/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2286051
Everytime I see your drawings I feel like throwing up.

>>2286051
>If someone is RUDE tell them to not expect much from an hour's work.
This is satire, right? It has to be.

>>2286075
This is not a random board. Please read the board rules before posting

>>2286079
Technically its a dump for sketches and shit that youll never show to people.
The 1 hour limit gives confidence to artists to present their work.

>>2286081
Start practicing before posting your trash then. Because this shit is worth nothing but cringe.

op is a faggot and cant draw

>>2286087
Dont spam the thread with inane insults and try to give constructive criticism.

>>2286091
op is a faggot and cant draw

>>2286096
this

>>2286083
>The 1 hour limit gives confidence to artists to present their work.

There shouldn't be any correlation between the time you have to draw something and how confident you are in presenting it. It's a picture. If you're posting it anonymously on the internet you know exactly what you're fucking getting yourself into, given the environment. These threads are worthless with the general draw thread being a thing and anyone posting here would gain more for making their own threads for their own individual scrawls.

>>2286091
No constructive criticism could ever help OP, a fag that hasn't improved in months. He better gives up on art, really

I'm practcing some perspective and ambient drawing.
Any tips on how to get starighter lines?

>>2286111
stop freehanding everything and learn to use your art program of choice

>>2286102
stfu bitch its fun
these threads are always successful so why not make one from time to time

>>2286111
>>2286111
Slow down. Ghost exactly over the line you intend to draw. Draw from elbow or shoulder for all lines over an inch. Pull toward you for curves, push away for straight. Scott Robertson's first perspective vid has good instruction on this.

>>2286112
Eh, with practice i find i can freehand everything but the most technical of lines, for example, a couple foot-long lines that must form a consistent 32 degree angle.

pixelguy from last thread, working on effects and speed. Quick laser blast I whipped up in ~seven minutes or so.

Is this worth keeping or should I trash it and start new?

The assignment was to convey mood using value (via charcoal).

>>2286333

>>2286333
why not do another/ a few more? if your asking then you have the time, and it's only going to help you grow.

>>2286333
there are days where i sulk at the thought of not being an anthropomorphic L ruler and this is one of those days

Had an empty panel so I just had some fun with it

Had an empty wood panel so I thought I'd have some fun with it

moved to doing pen only sketches today, still getting the hang of it, so having a break doing doodle/style stuff. (i box things in red when i like a drawing)

crits pls ;)

>>2286417
fuck, resized

not very happy with this one

>>2286456
nice, but what is she standing in front of? it doesn't read. + what's in her hand?

>>2286458
An Apple iPhone

>>2286458
its just a block of stone, the black at the top was more of a stylistic choise than a representation of any realistic shading. also her hands are supposed to be pressed together, not holding anything.

Pretty much just the pokemon, fat guy and robot.

>>2286471
is this done in mischief?

>>2286506
Photoshop

I wanted to see if Sculptris would let me change the light-source but

>>2286051

just got finished drawing this, dying for some critique

i just started on this webcomic and am only 3 pages into making it so far: http://fates.thecomicseries.com/

>>2286051
>/ic/ - Artwork/Critique
>-Do not rate or give critiques

>>2286471
is this traditional?

practicing inking because im pretty shit at it. anyone have any tips/resources i could check out?

>>2286959
plus bonus tourist

>>2286912
Nah, Photoshop with a 1-2px brush angled at 45 degrees.

just wanted to draw something comfy

>>2286970
wrong perspective on the door

0 / 10 would not live in the orange

>>2286977
What exactly is wrong with it?

painted it in 50 minutes. Ref source = http://www.deviantart.com/users/outgoing?http://www.timescolonist.com/news/local/snow-and-freezing-rain-take-bloom-off-victoria-flower-count-1.865242

What started as a routine sphere-shading sheet resulted in a cute kirby thing. Critiques encouraged.

original character do not steal
OR I'LL TELL MY MOME

>>2287034
You really nailed the colors and values, maybe make the light area a little brighter.

Pure shit

Trying to get back into it. If you know who this is maybe I did a service. :3

>Ask for criticue and advice
>Get nothing
fuck

>>2287667
I've been watching your progress on DA for a while. I like how you're finally actually thinking of the forms when drawing faces, instead of just drawing > for the nose and - - for the mouth like you used to, keep it up.

When you render the hair, you tend to make each clump look like a cylinder rather than a ribbon, and this gives it the look of some kind of creature with pointy tentacles on her head. Try to fix that.

On places that are really smooth, like her butt, just go ahead and use the airbrush. It's faster and gives a better result than the way you're doing it with tons of brush strokes with the hard round.

you've improved tons since the mikasa drawing. keep going man.

>>2287670
Tanks a lot, gonna try and fix the hair, as for butt i'd love to leave some visible strokes, maybe i should make them more accurately outlining the shape.

As for me this face horrifies me, I could really use some advice about the lips.

>>2287677
sorry it's poni, but I like this tutorial for rendering hair: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3CMnAzg_i5k

I remember proko had a good tutorial on lips: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xq3aHSuKRyg

And so did Marc Brunet: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f6MFRk2FiHg

For this semi-realistic style you're doing, just draw a real mouth but smaller. I think you may have made it a little too super tiny here.

You can do soft rendering with a hard edged brush if you lower the flow super low. Also, texture helps make it softer. Amount of texture and the exact percentage of flow will determine how many brush marks get left.

And you should join us in the UL skype chat. People can look at your wips and give you advice. It's definitely helped me a lot of times.

>>2287693
>UL skype chat
How did i miss it?
I had no idea there was skype chat.

>>2287700
ha, i just thought you were being anti-social. send your skype name to mgc and he'll add you.

From the study thread, not tried to make her accurate just correct.

Feel free to c&c

>>2287767
Reference.

>>2287767
look at the neck, mate.

>>2287767
>>2287774
firez, did you even use the reference? baka senpai
has no one ever told you to practice realistic anatomy and understanding of form, before you can use your "style"?

>>2287778
Is it because I need to shade it more properly to differentiate from the clavicle?

>>2287800
I wasn't even aware of style while drawing this or any other of my horrid shit in the past.

Besides making making her ear a bit too big and what I mentioned before is there any other thing that is wrong?

Sorry but that kind of critique is way too vague.

>>2287767
Hey, have you taken a life drawing class, or any college level drawing class? I'm asking because it seems like you don't know how to quick sketch and do loose gestures and construction. If you haven't taken a class like that I think you should, you would really benefit from being directly shown how to build up a drawing. You still keep having alignment and structural issues, and I'm pretty sure you getting that kind of instruction is the only way to fix it.

trying some stuff. thoughts?

just trying

ref: http://imgur.com/phCmHOF

>>2287827
black shading is really ugly and the guy looks like he should be in a paper mario game

>>2287818
No we don't have those kind of classes around here.

Sorry for sounding like an ungrateful prick but your comment isn't that helpful too, if you know what's wrong and you want to help me why not just say it?.

I am sure I'm not the only one who can't detect his own mistakes otherwise there would be no point to critique at all.

Also like I said in my comment if I wasn't trying tomake something accurate, I purposely tryed to do some changes in order to understand a bit more a bit better than the time before.

Any thoughts?

>>2286051
need some feedback

>>2287846
you need to draw from life
you need to stop only drawing shitty generic waifu heads
you need to listen to advice and stop treating this place like your social club
you need to accept this in order to improve

>>2287817
thats the problem, you're not looking, you just draw what seems to be right for you
her head is too small, th eyes scream "muh style", lips, nose, hair, ears, everything is off
I don't know what you were trying to achieve, it's a good translation from real-life to your personal artstyle, but it's a really bad photo study

>the tits are great tho

just draw from life, observe and don't rush your drawing, focus on your reference .. and try to put your style away for a while, it will just distract you from growing as an artist

>>2287849
Looks like you are doing a bad job of ripping off that one Jaime painting. You're taking a few superficial things from it without understanding why, then trying to shoehorn in another image of a dragon and stuff. Go back to the thumbnail stage and put all other images out of your mind.

>>2287841
ok

>>2287856

Yeah, you're right. Thanks for the critique

>>2287853
>>2287854
At last something concrete, thank you.

I do have a problem with proportions I'm trying to fix that but it will take me a while. who knows?

>social club

You must be new here, if I had an ego or reputation to safeguard I will no be posting my shitty drawings or enduring the way people threat me here. As strange as it may seem to you I just want to be less shit each day.

>muh style

For the Nth time I'm not reducing things that way, I honestly could not care less about style

>>2287852
bumping feedback request

I know that looks like half hind of its body has been swallowed by its ass and that is part giraffe. I'll fix those anatomy problems later, but I want to know if there is anything wrong with the color or something.

>>2287852
What the fuck is it?

>>2287879
half lion, half god knows what.
Like I said, I'll fix the proportions later.

>>2287853
>>2287854
At last "something" concrete, thank you.

However....
>but it's a really bad photo study

It wasn't...

>From the study thread, not tried to make her accurate just correct.

>Also like I said in my comment if I wasn't trying tomake something accurate, I purposely tryed to do some changes in order to understand a bit more a bit better than the time before.

It's like you did even bother to read my past comments.

if I wanted to do a proper photo study I would have done it, like I have done several times in the past.

I do have a problem with proportions I'm trying to fix that but it will take me a while. who knows?

>social club

You must be new here, if I had an ego or reputation to safeguard I will no be posting my shitty drawings or enduring the way people threat me here. As strange as it may seem to you I just want to be less shit each day.

>muh style

For the Nth time I honestly could not care less about style.

>>2287882
Fix them now. And work on those timid lines. Colors look flat too, but the whole drawing as a whole is also flat. Also that tail, if that IS what it's supposed to be. I would look at a reference, even when drawing mythical beings.

I hope you guys don't mind this degeneracy, first time poster on this board.

>>2287885
So more color and fix proportions?
or is there something wrong in the way is drawn?
I know that the hind part of the body seems like is been sucked by a black hole but outside of that part, is the fur direction fine?
Is there anything wrong with it or the way is colored?

I take it these are the new draw threads?

>>2287887
I hope that's not the finished product

>>2287887
Don't mind anthro, personally. Look out for tangent at the top of the head as well as the fin. Chest looks a little saggy if it's male.

>>2287897
Nope, not male.
>>2287895
Welp, I'm a lazy sack of shit. I realize It could do with more shading but I kind of gave up

>>2287898
Well, if you like kinda good reception instead of the whole thing

>>2287852
The thumbnail looks like a penis. That's merely an observation, not a criticism.

>>2287827
I don't mind it.

>>2286959
Hmm, what's your approach to drawing hands? Did you sketch any of this with pencil first?

>>2287846
Because you have an underlying lack of understanding that creates the same problems in every drawing you do. I could redline all your drawings, I've seen people give you redlines, and then when you "correct" it you still don't actually fix it, because you don't have the understanding to see what's wrong. So rather than attempt to keep fixing the surface problem that rises from your lack of understanding, I'm trying to let you know where the root of the problem is and how to learn what you need to learn so that you'll be able to correct things yourself before they get so far off and you've nearly finalized the picture. Your goal should be to deeper your understanding so you can see what's wrong, not to just have someone give you the answer. If you really care about getting better like you said, why would you even suggest that??

>one entire day doing this
>posting somewhere
>no one cares

am i bad?

tried to study ruan's colorization.. I wonder how long it took him to reach his current level

>>2287926
>one entire day doing this
so what?

>>2287909
yeah the two finished hands that are inked were sketched out first. they do need a little work though.

>>2287926
why do you think people should care?

>>2287929
am i bad, anon?

>>2287909
>>2287930
oh yeah also the heads and shit were sketched

>>2287926
Your anatomy definitely is
Gotta get rid of that noddle people

>>2287926
well, you should work on your proportions, plus the pose is generic af, plus the coloring is very basic, senpai
just experiment and draw from real life from time to time, what programs did you use? and for how long have you been drawing?

>>2287934

fuck off and stop posting other peoples artwork you freak. Step back for a second and realize that you spent time pretending to be someone else just to get a laugh in

>>2287937
i doodle since i can remember
just draw with pen and paper, colors with photoshop... and i never study anything

>>2287942
>i never study anything

well, you should

>>2287926
Yes, you're terrible.

>>2287937
>>2287942
>>2287946
>>2287947

this freak is obviously some sack pretending to be some unaware deviant art kid. It's really sad to see so many post directed towards this

>>2287228
>scream queens

what scares me most is that i recognize that name

what has this board come to

>>2287949
it's bad, but it's not bait-bad, imho

>>2287949
unaware deviant art kid?
i got it, i should stop
sorry bother you anons
deleting everything

>>2287961
With that attitude you definitely won't make it but yeah delete everything.

>>2287961
if you want to get better just shut the fuck up and practice more effectively

if you actually are some guy pretending to be someone else for laughs...remove yourself from existence.

>>2287961
grow up

>>2287921
It's like you just insist on missing the point, not everything I've posted here needs a redline and not everything that has been redlined needs to be corrected, also most of the time people spouting fundamentals and sticky are just not helpful not only in my case but also in others. I'm not asking to be handed the answers but it's obvious when something is flawed or the person didn't even try.

But go ahead keep thinking like that, I will keep drawing.

Pic related is an assignment from schoolism for the extrapolation chapter of the figure drawing course.

>>2287928

THIS FACE

this kingdom hearts fanart it's not even the one of the good ruan jia paintings why is it posted all the fucking time here reeeee

afternoon sketching

Saw some halo 5 concept work and wanted to do something kinda similar

>>2288021
Really, it's you missing the point. It's not about whether all your drawings need a redline, that WAS my point, all the redlines and corrections in the world won't help you because you don't know how to construct a picture. All you need is to learn how to do that and you'd be set, that's why people keep telling you to learn your fundamentals. You keep trying to build things on a shoddy foundation, and whenever someone tells you to break it down and lay the foundation correctly, you say "wait, what if I just add this glitter over here?" like that'll keep the house from collapsing. So YOU keep thinking this is all just some personal attack and never learn the true reason why your work is flawed, because it's only your work that suffers.

>>2286051
Do you guys even know what art is?

>>2288143
advanced shitposting isn't art

Concept art. Could use tips, especially when it comes to backgrounds.

>>2288143

vaporwave

>>2288168
what's up with the cloud

>>2288168
You could use tips when it comes to people and their limbs...

hey guys what do u think of my mads mikkelsen?

Defurried that slut from Great Mouse Detective as a little warmup

how did everyone that posts here suddenly got good?
the first threads are filled with things i can catch up, now its just pro work over and over again.

>>2288502
Looks like arnold schwarzenegger with faggot hair.

>>2287211
I want to fuck that snake.

>>2287928
stop doing this and go back to actually studying, just because you copy some color choices you wont draw like ruan jia, he needed years of drawing and painting, and if you dont draw something from life soon you will take even longer

I just started a couple of days ago and I tried sketching the chameleons from the beginner thread. Don't know if the scales are 100% but everything feels in proportion. I'm going to colour it later today.

>>2288599
I just tried to get the colors down similar to the way Ruan did, I know I have to study real life the next 5 years to even come close to his level.. but yeah, you're right, just copying his stuff won't help me

This iz wat I dru.

>>2286389
Need about a treefiddy

ayy lmao

2deep4u

>>2288028
ive realized how far up his ear is, fuuuuck

>>2286051
its a start

>>2288702
>>2288668
reeks of artschool in here.

I just want to know everything. I'm so far behind people I like. I would draw 24/7 if my body could handle it and I didn't have to work. Gotta keep at it.

>>2287358
i'll keep that in mind with my next study thank you

>>2286051

>>2288945
what

>>2288951
A big head looking a tiny man.
What's so confusing about it

>>2288978

i thought it was a giant-fetish blowjob tbqh

>>2288029
i like these a lot

im good now?

>>2288706
neat .

>>2286614
>Bad anatomy
>Shitty shading
>flat ass backgrounds
Nigga you might get this a lot but please STUDY anatomy and color before applying it to comic form

I don't get why people get so worked up when somebody criticize their work, it's /ic/, that's what the board is for, if you want to post shitty doodles then expect to receive nice comments then go to /i/.

Thoughts pls.

>>2289099
I dislike your way of rendering: I don't find those really visible round brush strokes appealing.

>inb4 muh style

>>2289111
Ok. It's not even finished so of course the brush strokes will still be there. I'm still working on it.

what should i do to make my sketches better?

>>2289099
Values are stuck in the middle range too much. Try getting some dark accents and some brighter values in there.

Was trying out 'neon' type stuff from a distance, it looks bad close up, and I was just fiddling with stuff, drew it in about 4 minutes or so anyways. I'm still fiddling around with shit here and there.

>>2289311
Thanks.

R8 pls
(I fucked up the moons lips but eh)

>>2287961
Let's see you grit those teeth.

>>2289308
well, you could stop dipping them in your coffee for starters

what exactly do you mean by 'better'? if you want to get your proportions/anatomy on whatever you're focusing on more correct, you'll probably need to spend more than 5 minutes per sketch.

getting faster at sketching is just something that comes with practice.

alternatively, you could add more detail and concentrate on making each line 'count' a little bit more, so you get less of that chicken-scratch effect, which is you what you /might/ be referring to.

>>2289040
Thanks!

>>2287961
If you like drawing then you'll be still drawing anyway, so you know.

>>2286614
the font is hard to read, and you are using brown speech bubbles, which doesn't neccesary help

>>2288439
I like it.

rate it

>>2289559

its one of those pictures that the more you look at it the worse it gets.

You need to go back to basics. Didnt you read Loomis, our lord and saviour?

>>2289654
be more specific, please

Here's a bug guy I drew. Drew it on a whim.

screwed around with drawing some vehicles in perspective. i need to work on this more.

>>2289672
Okay. Read all the shit in the sticky, and fuck off until you've done that.

>>2289701
these are really cool minus what's happening at the front of the truck + some perspective errors like the truck doesn't look like it's on the road.

i'm not the best with perspective so take with a grain of salt, but i would pull apart the vanishing points for the truck

>>2289731
yeah i gotcha man. though they started out as separate images. based around some of same points.
this is my first real attempt at vehicles and i was kind of eyeballing it aha.
I'll put some more work into the next ones. Thanks bro

>>2286096
/thread

Burnout is horrible. Scribbles shit only helps to stop thinking about suicide

not finished. gib tips plz

>>2290538
draw yourself killing yourself in creative ways. (it helps)

>>2289360
>sun is a female
>moon is a male

>>2288439
saved to my cyberpunk folder. nice

quick anatomy study sort of thing, critiques would be nice !! especially telling me where i could improve/where i should start first

>>2290562
Study forms and shapes first while at the same time perspective. Once you have basic forms down study gesture and begin building forms on top of one another while holding onto that gesture.

http://artists.pixelovely.com/practice-tools/figure-drawing/

Do two minute gesture drawings to help you better understand how the body is fluid and how it moves and behaves. If you don't know what gesture is see examples from other artists (there is no right way of doing it as long as you get the action)

>>2290538
theraphy?

>>2290565
5min is better

>>2290566
No money. I dreaming about 15$/day commissions

>>2290571
Isn't there any free where you live? Cause I did one in Poland, and I am doing one in England so maybe you should just ask, sometimes the counsellors have drop in days. Take care mate.

I feel like i get worse at drawing folks from reference if i draw too long from imagination.

>>2290628
if your using a reference you shouldnt be using your imagination.

>>2290628
With some stronger drafstmanship this could be a really good exaggerated drawing, though.

>practicing 2 point perspective

it's a bit rough but everything still looks a little off.

>>2290730
VPS are too close together, although on the bright side the perspective is less distorted when you get really close to the picture.

>>2290735
had a feeling it had to do with point misplacement. thank you anon

>>2286051
see (already posted an image of it in another thread)
>>2290805
mostly working on illustration techniques, but failry satisfied with the results.

How did I do, /ic/?
I have an enormous amount of trouble with the pec/deltoid insertion and the relationship with the bicep

>>2286417
>>2286445
I like these.
You should buy a tiny sketchbook and only draw with ink on it to improve and push yourself with your line confidence and quality. I honestly suggest everyone to try it.

>>2290830
I have trouble with that area myself but it looks to me like you connected it correctly. Everything from the trapezius up seems to be too high and looks detached from the rest of the body, though.

Nightwish

>>2290970
I agree, I didn't put enough effort in the head/neck area... and it shows.

Thanks though.

>>2286614

just finished this just now!

>>2289068
>>2289478

thanks for the critique yall, can i get some more please?????

Super rough sketch
Trying to practice 4 point.
More fun than you think.

How does one into design?

>>2291135
When you keep drawing, you will get better mate. I don't know about the plot, cause it's not my piece of cake and I wouldn't do a story like this, not this baloons etc. but it doent't mean anything, just my taste. I am not a pro, just sometimes draw comics.

If you want to learn about comics you can try Understanding Comics and Making Comics by Scott McCloud but you might be good without it (it learns a lot about making the eye flow on a page). Cause comics is a lot about storytelling. Or you can find making comics part of Eddie Campbell blogspot. Keep up.

Take care mate.

I have so little clue on how to make a pose that isnt just like a static model.

I want to doodle something for a bit but I have no ideas. Should I draw a sci fi person, fantasy creature, alien, vehicle, landscape/exterior, etc? Someone please suggest something.

>>2291339
nice Sam senpai

>>2291345
My technique lacks.... something.

Opinions on tsitra360?
I myself am not a brony, but I do think his ability to color and tone is amazing. However, I believe he could work on his anatomy a bit more.

>>2291344
Alien vehicle thats also a living creature.

any thoughts?

>>2291353
Learn how a pelvis and collar bones work.

>>2291355
>>2291353
Not to mention knees and elbows. Basically study the fucking skeleton/figure and sticky your shit the fuck up famtano.

>>2291135
those speech balloon are raping my eyes
the anatomy is all fucked
the perspective and orientation is all over the place
The floor texture doesn't seem to change with the zoom of the scene


0/10

>>2289338
http://www.alexhays.com/loomis/Andrew%20Loomis%20-%20Fun%20WIth%20a%20Pencil.pdf
http://hubpages.com/art/how-to-draw-learn

The best tip I can tell you from experience is: just like leaving a book at one side from the toilet to read and finish it, leave your wacom tablet or whatever you have at one side of the keyboard. Always on and ready to go. Also add paint/gimp/etc Pin to taskbar. You'll find yourself doing sketches occasionally.

As a personal recommendation, you should try mypaint, since it's free and you can have fun discovering god knows how many brushes

>>2291321
>>2291339
cool

>>2291352
I tried some things. Thanks for the suggestion anon. I need more things to doodle.

>>2291321
this looks really cool, reminds me of zedig

Chara

happy halloween

>>2291750
this guy looks like he should be a mcdonalds character

>>2291750
its 1 month to christmas

bad picsss

had a hiatus to finish my degree, and i totally suck balls now. dont know where to begin. used to be satisfied with my progress.

>>2291858
ugh, pic.

>>2291408
Thanks dude, hope to see yours finished
>>2291676
haha i dont see how, but thanks

she's single guys

>>2292102

despite being a rookie i'd throw a drawing book at you.

Been plugging away at this for a good while

>>2292425
Your values need to be darker.
Their faces don't pop at all. It all looks bland.

>>2292596
are you the guy that draws weird goblins? from then and now i never liked those soft edges and blurring the hell out of the surroundings. Are you doing this to avoid shitty splotchs of paint that you dont like?

>>2292603
I just like the way it looks. I know most people don't like it, so I don't use it for portfolio pieces.

>>2292596
>dat subtle green/magenta chroma shitf

YOU THINK WE WOULDNT NOTICE ? at least do a proper 3 channel shift instead of the halfassed thing faggot!

>>2292605
I see, I was wondering because I use to do this. Back then I painted with opacity on my brushes which makes it harder to paint and gives an ugly effect on brush build up, so i would just use something soft to get rid of that. Its a bad habit, but I changed much of my workflow to paint effectively.

>>2292606
aw shucks sherlock. you've figured me out!

>>2292612
different strokes for different folks

>>2287961
You're skins too thin for making it.

Did this shit to test my tablet since it decided to work...didn't feel like booting up PS so just went with MSPaint instead...I'd say it's decent considering I've not drawn hardly at all since like 2008.

Been doing value studies and Loomis recent;y. If nothing else they've given me the confidence to try new things, and I believe while I can't consciously call on the knowledge that I've gained, it seeps out occasionally. Thank you Vilppu.

>>2292681
lmao fuck you too greninja

>>2292674
I like your style despite you being completely terrible, is it okay if i just steal your drawing and claim its mine later when i fix it?

>>2292753
haha what a dick

horns are wonky, I know

What's the best way to go about getting something to look symmetrical/identical, like the horns in this case?

>>2292770
accuracy, measurement and construction
that said asymmetry is better than symmetry

>>2292791
Rad. Gonna do cleanup or tighter rendering?

>>2292791
thanks!
forgot to save the .psd file...

Please understand

>>2292794
get a mirror and draw yourself. study the skull. practice loomis heads, and leave any kind of style for now. also use symmetry lines and stick to them.

girl on the right of the left page, her forehead doesn't make sense. hair goes ontop of a skull. just draw the hairline for a while and ignore hair

>>2292810
fine enough
Danks for noticing me

>>2292792

Since I had deleted the psd.-file I started again, this time being careful about perspective and construction (thanks Scott Robertson!)

>>2292792

Comparison pic

IC IS THIS INTERESTING OR JUST PLAIN TRASH

YEAH I KNOW ANATOMY LOOMIS BLARGH

RESPOND PLS

>>2292967
Interesting composition. Fucked up the foreshortening and perspective.

Nice caps

>>2292988
sorry for the caps im just hungry for attention

i hid what i fucked up the most

is this good

>>2292791
was this drawn with vectors like illustrator or raster like photoshop? I'm new to this>>2292907
>>2292913

>>2293017
His left arm is super short and you hid everything else so what kind of critique do you expect

>>2292425
fuck that other guy, it's looking good so far man.
don't just throw in value before you've figured out the rest of the composition, Push and pull out the dark and light as the composition dictates, if i were you I'd work on filling in the page.

>>2289559
composition is cool as a thumbnail. feels like a study for some bigger. Background feels like it needs more attention. Not in terms of detail, more like softening.

I'm trying to get a little less dependent on references, though I still used some at the end.

>>2293127

Photoshop. This is how it was done:
I used the software "Carapace" for the perspective grid. Then I made my sketch in that grid. I continued by creating a mask and then applying the colors. I got the color palette from paletton .com

>>2293132
>His left arm is super short
>what is foreshortening

>>2293210
>what is foreshortening
Not what you did. The arm looks like a really short arm that's been foreshortened. Basically it's an error of scale and perspective. You can have a small object in the extreme foreground of a picture and it will look small even though it's technically bigger than everything else if the perspective is executed correctly. If it's not, then it'll look like there's a giant whatever in the middle of the picture rather than looking like it's closer than everything else. You attempted to foreshorten it but you didn't do it correctly, therefore the arm looks too short and small. Different anon, btw.

>>2292596
That looks fuckin sweet, do you have a blog

>>2293239

thanks here
>>2288301

critique plz

failed this one, hard

>>2293327
finished

Sorry about the shadow... Any and all crit please.
TEAR ME TO FUCKING SHREDS

i'm trying to master contrast and values but i have no idea what i'm doin to be honest

>>2293330
Head too big or hands too small

>>2293361
How about you resize your image, rotate it, and take a proper photo without a shadow over it.

>>2293393
don't got time right now

>>2293017
His left hand seriously needs to be fixed

>>2293395
Do it when you have time and don't bother posting sideways giant shitty photos.

Say something if you must.

>>2293411
Keep going anon! you're on the right track!

>>2293395

You know how long it'd take you?
About as long as giving that stupid fucking answer.

>>2293416
Ohh thanx anon. I know I have a long way to go compared to most people here but I appreciate it. Here is a foot and a.... cat thing? Im off to bed really tired. Cheers

>>2293361
those white highlights are corny as fuck

>>2293442
how to improve em?

yeah I feel like this is to soon

Really hard for me to draw right now but here's something at least.

How do I do legs? They just don't make sense to me

>>2293569
Forgot pic

rate

>>2293592
4 or 5 /10

>>2293564
I forgot to say I actually would like feedback on these, only my 3rd time posting in this thread so I forgot you have to do that here. I'm want to get more effective with my sketches though so yeah, c&c please.

still a long way to go. trying out the outline then paint method.

>>2293621
That method only works when you have a reference you can follow. If you plan on doing any illustration work you probably want to work the entire canvas at once rather than spot rendering.

spongebob

drawin qt anime grillz

>>2293628
that's really cool. do you have more?

>>2293624

>work entire canvas at once rather than spot render

yeah, it's something I've always needed to work on. professors always told me "general then specific". When I'm composing an original image I always follow this rule for obvious reasons (most control over composition), but since this is referenced I get caught in the detail trap "spot rendering" as you call it more often. I've struggled the most with matching his (zorn) actual brush stroke shapes since I'm not fond of textured brushes but his brush is textured.

thanks for the advice m8

>>2293631
nigger, you know the side of the head exists, right?

eyes aren't right next to the god damn ears

>>2293669
nigger, you know that the front plane of anime heads is actually wider to accompany the enlargement of eyes, right?

eyes can look right next to the god damn ears with that perspective.

>>2293196
I fucking love this. I just got an intuos 4 and i'm still learning which software to use for what...

Smut thumbnails. While fun, I feel like I grasped little, if anything. No understanding of anatomy, so I'm going to get back to Vilppu and the like, and draw from them until I can ditch the training wheels.

>a thread where people post their art
what has /ic/ become

Jacked the hands a little. My fault. Sketch confused me. Overall good practice doe.

>>2293845
looks quite interesting anon, lightning looks great

New thread
>>2293917
>>2293917
>>2293917

Drew this under twenty minutes, used some references, also moltar's mouthpiece is the only part I used anything other than pencil. It should be noted this is one of my first times seriously drawing. Criticism would be greatly appreciated.

Could someone give me some tips on how to make this better? I'm getting back into drawing.

>>2294402
That's a mean roastie you have their freind