

>>2321473
one word: helium.

>>2315893

Damn, artistic and cute. I'm not like all these other nerds I promise.

Love me.

P.S do you have a blog.

>>2315893
>>2315893

Damn, artistic and cute. I'm not like all these other nerds I promise.

Love me.

P.S do you have a blog.

>>2322125
blog?

Months ago since I did this.
Short hair now.

>>2322149
I don't have one, sorry. I don't even think i can draw well.. so thanks, i guess.

>>2313320
ok mr pedophile
>>2313827
the neck black blob really bothers me
>>2313838
do you have fetal alcohol syndrome?
>>2316270
bad
>>2317146
what the fuck is that composition? im not even going to mention any other problems
>>2319397
if you look like that irl you've got some weird mutations
>>2319744
fucking hell man

>>2322211

Why use a digital when you can just paint with the blood from where you cut yourself.

>>2322208
why do I have weird mutations? What's wrong with me??

hi this is me as a maggot tell me i am a pretty girl-maggot <3
>>2322211
yo i like that style

>>2322211
>>2323094

blog?

>>2320208
It's crazy how much people change in 4 years

>>2320261
>I don't think im ready for faces yet.
nigga if you don't draw faces you'll never be ready for faces

you people who only "critique" and never post need to get a fuggin life lmaooo. Especially people like this>>2315903 like fuck man, its a fine drawing. Im exactly one to be talkin here with my level but damn

>>2323412
*im NOT exactly

>>2323412
A coach doesn't need to be as good as their players.

Kek

Forgot this thread was a thing

>>2323476
lol look at that shirt. why don't you just look at that.

>>2323474
Wales?

damn, /ic/I thought you were better than this.

Posted this already in the drawthread but didn't know this thread was here so fuck it ill post again.

>>2323481
quality stuff i know

>>2323520
Is your face dirty?

>>2323520
Pretty nice. There's only some small nitpicks: ears look small, eyebrows and highlights there make you have a worried look on your face, the light outline on your shirt looks bad, where the texture shows can be a bit more controlled because as the other posted said in some areas it makes your face look dirty.

>>2323520
Are you the another son of han solo?

forever unfinished

>>2319877
yes its me

I think i posted this one before.

>>2315877
i like that style, "fatfuck"

>>2322441
your face is extremely flat and it's growing straight off of your neck, as if it's not even on your head

>>2323869
So am I
>>2323875
My ears ARE small, thanks for the rest of the feedback I've taken it all on board.
>>2323877
Yes, I kill leia in the sequel, spoiler alert.

Way different than what everyone else has but... First acrylic piece I did in my art class. Obvious inspiration from Pink Floyd and yes, the proportions for my face were supposed to be kind of wrong.

Concrit welcomed though!

>>2323476
love the color pallete m8

welp

Nothing compares in showing the epitome of your skill like sixty second self portrait on an online whiteboard.

>>2324502
stfu

>>2324140
>way different than what everyone else has
Well, lookatchu trying to be special and different.

>>2323412
>you have to be better than someone at something overall to notice any of their mistakes
If he sees a problem, he'd best state it
>it's a fine drawing
He knew. However, if the artist could be even better, then why shouldn't they?

>>2316571
Its a mess
>>2317105
hobo George Micheal. not bad
>>2317303
your hair are probably a good investement if falling debris are coomon in your area. pretty good
>>2317417
snout Hitler with chicken claws
>>2317499
you look like a background character of a webcomic. also stop smoking, its bad for your linework
>>2317883
are you related to the angry marines logo?
>>2317904
hipster white snoop dogg stop playing with yo momma mestruations
>>2319403
I hope that's just a strange expression and you're not actually paraplegic
>>2319549
You look like every geek ever. the style seems a drunk imitation of Diterlizzi. both aren't good things
>>2320101
You look extremely gay even for tumblr standards. probably you should be happy
>>2320194
What's that, a flat iron spitting flames from the muffler? well I guess taps have peculiar imagination. nice choice using a profile for your face.
>>2320753
you look like a fucking weeb basement dweller. respect
>>2322169
you should think more of drawing and less about your fucking hair. well maybe you'll go bald one day, so better enjoy it while it lasts
art makes you go bald faster, did you knew?
>>2323468
and your hair are made of ham? I'm jealous. wonder how fast the ham regrows.
>>2323497
This seems out of one of those super intelligent webcomics with sharp humor and ironically ugly art. bonus points for the dick neck
>>2323987
this goes straight into my porn folder. if your mouth is really like that, your boyfriend is a lucky person
>>2324410
come on a date with me sleepy.

>>2323880
An extremely good imitation of sad pepe. I had no idea men could become nuns.
>>2324575
wait, I need to fix my monitor settings because I don't see it well

>>2323987

Monica Lewinsky?

>>2324410

Hey cutie, can I nuzzle your boobies?

>>2324410
absolutely disgusting

>>2323987
Why the long face?

>>2324791
I just have an oblong shaped face bro

>>2324716
Thanks i guess. And yeah i cant close my fucking mouth because of my bunny teeth.

>>2324828
its cute and potentially sexy

>>2324790
Post your art.

>>2323987

Nyyeehh...What's up Doc?

>>2324850
Im having middleschool flashbacks TRIGGERED

>>2324860
Can you make a self portrait wearing a bunny girl suit?

>>2313838
Hello Ahmed Maboob

>>2310918
What program do you guys use? I'm thinking about buying a Huion tablet.

Is Manga Studio 5 worth the money? And can you animate using it?

>>2313415
Because it's an anonymous website that doesn't have a skill specification to use, so many untalented people, or just amatuers in general, come here.

>>2324716
>judges
>doesn't share shitmess of a portrait

>>2324889

Maybe I judged mine too, maybe not

>>2324716
>>2324782
only if ur qt

>>2324790
yessir

>>2324889
>>doesn't share shitmess of a portrait

I hate this board.

Why are people so damn negative here?

>>2324950
Am I cute?

>>2325060
Unsurprisingly, the sentiment is reciprocated
>>2325115
...have you looked the pictures in this thread?

>>2325117
da kawaiiest
qt/10 would hang on my wall

>>2310918
It's too big, I already know.

>>2325090
Will you rape me?

>>2325122, refer to the following:

>>2313428
>>2317855
>>2317989
>>2323488
>>2324716

>>2323412
Fucking this.

>>2325133
You look like you own a motorcycle

>>2325144
I do, actually lol
Also, I live in an RV

>>2325136
There is nothing worse than being ignored you dumb retarded cumivore wereass. to paraphrase that person you consider so wise, "lmaoooo"

>>2325133
You look like cast member of trailer park boys.

did this just now with a mirror. first self portrait i've ever liked

>>2325437
blog?

>>2325439
i know this is the new meme, are you shitposting?

>>2325440
nope

>>2325440
no, I just wanna know if you have a blog because I liked your style

>>2325441
>>2325442
alright then, spaghettisketch.tumblr.com

this is a good bit better than what i usually post though so be warned

>>2325444
>so be warned
It is not that bad shut up

>>2315893

do you have an artstation?

This bad

>>2324410
do i get a redo
fuck it yeah i do

>>2325498
blog?

>>2325501
if you're being for reals, nudistgangsta.tumblr.com
there isn't much on it though

>>2325498
Sleepy a cute

>>2325135
Yes.

>>2325437

Carci?

>>2325498

I bet you have soft little ears to nibble on.

>>2325841
Show more respect to my gf you fucking idiot.

It's so great to be a girl.

>>2325842

Fite me.

>>2325844

IKR!

Show boobs.

>>2325639
thnk u bb

>>2325841
>>2325842
>>2325859
calm down, senpai has noticed both of you

>>2325844
that it is

why do grills get so many replies? geez

>>2317815
I like your pirate style!

>>2323520
nice

>>2319453
I will ____ your brains out (fill in gaps).

>>2325928
Just one, because I like her drawings.
nice art>personality=cute>sexy>easy to fuck
this is how I rank females.

>>2326093

> I'm fucking desperate

>>2324716
Mate, I fucking shaved it clean off months after this was done. Was trying to do some Mucha shit back that week I made that portrait.

>>2310918

Ignore the phrase.

>>2327028
Then crop or cut it out.

>>2327041

Too lazy. I just grabbed the pic from my folder.

When you come on /ic/ to browse and see a thread you created weeks ago still sitting in the catalog.

Hello, you magnificent bastards.

>>2319397

You mind need to add more of something to make your paint smoother senpai. It's really clumped on there.

Was the first portrait I did in high school.

>>2328499
You look vaguely like a kpop star, wanna fuck?

The true face of a winner

>>2328483
That is friggin' adorable.

>>2328558
Go take a bath buddy

>>2328558
r u spazkid?

>>2328575
Bath's are gross. Besides mine's too small. I do shower 2-3 times a day though.
>>2328576
If you so desire, then yes.
Realistically, no. Sorry bud

>>2328558
lose some weight

Did in about 40m...

Can't tell if boy or girl. I must have made a mistake! oh.... no.... I didn't. :\

Damn you genetics.

>>2328628
Nah, too lazy

>>2328635
youll live longer and get to ref off your own body. Just install yourself a treadmill at your computer desk or something if youre worried about time sink. Or maybe just starve yourself. Do it for me, I hate fat people. But i wish I could like you. Do it for your mom, you dont want your mom to attend your funeral do you?
>>2328632
Youre not drawing what youre looking at(elaborate form of symbol drawing), let go of soft brushes.

>>2328656
No, thats pretty much what I look like. Big nose n all. Plus I wasn't intending to go into much detail because I just got a tablet 2 days ago and whenever I try to do too much I end up fucking it up. So just staying simple for now.

>>2328673
thats now what you look like, i could draw you more accurately from your own drawing. Chin cant possibly be that pointy, ear doenst follow aas i would like, nose cant possibly retract that fact, mouth cant possibly be that grotesque.

>>2328681
not*

>>2328673
Anon said nothing about your looks. Don't worry about them so much. I don't need to see you to know you don't actually look like that. The perspective is off if nothing else and anon is right. Think about what they said. You'll improve if you work on those things.

And you don't look like a boy. If you're that bothered by it, grow your hair out.

>>2328483
Cute.

>>2328685

lol, you think that's your only error?

Regardless, it's not the only thing that makes your dumbass comments unreadable.

>>2328681
I'll give you the mouth. I didn't like how that went either remotely.... So much easier to sketch in pencil. But the chin is actually that pointy. I'm a strange looking person.

I think it's more a matter of I need to get used to using digital, than anything. It screws me up all the time. I don't know where all the brushes are, what they do. Etc. And I am still clumsy with the tablet in general :\. It's not one that has a screen to see on it like a wacom. It's just a pen pad. So it is taking me time to get used to.

>>2329010
Oops. Forgot to add the ear. I didn't even really try there. Rofl. I was just trying to see how much I could get done in 40m.

I didn't really even adjust the brush... I just made left it at 1.00 and 100% opacity and let the tablet do the rest. I know that's not what I am supposed to do, though. But whenever I try to add funky tools/color I tend to fuck it up.

>>2328558
>posting his work
>only comments he got were criticizing the way he looks, instead of criticizing the way he drew himself
That's exactly why I never post my self portraits here.

>>2328483
No way you could be this cute.

>>2325437
>wolf sweater
good, i like your style and flow too

>>2329099

>the thirst is real

>>2323433
>excuses.txt

>>2323987
The world is pretty tiny when you think about it.

>>2328904
only mistake that impedes reading ya.

>>2329313
Oh shit you know me who are you?

>>2329451
Imma rape you

>>2329313
That's what I call a sex mouth

>>2328656
Why would I lose weight for you, or anyone for that matter. If it impedes upon my health, then I will. I'm fine as it it now. Plus, I'll be dead so I wouldn't care much if I had a funeral or not, nor who showed up.
>>2329092
You know upon the critique part I just realized I drew my right eye horribly. I do have a huge gross dick nose though.

>>2324716
Fuck these were funny. I like you, guy

>>2329313
>>2329511

>>2328558
youre that guy from nighthawks animations?

>>2324716
jesus christ
someone screencap this shit

>>2330041
What's the point when the corresponding pictures aren't there. Plus it wasn't funny.

>>2328208
>When OP posts after 200 posts congratulating himself on his threads success
this always makes me cringe.

It's a shitty one but who cares.

>>2330152

>When you "cringe" at the things people write online to make yourself feel superior

roast me /ic/, i'm ~*soft grunge*~

>>2330158
Took me a bit to get that it wasn't boobs but an arm
>>2330392
nice hair.

>>2329851
fucking fattie.

>>2328580
Do you shower 2-3 times a day to combat all that fat sweat? Your bath is too small because you're a landwhale.
Unless you're out wrangling in the dirt (which I doubt you do) you don't need to shower that often.

You sound awfully defensive for someone who put their self portrait on /ic/ of all places.

>>2330462
>>2330442
/ic/ - hygiene/healthcare

>>2310918

from a while back

>>2330549
It's shit, read sticky.

>>2330462
I do sweat alot due to the heat since I work near my window, though I could be wrong and your fat statement is true. I only take long showers in the morning. Anything after that is just 5 minutes so I can get the gross sweat smell off.
>>2330462
ya got me there

>>2330714
>he's actually responding to them

>>2330720
Mostly cuz I've been bored. Either that or childish insecurities are leaking out.
My publisher still hasn't responded yet and I'm running out of movies to watch.

>>2330733
>publisher
you what

>>2329313
Dank teeth! Can you sing too?

>>2330159
What else can you expect from a tripfag?

>>2330547
I like this one.

Was a quick complimentary color study, no measurement or drawing just jumped in. I look like a yaoi boy

>>2331615
You look more a cross between a fish and a monkey actually

>>2331933
Isn't that what humans are?

>>2317807
stahp it dog.
get off 4chan.
you cant art
you don't even have apposable thumbs

Drew this in the fall for an ig icon

>>2332400
I like the hands on this a lot, but the back and shoulder positions are throwing me off. They're too far to the right I think

>>2332904
stop copying tumblr trends and learn to draw

the back and shoulder positions are fine, and merely exaggerated to get a point across

>>2329451
i know u alright baby

>>2310918
Do you have a lazy eye condition?