/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2279333
>Rules:
Malasya anon please hang yourself. Your sole presence makes this board shittier than it already is.

>>2279369
i can tell it's you puta. still butthurt as fuck eh?
why dont you go back to /pol/ and shitpost your last works there before you set yourself on fire before christmas

Just did this one today, any critiques would be much appreciated!

>>2279373
why is the chair wrong

>>2279333
>-Do not rate or give critiques unless if the artist specifically requests it.
ahh fuck off already

>>2279377
Poor timing, didn't get round to it

>>2279373
the left arm is to long, also the right upper leg (but just a bit). the rest looks really neat. good job.

>>2279373
Looks kind of lumpy. I think you would do well to simplify more--group your darks, groups your lights, simplify the forms and contours in places, use the white more sparingly etc.

>>2279384
Yeah you're right, I can see that those lengths are off a bit now, cheers!
>>2279385
I see what you're saying and I take your point. I'll Definitely give it a go tomorrow, thanks for the crit

Meepmeep
:^)

>>2279411
hold on fammy lemme take a screeshot of the monitor using my phone and bt it to the pc because its a much faster and quicker process than saving the file as jpg or use the printscreen key

>>2279412
maybe he's browsing /ic/ on his phone

>>2279416
This. Stop being so rude to the mentally disabled. Its not his fault he can't figure out how to use the internet on his PC

>>2279412
What's a print screen key?
Can I get it made?
Wait... You can save and upload to 4chan?!

any critique? i know the face is weird but i just dont know how to fix it

>>2279479

Looks like a 12 year old boy with wrinkles. You gave him nice innocent boy eyes instead of a masculine glare and a weak as fuck chin.

>>2279333
i need you to redraw that temmie and post hi res

Doing some more work on a piece i kinda liked from earlier this year, lets see if it ends up looking decent

did this literally 4min ago

>>2279479

the face is head-on, the nose is in profile.

Look a a poster, see what it actually looks like - dont paint what it "should" look like.
nose needs to be wider and more accentuated
nose bridge is lopsided
basically its all the nose lel

Redraw it, maybe do a few studies on the side to practice.

did this literally 4min ago

>>2279479

the face is head-on, the nose is in profile. Look at a poster, see what it actually looks like - dont paint what it "should" look like.

nose needs to be wider and more accentuated
nose bridge is lopsided
basically its all the nose lel

Redraw it, maybe do a few studies on the side to practice.

Critique this shit out of it, i need to know where im wrong.

>>2279653
>tiny 2 inch drawing in the bottom of a sketchbook
>no face, front straight view
>critique plz
what the fuck am I critiquing? It's a cropped figure from a front view that can be drawn in like 2 minutes that doesn't even have a face or any real attempt at anatomy beyond basic symbolism.

Take some pride in your work and put some fucking effort into it. OP's title is what you drew in the last hour, not what you shit out in 30 seconds at the bus stop.

At least you resized your shit so that's a start.

How do I stop sucking on this fuckload of dick.
Crits would be great.

I need some help here!

How's it looking? It's for a phone screensaver, the clock tells the time, the notebook tells the date and the window the climate/time of day, it will have raindrop animations, candle animations, particles of dust, etc.

The thing is I want it to look more like the work of this guy:

http://mrockefeller.tumblr.com/post/76023911621/hey-everyone-this-weekend-inprnt-is-having-a-20

But I don't know his process, everything he draws looks so organic and the colors are awesome.

>>2279691

are you a grill?

How's it looking? And how can I make it look more like the work of this guy:

http://mrockefeller.tumblr.com/post/76023911621/hey-everyone-this-weekend-inprnt-is-having-a-20

It will be animated and tell the real time and date and weather and time of the day.

>>2279699
No, am not a grill.
Here's another thing I drew in the last 3 hours.

Going to paint it with the outline. I have not done it this way before and I am feeling apprehensive.

>>2279716
I really like it when people mark shadows/light shapes with lines

only feed back i got on this was "sick" lol

>>2279333
Critique???
How to render hair???

I'd post the blank canvas I've been staring at literally all day, but I'm too busy crying and wishing I were able to draw anything other than Sonic the hedgehog fanart.

>>2279734
is this done using markers? possible using watercolors?

>>2279749
Just do some studies or practice shapes.
Dayum nigga it aint hard to paint and stuff just do it low test nigga

>>2279752
drawing with felt tip pens and a brush tip marker, and some prismacolor markers.

>>2279768
>prismacolor
why not copics

>>2279773
these were cheaper at the time. I do own some copics, but not enough of them at the moment to do what i want with them.

>>2279774
what color is the best to start with?

Not even close to be my best work, any critiques about what is wrong

ehhh

>>2279799
Sry forgot to uploud

>>2279813
your lines/edges are too strongk, they flatten everything else around them

>>2279835
Okay, thank you by the critique

>>2279333
Finished it now, tried another technique.
I was motivated by a description of a d&d character..
Request critiques

oy vey all of this 2mb filesizes are killing my RAM

>>2279584
Nice concept!

Decided to have another go at digital painting after a long time of giving up on it, mostly do studies at the moment so I felt like doing something different?

Go ahead and critique, I have a rough idea of what to improve on but feedback would be good

>>2279895
resized my image, didn't realize how big it was

>>2279785
i usually when sketching i put a grey down after i draw everything. that or around the image. helps it pop. im using tanned paper. so you have to try markers until you find ones that look good on the paper.

>>2279700
It's looking great, literally needs nothing more than that!
Would you share your blog or wherever you're gonna post the finished product? Thanks.

Homer is my boy

>>2280312
>filename
kek
That's my favorite scene in the book. Awesome job, anon.

>>2279333
This faggot again. How about you actually try to improve at drawing instead of dumping a bunch of shit onto a page and then deeming it good enough to start a thread with?

Drew this for a thread in /v/.

>>2279506
>>2279597

Thx guy i'll redraw it letter

are those disposable techinca pens felt tip?

I "almost" feel good. It just always looks like I half assed it. I wish I could tell you how much I know what to do and that I just consistently not do it

>>2279411
blog man blog please

>>2279333
>>2279373
>>2279411
>>2279584
>>2279691
>>2279734
I need your site/blogs/tumblr ASAP

How long have you all been drawing for?

>>2280890
couple of months

>>2280758
You tried hard on the face but rushed the rest

>>2280897
show me something you made :)

>>2280909
Here.

>>2280957
nice :*

I've been lurking these threads and I am wondering where I should start. I literally only know how to draw stick figures.

>>2280957
squid's going to punish you for drawing that you know

>>2280972
The sticky.

>>2280957
Is it ok if i use this for my band's album cover?
Its a demo so no worries if it ever go on sale.

>>2279333
Ive been doing a bunch of my friends with their favourite pokemon.

>>2280966
fukin love this shit

>>2281083
YOOOO WHERE THE FUCK DID HIS TORSO GO

>>2281122
bending over

>>2281122
wanna redline it??

>>2279389
>>2279389
Yo thanks for the crits last time, tried working on simplifying my shadow shapes / light areas with these.. Any suggestions? Cheers

>>2280883
I dont usually post stuff like that, so you'll probably be disappointed but here you go bud
>Nilefar.tumblr.com

Posted this in the sketchbook thread
Crits welcome.

I drew this for my gf of our WoW characters taking S.E.L.F.I.E. pics at the Tavern in the Mists hotspring. The color is supposed to be a bit of a slap job just to get the idea across and go further than a simple sketch, but crits would be welcome for placement of shadows and highlights.

>>2279700
Looking great! Do animate the light particles from the sun ray too. That'll give that cozy evening laziness.

>>2281265
Hm, most of your stuff is kinda mediocre but I did enjoy your animations. And as far as I can see, you're drawing a lot so just keep it up and see where it takes you. Maybe focus a bit more on studying form in general. Good luck.

>>2279416
you can still take a screenshot with a phone and it saves to your gallery and then can upload from there, retard.

>>2279700
why does it have the schroedinger equation on the window?

>>2280883
http://bigfancynoodlings.tumblr.com/
here ya go, i just started getting more active with my art. doing more traditional atm.

did this at work a bit ago. fucked up a bit lol

This was a draw of a moth person I made. It was mainly to try out lines but I still hate lining with a passion

its okay to erase right? it feels like im wasting paper if I dont, but I have a lot of paper. So does it matter?

>>2281433
draw bigger and don't press so hard on your pencil. Light lines make you able to do more corrections, looks better and is easier to erase.
erasing your drawings afterwards is fine. A normal eraser is fine, but don't use your body to get rid of the residue, use something like a (sturdy) brush.
You will end up throwing away the paper sometime in the future anyway.

>>2280312
i thought he stabbed him with a tree or a log

meh.

>>2280312
>tfw no man stabs your only eye

I don't get horse legs

>>2280758

Lard ass bitch.

Hopefully the thread didn't die. Had to look for it since I accidentally saved into some random folder

>>2281663
I don't get regular legs. For horses I usually draw big slabs of muscle and meat, and somehow it always works

>>2281770
Post your horse legs fgt

>>2279901
Eyes are uneven, freckle/mole distribution lacks rhythm, hair curl to the right seems a bit stiff, and her nose is missing it's left nostril

>>2280966
N i c e
Tumblr/Twitter/whatever?

novice here

>>2281258
I'm digging the shadow shapes and the overall construction on these, nice job! However, I can't help but feel like they're a bit too "blocky"; the very last drawing is the only one that looks like it has a sense of softness like the human body has. The angled lines and straighness do help when you're figuring out the shadow shapes, but you need more soft edges too.

In the first drawing the highlights are distributed a bit too evenly, making the torso seem like a cylinder and stiffening the pose. You should try highlighting it so that it doesn't make her skin look so tight, contouring around the muscles of the torso and where the skin and muscles pull over the ribcage (sort of like an upside down "u" shape).

Obviously you don't need to know all these muscles, but just study the model carefully and look for the subtle changes and rhythms of the body, which will help you give more life to your drawing. I understand that these are fresh drawings, so you didn't have much time to get to do what you wanted to it (tfw in figure drawing), but you're going in the right direction. Good luck!

>>2281344
i like the left one
the hair and fur? feels great

>>2281814
why do i trust my phone to work here

Random things while procrastinating

>>2281844
lol wtf

>>2281962
they eyes are so cool
I think you can go more intense on some of the darker values,like the back of her hair,behind the neck

This is the fucking /soc/ circlejerk thread of /ic/

the only way the board will ever see any traffic is shitter threads like this unfortunately

>>2281988
why r u mad babby?
u cant shitpost here because everyone is better than u?
yeah bitch these are all made in less than 1 hour i bet u cant even do any of these in ONE day lol

poor babby cant draw cos mommy didnt pay for art school...
wait u did went 2 art school no wonder u suck. :^P
go pick a rock and write a 20 page essay why its art babby boi

>>2282002
how to make someone shit themselves with misplaced rage in one post

try to make a political cartoon

>>2282156
How very ignorant : ^)

>>2282156
>having the political sense and the drawing skills of a 14 year old
Topkek.

>>2282156
he tried

First real attempt at drawing realistically and I just can't shake the "Cartoon vibe" any advice? Examples very welcome.

sketch... im bored...

>>2282266
Draw from reference until you understand how the different parts of the face are supposed to look.

and of course
>loomis

>>2282267
the way that bane guy is holding the wine glass is driving me mad

Story boarding, not really going for realism.
1/5

>>2282290
2/5

>>2282294

>>2282296
4/5

>>2282300

>>2282279
dude that was on my wine holding ref haha
i'll change it possibly

Worked on a picture of myself, still has a lot to go. I know I need to work, I'm going to erase that hand by the way. I realize it's too small. Plus it's outlined.

Just sketching it out on my phone

>>2279333
I'm practicing on new coloring techniques.
Also tried to draw her from memory so thats why I just gave up on the crown

We all have to start somewhere I guess.

I much prefer Loomis's Guide to Drawing Faces than Fun with a Pencil. Shit seems more specific

>>2281808

Dude, thank you so much for the crit!

Totally agree, the straight lines and hard edged lines in the shadow shapes and definitely giving me a blocky result. I guess its become a bit of a crutch, I know its only supposed to be a means of finding the shadow shape but I keep going in and defining the areas with a hard line and you're right its totally flattening them.

Alright, I promise I'll look for the subtle rhythms in the contouring of the muscles and try and get them down with softer shadow shapes. Also I take your point with the highlights, especially in my first drawing, I can totally see that now hahah far out!

Thanks again dude! Genuinely appreciated that crit! Ill try my best to see it through

>>2282301
I really like these but I wish you'd just compiled them as a grid on one image.

be as harsh as you need to be, cunts - but also give tips please

>>2282436

Anybody have tips on drawing maps? I have no idea what I'm doing

its shit currently but ill get it right with more work. crits welcome

>>2281433
Yes erasing is absolutely fine and I would encourage it. Drawing/sketching isn't a performance art. You aren't Kim Jung Gi doing a live drawing presentation.

>>2282436

>>2282393
Watch proko's videos, he teaches the loomis method and it might help you to see someone actually use the method.

>>2282452
Adjust your chosen colors, they're too muddy and dark. Very hard to interpret your map.

Additionally, plot out some actual paths going between things so you get a feeling for whether this actually makes sense as a map at all.

Everything in that looks too close together currently, I wouldn't know from a quick gaze whether its a large area of land or a small village.

Already posted this but i probably wont draw anything else until later today

In the office, drawing in secret

>>2282561

>>2282568
DAMNIT JEFF

>>2282568
>that cast shadow

Dilbert...is that you!?

>>2282267
props for drawing Tatara attending an orgy at an elderly nursing home.

human creativity is amazing

>>2282589
>>2282590

Tfw when you don't get the reason for the bullying

>leave britney alone!

No seriously, I need context for those inside jokes, i guess?

>>2282604
https://www.google.com/search?q=dilbert&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=0CAcQ_AUoAWoVChMIsZjZx5mLyQIVQzQ-Ch0mfQA3&biw=1073&bih=687&dpr=1.25

>>2282608
thanks, I totally fogot about Dilbert part (because of me working in a office, good one), but the cast shadow was too bad?
And who is jeff?, google is not helping me much

I just started drawing about six months ago so don't expect much.
But tell me whats bad with the sketch so I work on it.

>>2281962
Blog? you draw similarly to me so im very interested DA/tumblr/pixiiv preferred

>>2279479
lol, so bad it aint even funny. Come back in a year

>>2279597
>These are the type of people giving you critiques

>>2282617
Your complete lack of construction. Try learning basic drawing from Loomis books.

>>2282723
Loomis couldn't construct a pile of shit without it looking wooden and stiff

sorry if you find this offending.

>>2282443
>>2282488
so helpful

>>2282645

a fool's point of view is better than a lack if perspective

really though everyone here is shit take things with a grain of salt

>>2281341
more junk :v

about a half hour of warm up doodles.

>>2282503

Cheers, anon.

Hey guys, I just want to try and redeem myself for posting something generic and boring in the last thread. I'm trying to develop a style and here are some sketches I did today. I spent over an hour altogether but I did just finish the Dracula one and I did only spend about an hour, maybe 15 minutes over, on that one. Anyway let me know what you guys think, this is the first time I'm trying to make a conscious decision about a style for myself, and it's in no small part to how you guys pointed out my other sketches were so boring, so I really want your feedback.

>>2282611
The shadow cast on the paper looks like Dilbert's silhouette. /spoilers

Poor detective work, see me after class.

>>2282855
Here head is really big to a point that front shit, it sort of makes her look like a child with big boobs.

>>2282960
Really really fucking nice man

>>2279479

If you only changed the nose it would look heaps better.

>>2283013

I went back and watched the proko vids. I think I'm going to have draw llike at least a hundred a more of these before I even consider trying the features. Still, I'm happier with the basic shape of my heads than I was before.

Started drawing a few days ago. Is using the smudge tool in Photoshop cheating?

>>2283325
>Is using the smudge tool in Photoshop cheating
>Is X cheating
no
that said you might not want to use the smudge tool as opposed to a better blending preset

Hey! Im struggling with this one. Any critiques/redlines would be greatly appreciated!

>>2283142
her head is big in the cartoon too.. but i know what you mean, thankks.

>>2283144
thanks i hope aha.
>>2283325
its not cheating. i tend to avoid the smudge tool though

>>2283341
First glance neck's placement on the torso looks fucked, can't help beyond that but have you flipped the canvas and done anything to give yourself fresh eyes to look at your shit with?

>>2283358
Yeah but on the earlier stages. Ill try to see if i can get some reference for the neck placement then. thanks!

>>2283362
I'd basically recommend an underdrawing or overlay wherein you try to place the clavicle and collarbone, followed by the sternomastoid and sternohyoid as well as the traps. Your placement of the breasts seems to indicate a feel for where the sternum should be that you can use to guide this. I'm just a scrub who fell for the anatomy meme, though.

Sure, why not.

Something I started ten minutes ago while I procrastinate the night away

>>2281273
Eye placement. Eye size. Eye placement.

Procrastinating any real drawing and just making shapes

Exploring mood and lighting for a series.

>>2281423
I like this. Gives off information about the character.

>>2279479
>Drawing Voldemort on a specter poster
topkek, Ralph Fiennes would be proud

>>2280312
anatomy of the forearms is weak

Rate my Hitler. I think the angle of the jaw is fucked, what else?
>tfw you drew this on the train in Germany and an old lady asks to see your drawings
I told her I don't like to show unfinished things to others and just gave her everything else I had with me. Close call

>>2281655
Underrated

>>2279333
Can't draw eyes yet so I'll leave it like this for now

>>2283673
learn the structure of the skull

>>2283673
Symbol drawing as fuck. I thought aryan men are better than this

Weeb shit. Probs doesn't belong here. Idk.

>>2283695
not a fan on shading lines on face
it just looks messy

unnecessary details like the hair on back of the head that make it look messy

lines can be cleaner also

>>2283694
I'm sorry, there's just not that much information to be gained from shitty 1943 pictures...

>>2283697
That won't change the fact that you're lacking imagination

>>2283701
>/ic/ tells me to draw what I see
>I try that
>/ic/ now tells me to add details based on my imagination
What?
Anyway I'm not saying that I don't have a long way to go. But I think that >>2283692 has more of a point here because looking at the image mirrored really makes the fucked eye/jaw lineup stand out.
Don't worry I'll become an impressive Aryan drawperson eventually anon

>>2282359
im trying hard to learn how to colour and this is inspiring. the colour seems to splur emotion and context. how long have you been in the works?

>>2283705
you want point? slav rape baby, i give you point.
-your values are not uniform
-the pencil scrathes look like theyre made by a 5 year old
-stop symbol drawing

stupid dumb slav rape baby.

>>2283716
I don't understand this post but thanks for the critique I guess. Will work on value accuracy. Still don't agree with the symbol drawing thing in this case but alright I'll work on that too

>>2283726
also your art is flat as fuck. consider putting the pencil down and pursue another hobby

>>2279333
just dropping turd, not really looking for critique

>yfw people post in this one-hour-doodle to show off
>yfw you thought this was gonna be a dump thread
guys, there are like 3 other threads where you can ask for critique and show off

>>2282475
>more work
I don't think so unless you're gonna erase and re-render her right eye so it's not crossing the left and melting down the side of her nose.

>>2283315

draw LIGHTLY, it looks like you're carving in the paper.

Eh

Walter Horton

his face is flatter to me, not enough detail. And i forgot the cigarette...

Throw me a bone here. Am I doing anything wrong so far?

>>2283771
I think the back leg isn't in the same worm's eye sort of perspective as everything else, and it seems too short. Below the elbow of the down hanging arm, the forearm seems too long. Personally, I think she could be a bit more feminine, with slightly wider hips and a more slender wrist on that down arm, and maybe more of a taper to her legs above the knees. Overall seems to be a good start though.

>>2283773
Thank you so much, Anon

>>2283784
You're welcome. It'll be interesting to see how your take on her comes out. Most people seem to have been giving her a swimmer's build, no pun intended. But you're giving her more of a warrior build, which I think has potential to look really good and different. I hope you'll post the final somewhere here, like in the drawthread or something.

I wish I could draw anatomy properly.

>>2283916
using balls as joints won't get you anywhere anon, study simplified skeleton or actual skeleton and see the way femur connects to pelvis and arm connects to clavicle and scapula

>>2283919
>hey spongebob how do you draw that circle

>>2283919
I haven't tried that before, so thank you Anon.

Rate it guys

Rushed it with cropping the body.
Crit everything else.

>>2283920
Anon, a mannequinization that beginners can handle IE Loomis isn't "The rest of the fucking owl" though maybe it's a bit early for that anon.

>>2281298
work on that arm perspective dude

working off a self portrait. :/

>>2284094

What's the deal with artsy emo kids sitting on the floor? They ALWAYS sit on the fucking floor

>>2284096
Hahahaha you know now that you mention it that is pretty true. Was just trying to do quick ref pics though honestly. Was easier to get whole body shots in frame by being on the floor since I was using a table and dont own a tripod.

>>2284094
you better include panties in there

>>2284098
can i see the ref, pls?

>>2284197
>>2284198
Thirsty ass niggas.

>>2284094
L O N D O N
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>>2283376
> Dat horrid smudge

>>2283765
OH YES YOU CAN CRITIQUE

Beep boop.

Some Hampton's feet

>>2283758
Choose your lines.
>>2283695
I recommend the sticky if you havent red it, if not, go learn the stylization process, if not go get some face anatomy, you do the face expands upwards forever thing so really just inform yourself.
>>2283679
Grab a pen if you arent playing with values

>>2283634
Completely unreadable, lack of anatomy, lack of flow, but whatever you're clearly trying so A for Effort
>>2283341
Disgusting Cop out I never learned lips type lips
>>2283325
dont post something so small come on.
>>2283315
Keep at it, PS you are over estimating the amount the front plane goes outwards
>>2282855
Youre trying, but drop the furry shit, Also, go check flow of bodies i recommend the 2 youtube tutorials by proko on gesture, learn your asymmetry
>>2282617
dont want to be <<that guy>> but go read the sticky.
>>2282561
neat despite the mega abdomen

Just a few figures. I'm seeking to get better so I used the gesture generator and moldedsome in my style. Please critique

>>2284404
Rotated and resized for convience, sorry for double post

I'm afraid to color this.
I have no idea how to even begin adding color to this. Any help?

>>2284406
1. base color
2. shadow color
3. refine by adding more value and color transition to model the form
4. highlights and dark accent

>I'm afraid to color this.
it's digital, just save a copy before doing it.

>>2284411
>no mention of layers at all
Dude you're sending him on a suicide mission.

cosplayer and 2 3d models

>>2283711
Just dicked around with settings, brushes, and not giving a shit

>>2283325
it isn't cheating but there's better ways to blend that give better result.

i am drawing something right now..

3 random heads..guess i still see things "flat"

>>2284707
Varying/controlling your line weight will help give them more form. I would also argue that drawing/value painting from reference/life will help you understand how forms work three dimensionally.

>>2284744

That's a good point. i will remember this.

>>2284753
Your forms and linework are pretty solid, with the exception of having gone overboard on the folds. Particularly the area between the legs, folds don't actually follow that consistent of a pattern. Also see >>2284744 about lineweight. Thickening the lines where from are spatially in front of others will help them read more dimensionally

>>2282359
corel painter? looks great

>>2284094
looks good

trying some figure drawing from imagination. crit pls

fuck I will never learn ps to paint mangoo like sakimi senpai... :(

thought i could get more done in an hour

>>2279479
It looks like voldemort

>>2284992

1 hour no ref

>>2282359
I know this is an "alternative" style but "her right" eye looks almost like a full on side view. You should see at least a hint of it narrowing towards the inside.

>>2281083
Not that guy but I tried.

Took about 50 minutes, critique mah shit.

>>2279705
doesnt really matter if you ARENT A GRILL MATE

>>2279901
what the other guy said + your arms arent done while taking form into account and your folds are too even in the cloth.

>>2284817
wtf are you even doing

>>2284406
I'm niggersaurus.
Just finished coloring a few minutes ago. Don't know where I went wrong or right.

>>2285053
>>2285053

>>2285077
fucking woops i forgot to turn the opacity back on so you could faintly see your drawing in the background, whatever.

>>2285066

wish I knew... just wanted to make a kawaii girl... didn´t work...

>>2285079
Never the less, thanks anon.

>>2285053

could've spent another 10 at most for an even hour and drawn the other fucking eye.

Some quick anatomy studies

>>2285104
Took it bit too literal?

>>2282349
app?

idk bored doodle

>>2279716
Looks interesting. Will we get to see it finished?

Part of a bigger piece featuring characters from to Kill a Mocking Bird

>>2285244
Also, critique welcome, hurt me daddy.

Small ruan jia study from a stream

please critique my pixel-art dogman.
I've been trying to post this for the past ten minutes and my internet is being the biggest pile of doodoo about it.

Next step is a dismal city background, hence the streetlight-level light source.

all I drew in the past hour. Tried doing something from imagination. Hit me with it, anons, sorry for the shitty pic

>>2285327
He looks incredibly stiff. Those knees dont line up properly. His left arm is much thinner than his right. Try and use less full black lines.

>>2285340
noted. Stiffness I was aware of, the other things not so much. Gracias.

>>2285340
Right direction?

>>2285349
finished product with a stupendously lazy background.
Probably not gonna do anymore with this, but good advice

>>2285330
Do you know how I got these scars?

forgot to post this earlier
i'm trying to uguu harder by simplifying the facial features and hair
being moe isn't easy

>>2285493

Looks cool lefty. Did you color it yet?

>>2285365

Our furries even allowed to post in this forum?

Your black outline looks weird as you don't do it for his right arm.

>>2285493
Impressive if you drew it with your left hand.

>>2285244
The angles of the eyes are odd, they should mostly be in a straight line w/ each other.I think it's that the right eye is rotated. Also the nose looks like it may be too wide at the bridge, Which might be from that shadow on the left side. If thats supposed to be from the cheek it should be lighter, and probably a little lower.

Board for one of my story ideas I don't want to forget.

>>2285483
top kek, yeah, the lips are fucked

>>2285522
Why wouldn't furry artwork be allowed? It needs critique like anything else does...

>>2285330
you're not thinking about the lips in 3 dimensions. its going to curve with the curvature of the skull and disappear not just keep going to the end of the face. also the stage right part of the mouth is too long all together

First time posting on /ic/

The alien and waluigi are new

I am a beginner so don't be harsh, thanks

>>2285627
My Wi-Fi sucks, can't upload the images

Is this ''bad'' bad ?

I didn't do a great job with the smoke.

>>2285010
DOPE!

>>2279333
This is the worst piece of shit art i have ever seen.

>>2285707
you're about 6 days too late to vent your frustration
people has already been asking me about my blog

>>2285718
whats your blog?

>>2285718
People with bad taste, that is.

>>2285718
Samefagging isn't valid.

>>2285729
who hurt you boy?

>>2285735
Being forced to delete his tumblr and unable to drawfag in /pol/ i have to say he's hurt quite badly

>>2285725
He's that chink from /pol/. Mikufag is one of his cronies as demonstrated here. >>2285737
They both believe that anybody who doesn't like their art is some chilean animu drawfag from /pol/.

>>2285747
so mad
so butthurt
so suicidal

>>2285747
>thoae disgusting drawings
I can see why the faggot never posted his blog lol

>>2285753
i want to ask you to show your art but i've seen them all.
cant help a sameface chickenscratcher from being jelly and buttmad tho

>>2285747
HOLY SHIT BLOG UPDATED

Based as fuck i love his comics

>>2285747
>Mikufag is one of his cronies as demonstrated here. >>2285737

I'm just there to remind him to do some studies.

>>2285761
how can someone be so butthurt, jesu kawaii?
did he get bullied in summer camp

>>2285763
He is a piece of shit after all. surprised he's still alive after getting BTFO 3+ times this year

>>2285770
Calm down Malaysia.

>>2285770
the fuck are you talking about

>>2285788
3 times officially
-in march by some argie
-pic related, he fucked off but came back later
-during the periods of winterball where he axed his tumbler and became 100% irrelevant

most damage was during the winterball because the very reason i fucked with him in the first place is because i want that creator link in KYM dead.

god bless winterball and that autistic swede

>>2285755
What the fuck are you talking about? I've never posted my art here you talentless hack.

>>2285797
What a fuckin wuss

>>2285806
Malasya? Yes. I mean, did you see how he sperged in the porn thread?

>>2285761
Dat ass. Blog?

>>2285797
deleting your site due to some simple provocation is cowardly as fuck

>>2285890
Sending anon hate 24/7 and spending almost a year actively hating the guts of an artist because they told you to fuck off is autistic and disgusting as fuck.
Kill yourself, malasya. Youll never be a quarter the artist cabin boy is.

>>2285893
You have to admit though, that much dedication on someone is pretty admirable I just wish he used that energy on his work he can go really far with his drawings but if only.

>>2285895
Only a tumblr fag would admire literal autism. Are you a tumblr fag?

>>2285895
What the fuck are you on about? HE'S SHIT. Try to tell me one thing that's good about his drawings. Only one will do.

>>2285895
I have to do that to cease the copyright issue.
when cabin fuck said anyone can do whatever they want with christ chan i dont believe him one bit so he needs to be rubbed off from existence.

you might say im evil, but profiting from memes from the USA are usually linked to a creator and not totally anonymous.

>>2285918
I'll link your blog to some famous SJW :-)

>>2285922
>more audience
yes pls

>>2285928
Expect it.

>>2285913
>>2285915
>>2285918

He certainly has a pursued interest, that alone can make great things happen.

>>2285936
legendary, nice things.
man i hope i got big. I want to be rly super big like everyone know me. i want to be at least charlie hebdo level big

>>2285943
You don't want that. Trust me.

>>2285945
im stronger than you think. do yo think some faggots slamming keyboards keys all day long will stop me?

>>2285947
You would lose sight and focus from all that fame and attention and you'll end up blogging more rather than actually draw.

>>2285955
ill actually draw more and write less.
do realize outside of 4chan i'm very silent.

>>2285947
You give yourself too much credit. You're quite sensitive, after all. I know how you die a little whenever your drawthreads fail in /pol/.
I also love how powerless you are when there's no a 4plebs archive for a board.
I love it so much.

>>2285960
Let's have fun.

>>2285522
just woke up, yeah I started trying to fix up the outlines and wound up giving up, that's stuff I plan to apply to the next picture.

>>2286010
are you the guy who made that pixel art?
can you share some tutorials

>>2286051
>>2286051
>>2286051
new thread