/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Back again with an update on my cruddy first attempt editing. Did I do the shadows right?

P.S.: Took off the other practice layers so that it doesn't distract ppl *cough*aheago basher*cough*

can someone tell me /ic/'s obsession with the artist that drew these?
or is it just mikufag being butthurt?

>>2299992
there's different reasons
- some people have a bad sense of humor/taste
- some people like to troll this guy to make him think they actually care for his work
- samefagging
- trolling mikufag for no clear reason

is my writing bad enough for porn?

>>2299992
Its the same guy that made the 1 hour art thread.
Its always the same guy that create those and every single time, it gets to bump limit plus shittons of participants. So people are jealous maybe?
If im not mistaken, this is the same guy that made those christian comics with the swastika in the title.

>>2300038
I like work as always!

>>2300038
Stop copying anime/manga symbols and learn some fundamentals.

>>2300038
very appealing good work, fix that tail though, as-is it looks like it's coming out of her butthole for fug's sake.

>>2300042
lol butthurt

>>2300041
stop samefagging, christ... [=_=]
It looks like some horny 15 year old weaboo's work... [T_T]

>>2300038
>that thing on it's face is the mouth

>>2300045
must I do this every time

>>2300045
>[=_=]
>[T_T]

please leave

>>2300044
I'm not really butthurt, since this is below my own work imo. What I said is very true. The face looks exactly like Shiwasu No Okina's girls, and the malformed boobs are proof that he doesn't understand perspective and anatomy.

>>2300002
that mouth

>>2300050
Yeah. this proves everything rofl. Like it's sooo hard to photoshop a screenshot haha.

>>2300056
LOVE the photoshop edit meme!

>>2300058
no one takes so much time to defend a complete stranger lol.
stop tryharding, samefag.

>18 replies
>thread's already at shitposting mode

>>2300060
no one takes so much time to slander someone who thinks they're samefagging unless they never received "I love your work!" by a complete stranger. Stop being jealous.

>>2300064
I receive that basically on a daily basis, but that's not the point.
Listen, do you want me to redline that, to make it up to you for saying you copied Shiwasu No Okina's style while not knowing how to draw proper breasts?

>>2300073
No, just post your work so I make sure not to give you thanks in the future.

>>2300061

>>2300075
You really shouldn't be mad at people that give you valid critique.

>>2299992
Why is there a series of these?

>>2300193
Because some people have too much spare time.

>>2300193
because everyone wants to fuck mikufag

>>2300239
Fuck with as in piss him off or literally, physically, smashing his boipussy IRL?

I'll just place this here and see what happens..

>>2300256
His neck is broken.

>>2300243
>literally, physically, smashing his boipussy IRL

>>2300256
The cock.
The cock is realy nice. That's a high quality cock.
But yeah that neck is broken. It looks like you squeezed that poor demon inside the canvas because you made the canvas too small.

>>2300002
She looks too nice to say, "shit like that". She sounds like teenage boy.

>>2300270
It's a dated facebook meme, anon. Get with the times. From Rick Ross eating healthy, though I could be wrong about the reference in that picture

How do I figure out a fetish in which to capitalize? Which one is not yet saturated?

And how do make sure the people that like that sort of stuff find me?

>>2300050
Thanks for defending me but right now I'm scared of all these people here

>>2300268
That's a nice reaction for a cock, thank you!

>>2300270
>>2300264
I tried making him a bit more comfortable..

>>2300281
Furfags are easily the most cash-loaded and ready-to-pay demographics on the internet. Them and diaper/ponyfags, though those tend to overlap. And honestly, you wont get shit if you wait for them to find you. Find sites where they are known to be found and start networking/drawing. I easily made like 500 dollarydoos in a month from furaffinity commissions and I find the fetish to be dumb as fuck.

>>2300283
You scared of this guy too?
>>2300188

I think you should say thanks.

>>2300270
>>2300275
shoutout
https://vine.co/v/ObbKrpn5JwL

More demon buy, wip this time.

>>2300243
>smashing his boipussy IRL?

Seems like it

More demon boy, wip this time.

>>2300356
>...and then she farts!

>>2299970
There needs to be harder shadows under the breasts.
I'm not too sure how much of it is yours since you said 'editing' but I feel like all of her body is one tan hue and her mouth is a red hue. Add a little more pink to the nipples and the vagina and try to add a less saturated tone to the tongue.

>>2300265
HEY MIKE!

>>2299751
>>2299755
I thought there were going to be 7 parts? ;_;

that said all in all damn good very useful can't wait for the next tutorial that will be fun

>>2300292
Wow never thought Id see you in this board
>>2300297
if anyone wants to rake in that hot furry money, sofurry is a good place to start since it has a sell/buy page

>>2300678
I come here from time to time, used to be the only 4chan board i used. The new Porn threads are fun though!

I figured this stuff would be perfect here.

Gonna start running now.

>>2300487

>>2300487
This is the worst meme..

Hey guys. So I know it's possible to get paid and stay anonymous with a business paypal acc.

But is it possible to pay someone while staying anonymous? I think not, correct?

>>2300703
I think the business account would make it possible. Like, if you receive a refund from windows, it'll say windows, not the name of the person logged in. Not sure though, call and ask perhaps.

>>2300283
Y'FUCKING FAGGOT
Y'FUCKING FAGS
I can draw dicks all fucking day all fucking week and I'll never manage to be this fucking faggy.

>>2300780
no bullying

>>2300292
Looks all right now

>>2300292
Could just be me but the dick looks a little twisted, like in order for him to be viewing the top of it it would have to be bent clockwise about 30 or 40 degrees

>>2300256
ehg why

>>2300790
Good to hear!

>>2300855
I agree, I'll try to fix that, thanks!

Repostan. Would like critique.

>>2300988
how many fucking times...

>>2300991
As many as needed until I could critique, hopefully. I would rather not get balls deeper into working on this and end up noticing something to redo the entire thing.

>>2300988
WTF, is this a meme or some shit? You've gotten critique on this a few times, helpful ones at that. Why the fuck are you still asking? Are you that inept that you still need your hand held? Finish the damn picture and quit asking people to baby you like a faggot when you've gotten helpful critiques already.

>>2300988
Re-work face expression, hand/arm, end of tail, legs and line thickness.

- Line thickness is really bad, looks like the result of when I take a drawing into Adobe Flash and just enable auto-trace.
- Her face looks emotionless. Like she's gazing off into the distance thinking about whether or not she left the oven on.
- Arm and hand look boring. Like she just grabbed a hand rail on an escalator while at the mall. A better pose would be perhaps looking like her arm is flexed/tensed up, as though it's struggling under pressure.
- End of the tail doesn't look like fur, just looks like a piece of spaghetti with the silhouette of Vegeta hair added to the end of it.
- Fore-shortening on legs is really messed up imo. I can't pin point why though.
- Also I don't understand the two small curves on either side of the tentacle going across the stomach. It just looks like a stray piece of hair is caught under it. What's that meant to be?

Also you seem to post this exact same picture in every porn thread. What exactly has changed since the last time you posted it?
Forgive me if I'm wrong.

>>2300995
>>As many times as needed
>>I would rather not get balls deeper into working on this

Your logic doesn't make sense.
Why the fuck do you want critique for this, if you aren't going to bother working on it.

Seriously, this shit is becoming spam/meme tier in its current repost form.

>>2300988
You're spamming at this point.

>>2301011
>>2301019
Apologies. I've gotten critique once, and having tweaked the linework accordingly and wanted further opinion. I AM going to work on it, but wanted more thoughts before continuing.

>>2301015
The light weights have been adjusted, as well as rearrangements of the lines regarding the thighs and the bellybutton. Not that major perhaps, but still. Nevertheless, this is what I was looking for, thank you. and this was something I didn't want to get while I've spent hours on coloring alone just to have to scrap it all, inevitable sometimes, but I would prefer to avoid it...

>>2301031
>I've gotten critique once

Twice actually. One was a pretty decent redline. The other was a comment regarding the linework and it looks like you ignored both completely judging from the WIP you posted.

>>2301031
Stop continuously polishing the same turd and start doing some actual studying. Do you really think you are going to improve by doing what you are doing?
Do a fucking thousand sketches and before you come back to thank me, do a few thousands more.

>>2301038
Perhaps I may have forgotten the other post, but the lines have in fact been worked on.

>>2301040
If you think I don't do studies apart from what I've posted here, you're sorely mistaken. These things take time, and while I am where I am, I would like to work out what I can do, is it great? fuck no, but that's why I'm here, looking for critique and not a hugbox.

>>2301047
>that's why I'm here, looking for critique and not a hugbox.

But you've already gotten it. That's the thing. You got the lead you needed. You should be doing research and finding reference to help improve what you were told were your issues instead of here asking for more help again.

>>2301047
Different anon, but

>If you think I don't do studies apart from what I've posted here, you're sorely mistaken
Why dont you start a new drawing but with the same pose? If you've studied you should have no problem scraping this >>2300988 and making a new version.

Im not saying to delete the old one, just keep it and do comparisons with your new one.

>Maybe have better construction with your new 2.0 version?
>Maybe mess with line opacity instead of line thickness?
>Maybe fix the anatomy while improving the gesture?

Open your mouth so I can spoon feed you Anon-chan

>>2301047
>If you think I don't do studies apart from what I've posted here, you're sorely mistaken.
I don't believe you. I think you are lazy and that's it. As another anon said. Stop working on this and start from scratch. What you are doing now is bs.

>>2301050
>>2301052
>>2301069
Kay.

Top tier thread

>>2299926
so i want to up my cell shading game.
could you guys recommend me some good artists?

>>2301083
I can smell the bait from here kid

>>2300697
looks like a Deathclaw

>>2301306
I don't know. I made this up on the go, so it doesn't really represent anything in particular other than a random monster.

>>2300701
its one of my favorites

What do when art block kills your soul?

>>2301426
Idk, watch a good movie or smth, take a walk?

>>2301426
you draw some more

>>2301426
Talk to my girlfri- oh..
I dunno. Fap. Play some games. Read some hentai.

>>2301438

>tfw drawing eyes and lips is arousing to the point where I can't hold my pen properly and have to do something else for a while
a-anyone else has this problem?

>>2301511
Start fapping and one of two things would happen, either you will immediately start seeing mistakes once you start to look at your drawing with a horny eye or you will loose interest after you are done fapping and will most likely scrap the drawing.

>>2301511
It's lips and stomachs for me. And hips. But yeah, masturbating mostly leads to losing interest, so I stick to it for as long as possible.

>>2300188
How do you get lines like that?

>>2301516
>>2301523
I can't draw nor really get off with just one hand so I just have to endure and take a break when it's unbearable. I can't scrap commissions so I keep pushing and pushing to the point where I look like heroin addict going cold turkey with withdrawals.

>>2301511
are you a puritanical 13 year old?

>>2301546
No I'm a 21yo lewdster

>>2301527
manga studio - setting where stroke speed affects brush size

also
>>2301426
looks like it's just bad if you eat right before you start drawing lol. pic related.

Goddamnit why the fuck cant I just get good at my form, I feel like this so constrained it needs to be reworked from the scratch

>>2301613
Her head looks hueg

>>2301621
Don't see it. I'll wait until morning I guess.

>>2301621
Matter of perspective.
I'd say head size is ok, but the lower parts might be too small. Maybe up the leg size a bit from the knees, as it's obviously the closest to the viewer

>>2301623
Well, maybe it's just her thighs and calfs that are small

>>2300496
Oh, thanks, I really just wanted to see if I could convincingly remove something without it looking like crap.
I guess I'll post the original so it's easier to get advice later

still practicing my dicks

>>2301723
practice your funamentals faggot

>>2301618
calm Ark, the only thing off is her balance she doesn't really seem to be lifting her right leg enough for that workout it's a bit stiff the pose that is.

how long are you going to break before you start the next tutorial batch?

>>2301733
As soon as I get good enough drawing vaginas, I'll start working on tutorials on them.
Speaking of which

>>2301723

Yo, http://arkomeda.tumblr.com/post/134175420805/call-for-qa-mailbag-as-of-december-2015-my check dis shit out if you want some more indepth look on how to draw dicks and balls

.
Where do i find art friends?
.

>>2301754
sit in public places workin in a sketchbook and look mysterious

>>2301757
>sit in public places workin in a sketchbook and look mysterious

Autism.

>>2301754
not in the porn thread retard

>>2301757
make sure your dual katanas and Diablo 3 t-shirt are visible

>>2301754
Art school and the internet

>>2301754
What's your skype or steam

>>2301754
I'm talking to one guy who's blog I looked at at random one day, and so far we've been hitting it off.
That being said, I have one other guy that I hardly talk to even though he's on my Skype, and that's largely because he doesn't really draw that much; incidentally, he's not that good as a result. That's alright, but he doesn't think about art like I and the other guy do, and consequently, I can't really speak to him.
In short:
>don't look for art friends that aren't as into art as you
I'd say not to even bother if you aren't that into art.
I know that seems like a no-brainer, but I'd say most of the people on /ic/ couldn't be my friend simply because they just don't seem as into it as I am. They'd rather shit around and call each other senpai and shake they're head a lil' while they draw some gay shit like girls holding hands.
>inb4 pobst ur werkk
It's not about being better; it's about your interests, which're something you need to have in common if you wanna make good friends.

>>2301825
F A M

Does that still show as "senpai"?
The filters a godsend, incidentally.

>>2301754
>asking this in the porn thread
That desperate?

Life drawing sessions are your best bet in terms of finding quality people with a good head on their shoulders. If you want borderline autistic NEETs who've never held a real job in their lives and have poor people skills, stick to online based artists. Online based friendships are pretty shitty and worthless though. I haven't bothered with them since highschool.

QUESTION

What colouring style/method/technique is used here? Do you anons know of any artists who colour like this? I want to commission a colour job, the lineart for the piece is already done. There's just something about the skintone that gets me hard.

>>2299926
Did the coloring not the lineart.

>>2301720
Her vag looks a little bulbous, but it isn't a terrible thing

>>2301944
it's just a rushed photoshop brush with either opacity or flow enabled where he adjust the base color slightly in a color cube. You may like the resulting color transition but beyond that both the drawing and coloring job is pretty shitty quality wise.

>>2301944
Markers.

>>2301993
Wrong.

>>2302072
There's nothing wrong with that. It's exactly how you can create that effect, dumbass.

>>2302072
It's most probably traditional media, as you said, but it's not like in Photoshop or other programs you can't achieve the same results.

>>2301944
JJFrenchie

>>2301754
Why do you need art friends? to make you feel even more miserable if they're better than you?
fucking facebbok fags

Trying to practice perspective. Not sure if I'm doing it right.

>>2302131
pretty good foreshortening, I'd say.

Hands too big?

I'm still working on this, just on and off when i can get the time. I still suck at coloring since everything blurs together for me when i look at colors. any helpful critiques would be great.

>>2302532
I think the hands are fine, just the lower body is too small

>>2302532
>...and then she farts!

>>2300038
Let's talk about the boobs. Her left one(our right) is not on the same plane as her ribcage, it's bent outwards

Any thoughts on this?
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=53780454

>>2303088
Wish I had your guts. Cause it obviously takes a lot of them to post that kind of crap online.
I'm not that bad but I still can't bring myself to post my shit because I wouldn't want people eyes to bleed.

So yeah, either guts or sheer naivete, but whether it's one or the other I commend you.

>>2299999
>that get

in my language 2 and 9 sounds a lot like each other

>>2303149
Which one of the people I mentioned are you? I hope not bad humor/taste chan.

>>2301613
comfy as fuck pic senpai, look forward to seeing it colored.

>>2301438
watch out for those sketchy lines.

did you guys ever felt afraid of getting flak for doing porn?

>>2302533
They look dead, no warmth in their skin at all. Stop shading with black.

>>2303098
ey man it's not that bad because I've posted much worse than his

but I'm guessing you're saying that to motivate that anon, and I'm not gonna stop you but just I think those kinds of words are best suited for others
like me

>>2303248
Any recommendations for colors I should use? I want to add blues and pinks but I dont want it to be too vibrant. I start in black and white before colors, I'll go back and use grays instead of blacks, thanks.

Spend 3 hours a day watching porn, could be getting good drawing porn.

How do you make the switch from watching to drawing porn. Surely wouldn't drawing porn just make you want to masturbate.

>>2303381
masturbate while drawing porn
use the porn you're whacking too as reference

>>2301511
>getting horny from your work.
ah.. i miss those days..

I'm still learning how to art, and now every time I try to fap to a nice H image or watch porn I pay attention to how the body is drawn/how the pornstar's body looks in the video and can't focus on fapping

>>2302532
Definitely one of your weaker ones, BBC. The proportions are off and the forms fall a bit flat. At the angle we're looking from it seems the ass should hide part of the lower back and the head should be smaller. There's not enough overlapping forms to make it believable.

>>2303598
I thought it was one of my best lol. Probably you are right about all that you said though. I've been too focused on rendering and trying a new approach to drawing that I didn't pay enough attention to the perspective or something. Thanks for the crit.

>>2303582
Don't worry, nothing of value was lost.

Meant for the satyr thread on /aco/ but it's long gone.

>>2303714

I know it's muhstyle but that head and upper body are giant.

>>2303598
WHAT?!!! i just realized that's bbc what the fuck?

>>2303727
Should I shrink her head more than this?

>>2303752
just make the bodies bigger

>>2303787
Edited, do they need to be larger than this?

>>2303735
What's wrong?

>>2302814
YOU KNOW
FUCK YOU
FUCK YOU AND THAT STUPID FUCKING JOKE
FUCKING FUCK

>>2303692
its the only one ive hated from you.

What's wrong with this?

>>2303996

>Karin
>Something wrong

Kek'd

>>2303998
I mean any critique?

>>2304022
>>2303996
►eye's not centered properly
►hair (drills) just floating no gravity at all
►foot and shoe are awkwardly shaped

>>2303996
The foot dissapears into the leg, you gotta make some changes in value, or add some highlights

>>2303996
The hair looks like something out of a really badly drawn western scat doujin cover.

I'm not kidding.

>>2303088
looks great

1st pass- how bout that crit

wow im sure he'll be leaving any sexual partners he has- dino sore

>>2304136
i laughed. I didnt mean to, but i did

>>2304119
Fix the saggy tits and her left shoulder

>>2304119
her left tit is preety disgusting

>>2304139 Should I shrink the tits a little and make them more perky? Theyre hanging down so im not sure how to approach it without it looking gross-ish,

>>2304142 Yeah I feel that

Rate plz

>>2304149
Breast size is fine. Their current state looks jagged and angular. Maybe make them smooth and round?

>>2304306
Not bad, but there are some beginner tier errors going on. The most evident one is the flatness of the eyes. Eyes have a structure. They are spheres placed inside eye sockets and covered with eyelids, not stickers that you just glue to a flat surface.

>>2300697
>>2301426
blog?

>>2304501 not him, i'm this dude >>2304306

How do i thumblr?
I mean i'm not very social and think that I lived under the rock but i don't know shit about social networks. I made a tumblr account, dumped some shit with tags and got literally zero views.

How do I do that and do i really need to?

>>2304306
9/10 would wear

>>2304501
bbc-chan.tumblr.com

I wanted to do a smaller dick but customer is always right, how does it look?

>>2304634
undercancer please go away

>>2303984
Unless she's supposed to be a dwarf you didn't put enough thought into the top vanishing point. Your overlapping is non existent and your foreshortening is weak.

>>2304662

>>2304662
I wasn't asking that, since the other anon already pointed out all that stuff and I agreed with him. Wasn't sure why he was so startled finding out it was me.

>>2304651
according to customers "an ok, normal dick, just not too big" is like the hip of the character

>>2304306
w2c?

will drawing porn help you git gud even if your end game is not drawing porn at all?

>>2302131
that actually looks pretty good!

>>2304836
drawing anything will help you git gud

>>2301546
-shrug- not everybody can just turn it into "just a bunch of lines" and shit, especially if they're creating fap material, and doubly so if they're trying to create it from their own mind.

now I try shading with one multiply layer

>>2305068
Hand on her plot is kind of awkward looking but to be honest I don't know what the hell position I'd put it in myself. Also that boobs and butt pose is totally triggering me Kep you misogynistic shitlord.

>>2305080
oh
it's microfetish commission stuff
she'll be holding a tiny man on her butt
probably why her hand looks kinda weird

>>2305068
Are you use your "block in bristle" brush for coloring too?

>>2305093
"Frenden painter chalk tool"

http://www.mediafire.com/download/6ezn2vz8n6gwb36/Frenden+Painter+Chalk+Tool%282%29.sut

>>2304886
i mean like does the gud part of porn have some hidden benefits compared to non porn?

>>2305083
How much does stuff like this pay?

>>2302532
why are your proportions all over the place these days bbc, did you have a stroke?

so mod you removed my thread and u let this happen ?
who the fuck employ those fuckers and who they are ?

>>2305180
I think it's kind of normal that my art is hit and miss sometimes, or all the time, I don't know. Especially if I want to try a difficult pov using no references, like in the case of this artwork.
Still not sure why a lot of you hate this pic so much. I made the torso too short and the head too big. I can see that. Though calling this all over the place seems a bit reaching to me.
Or maybe I'm just not seeing all the flaws that you do. A redline would be awesome.

>>2305171
Maybe just that porn forces you to give a lot of thought to good anatomy and expressions.

>>2305173
150usd for this one.

>>2305201
Damn. I really have to charge more for my stuff.

>>2305201
Shiiieet. People actually make moneys from this.
With that I could eat for a month

>>2305206
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oWXYoD7wfOs

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5PiqC-vfYLw

anyone has some good manga studio brushes ? the default ones are absolute dogshit and idk how to tweak stuff to make it do what i want.

>>2305242
Well it's not like I'm setting very low prices. It's just that I price my illustrations at 100 EUR (cca 110 USD) for fully colored/rendered pieces with up to 2 characters.
I am afraid people might not want to spend more than that for artworks without backgrounds.

Oh well, I'll increase my prices and see how it goes.

>>2305250
I think the default manga studio brushes are totally fine. I can draw perfectly well with them. However I modified some of the settings (on basic brushes) to better suit my own style.

>>2305263
no, they are shit. i was watching doxy presenting his brushes and none of ms are doing that.

>>2305302
much good.

>>2305302
Hey famtano, what's your blog?

>>2305302
muh dick

>>2305307
>>2305308
>>2305310
samefag

>>2305311
:)

>>2305311

>>2305302
I love your style, famlacadabra

(please visit us in the Tower Girls thread some day)

>>2305289
Ever thought that maybe isn't the brushes that do that, but the artist?

>>2305302
Great poses, but the hands are really really bad.

>>2305289
git gud hands to use gud tools

>>2305311

>>2305302
Get a tumblr man

>>2305318
yeah its the artist who tweaked the brushes to not act like shit. idiot.

>>2305319
The hands are pretty good actually, even if they only have 4 fingers, that's a common cartoon thing anyway.

>>2305330
I'm pretty sure the artist's skill is so much more important than the brush, that there is really no point in blaming the tools if you can't get good results on your own (whit whatever kind of brush). Stop being mad and git gud.

>>2305333
The hands are the worst part of these illustrations. That's why I pointed them out.

>>2305344
you are an idiot.

>>2305346
Let me guess, you are some kind of shit tier "artist" who thinks that a better brush will make sooooooo much difference?

rofl

>>2305386
>rofl

Kill yourself cancer

>>2305386
I get where you're coming from but if you don't think nice tools make things easier, you're pretty dumb senpai. That said this anon should put research into making his own brushes.

>>2305391
Od course they do. But saying stuff like manga studio's brushes are shit (I understand this like they are useless or that you can't draw properly with them) is the dumbest possible thing.

>>2305389
please stop trying to be some kind of advanced edgy 4chan user. nobody cares about the likes of you and if somebody uses rofl in these threads.

>>2305389
lol tryhard

>>2305395
Back to reddit

>>2305397
>>2305395
>please stop trying to be some kind of advanced edgy 4chan user. nobody cares about the likes of you and if somebody uses rofl in these threads.

>>2305313
anyone can inspect element, why even post this

>>2305409
on the off chance someone else who was replied to posts a similar screenshot of them being quoted within 60 seconds of my post, embarrassing the anon accuser.

>>2305405
>>please stop trying to be some kind of advanced edgy 4chan user. nobody cares about the likes of you and if somebody uses rofl in these threads.

cute?

>>2305479
All of your artwork is cute man.
Not sure if you want crits on this one since it seems already finished, but I'll give them to you anyway. Her hands (especially her right one) are off putting somehow. Probably the thumb is a bit stubby or something.

>>2305479
Work on your legs family. Especially the back of the knee and calf meet.

>>2305487
stfu kyle

>>2305479
Famlamb, you ever going to put out any more infographics? You mentioned something about your flesh rendering a while ago.

>>2305498
Best troll ever.

>>2305533
Kyle is lazy as fuck he won't do any more of those

>>2305692
He's just being smart. Why would he do them if there's a chance people like you could gain from it.

>>2305479
Looks a bit off. The combination of somewhat realistic anatomy and the cartoony face is kinda weird, and combined with the tiny head and muscle definition, makes her body look a bit masculine. It kinda hits the uncanny valley for me, like you stuck a cartoon head on a real woman's body.

Also, what this guy said: >>2305498

>>2305698
>gain from Kyle

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

even if you could it wouldn't matter being an artist isn't like building hardware or something it's easy as fuck for people to figure out your brushes,colors,etc. the only thing that makes them different from person to person is technique and level of skill and experience

>>2305883
>explaining obvious stuff

so?

Okay, so Ive been lurking for quite awhile and finally got the confidence to share my wips.

Thoughts?

Also how do I draw an attractive looking armpit? An armpit so sexy that the viewer would have an armpit fetish right when they see this drawing.

>>2306186
The armpit is the least of your problems here. Her horse face is a bigger issue imo. Then, after that, comes the unconsistent perspective, where the tits look like they are positioned higher above the horizon than her head.

>>2306186

Nice shading, I like it a lot.

>Also how do I draw an attractive looking armpit?

Give this a try

all loosely refd

Ya, what >>2306210 said
For armpits and many other body parts knowing the anatomy and proportions is key, use references (I am a bit rusty with armpits too) and maybe study the focused on muscle groups beforehand.
Also some suggestions where hair can go so it isn't just existing "on one plane".

>>2305479 She DOES look cute, I like the shading, especially on the bottom foot. It mostly just needs a bit more work put into the wings and background, especially the one smudge to the center, right looks like ya tried out a brush and forgot to erase it. Also some little things with anatomy and integration into the enviroment but I made a quick, messy red line for that.

A wip, did I miss any of the glory that is Donald Trump's body and hair before I do further work on it?

>>2306245
Nice, I like your lines. Got a blog ?

Hi, lately i wanted to start drawing porn so i just made one drawing quickly. I really want to improve and learn, do you use references to draw such beautiful whores ?

>>2306270

You have to go back, Paco.

>>2306210
>>2306217
>>2306245
Anatomy and proportions, got it.

Any comments about the values if there's any I should adjust?

How can I make this sexy looking? Also any critique?

>>2306587
dude looks like he has no/very small balls

>>2306270
go make your art outside our wall.

>>2306245
lol wtf
those lines under the arm dont go there. those are the muscles for the ribs.lolololol

>>2306651
post the rest of these please

>>2306299
YOU'RE A TINY BOY

>>2306658
They're from that super huge anatomy book, aren't they? "The rest of these" could take an entire thread.

>>2306682
>that super huge anatomy book
what book?

>>2306684
its from the "anatomy for the sculptor"

should definitely have used ref for this.

Hey guys if you have any requests for lewd references I'm here and i have a rei figure at my disposal (for same lighting purposes)

the more precise pose you give me (if you draw it that'd be the best) then i can give you the best reference

bon voyage

>>2306717

That´s hot!

I would totally give you a blow job

How's this?
Anything I should change before I start the colouring process?

>>2306717
ur body is gorgeous m8

>>2306699

The detailed rendering of the face compared to the body freaks me the fuck out man. It's very jarring.
I do like the face, though. The torso looks weird, I think it's the arms and also the ribs that look most off to me.

>>2306738

hey! I saw him first!

>>2306735
Your proportions if stood up are really strange. The body shape isn't balanced at all. The lower legs couldn't hold all that fat, and the head is way too round. You're not the best at feet either, but you should try to get better proportions. The details come when you get tired of drawing shitty feet.

>>2306742
>>2306738
>>2306721
You are breaking the rules. There are porn boards to act like you are. Ic is for art, not drooling. Just don't post those thoughts and imagine choking on dick silently, without acting like it's the first time you see a naked body. You would get kicked out of nude modelling sessions for creeping, it's the same principle here.

>>2306745

Thanks for the crit anon, the feet could use more attention but I'll let that pass for now an fix it with my studies.

Would you mind going a bit more into detail on the lower legs and proportions?

>>2306766
Just look at body mass. Big head, big tits, big ass, big thighs and skinny shins. She would snap her ankles. Imagine that you folded out the body and stood it upright, that's how you can tell your proportions are wrong. The lower part of her leg would be thicker. Look at wakfu, big ass and thighs and so are the shins. That's balance. short stocky or tall and fat, she would have more meat on those extremities. I'm not saying you should draw believable proportions, you just have to balance them so you don't end up with something that just doesn't look right.

>>2306791
ah thanks man, I'll try to apply it.

>>2306277 ya, shmutzig.tumblr.com
>>2306717 people of 4chan, keep being great!
>>2306651 really helpful ref, gotta find the rest of that book

>>2306651 >>2306186 yeah, I looked at the ref wrong apparently. Hope this time it's more accurate.
As for the anatomy for sculptors book, I found a mirror, get it while it's hot!
uploaded dot net slash file slash qre5pq41 slash 0990341100Anato dot pdf
(fucking spam detection but ya figure it out)

>>2306937
Forearm equals the length of your head.

Your hand equals the length of your face, chin to hairline. Her right arm is also closer to the camera so that should make it even larger than normal proportions.

>>2306944
why did my thread get deleted assholes

>>2306945
Fucking autism.

>>2305302
This is cute. Got a site?

>>2305302
cute lil setting, hope she has a nice time at the con

Where find commissions for porn?

>>2307308
on the internet

>>2307310
but what sites?

>>2307312
if you are not intelligent enough to find that out for yourself, then you'll never make any substantial amount of money from it.
so you'd better just give up and get a normal job, or better said, a job that suits your intellectual capabilities.

>>2307312
if you are not intelligent enough to find that out by yourself, then you'll never make any substantial amount of money from it.
so you'd better just give up and get a normal job, or better said, a job that suits your intellectual capabilities.

>>2307317
why you don't help? :(

the spines are fucked but I like it anyways. Another for the trash pile but I'm trying new shit and it feels nice.

>>2307320
sry, all my spoons are in the dishwasher

>>2307320
You have to be 18+ to post here.

>>2307398
A few advices if you are serious about your art:
- read the sticky
- go to the beginners thread
- stay there until they compliment your work
- start doing porn

Right now you are complete garbage. Sry.

>>2307453
>- start doing porn
would that make him better at drawing porn?

>>2307453

Compliment work.

Noah Bradley could start posting in the beginner thread and he wouldn't get compliments,

>>2307469
>his work never got complimented on /ic/
there, there. just git gud anon.

>>2301613
Nice, but eyes seem a bit too high.

>>2305479
Like others have said, inside of knee looks weird, but other then that I really dig it!

And done.
Tried to apply anon's crit, I hope it helped.

whats currently popular and hot to draw fanart

>>2307587
onepunch

>>2307469
>Compliment work.
/ic/ isn't a place to put on the kid gloves. You don't need to soften blows or reassure someone that they did something right. They'll know where they didn't fuck up.

>>2307562
Nice colours! I especially love the tones. How long did this take to colour? Can I make a colouring request? It's an easy one, I promise. The lineart is done, I can post it as soon as I'm home. Also, do you have a page?

>>2307587
league of legends
always

>>2307954

Thanks man, the colouring process took quite a while. Mainly because I usually don't colour like this.

And i'm sorry but I rather spend my limited time on my own work.

I have a tumblr: http://graniem.tumblr.com/
You can find me on HF under the same name as well.

New thread

>>2308496
>>2308496
>>2308496