/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2287349
Isn't this a SFW board

>>2287353
No, it's pink dummy.

>>2287353
Newfags like these are ruining the board, people.

>>2287274
there can be many individual differences, but the biggest difference is the nosebridge.

if you look at caucasian faces like >>2287292 >>2287237 >>2286884 >>2287079
you'll see the deep ridge that the nose creates because of how it protrudes. it also creates heavy shadows. that's something that you'll almost never see in asians.
with asians that area is significantly flatter and with weaker shadows.
both pull on the eyelids in different ways and create a different shape for the nose.

Threadly reminder that all, ALL, of you guys suck.

>>2287361
Yeah, that too.
You'll have very little to play around with Asians facial features, therefore leaving the critical emphasis on the eyes.

Probably why the eyes are so big in most animu art, while noses are usually minimal.
(though often they end up looking like Caucasian anyway with more mature and built characters)

>>2287366
Time to face the reality, eh?

>>2287366
Ah that's too good to be true

>>2287368
>(though often they end up looking like Caucasian anyway with more mature and built characters)

No, they really don't. But hey, believe what you want to.

>>2287335
This is great, thanks. Yeah, I figured out the main difference is in the prominence of the eyelids.

Also, inked that guy.

>>2287335 →
This is great, thanks. Yeah, I figured out the main difference is in the prominence of the eyelids.

Also, inked that guy.

>>2287389
Wow, thanks so much, man!

>>2287366
go back to /pol/ you silly cocksleeve

Okay, I know this needs work, but I'm not sure where. (Granted, I was using a different coloring style than usual and I know this is basically zombie porn that's not what I need critique on.)

>>2287473
>mfw

>>2287484
Sooo it's good? Honestly, I need to know. It's probably the coloring scheme that bothers me but still.

>>2287484

Penciled, then edited to get rid of eraser marks.

>>2287514
- Redraw the nipple placement, the nipples shouldn't be sticking directly towards the left on the sides of the breast outlines.
- Thighs too long compared to the rest of the body.
- The hipbones seem to be rather steep, almost disconnected from the groin/ass.

Should those be fixed well, I would give it a passing grade, for now.

>>2287509
>you'r beautifull

Posted this in the last thread right before it died.

Quick rough practice loop, heads messed up and so is the back.

I think the main motion is okay.

>>2287631
Noice.

Posted this in the hentai thread. Here for more feedback. I'm happy that I was able to use refs correctly and visualize forms instead of copying but I'm disappointed with my chicken scratch.

>>2287736
My bad.

>>2287373
Read the whole passage, you retard, he's talking about anime.

also
>that
>built and/or mature
nigga's in his 20s and weighs like 70kg

>>2287387
barack obama the hung porn star.

More stuff.

>>2287745
>my point
>your head
The only retard is you. We're talking facial structure and anatomy likeness toward reality, to hell with his actual build you dumb fuck, look at his face. Anime characters don't look white unless they are specifically designed to, see Monster. White weebs just commonly project onto anime characters like autistic retards.

>>2287791
Hm. To me anime faces never looked very Asian desu. I think the majority of styles tend to look more Caucasian than Asian.
If anything is Urasawa's faces that look very Asian and thus Uncommon in anime terms.

>>2287791
>talking about mature, built anime characters
>posts a photo of an effeminate man in his early 20s
>t-that's n-not my point! y-you're projecting!
kk

>>2287355
the board was ruined awhile ago, so it's been bad, and it's gotten bad like the rest of the internet.

Newfags like these are ruining the world.

>>2287509
it's funny cuz I get that reference

>>2287484
I'll work on the expression then. I was drunk when I replied the first time, but yeah. The first time I drew it he looked sort of pained? And drawing it like that ^^^ was my "solution." :/

It looks so cringy, ugh.

>>2287807
i agree

>>2287370
>doom
slick

>>2287807
I believe japanese artist adopted their signature art style from on eman than was inspire by the early cartoons by disney. So is not that their faces look caucasian(silly name for white people) that's just confirmation bias from us. To the japanese they are japanese characters not white (european) characters. Besides most their stories take place in japan so is safe to assume there japanese.

>>2287915
I that one or 2 layers? Jelly af if no construction

no real feedback in alt-gen so trying here

>>2287953
is this porn

>>2287970
the size and proportions of the muscles/body are drawn with a fetishistic goal in mind, tho it is not explicitly hardcore. it's a kinda gray area.

>>2287953
I like the form, feels very heavy. All I'm seeing is Baymax though.

post ur work squid

>>2287988

>>2287738
- The head and face needs to be redrawn completely, I know it's a difficult angle. Maybe I'll give you a redline when I have the time, since I can't be arsed to instruct it all in detail. (don't count on it!)
- There's something unnatural about the way her left arm/hand is posed, perhaps it's faced too directly and straight towards the viewer.
- The dick appears to cum in her tailbone, not in her asshole. The asshole is located lower than that.
- Since her face is visible on the right side, I would switch the arm resting on her ass to the same side to make it more natural and comfortable. Or alternatively do the opposite and switch everything else to the arm's left side.

But otherwise it's looking decent.

>>2287990
you know mikufag, one day you gonna make it.

>>2288000
Yea, to prison maybe.

>>2288000
>god wills this

>>2287990
How long have you been doing this, again?

>>2288000
mikufag already made it in my heart.

>>2288005
lel

This

>>2287813
>talking about mature, built anime characters

They were talking about faces. You just have poor reading comprehension. But do continue to make yourself look dumb. :^)

>>2287807
>I think the majority of styles tend to look more Caucasian than Asian.

That's you projecting onto the characters. The characters generally are minimalist with the features. Caucasians have distinct features, like other races. Anime generally doesn't portray those features because it's so minimalistic in nature. The emphasis on the eyes to help express emotion originated from super old western cartoons ala anthropomorphic characters. Anime characters are default Asian unless stated otherwise. Western weebs just project onto them all the time.

>>2288051
what the fuck is that shit

>>2288073
>Probably why the eyes are so big in most animu art, while noses are usually minimal.
>(though often they end up looking like Caucasian anyway with more mature and built characters)
>in animu art

>>2288078
>he still can't read.
I think it's time you stop posting and start working on your art, anon.

>>2288087
>literally says it refers to animu
>still not getting it
Time to go for an examination, anon.

>>2288051
this is so bad I had to fix it. Some parts are just so broken they can't be fixed though.

>>2288005
>tfw you will have to kill someone when mikufag got himself arrested so you will be the first to fuck his virgin boipucci before anyone else

>>2288111

I like his better to be honest, even if yours is more 'correct'.

>>2288093
The statement was false. Mature characters generally don't look Caucasian in anime unless specifically designed to. The real photo shows that Asians have general facial structures that some people like to pretend are exclusively Caucasian for whatever reason. Facial structures like what's shown in that real photo are used commonly and stylized to make handsome mature men in anime all the time. See pic related. I shouldn't have to spell this out to you anon. Stop being so inept.

>>2288119
The model is a twink whose only "Caucasian" characteristic is a square jaw, which is debatably more common in Asians. What the fuck are you even trying to say at this point?

>>2288122
>The statement was false.
>What the fuck are you even trying to say at this point?
>The statement was false.

Read more books.

>>2287950
that is my construction. its not too hard to construct with curves and circles and stuff.

>>2288117
how. The fuck is wrong with you people.

The old one literally has balls, flying breast, and bubble muscles, nose is on the brow, mouth is down syndrome. It's fucking so bad.

This is why furfags make so much fucking money. People have terrible taste.

>>2288117
I bet you think genzoman is the greatest artist of our generation.

>>2287998

Thank you for the critique.

>Maybe I'll give you a redline.

Pleeaaaase?

>The head and face needs to be redrawn completely

Maybe forward? I had a hard time with that, it looks flat.

>The dick appears to cum in her tailbone, not in her asshole. The asshole is located lower than that

That's what I get for not thinking about it enough.

>switch the arm resting on her ass to the same side to make it more natural and comfortable

Yeah you're right lol

> it's looking decent.

Thanks again for the help.

>>2288131
Probably because the poorly drawn muscle-toned body was still conceptually preferable to the smooth, boring body that was in the corrected version. Also the colors and contrast are worse in the "fixed" version.

When do I know I'm alright enough to try porn?

>>2288155

Just start doing it. If you try to wait until you're "good enough," trust me, you will put it off forever.

The #1 habit that all successful artists share is that they MAKE ART. They don't just sit around doing endless studies until they feel like they're good enough. They embrace failure.

Learned this the hard way.

>>2288159
Seriously.

>>2288159
Anon, what you're saying is nice and all, but where's the problem in waiting a while before focusing on conveying your ideas because you lack the toolset?

>>2288051
Okay, here's the thing. While your rendering might be technically correct, you drew your line work to get closer to a 3/4 view of the character, but your rendering suggests we're looking at her from the front it's disorienting to say the least.

Yes I'm aware we can twist our bodies, but your rendering and line work aren't working quite right.

>>2288111
This, while the rendering makes a little more sense, I feel it's starting to lose some of the gesture and life to the pose.

Also like >>2288148
said, the lighting and contrast is lost a bit, kinda looks greyed out. It also looks like someone just took a photo of a woman's torso and overlayed it, then did a paint-over. Not in a flattering sense either.

I've been trying to draw this surfer boy for a few days now, but this is the one that's outright lewd.
I'm not very confident in this.

>>2288186
It doesn't look wrong, but then I'm a newbie. If you need help find some ref and compare.

>>2288171
Thanks. I notice my mistake now and probably should've taken it here before I colored it.

>>2288131
Not quite sure how to avoid "bubble muscles" like this anon says. Should I have smaller muscles, and less shine?

>>2288190
Thanks for input.

Here's another one that I think came out competently.

>>2288208
This one I think is also okay-ish.

Sorry for bit of spam.

>>2288191
>"bubble muscles"
usually this refers to michelin man looking shit, that doesn't have any sense of anatomical rythm or how muscles insert with one another. Dunno what sense the anon you're responding to meant it as though.

>>2288186
>>2288208
>>2288225
this is gay anon, it needs more fucking

>>2288163
Drawing is suppose to be fun. So far I have drawn to porn related pictures and for the first time I enjoyed drawing. Yes waiting a bit longer to get decent is nice at all but sometimes to much practice and studies burn people out. I know it did for me andI stopped drawing for a while. So let the anon dive right in.

>>2288243
I see. Maybe I just find study fun or incorporate enough application of concepts into my study sessions to actually enjoy myself instead of just burning myself out.

>>2288227
just look at it. There is no anatomy to those muscles. They are just bubbles randomly placed.

This thread has the worst art on the ic.

>>2288186
>>2288208
>>2288225

cute but the dicks look garish, you need elliptical, plump shapes for dicks

>>2288258
>it's a guy

>>2288251
My sides are dead.

>>2288265
Theres more of those. Have you ever been so hated that people starts a hentai of you being raped as a loli

>>2288261
Not sure what this reaction image means and not that guy but he's not wrong. The pictures are a beginner level in general but being able to draw succulent dicks is absolutely necessary if you plan on drawing anything even mildly erotic. So it shouldn't be ignored. You want them to be plump and succulent even if they're also masculine and highly rendered.

Mentaiko is a good example. Look and the line weight and shape of the shaft, the head,and the balls. They aren't just tubes, everything connects with its own suppleness and mass.

I drew a butt.

>>2288314
This looks a lot better as a thumbnail. Blog doe?

>>2288312
are you gay, anon?

>>2288338
show me ur boipussy and I'll let you know.

>>2288338

I am.

current thing. yes I used a ref for this.

>>2288470
>yes I used a ref for this.
I ain't even mad Kyle

I do think you're a a point were you don't need them though try next time when you're not doing a commission

>>2288470
i dunno kyle
not gettin a boner here unlike bbc's asian ass

>>2288470
Can you draw without a reference? I remember your stuff from back in the day, and I don't recall having seen something that wasn't essentially a copy of a photograph.

>>2288470
That would be a really hard position to hold in real life and would hurt pretty quickly. But it's not real and it's pretty hot, so what do I care.

Do freedom boners count?
Also, does anyone have any pointers or guides on greyscale scanning or traditional to digital?

>>2288470
Love your stuff man. Keep what you're doing.

>>2288562
oops wrong reply
>>2288539

>>2288563
Ignore this shit. I love Kyle's work.

>>2288568
but how about this guys work?
>>2288539 (You)

>>2288531
>That would be a really hard position to hold in real life and would hurt pretty quickly.
Not if you are used to seiza-style sitting, which is common among Japanese.

>>2288470
Can I see the reference? Who could possibly keep their face turned like that during such an act, my neck hurts looking at it. I must see the woman capable of this

>>2288051
The blades of hair on the right side have flax bush syndrome going on.
Perhaps find a hair style to work from as reference. I can't think of any particular styles so I'll just link to things I thought were nice:
http://www.tosbase.com/news/107/Character-Creation-and-Hair-Styles/

Braided parts look okay.

Oh also, the mid body has way too much specular light, looks like its about to explode from the inside.

>>2288314
>I copied a butt.
That's sounds better.

>>2288163
Original post said nothing about lacking the toolset..

>>2288605
Maybe because it's obvious?

>>2288607
It wasn't obvious at all though, there is literally no words in there that would refer to tools.

Just a short, vague sentence.
Perhaps make less assumptions.

>>2288312
>>2288258
So you're saying the dicks don't look like they belong to the same style/picture?
Hm. I may have focused too much on making them look "correct". I had a similar problem with a detailed muscled body with a cartoon head on top.

Here's a bunch of gay sketches I've drawn two months ago for comparison. Would you say the issue is here as well?

oh shit squid i need to git gud real fast

>>2288592
Search for doggy style in Google images.

>>2288609
Of course it's obvious that it's better to study drawing thoroughly if you want to be serious about it.
And being serious about anything requires you to develop the right tools. Everything about this is obvious. If you are not too dumb to understand this, of course.
>>2288614
You have basically NO style. These are pretty much all shit tier scribbles and nothing else.
Either learn some fundamentals, or keep being bad at what you are doing. Your choice.

>>2288604
I drew that butt while watching the rooster teeth podcast. I thumbnailed it and everything.

>>2288687
>and everything.
Show me.

>>2287953
gay, stop working on this.

>>2288604
that sounds better? sounds like youre in denial about it being too good so you had to declare it a copy to feel better about yourself.

>>2288831
Nah, I don't care about people being better than me. I know I am and will probably never be the best and there will always be better artists than me.
I just wanted to point out that shit is way over-referenced to have any appeal at all.

squid post your work

>>2287473
Looks like WikiHow illustrations.. Dont use the airbrush tool as such a crutch. That's the main problem I see. Other than the line work being pretty mediocre.

Cool down sketch.

>>2288915
>Weakly-NSFW-033-Sketch.jpg
>weakly

>>2287953
keep going

>>2288915
ok kr0n.

What kind of faggot actually says "warm up" and "cool down".

I bet you love speed painting too.

>>2288924
kek

>>2288915
boner obtained
fuck them haters

This is the first time i'm actually trying digital painting. Fisrt time with tablet too.
All critics welcome

>>2288947
put the tablet in the trash and stick to traditional

2288964

>why?

>>2288947
>All those layers

Why? Are you really making individual layers for every little thing?

>>2288979

I just like organization.

>>2288989
you should probably be more interested in painting than a million layers.

Layers just limit what you can do. Just flatten that shit and paint like normal.

>>2288995
>Layers just limit what you can do
literally retarded

>>2288999
>I have never actually painted before

Kill yourself, please.

>>2288999
ollolool you're a massive idiot.

Please anon, show us the power of layers.

>>2289005
>>2289010
>that obvious samefag

>>2289017
please stop shitposting. Your posts are shit and I'm guessing your art is too.

>>2289020

>>2289022
shit meant for >>2289017

>>2288651
I was mostly being facetious. That face is not possible in that position, her neck is broken.

I just asked for critic on my art not a shitstorm.

>>2288979
>>2288995
Depending on how you use and organize numerous layers, they can be an advantage or a hindrance.

But blindly insisting on traditional approach and pushing it on others is retarded.

>>2289020
Post your work, then. Not even him.

Saying layers only limit you IS retarded. You can easily create variations of your image just by using 2 layers instead of one. Did you ever even use anything besides SAI?

>>2289028
no, it's not.

Look at that fucking painting and tell me it's good. Tell me that person knows how to fucking paint. Fucking tell me layers are helping them out in any fucking way.

Stop being such a faggot. You know literally nothing about painting.

>>2289033
>look at this shitty painting on a single layer and tell me not using layers is good
this is your argument

>>2289033
Just because he might not be top notch yet doesn't mean the concept of using a lot of layers is detrimental to the workflow.
Using layers is just another tool in an artist's arsenal that requires its own mastery, but it can definitely do more good than harm in the right hands.

>>2289033
Uh, it's kind of silly to use one person who did something badly as an example of how a method is inferior. Layers have their purpose, but that's not to say you can't make great paintings without them either. One of the main draws is easily being able to change around color schemes and such. Very helpful if you are designing something.

>>2289039
im going off the quality of art on this thread and on this board as a whole.

You guys are not good. just absolutely fucking terrible. So when you idiots all scream "ma layers help!" its clear none of you have any experience and are all beginners.

I use at most 3-4 layers in my paintings. And those are usually just for flattening down later.

>>2289047
>Uh oh, I just got fucking told!
>YOU ALL SUCK
Classic /ic/ at display here.

>>2289047
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>>2289048
told? ok...

You guys are the ones that could learn a thing from this. But you're too fucking dumb to realize it. You're only hurting yourselves.

>>2288924
It was a sketch done for fun after I felt I wasn't in the mood to work on a commission anymore.
Not sure where I heard this term.

Anyway, I'm glad that to you this is the worst part of my post.

holy shit, the /aco/ drawthread
>50 posters
>100 images
>1 OC, 99 requests

>>2289076
time for mikufag to shine

>>2289076
That's pretty much every drawthread though.

>>2289080
The /tg/ one is pretty productive actually, and the art is not that bad, one guy's decently good. I think the one /co/ is also active.

>>2288823
>>2288923

>>2288943
same here

>>2289080
Except /jp/'s.

>>2288915
You're even better when not doing comissions.

>>2289026
The /ic/ porn thread is pretty trash and worthless, anon. You've got to be pretty desperate to be coming here for critique. This place can't even critique the amateur tier artists that post here. They gush over them instead. The most they can do is shit on beginner tier artists. That shows you the general skill quality of the posters here. They are shit.

>>2288919
Erm, t-that's because when you look at it it makes you weak in the knees.

Since somebody had asked, here\s a place where you can find all of the penis tutorials i've done so far.

http://imgur.com/a/AlM2b

Enjoy drawing dicks. Part 6 will probably be balls.

>>2289171
can't wait

>>2288470
>...and then she farts!

>>2289145
I have the feeling that the people that bash on beginners aren't even artist, and just people acting retarded on purpose.

saw this pic on /b/, its not even my fetish, i just though it would make a good study. turns out its much harder than i though to get the volume down!

any tips?

>>2288000
trips confirm, Mikufag will one day triumph over us all

>>2289291
wtf man why would you want to draw that

>>2289291
nice water colors! Was this done digitally?

>>2289291
can you just post the full image I want to reference it too

please

>>2289316
literally why not?

>>2289324
yeah, its SAI

>>2289406
well, dig it out yourself, i didnt save it, find this thread in an archive and itll be there http://boards.4chan.org/b/thread/652624735/

>>2289324
>>2289406
>>2289425
And these people are worse than furfags.

>>2289431
>not seeing the beauty in everybody and everything

do you even /art/ anon?

Fukkin chicken scratch

>>2288902
I can see what you mean by WikiHow illustrations ha. But the airbrush tool isn't usually my gig. Normally it's like this (and the lines are done traditionally, with the color added digitally.)
(And I know it's not good to have it cut off at the shins, but I ran out of room. Poor planning on my part. :/ )

I feel like I'm just not getting the 'roundness' that most port art drawings have.

>>2289291
Draw some Jabba the Hutt porn while you're at it.

>>2289445
>beauty in morbid obesity

Tumblr pls go and stay go.

>>2289627
/fit/ pls go

>>2289445
That shit feels disgusting and i am into scat and guro anon, those red marks make my brain think that she is full of skin diseases and i have to keep away

>>2289445
marry her then faggot

>>2289291
kill yourself

>>2288915
whats with all the pink? you gay or sumthing?
...add me on skype i-am-dutch

>>2289759
not gay, not interested.

>>2289126
isn't this normal?

>>2289681
I love these

so, I'm genuinely curious if there's an appropriate way to open a Patreon. I'm getting attention and work, and I feel confident, but I'm curious if anyone has specific advice on how to not fuck things up.

>>2288314
>>2288604
>>2288687
>>2288777
I guess I was right and you simply copied a photo.

>>2290037
>mom, look! I totally called him out on drawing a butt from a photo! p-please acknowledge me now, mommy...
get back to drawing porn

>>2290216
I am drawing. What about you? I guess you must still be scrubbing since you rather post bullshit like this instead of drawing.

I'm trying to make gross shit sexy. Would you fuck a bug?

>>2290360
you never been to >>>/h/ have you? insectsare pretty vanilla.

>>2290356
Nigga, are you even reading your own posts lel

>>2287514
I'd love to critique it but I cant see it from behind that fucking filter. Also, get the pen and the notepad out of the way. The angle the picture was taken from also skews the proportions
if you just took a plain picture of your drawing with good lighting, I would say that it looks decent, except the thighs are too long and you somehow managed to symbol draw boobs. However, right now the focus of the picture is you, screaming LOOK AT ME IM AN ARTIST SEE HERE"S THE PEN I USED TO MAKE THIS PICTURE WITH AND THE NOTEPAD I DREW THE PICTURE ON.

>>2290360
wow you fucking retarded

And super late to the party. Ever hear a thing called bondage fairies?

This did not turn out how I wanted.

>>2290517
It looks painful.

>>2290517
can you just stick to drawing qt non anime girls

>>2290520
What do you mean? It's not supposed to look painful. Where did I fail?

>>2290522
Why?

>>2290528
>It's not supposed to look painful
I mean in a good way.

>>2287370
The rest when?!

>>2290520

For you

>>2290573
this is /ic/.stop being a fucking requesting faggot.

>>2290528
its grotesqueue tq

>>2288614
Sorry for late reply. Don't get discouraged, it's just going to come with lots of practice. Most of your weaknesses are just the fundamentals.

I would look at porn you like- What do you find pleasing about it? How does the artist draw their lines, what do they exaggerate, and to what degree?

>>2288126
This anon is another good example. Note the confidence in the linework. No more chicken scratch. If you're going to use a pen you need to learn to do so with confidence.

Does anyone know if >>2287915 has a tumblr somewhere?

anything off so far?

Posting class project

>>2290607
Oh, I see. You are just funposting. Keep it up or something.

>>2290517
That's not where the asshole is

Do you shit out of the middle of your butt?

>>2290517
i gotta know, you black or do you just have a fetish

>Shark furry
Preemptive apology. It's a request for a pal.
Finally just filled out the flats before I start to do anything. Kind of nervous about this one. Advice and constructive criticism is very welcome.

>>2290927
>request for a pal

why would you ever befriend an autist of that scale?

>>2290937
Because I make questionable life choices.

>>2290857
She's supposed to be leaning forward a bit. I guess I exagerated it.

>>2290861
What does this have to do with /ic/ and me seeking for art critique?

>>2290944
Nothing, it's called a question you sperg.

>>2290947
Do you really think I want to talk about that kind of personal stuff on 4chan lol. Also, sorry for rustling your jimmies, but I really don't know why would I want to answer a question like that. What's the point?

>>2290967
>dont want to talk about personal stuff
nigger its 4chan thats the whole point.

the point is that i want to know. im curious. its not like youre giving me fucking nuclear launch codes.

however i do know youre a bit of an ass now.

>>2290967
also, im just going to assume youre either a skinny white guy who loves black cock or a fat black guy who wants the white pussy so what would have been the harm in answering.

>>2290977
>im just going to assume youre either a skinny white guy who loves black cock

top c.uck

>>2290973
I'm an ass because I don't want to indulge in your silly requests?
I'm an ass because I don't want to open up to 4chan (people here keep mocking me on a daily basis, just because it's fun to be mean and troll)?
Alright, next time I'm going to be a true ass and just ignore questions like this one.
>>2290977
assume whatever you like, but nothing of what you are saying is either true or has anything to do with the theme of that illustration.

Would you faggots stop sperging out and critique people's drawings of tits already, jesus christ.

>>2290018

release one monthly patreon image that stands out from your regular releases
release patreon exclusive progress posts
offer images with donors name on it

don't let patreon posts or requests hinder regular releases

>>2290994
Wait, is kek also wordfiltered? That'd be fucking great desu senpai

>>2290998
just get off your high horse
this is the website where people masturbate to pictures of cartoon ponies

>Alright, next time I'm going to be a true ass and just ignore questions like this one.

you sure showed me. man i will be forever wondering about your lust for black cocks. it will keep me up day and night.

>>2291101
>just get off your high horse
Hahaha. Please, show me where I am acting all high and mighty. Just because I don't want to answer your stupid provocations that aren't art related?
I don't want to answer you, because you are rude (you've been from the first second you asked that question). This said, let me give you an advice. Next time you want someone to answer you, try to be less of a provocative douchebag. I am sure you'll achieve better results.
Over and out.

>>2291009
Never gonna happen. This is a thinly veiled screaming autistic containment thread

Christ guys I just came here to see if people thought my ghoul porn was okay. It's not like I can show anyone I know that kinda shit.

>>2290791
>that denial
>You are just funposting
it does look grotesque desu

>>2291263
>still funposting
>thinks anyone cares

>>2287998
>it's looking decent
dude what the fuck is wrong with you?
this belongs in the beginner thread and you know it?
he knows jack shit of anatomy and has no clue what proportions are.

>>2290517
I really like this as porn. But I'll try a crit.

Overall great drawing, you're obviously good. But there's some things that throw it off. Her hands are a bit large, I'm familiar with the Taboolicious characters so it could be a stylistic choice. Her left foot is a bit odd as well when it comes to placement on the ground. Anatomically, its great. Though I'd still familiarize yourself with musculature as your back here is a little to be desired for my tastes but it gets the job done. Also, the bones of her ankles aren't very different in height. Fix that.

>>2291391
I agree about everything you said. I fixed most of that during inking and Taboolicious colored it afterwards. I wish I had such confidence with colors.

>>2291401
>I agree about everything you said
You're welcome! You're actually an artist I look at a lot when it comes to doing "sexy women". As an aspiring comic artist my women probably won't get much worse than an "R" rating but its good to have a visual reference of what is actually hot.

And as for you and colors, I wish I had as much confidence as you when it came to drawing smut.

>>2291401

you got a tumblr?

>>2291409
Mind I didn't color the artwork you quoted.
you can find my stuff @ bbc-chan.tumblr.com

Also, a rough sketch and some thumbs.

>>2291476
Huge ass hand.

>>2291401
blurring of the feet is very off-putting and distracting.

>>2291476
>simulated digital ink bleeding

fucking how do?

>>2290927
neck seems a bit long

other than that it's not too bad

>>2291496
not sure if he's the anon with the messed up tablet that goes full pressure at the end of a stroke or not, but you can get a similar effect in MS5/CSP by fiddling with the Brush Size settings when linked to velocity as well as maybe fiddling with the Starting and ending settings

>>2291496
not sure if he's the anon with the messed up tablet that goes full pressure at the end of a stroke or not, but you can get a similar effect in MS5/CSP by fiddling with the Brush Size settings when linked to velocity as well as maybe fiddling with the Starting and ending settings

>>2291541
can PS do that too?

>>2291546
not that i know of, at least not default photoshop (i use CS6), p sure there's a plugin for any type of weird lil feature you can imagine tho, but finding it on the other hand...

>>2291552
alright, thanks. guess ill have to try MS5 because the digital bleeding lineart looks way too sexy

Thoughts? Im still working on it.

>>2291512
Thanks, anon!
I'll play with the size of the neck.

Does anyone else have any input?

>>2291651
Not bad, it kind of reminds me of norasuko's work

>>2291491
I know. Big hands syndrome is a serious illness.
>>2291496
MS5/CSP -> Velocity setting for pressure turned ON.

>>2290573
didnt want to post this cuz it ended up looking like a FUCKING SHIT STAIN

>>2291873
Hahaha, porn comedy gold.

>>2291873
RIP Doom

My fav hero

>>2291876
>>2291883
... you better stop cyber-bullying me you virgins

>>2291891
Sorry anon fag, it's just that those hands are too fucking hilarious.

>>2291896
yeah I know I just like such stupid round forms and shit
but I might get my hands on a real anatomy book someday

>no shame gender swap Slark porn

>>2291899
Also, don't get me wrong. I like your linework and coloring and I also somehow love this piece (even though the hands are funny). Porn artwork always takes itself too seriously. It's actually a breath of fresh air to see something porn related, that makes me smile.
Not sure if you wanted to achieve that though haha.
Anyway, keep it up man.

>>2291873
Is that the Amazing Bulk?

>>2289614

This is very terribly constructed but I find the pose, general composition, and overall idea hot.

I'd fap to it if it had fundamentals.

>>2291873
this is so funny. In a good way.

>>2291873
I'm still going to fap to it.

>>2291806
Absolutely fair assessment. I study him quite a bit.

>>2292202
You post your art anywhere?

>>2291873
It's not too bad.

>>2287349
´
guys how hard is it to reach a level of popularity where you reliably get 1 comission atleast every other day, sometimes one per day?

because I might give this porn thing a shot after all... seems like you could make a comfortable living with comissions alone provided you get enough. 2-3 hours per day to pay da bills, rest of the day for personal work.... seems pretty sweet desu.

>>2292831
really hard.
don't focus on catering to commissions, focusing on doing what you love, and people will come.

>>2292831
It depends on what journey are you willing to take and how good you already are with your overall art skill and at conveying lust/passion in your pieces.
You can either try catering to a certain niche (furry, gay porn, incest, kek, videogames fanart etc.) and in this case the skill isn't really that important as long as your porn has some appeal (the more extreme the niche is, the more desperate the people craving for porn are, and they won't care about fundamentals and stuff like that). Or you can go more mainstream or trying to be a jack of all trades. In this case I think your skill has to be more developed if you want to have a chance against all the competition.

>>2292879
that k-e-k (forum autocorrection censorship bullshit) is supposed to be l-o-l-i

hey /ic/
what porn photographers or magazines have good composition and perspective
preferably in landscape canvas

Back again, only now I sign my work as BackgroundNoise (BgN) now. Other than that, *Shrugs*

Where am I now?

>>2292831
Don't bother. Making a living with porn is extremely hard. It might seem easy when you look at some of the popular people who seem to be making bank and you see their mid tier art and say to yourself "hey, I can do that!", but it's not really that simple. It's not all about art skill. Those people worked hard, they also had some decent business sense and a good business plan that they knew how to apply, and also some luck. Making enough to live even as a single person will be extremely hard.
The worst part is that even if you manage to have some degree of success, it is a dead end. You won't really be able to put those years you spent doing porn on your resume.

If you're young and you need some extra bucks to buy videogames or something then go right ahead. Hey, you might even get lucky and make bank. But if you need to make a living it's not a particularly good plan. It might happen, but don't count on it.

>>2293077
Quite nice in some area's (good junk), but you need to look for some reference for the arms and hand, those parts are awful. Also her nose looks crooked and you should try to give her chin and cheeks a bit more volume.

>>2293077
Oh, and the left thigh (her right)! What the heck did you do to the underside of that? It shouldn't curve up towards the knee that dramatically.

>>2293142
>>2293145

May I have a red-line please?

>>2291476
>porn of actual Twili form Midna instead of imp Midna
Thank you so much

>>2293118
>making a living with porn is extremely hard
You could say the same thing about making a living with any kind of art.
I don't think that porn way is harder than making a living with being a freelance illustrator or getting into concept art for video games: you need "some decent business sense and a good business plan" in EVERY art career.

But I'm curious of your opinion: what's the easier way of making a living with my art than selling porn?

>>2293153
Ach, I tried... How ever, keep in mind that I kinda suck. And the more I look at it, the more I think the perspective might be a bit too overdone. I dunno...

>>2293182
Also, note that I toned down the lines defining the abs. They looked a bit too harsh and detailed in relation to everything else. I might have made her legs too chunky, tho...

>>2293077
Study anatomy and how perspective affects a WHOLE body. Or just study perspective thoroughly. You are doing the same mistakes any other beginner does when he tries to put a pose together and doesn't know how to do so properly. What you have here is a collage of body parts that are put in different perspectives, resulting in a mess. Either spend more time on the construction phase on your future artworks (and while you are at it you'll study some perspective, which you need) or do simpler studies to learn how perspective and anatomy work together.

>>2293198
I appreciate the bluntness, it's why I come here and ask for feedback. It's obvious I don't have a grasp on everything in art, especially perspective and anatomy and don't pretend to know otherwise.

I am studying, but like a lot of beginners, I get stuck, cause I'm not where I want to be knowledge and experience-wise, so I need a bit more clarification from people who do know better. So while I appreciate the advice of "Study more, get good" I would appreciate it more if you told me where the anatomy and perspective is off so I know for the future, and not repeat the same mistake.

Thank you

tl;dr: I suck so I come here to get good, where did I screw up in so I don't do it again? A red-line showing an arc or arrows pointing stuff out to follow or something similar would help a lot.

>>2293183
This is seriously helpful, more than you think it was. Thank you!

>>2293049
nobody cares about comp in porn m8.

>>2290644
its http://justmegabenewell.tumblr.com/

>>2293198
After taking a second look, I think I see what the problem is with the perspective here. I'll post up the fixes in a bit.

>>2293230
em i really making a porn folder i like just artisticaly and not sexually?

>>2288915
how the fuck is that a "sketch" that looks like a finished drawing.
fucking hell i feel inadequate now

>>2293145
>What the heck did you do to the underside of that?

I'm pretty sure the implication was that she's on sheets or a cushion and it was obstructing the view of some of her thigh underneath.

>>2293230
Oh shit, I had thought it was you but I wasn't sure.
Your rendering is fuckin' awesome, dude.

Fixed some stuff. Any pointers for the color of the background plane?

>>2287807
If you think that anime characters look Caucasian or Anglo that's mostly you, a white person, projecting really hard.

wrow

at the risk of embarassing myself please flame my awful sketch for a comic im working on.

Some things i've already noted myself
1. kid's face + head look off, too big, bad angle, try changing that.
2. hands, I don't know how to draw them, learn how to draw hands.
3. completely inaccurate perspective, don't even bother next time
4. Absolutely no knowledge of anatomy

Any other flame will do and will help motivate myself to stop drawing

I'm trying out a style but I'm not experienced with a "paintery" approach. What can I do to keep volume and color believable?

>>2293814
you suck so much its self depreciating for anyone to crit your work.

Alright, taking in the advice given with the red-line and so on, I tweaked the picture. Is it better for it?

>>2293820
lol just the fuel i need to motivate killing myself thanks

>>2293824
Left breast still seems lower that right breast, which makes no sense, considering that "her" left arm is raised

>>2293834
That's odd, since all I did was erase some lines, the breasts weren't adjusted at all from the original pic beyond that. It's an easy-enough fix though if it's necessary.

>>2293817
I have no idea but it looks good so far.

>>2293731
I'm pretty sure It's not MOSTLY me, since a lot of people think the same.

>>2293817
>wants to try "paintery" approach
>doesn't know what anatomy is
slow clap

>move on to other layer in retardshop
>ctl-z on new layer
>it takes you back to previous layer

JUST

>>2292432
Yeah I post it at sinfuliconic.tumblr.com

>>2287349
Unfinish

>>2293943
They still haven't fixed this?
Thank god I switched to Manga Studio.

>>2293955
I'm sure you wanted to give her a lustful expression, but she actually turned out retarded.

>>2293943
>Could not use the brush tool because the layer is locked

>>2291476
>>2293230
Sorry about being THAT guy, but what program/tool are you using?

>>2293961
make sure you're sorry because BBC chan doesnt forgive when people ask simple questions

your question is probably too personal anyway

>>2293962
.. What?

>>2293963
>how to read

>>2293943
I figured I was one of the few people that this bothered. I grew the habit of just tapping the eraser somewhere outside the canvas so it wouldn't overwrite to the new layer.

I'm glad others share my pain.

new thread
>>2294033
>>2294033
>>2294033

>>2293817
sup shmutz

>>2293961
Manga Studio 5

>>2293956
Around 2 years ago I found an Adobe Photoshop forum where the admins were all just like "deal with it"
On an other, non Adobe forum, a possible explaination was that this behaviour HAS to be that way in order for Photoshop's actions to work.
At one point in my life I had to parse the PSD file format to some degree so I understand where they're comming from to just want to live with that 10yr old code base but on the other hand fuck them, fuck Adobe and fuck the support of shitty, outdated software! Get SAI or some shit instead. I'm personally very happy with Clip for linework and painting (and even brush management, let's talk about that shit, PS!) while diving into Krita.

>>2293955 drunk night overdraws pt1

>>2294085 drunk night overdraws pt2

>>2293801
I love it!
Sorry, no crit from me, but I like where this is going.

>>2294379
>>2294380
why so drunk?