/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Need critique about the coloring. Any tips about the background would be awesome.

Repostan.

>>2283933
Looks alright albeit very soft, I'd figure there would be a couple harder shadows, as well as it doesn't seem their arms are casting any shadows at all. I really like it otherwise though.

>>2283933
The girl on the right has a reeaally wonky face, the eye that's in the back is not following hte perspective, when you look at the angle of her head.

>>2283933
Is the light source top-down from the center?

>>2283933

The girl on the right has a tiny face on a big head. One of the sex toys on the left of the background is being cut off at a very weird place. Only a tiny bit of it is cut off so you may as well include the whole thing in the piece. Otherwise it's a weird tangent.

Besides all of that, it looks fine.

>>2283931
you just know the OP is full of shit when BBC posted his work in the past thread and some chicken scratching anime tracing faggot gets the honor

>>2283981
>Abloo bloo bloo

>>2283983

Cry more babby bottom bitch
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>>2283981
stop carying whats op its not some prestige award as you make it look like. It dosent matter at all.

>>2283931
is lolibro a tracer ?

fuck i want more lolibro

my collection is 13 pictures in all, it's growing

>>2284024
>tfw you're so shit nobody collects your sketches.

>>2284034
that blue ball guy again i swear to god.

>>2283981
>tracing

>>2284081
>You'll never be SImon
I want to buy a suicide

>>2284024
>fuck i want more lolibro

You should be studying better artists.

>>2284193
>studying

>>2284204
It's wasted space either way.

I already turned in the commission but I'm still unhappy with this. Please help me

Help me please, something is wrong

>>2284350
You gotta pray the gay away

>>2284350
Does he have two dicks, or only the one growing out of his thigh?

>>2284350
The person sucking the dick should have long hair.
And the name should be Jane.

>>2284353
k, move the dick. got it

Looking for any criticism, aside from obvious chicken scratching

>tfw the last 5-6 posts on /ic/ got 0 responses total

>>2284357
B E G I N N E R
T H R E A D

Ok I fixed his dick I think, anything else really sticking out that looks off?

>>2284350
everything is wrong baka

>>2284361
Purple shirt's shoulder doesn't look well defined, his neck is elongated a bit. Fix the shoulder first and work on the neck I say.

Daw

>>2284379
Wtf is going on with her eyes? tongue looks like a leaf.

>>2284379
its impressive how you can have such good and bad anatomy at the same time, how the fuck are you refferencing?
>>2284361
Oh please dont make this /gif/ 2.0 where everything is gay.

>>2284366
b-but Senpai don't you still skedai me desu <3 <3 * waves arms around* lol im so random >__<

Devientart style teenage cringe ect~~

BigTyme, i need some help.

I have this commission to finish but i just couldn't get it to look right, i need help on a couch, coop and the rest of kiva. so help a brotha out someone?

>>2284384
It was literally the only gay post in the thread lol

can i get some other eyes on this??
anything blatantly horrible i need to work on?

>>2284408
The male doesn't look like a ram. His nipples have weird placement and he's too thin/flattened.

>>2284388
>being so new that you don't even know about the filters

>>2283981
>chicken scratch
>tracing
I see no evidence of either.
>anime
Oh, so you just hate anime. Carry on then.

k, setting up my block-in proportions, some guidance on the lady underneath could be useful.

>>2284422
second time I see the word baka, followed by the word filters in another post, is there something I don't know

not the one you are responding btw

>>2283931
I don't know man.

>>2284399
witnessed

and I have to say I like everything about this, but not her face, but I am not good enough to say what

>>2284433
maybe after you get some actual lines down and not just the gestures

>>2284433
you are just a fucking hack, that has no clue what it means to draw something.
take this shit to the beginners thread and stay there until you learn some basics.

>>2284450
me neither man. you should really study some foreshortening.

>>2283933
see
>>2283953

Too much of your lighting is "pillow shading", which makes it look unrealistic, almost as though every individual object or section in the picture has its own light source floating dead center, directly above it.
This is most prominent in the left-side girl. Her legs, arms, and chest have shadows all around the sides, and lighting only dead-center on their mass.

If you look at how their legs overlap, the shadows from pillow shading are giving the illusion that the left-side girls leg is being squished flat by the right-side girls leg.

Picture related, it's what to avoid (it sticks out way more in pixel art).

Wonderful line-art by the way.

>>2284379
Not sure if that's penis in butt, penis in vagina, penis in some third hole that shouldn't be there.

Down stairs anatomy is fucking way too wack friend, you need to fix that pronto.

>>2284433
Off-topic, but holy shit I didn't realize Nezumi now has fish-eye lens support.

Fuck yes.

>>2282557
looking good man!
link me to your blog if you do more.

>>2284401
Ya, thats how it started on /gif/ too.

>>2284506
that example is not really helping anyone.

>>2284469
Let's see your work then.

where does one begin with drawing porn? i guess the first step is anatomy studies? the usual books?

>>2284646
Yup. basic stuff. Study anatomy, proportion of body and perspective. Study some stuff from you favorite porn artists and ask questions about their choices and break down the pictures into 3d in your head, question what makes their art sexy.

You probably seen enough porn to have ideas for some dynamic sexy pictures in you head. Treat the paper as a 3d space you can put your hand through. Draw like your tracing the contours of a 3d object in that space. Think and see the object before you even put the line down. If you get stuck or have a blind spot use get refs.

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>>2284646
Also don't try to draw the whole object in one go
if you can't visualize it clearly. Start with simple construction if you need it.

>>2284470
Can you explain? Anon's foreshortening is bad?

>>2283933
Very pillow-shady'ish. You need to define your light source more and toss in some harder shadows and edges.

Is this looking okay?

>>2284951
not into monster but to me it looks pretty good, maybe make her a bit thicker from the waist down but thats just a personal preference. But it looks pretty good

>>2284448
There are filters for certain words.

Type in the short hand for "to be honest family" and you get desu senpai

>>2285037
desu senpai

>>2284951
The foreshortening on the torso is off. It looks like her entire stomach area is missing. You can either move the upper body lower and draw her spine curving upwards to her butt, or move the entire upper body left so you have a bit more space to suggest the foreshortened stomach. Either way you should figure out how to connect her back to her butt though. Even if you hide it with the arm the parts that you do show look off.

First time doing this. Kinda.

>>2284951
Needs a dick.
>>2284517
Needs a dick.
>>2284450
Needs a dick.
>>2284379
Needs a dick.
>>2284361
Needs a bigger dick.

>>2285200
Thats gay
>inb4 traps are female

WIP trap cats

I feel like I drew her vagoo too weirdly pls help

>>2284469
you say that like 70% of this thread isn't beginner-tier shit. do you have a vendetta against that anon or what?

the purpose of this thread is to contain all porn posts to one thread, so beginner porn belongs here too.

>>2285235
there needs to be skin in between clitoris and vagina, right now it's just an axe wound. looks nice tho

U-Um. This is from my head. A dream I had

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>>2285274

Hot.

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>>2285311
I like the color choice

>>2284569
Helped me perfectly fine.
Which part of it are you struggling with, friend?

>>2284951
That monster has the perfect "aww yus" face.
I like it.

>>2284951
no, it's not, you literally just have to move around to avoid that shit anon, i have no idea how you made it to 80 without learning basic damage avoidance

>>2285271
Nah, this is not the purpose of this thread. Unless you are a 70 years old racist grandma, who can't handle 21st century.

>>2285311
Thanks a ton! It does look a bit better now

>>2284951
do you have a blog?

>>2283931
can we not have an OP with shit taste for once

>>2285775
not a chance fuckboy

>>2284506
You replaced one wrong method with another, more common one

How's this?

>>2285814
>...and then she farts!

>>2285818
HUE HUE HUE HUE HUE HUE HUE

>>2285818
??? Is there a reference I'm missing or does she look like she's about to pass gas?

>>2285854
it is just a silly /ic/ meme, don't worry about it friend

>>2285775
>/ic/ porn thread
>shit taste

You might as well ask water to stop being wet.

when i dont have time 4 a wank i just sketch something lewd

>>2285903
You should just wank next time mate thats horrendous

>>2285879
another low tier scrub that is jelly of porn artists' skills

>>2285919
>anime
>skill

Pic related. Is the skill level of the faggot who is complaining lel
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>>2285929
donut bully. He's improved from the first time I saw him drawing at least.

>>2285929
This would be easier to fap to than bbc's stuff, 2bh

>>2285942
He's been drawing like a 2 years old since may. I don't see any improvement. All I see is eternal shit, chicken scratch and autism.

>>2285950
Awh cute he actually referenced Chabs

>>2285942

You cant fool me Mikufag, you like it when he's bullied. I'd go as far as saying it turns you on.

>>2285954
Shut up Anon.

>>2284951
Saved. I love it.

>>2285959
You're so evil. Even more than Malasya. You drama loving whore.

>>2285949
>being this deluded

>>2285925
>implying there is no skilled anime artists
>implying the genre has anything to do with an artists skill
>being so autistic

>>2286011
Just look at his drawings
>>2285929
Youre talking to a literal autist. Dont waste your time.

do you guys know what i did wrong?
perspective-wise i think its fucked.

>>2286013
also any tips how to render skin with colored pencil?

>>2286013
*pukes*
>>2286015
You can't. You suck. Give up on art and kill yourself.

>>2286013
Why won't you look at a real benis for reference next time? This one's got no curve a true Aryan has a slight curve.

>>2286013
you need to work on your tits man
and penises dont glow red

>>2286021
is this benis ok?
sorry for that one, i havent drawn lewd in very long time

>>2286024
What in the ever loving fuck. Im so glad im not you.

>>2286024
DOUBLEDICK WILLY

DEUCE FOOKEM

DOUBLE ENTENDRE

9/11

>>2286013
If your dick has a vein throbbing that fucking hard you might need to go see a doctor.

Is this a raid? The shitpost happens literally outta nowhere. What the fuck's going on?

>>2285919
I'm sorry you have shit taste and your art shows that.

90% of the artists here have terrible taste. That's why they are wow'd by amateur work like in OP. When you have shit taste, your art will be shit.

>>2285929
If that's what you have to believe to cop with your shit taste and artistic ability, have at it m8. More power to you :^)

>>2286035
Seems to happen every time someone uses one of my pictures in the OP.

>>2286042
i wonder if these faggots came from /b/. i hope they know we got moderation here

>>2286043
moderation on /ic/ is trash though.

>>2286042
Nah, Malasya is just a troll who hates people with talent. If youre being attacked by him rest assured youre doing something right.

>>2286045
>hates people with talent. If youre being attacked by him rest assured youre doing something right.

you mean like /ic/?

>>2286045
I prefer to stay out of it, but it is pretty funny to watch. You'd think I'd raped his mother or something.

>>2286042
sorry, buddy. I even picked the less loli looking illustration.
anyway, great skills. love your linework.

>>2286046
/pol/'s art standard is pretty low. he's being honest from the looks of it

>>2286057
You cant get lower than this though.

>>2286046
I wouldnt consider critique attacks in /ic/. BBC and kyle did got some real pointers without people showing senseless hatred such as this example >>2286017.

What really worries me is the amount of silence given to beginners that need and ready to accept critique.

>>2286042
you need to git gud tho

>>2286071
>What really worries me is the amount of silence given to beginners that need and ready to accept critique.

This thread is shit. Anon's here don't actually want to get good. They want to praise the amatuer artists that visit here every once in a while and try to be their butt buddies. It's the reason why you've got morons asking for the "blogs" of these artists or trying to convince them to make one so they can stalk them rather than actually trying to give constructive feedback on work to help them improve. Most of the anon's here are lonely faggots looking for friends. It's pretty pathetic.

>>2286088
Like this, right MALASYA? :^)
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>>2286071
BBC was mostly attacked for what he was drawing, and not so much for the quality of his art. Kyle was mostly attacked for copying photos. But they did also get a ton of regular critique. I personally think BBC is one of the better artists on /ic/, but I really don't like his style or subject matter.

>What really worries me is the amount of silence given to beginners that need and ready to accept critique.

I think it depends on the skill level of the artist. Art critique is easier to give to people to people with at least a basic understanding of the fundamentals, because you can pinpoint specific parts that need to be worked on. With beginners who have no sense of form, lineweight, perspective or anatomy, it's very difficult to give criticism that doesn't boil down to "draw more and use these resources".

>>2286089
I can be your friend, Anon.

>>2286089
if you see faggots such as these /pol/ retards here just report them. if these got ignored write a fuckin email or something.

still some of the crits may sound harsh mainly because the artist challenge them causing butthurt on both sides

>>2286105
Ive never seen this much damage control. lel.

>>2286105
>artist challenge them causing butthurt on both sides
thus causing drama

>>2286089
> They want to praise the amatuer artists that visit here every once in a while and try to be their butt buddies.

I'm the guy who got my picture posted in the OP, and while I wouldn't go this far, there is a core of truth to this.
I don't post my stuff here very often, but when I do, I usually get two kinds of responses. People who ask for my blog and say they like my stuff, and a tiny handful of people who seem to hate it without givng a reason. Over the past two years, I can only recall one post that offered critique. I'm not complaining, just stating my observations.

>>2286122
theyre mostly show hatred your art because theyre concerned about your progress.

you didnt color your shit, never finalize anything and the lines are always crappy.

youre a fuckin waste if you stall and never git gud considering your age

>>2286122
>a tiny handful of people who seem to hate it without givng a reason.

I hate it because you draw the same face and the shit is always unfinished. You're stagnant as fuck and it shows that you don't give a shit. So why should I praise your work?

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>>2286124
When will YOU git gud tho lel.

Btw, your tutorials are shiiiiiiiiit

>>2285274
blog?

>>2286141
NOW THAT IS SHIT TASTE

>>2286132
>So why should I praise your work?
When did I say you should praise it? Don't you have any other critique to give? My anatomy and proportions certainly need work, and most of the poses usually end up stiff in my eyes. Given the amount of attention you're giving me, your critique seems to be very personal in nature.

>>2286147
Not him, but the only thing I have to say is that puffy vulva in the op is boner-inducing.

>>2286138
dont ever make a tutorial ever again.

>>2286147
your fucking headstrong nature is essentially what makes you unlikable and starts the drama concerning you.
learn to accept reality for fuck's sake. this place is not a hugbox and you're fucking lucky to actually get people to give a shit about your art

>>2286138
you right now

>>2286156
>your fucking headstrong nature is essentially what makes you unlikable and starts the drama concerning you.

I have no idea what you're referring to here. I generally try to stay as neutral as possible in order to avoid drama, but it still pops up. In case you don't know, I'm not the one posting my picture in the OP, and I rarely comment on any of the drama that ensues. The only time I've posted anything in length about myself was the day before yesterday.

>learn to accept reality for fuck's sake. this place is not a hugbox and you're fucking lucky to actually get people to give a shit about your art

Again, I don't really know what you're referring to here. I post here specifically because it's unfiltered. I don't think I've ever tried to defend my art from criticism. The only thing I did was post about being burned out and stagnating as a result, and this was two days ago.

>>2286166
headstrong as in you resist critiques such as
-not finishing your work
-posting doodles and studies

youre not even posting WIPs all the things you've made so far has been sketches. those kind of things pisses people off when those got recognition while many other WIP's and finished pieces that needs checking are totally ignored.

>>2286147
>personal

I don't know you nor do I care to. I've only seen your work and what I said is what I get from your work. I'm talking about what your work showcases, nothing else. Your work is shallow and doesn't show any real flexibility. Same faces. Same general proportions. Same style of posing. Typical comfort zone stuff, like most amateur artists on the internet. It's easy to get bored of your work. You're like Legoman if he only drew mainly loli.

>>2286147
He's like that. He's an autist, he actually persecuted an artist for months because he was told to fuck off. Hes deluded and sick.
He also drew this. >>2286138
Ignore him, hes not worth shit.

>>2286166
you need to push yourself harder cunt
thus gitting gud

listen to the crits people are giving you in this thread. stop being so fucking lazy, stagnating and by god i hope you're not proud of your shit scribbles

>>2286169
>headstrong as in you resist critiques such as
>-not finishing your work
>-posting doodles and studies

But I've never resisted this. I've repeatedly pointed out that this is my main problem.

>Your work is shallow and doesn't show any real flexibility. Same faces. Same general proportions. Same style of posing.

So point that out, instead of starting pointless drama. It's called critique. And I actually agree with some of it, but I'm not a mindreader, so it's hard to tell what flaws other people see in my work if they don't actually provide any critique.

>>2286185
> I've repeatedly pointed out that this is my main problem.
SO FUCKING LISTEN TO IT AND GET YOUR SHIT TOGETHER AND STOP POSTING SKETCHES

Christ are you seriously older than me

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>>2286184
you see this shit?
you see how nobody even bothered to give a fuck?
just in case none of you noticed, the inking is above decent.
but of course noone cares because he's not on a level that merits him attention.

my point is you niggers should be lucky people cared about your shit because it takes a very high level of skill to get recognized in /ic/.

>>2286192
That is because it is all shit.

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>>2286184
Here is your reply

>>2286122
>Over the past two years, I can only recall one post that offered critique.

I want to be your butt buddy and I want your blog.

But even if I had criticism to offer to you, your attitude is like "I don't care anyway I don't really draw lately I'm just scribbling once in a while, not really searching to improve since I always draw cute girls in sexy pose and I do it well".

>>2286188
He said he doesn't really care unfortunately. I like his sketches so I can't really help but respond (there are others works from others anons that I like tho). But it's true his work doesn't really seem to search for critic, nor need it (at least at the level I am I can't provide them).


>>2286169
>youre not even posting WIPs all the things you've made so far has been sketches. those kind of things pisses people off when those got recognition while many other WIP's and finished pieces that needs checking are totally ignored.

I also agree tho.

>>2286204
>He said he doesn't really care unfortunately.
I don't recall saying this. If anything, I specifically asked for criticism.

>>2286204
>youre not even posting WIPs all the things you've made so far has been sketches. those kind of things pisses people off when those got recognition while many other WIP's and finished pieces that needs checking are totally ignored.
>>2286169
Git gud.

>>2286207
That's how I interpreted your interventions at least cf >>2286197

You only post sketches and I can't really see anything bad to say about them (I'm low level but nobody bothered to say bad, argumented things except "that's only sketches, man").

Maybe you should try to show us more pushed works, you seem to do well for sketches at least but it's true it's repetitive and feels unfinished. And if you don't want, that's the feeling you give me, you're in a no care position.

You all need to get off lolibro's dick this is ringing a bell from back when Teal used to post redlines and everyone started to ride his dick derailing threads asking for blogs and the faggot that started shitposting out of spite.

You're all faggots fuck off

>>2286213
But it's true I don't come often on these threads. So maybe if there aren't interesting criticisms it's because anons here aren't suited for that task... Dunno. But the guy saying we can't really judge on sketches only is right I think.

>>2286213
One of the reasons I posted sketches, at least early on, was in order to get criticism, so that I could correct mistakes and actually finish something. I always end up nitpicking on the same details over and over, and nothing ever looks right in my eyes, which is one of the reasons I don't finish stuff. I get stuck on some flaw I can't fix after wasting hours o nit, and give up.

Do I need to specifically ask for criticism when posting on a board labeled artwork/criticism? If I seem passive, it's because I'm trying to avoid the endless drama that comes with shit like this, but it seems to be having the opposite effect. Guess I'll go back to lurking.

>>2286221
>Guess I'll go back to lurking.

Good, don't post again /ic/ is too autistic and as a matter of fact I suggest you leave /ic/ there's absolutely nothing to gain from here.

/drivesbypornthread

God damn no talent faggots always eating each other alive.

/drivesoff

>>2286221
Sorry, guess you're night. But as you can see there isn't any criticism. Maybe you should have tried to explicitely ask for them when posting your work. As a leech of this thread coming mainly to see the works like many others, I really thought you were satisfied from your sketch and just dumped it here while lurking.

>>2286207
I think the reason you don't get criticism is because you haven't posted enough.

>>2286217
teal shitposted?
i thought he was silent and forgiving

pls crit

>>2286256
Awful anatomy. Terrible foreshortening. Shitty hands. Pubes don't work that way.
Considering quitting art.

>>2286256
Stop copying from a chinese sex cartoon comic book.

>>2286204
he's still stuck perfecting anatomy and proportions. he got a long way to go. Rinfag have lots of problems on that deparment as well but at least he have the balls to finish

>>2286260
>>2286262
just checking the moderation

>>2286217
>shitposting out of spite.

The faggots dick riding and asking for blogs get butt blasted when you tell them to STFU. /ic/ has a self promo thread. They need to go there. Why people would want to stalk the artists that post in the porn thread of all places is beyond me.

>>2286271
teal never posted his blog in the promo thread cunt

This place needs more redlines, man.
Even if it takes effort and even if the redlines might suck themselves, I think it speaks more to the original artist and is good for the person drawing the redline too.

>>2283948
I hope this helps.

>>2285814
I think the parts of her left leg are too short.

>>2286275
>teal never posted his blog in the promo thread cunt

That means he doesn't want you cunts stalking him.

stop sucking simons dick he isn't even THAT good

>>2286286
isnt its obvious why people asked him for his blog?

>>2286275
Exactly, you stupid fuck.

What's up guys? I'm totally new here just checking the place out. You guys alright.

>>2286289
>isnt its obvious why people asked him for his blog?

They are more concerned with stalking others and being fans than getting better.

>>2286300
he did a work of charity in /ic/ of course people will want to see his other works.

its a pity he's a wuss that deleted his site like some summer camp bitch that cant face reality.

>>2286295
Look who finally showed up

>>2286024

>>2286310
already inked that but im gonna keep this for the next chapter

thanks

>>2286303
He can do whatever the hell he wants with his gallery or his work. You faggots were just salty because you couldn't stalk his shit anymore. He did charity work for /ic/, Good on him, leave it at that. But nope, faggots want to stalk because they are lonely af.

>>2286343
i didnt stalk him. but then again his works are controversial and some might consider repulsive.

>>2285171
Is this any better?

>>2285385
>not letting Mordremoth's minons have their way with you at every opportunity.

>>2285554
Yes but I don't want to share it right now, sorry.

>>2286351
>this is porn
i thought i saw this in the alt thread

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>>2286173
I like these a lot

>>2284399
Ok, so nobody got any other critique for me?

>>2284408
I love the female, she looks great. But the proportions of the male are very wonky, his body looks formless compared to the deer girl.

I'm not sure of a way to fix it that wouldn't end up completely changing everything about the dude though, so you might as well go with it. If there was a more clear indication of what he's supposedly laying on it will probably look better.

>>2286442
I'll give you crit in a moment.

>>2284399
>>2286450
Focusing on this issue this time.

>>2286447
I was going to say something like this. It looks like the OP isn't used to drawing males and tried to translate a feminine form into masculine but it didn't work. All I can suggest is finding references and/or trying to break down major typical differences into shapes.

>>2286459
Ok, subtle distortions big no-no, i also need help wit her leg position and i need the perspective for the couch. or i should i figure it out?

>>2286508
Maybe, dunno.

You might want to reconsider the directions the characters are looking.
Right now the girl is looking behind her and the guy is looking at the ceiling.

>>2286041
>90% of the artists here have terrible taste.
Who are the other 10%?

>>2286041
>That's why they are wow'd by amateur work like in OP.
You have some strange standards.

>>2286558
You and me, anon.

It was always you and me.

Does anyone know of a gravure focused reference blog? Or something softcore?

>>2286565
the work in the op is bottom line amatuer work.
its just a sketch that's appealing anatomically. Even /i/ drawfags can dish out something better than that

>>2286637
Haha, fuck you. It's only a sketch, yet it's already showing off so much quality.
You have no idea what bottom line amateur work is and you have a terrible eye for quality.

>>2286638
shit sketches are the only thing he's capable
you are literally looking at the ultimate and most final form of his work

>>2286642
Sketches might be all he draws and posts here, but that doesn't make them any less good.

>>2286643
There are other artists that are much superior than him but gets no attention from their work.
Pic related for example.

Loliguy is just an attention whore that can't face reality.

>>2286646
Are you actually autistic, or something?

>>2286646
that would surprise me if such a drawing really didn't get any reaction

but lolibro's sketches are good in their own way

there's a special sexiness that doesn't appear in other artworks posted here

>>2286646
You arguments seem to revolve around achievements like how far an artist takes his work and how little other artists get comments, instead of actually looking at the quality of the sketch in the OP.

I doubt you are a good artist yourself, so I don't see why the fuck you would be such a vigilante about stepping on someone else's art promote to another's work.

>>2286192

ayyy thanx bro

>>2286653
>>2286654
>>2286656
>samefagging this hard
is loliguy the next smurf? stay tuned

>>2286661
no prob man
what tools do you use to ink?

>>2286670
I'm the second post and am not the first and third

and smurf is despicable, I seem to know him a bit more than the guys on this anonymous board and all the reproach made to him concerning not taking in account criticism are true, even on unanonymous forums

lolibro didn't even have right to get decent criticism yet

>>2286678
smurf has the right to receive critique because he tend to finish his work
this lolifaggot just post shit sketches and samefags a hugbox to take advantage of the hivemind

>>2286683
What do you expect from the braindead.

>>2286674

those ones were "uni pin" fineliners although my fave pens to use are alvin techliners

the backgrounds were painted on with a roller

>>2286646
>Loliguy is just an attention whore
>~13 pics since 2011
Lolibro is new target for shitposting.

Do you guys feel compelled to reply to the shitheads that try to stir up shit? This thread is nasty.

>>2286734
Dude, I dont know, just lurk; it'll be safe that way

This thread needs moar porn, to bad I suck so bear with it. I lover big pear shape women so here is a one of them.

>>2286509
Actually, coop is looking a the tv cuz he's playing games & kiva is in the way .

Where does one go with porn art?
Just start a thumblr and dump it right there?

squid show your work. i cant make drawthreads because fuck me /pol/ is too fast for school

>>2286794

>>2286797
>those heads
wtf

>>2286807

ayy lmao

>>2286281
Super helpful, actually! I very much appreciate critisisms, it's just something I seem to only get from here once I'm in a point-of-no-return with a picture. Thank you very much.

>>2286797
Mikufag you should be proud that i'm saving all of your work and shill them when i see fit. You're getting there and I believe that one day you will exceed both kyle and BBC in both rendering and lineart.

>>2286841
>>2286797
samefag

Do a lot of artists trace real porn to practice.

>>2286841
>I believe that one day you will exceed both kyle and BBC in both rendering and lineart
Good Lord.

>>2286797
You are our Lefty 2.0. Make us proud Miku.

>>2286846
I cant tell its u kyle.
still mad u'r shittier than bbc, babby boi? :^)

>>2286638
>you have a terrible eye for quality.

You have a terrible eye for quality it you're looking at OP and think it's anything remarkable. It's amateur work. It's nothing to be impressed by unless you have shit taste yourself.

>>2286874
What's your gold standard for quality.

>>2286861
gas yourself chink

>>2285782
I really don't give a fuck, the image still serves its purpose, which was to compare the current pillow shading to something else.
If you don't like it, I'm fine with that.

>>2286876
>What's your gold standard for quality

>>2286880
???

how do you make a work that's fappable?

>>2286893
Depict things of an erotic nature in a way that has sexual appeal (warm colors, soft forms, sexual pose/gesture) with a degree of technical skill is acceptable to your audience.

>>2286797
stop doing those circles and do actual crossections like KJG recommends. that way you also learn a bit about perspective too. in any case it is generally much much more thorough.

good to see that you are at least doing more than one sketch at a time now.

>>2286797
Mikufag you have my trust that one day you'll get so gud /ic/ will shit on you like they shit on Kyle

Just so you guys know, I never jerked off to any of works posted in these threads

>>2286893
Null is a great artist for erotic content, would recommend as inspiration for most aspects in drawing.

>>2286923
>null
Now that's shit taste

>>2286927
Sorry, I referred to Nyanpyoun as Null, when it's actually the group's name. My bad.

I hope you weren't thinking about NULL Mayu, because that wasn't my intention.

>>2286876
>>2286884
BTFO

>>2286896
kjg does tutorials? has notes?

>>2286884
That's not erotic at all.

1/10, 1 point only for the technical execution. Would not fap.

>>2287003
>being this gay

>>2287007
I really ought to close this worthless thread and stop discussing trite bullshit with shitposters like you.

Yup. That concludes my monthly re-confirmation that /ic/ is indeed shit.

>>2287000
boxes and crossections, that's all you need to know

>>2287010
>being this mad

>>2287010
This thread would do better with less pornfags with shit taste. Please do leave.

>>2287010
I'm fairly certain it's just one fedora shitting up these threads, and he even switches between capital letter and small letter, to make it look like there's more than one person. He loves using the phrase "face reality" or "reality check", so if you look that up in the archives, you'll find the same autistic fuck raging about the same shit over and over. It's always ad hominem arguments and unwarranted anger directed at anime style.

>learn to accept reality for fuck's sake. this place is not a hugbox and you're fucking lucky to actually get people to give a shit about your art
>Loliguy is just an attention whore that can't face reality.
>its a pity he's a wuss that deleted his site like some summer camp bitch that cant face reality.
>And you FAGGOTS need to get a fucking REALITY CHECK.
>It's sad you don't want to face reality. I don't want to break down more of your defense shields before you panic and cry so I'll stop replying.
>Too scared to face reality?
>Can't face reality?

Most of his posts read the same, so I'm convinced it's mostly the same guy.

>>2287065
>he even switches between capital letter and small letter, to make it look like there's more than one person

lel

>>2286893
very carefully

>>2287065
Please don't quit your day job, anon. Mystery solving isn't your thing.

>>2287065
Nice deduction, now draw a genderbender Sherlock Holmesette in a sexy position please.

>>2287071
Hit the nail on the head I see.

>>2287077
>Hit the nail on the head I see.

Sure thing Sherlock. I hope you sleep well tonight m8.

>>2287065
>now zoom over that screw so we can see the reflection of the killer

>>2287079
Face reality, my dear Watson. :^)

>>2287084
>being this much of a faggot that cant face reality
how old are you buddy. get some reality check ffs

>>2287040
>This thread would do better with less pornfags
>porn thread
>268 posts
>62 images, half of which are reaction images
>This thread would do better with less pornfags

wow reality check y'all need more porn on a porn thread,

Are there no janitors on /ic/?

>>2287065
Christ, get some reality check. It's just reality, fucking face it.

>>2287111

I AM HELPING

i was commissioned this but i have not much experience digitally, so is there something that i should fix before i start the lineart?

>>2287167
Yea nuke it and rebuild it, and this time use some references.

>>2286896
Can you provide and example of this?

>>2287167
literally everything

also, how much are you getting?

>>2287171
Point Commission, not real money

Like 10 points, if I were to put that in monetary value its less than a dollar since 400 just cost 5 bucks

>>2287169
well, just imagine crossections. imagine like a paper cutting through the figure at various places. it's not that different from the rings you're drawing, it's actually the same, but thinking about it like this makes it clearer.

try to imagine the form and shape of the crossection as well as the direction. the way you're doing it right now is too wishy washy and probably not too useful for learning or otherwise

>>2287179
I'm not the artist. I thought you were talking about the head. I guess you mean he should draw the legs in boxes?

I cannot into Asian eyes.

>>2287222
Allah akbar my penis is erect. Thank you

>>2287222
well bae bc

>>2287230
>>2287232

>>2287235
they're not so different

>>2287239
them and us

>>2287239
>>2287235
symbols up the ass

>>2287222
Looks like you already got some responses while I was drawing.

>>2287272
>>2287222
Usually I shrink back to the original size, but that was too small for comfort. Let's try again.

>>2287235
>>2287239
Whoever drew those eyes clearly wasn't paying close attention to the reference. Damn frustrating.

>>2287246
>>2287287

it's just what country their from I think, ignore them the reference is all that matters


>>2287274
SUCH A LUST FOR ART
WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO?!!


BBC just likes big lips like legoman it has no affiliation to ethnicity in his style it's just a bimbofication thing he does for once "muh style" actually applies

Other than that your redline does capture more of the eye traits who are you?

>>2287289
>who are you?
>posting on an anonymous board
>doesn't tripfag
>who are you?

>>2287289
>>2287292
I do have tripcodes and everything, but I will try to enjoy the anonymity for the short while that it might last.

>>2287274
Thanks for taking the time to redline this, however that's not exactly what I was looking for (my fault since I didn't specify anything).
I want to stylize the asian eyes as much as possible. Your example is way too "realistic" for what I am trying to achieve.

Also, a crappy sketch where I'm trying a different approach to gesture.

>>2287296
>short while that it might last.

No you're not going anywhere, porn thread...no /ic/ needs this

>>2287300
>begging this hard
Pathetic. Let anon do what he wants.

>>2287298
I kek'd out laugh, but good lines.

just doing some super rough practice animations,
Head and torso are messed, but eh. Overall i think it's moving okay.

First time really animating digitally, I usually use pencil and paper as I have a hard time controlling a tablet.

Man, I really wish /ic/ forced unique IDs in individual threads. It would call out so many trolls and samefags.

>>2287317
There's always reddit, tumbler and Da, you cumstain.

>>2287319
you are trying too hard to fit in mate

I guess after you have successfully tried a few times what makes the asian look "asian", you can start making it more caricatured.
Or maybe you can find another artist who has already invented the wheel that suits your tastes.

I'm not very familiar with such a super-chiseled style myself.

>>2287321
you're trying too hard fitting in that cactus up your ass

fuck off if you don't like the place

>>2287324
Not the original anon, but that man was clearly suppose to be black, not asian. You can tell from the hair and the features. That redline is no good.

>>2287317
Fuck off back to /pol/ faggot.

>>2287332
>but that man was clearly suppose to be black, not asian
I know it was. I just drew over it anyway.
>>2287298
Maybe this is more towards the cartoony look?

new thread
>>2287349
>>2287349
>>2287349

>>2283933
needs darker shadows.

>>2287319
>>2287327
>>2287334
Funny how all the new kids who come to 4chan mistake the freedom to say what they want with acting like an edgy teenager.

>>2287409
>being a sarcastic asshole is being an "edgy teen"

Grow a pair. If you don't like the concept of anonymity why the hell are you on 4chan?

>>2286793
That's what I did. Not a lot of luck really but it helps compartmentalize your shit for what it's worth.

>>2286893
This is the problem I have. It's not anatomy so much as making anatomy look hot ya feel?

>>2287414
>omg if you don't like retarded shitposters who ruin every thread you should go back to reddit! face reality already!

>>2287222
would pass for a chick with ds

>>2287507
Blame the mods for not doing their job. Stupid /b/ tier shitposting gets a pass all the time on other boards. This problem isn't exclusive to /ic/. The mods on some boards are generally just shitty. Deal with it or leave.

>>2287528
>this amount of jelly, kek