/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

repo from last thread

can someone share the mikufag comics

>>2259156
I've been looking at this for like 5 minutes and I still don't get what's happening with the right eye

>>2259163
It's an energy spear, in the game she shoots one out of her eye like that apparently.

gimme ur trash boys!

also, OP don't post meme pictures, it's fucking atrocious. faggot

>>2259230
hm, seems that the hand is a bit too small and so is the head. work on proportions. seems basic anatomy is in place, but proportions are very important when working on such pieces.

>>2259167
that's pretty stupid. what game?

>>2259238
Undertale.
D'you reckon it'd look better without it? Since that eye is all blacked out. It may potentially be an eyepatch, but it doesn't look like that on all the sprites.

>>2259230

>>2259230
>also, OP don't post meme pictures, it's fucking atrocious. faggot
then post more work to choose from faggots

day 23 yokai

>>2259243
that turn around is on the limit to break her bones, mainly because you positioned the belly buttom line directly to the hips rather than meeting with the outline

>>2259249
Breaking bones is my specialty. I see what you mean.

>>2259245
Do you have a tumblr page or somewhere you upload your pictures? I love that style

>>2259283
http://albertomoldes.tumblr.com/ or search me at facebook

I don't know my style but w/e, glad you like it

>>2259283
>>2259290
samefag

>>2259292
Are you retarded? Proove it and then post your work, so I laught more

>>2259292
I rather like it myself, although would prefer if he scanned it rather than just took a picture.

>>2259651
>>2259308
samefag confirmed

Opinions?

>>2259656

Ayyyyyyyy

>>2259656
>>2259659
AAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

>>2259656

>>2259659
>>2259660
>>2259661

Fuck you /ic/

>>2259656
>Opinions?
sampled and/or copied colors

>>2259668

>>2259669

>>2259666
I don't see any issue.. persona style is all the problems I see

>>2259656

>>2259680
Damn, you're so cool

>>2259692
I know. Thank you.

>>2259656
Well, I hate to say this, but his head is so incredibly large that he looks like some sort of extraterrestrial being.

>>2259239
From googling the character it looks like she is depicted with an eyepatch in most pictures.

>>2259704
It's supposed to look like this.
https://youtu.be/MFLnSfrDD4w?t=3m12s

That guy who drew that picture is just retarded

>>2259655
The style is great but has no substance, you need to show the contours of the character's form. Also keep at practicing proportions, I see good things for you dude.

>>2259723
>>2259704
It's not even a spear coming from her eye, it's a gleam of light in the shape of a spear.

>>2259801
Did you do this fam?
Blog?

>>2259802
>Replying to yourself

smh tbh

>>2259806
bruh

>>2259807
Why the fuck are you so impressed by a beginner drawing.

Shaking my damn head, to be honest.

>>2259814
>impressed
I just like the way he/she drew her face
>a begginner
I'm a shitter and just like other peoples work, I'm not seeking out for the next Titian dude.
You can like anyone's art.

>>2259801

Hands

>>2259801
wow it suck's that a idiot like sakychan can be famouse while you are unknow what is your blog?? fam

>>2259817
Don't have to be a dick about it dude.

>>2259802
Nah, don't have any as long as I don't learn how to draw pose, hands, etc.

>>2259816
I know, I know, I'm still learning how to draw them.

>>2259817
I don't know who is sakychan, but... Well, I don't have any blog at the moment.

>>2259831
this is nice

I finally found a good pencil brush in photoshop

>>2259723
Thanks, dickhead.

>>2259861
way too pixelated, it looks like you're zoomed in at 150%

I think I fucked some stuff up.

I think this goes here?
Please tell me what I'm doing wrong

you guys were right on some of the crits from last thread, thanks.
>>2258999
first attempt looks good, i like how you drew her legs. i had considered drawing a pose similar to the second one, but isn't it too boring?

also, how come everyone complains when someone draws tits and ass? is it really that impossible?

anyway, here's today's drawing. her face looks weird, im not sure why I moe'd so hard in there! lol

>>2259901
The tits and ass pose isn't impossible, but it's a pretty uncomfortable pose and the way you drew it was anatomically incorrect.

>>2259901
also, i've noticed a lot of japanese artists use really thin but consistent linework while western artists emphasize line weight and thickness.

this is me trying to use thinner lines btw

>>2259867
Actually it's zoomed in 200%, It's just a quick sketch I screen capped with puush

>>2259909
oh that explains it, I'd avoid doing that though, always screencap at atleast 100%

.

>>2259891
Yeah I got something for you, joylne isn't black. Otherwise it just looks like the eyes are a bit far apart and the eyebrows are just drawn on rather than actually being part of her face.

.

>>2259953

I just realized her right ear should be lower.

Btw I took a photo because I've noticed my exported downsized jpegs are considerably more blurrier than their source files.

>>2259953
Oh boy. Is that who I think it is?

>>2259960
what scaling mode do you use (also don't export to jpg, export to png)

>>2259949
>joylne isn't black.

Get your eyes checked. She doesn't even look black in that portrait.

>>2259886
Really like the pose and expression keep on drawing anon.

>>2259962
Nope, sorry friend :( but I will get around it eventually now that I've lifted my self imposed ban on drawing Vocaloids.

>>2259967
I always choose 100% quality. In Photoshop I use baseline standard and in MS I choose the illustration setting.

Thanks for the tip I will try PNG for the next time

>>2259891

Your values are WAY too dark, especially in the hair. Dark violet turns to black very quickly.

>>2260047
How many fucking retards, jesus christ. thoes arnt the acutal values.

>>2259786
Aight bro, thanks for the crit.

>>2260055

And yet it's still fucked. 10/10 post.

can someone explain to me whats going on in this thread and why is there cancerous namefagging

>>2260068
ur mom

>>2260047
Thanks a lot anon. I added some highlights to the face and I'll get right to lightening her hair when I paint it. Speaking of which, I have no clue how to correctly paint hair, so I might need your guidance if I can't find a good enough tutorial.

>>2259949
I think her appearing black was because the other anon pointed out that my overall values were too dark. I brought her eyes closer together and touched up her brows, though I always thought Jolyne had fucking dramatic eyebrows. The kind that people usually draw on lol

>>2260074
edges are going awsome but there's no color armony, it's too contrasted at hues, hues are so far away from each other, make their gap closer, local colors won't dissapear even if you use gray as complementary, pick your hues wisely and play with color adjustments

going that mad with colors is not necesary wrong, but it' might be so gaudy it doesn't seem you're gonna be using color with communication (design) purposes

>>2259901
>Wah! What are we gonna do on the bed?
>POMF

hands and feet going weak right now, damn, I need confidence on them :'/

>>2260169
Nigga is that some ANIMORPHS?

>>2260172
it's a monster with double limbs from monster girl challenge I'm doing on inktober, so I did double limbs for hip+legs too, cuz 2 pussys means smart design u kno?

>>2260169
Introkun, I-Im seeing doubles!

Foot can't bend that much.

>>2260178
It actually can. literally google ballerinas or acrobats or gymnasts. In fact, they can point their feet even further.

>>2260169
The more I look at it the more it fucks up my eyes

>>2260149
I honestly have barely any knowledge of harmonious colors aside from this truck where you overlay a similar color and the mesh a lot better, but I don't know if it works this time. I used a gradient map then lowered the opacity and fill. Did it help at all?

>>2260169
What a

>>2260169
>>2260173
Though I like it, the double hip is oddly placed as one is beneath the other, so if she stood, her front hip and legs would kind of float in mid air as it's connected one hip length above the other hip. Not sure if I'm explaining my thoughts correctly, but the should be joint sideways rather than on top of eachother imo. Unless she's more of a horse, but that would fuck up her back.

Maybe she's a ram or something

guys is there a different method in making clean lines with a bit of render that dosent require clean lineart first ? like making two things at the same time over sketch is that smart ?

>>2260271
Where you learn chiaroscuro?

I really have to learn how to do hands and feet.. but It's enought for this cute monster <3

hard to make her "dress" kek

I've picked up digital art recently after an almost two year hiatus. I've always found digital painting more difficult than traditional. Don't know if this belongs here but this is what I'm working on right now, any tips and comments for colouring?

>>2260271
busted anatomy all-round

>>2260271
I wish I had your edges :I
how the fuck r u painting over your toolbars? jk, y that?

>>2260291
Ah, could you elaborate more?
Looking back I was pretty sloppy on the abdomen and legs, and the connection to the shoulder

>>2260289
First read after the thumbnail is appealing, but a lot of the features are flat.

>>2259953
you managed to do a cutie for first time, gratz!

You might have banned yourself from doing vocaloids, but you're still doing the same dress

>>2260261
look for some color theory about that
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8LbQYuV6dng

>>2260291
>hurr bad anatomy
people need to stop doing this, its one of the most vague and unhelpful responses you can possibly give.
if anatomy is bad point it out specifically or don't mention it at all.

>>2260326
He's right you know

>>2260339
"anatomy is weird" or anything of that type of "critique" applies to literally every artwork ever and isn't helpful in anyway.
Its a horrible critique not because its incorrect, but because its not helpful.

>>2260344
Let me critique you on the usage of "its":
correct - It's a horrible critique not because of it's incorrect, but because it's not helpful

>>2260344
>Telling someone that their Anatomy is incorrect is not helpful

>>2260349
you're a complete idiot if you think something as vague as "anatomy is incorrect" is a good critique.

>>2260350

If the audience can see exactly what the artist subconsciously knew what was wrong but posted anyway then clearly it isn't bad advice.

>>2260352
it clearly is bad advice because instead of pointing out something wrong with the image you go with the generic
>something somewhere in this image isn't perfectly 100% accurate to human drawings
which is especially worse when it is quite possible it was an intended "mistake"

pic related has "bad anatomy" but you can be damn sure your critique means nothing to them. because in comparison you're a retard floundering in the dark trying to "critique" despite having no knowledge or skill to back yourself up with.

>>2260358
Are you trying to compare murata to the fag above blindly copying ref without understanding and fully doing studies himself?

My english only comment means nothing to them indeed, probably because he can't read english.

>perfect anatomy
>from imagination
>no redline
Top Kek

>>2260358
anon, did he say
>something somewhere in this image isn't perfectly 100% accurate to human drawings
or did he say
>busted anatomy all-round
do you even know what the difference is?

say no to autism

>>2260363
>anon getting gud
>another anon salty as fuck
Schadenfreude is real

>>2260368
whatever helps you sleep at night, turd-nip.

>>2260358
>please spoonfeed me on exactly what I want to hear instead of what I need to hear.

If your anatomy is incorrect, research on anatomy and figure drawing and then understand the underlying forms and structure better. We will not tell you what you want to hear, if you want to hear what you want go to Deviant Art or Tumblr, and blog about it.

>>2260365
>but he said all around!
and he's be completely incorrect.
>>2260371
>hurr spoonfeed me!
you have no idea what a critique is and are just using critiques as a way to shittalk in order to make yourself feel better about your inability to draw.
>b-but we're just not being a hugbox!
no, you're being idiots.

>>2260369
pretty cool m8, you migh want to add more variety to the kid shading with paralels over that lines following form, aiming to the direction of his faint if you wanna add emphasis to it

>>2260370
>turd-nip
Toлькo в твoих влaжных фaнтaзиях, manya

>>2260372
>and he's be completely incorrect.
not really. it's not as horrible as he makes it out to be, but it's still vague all around and some areas really just look like guesswork.
in the end it all means the same thing: he needs to work on his anatomy.
it's not at all comparable with "small mistakes you can find in every image"

>>2260372
"Critique is commonly understood as fault finding and negative judgment, it can also involve merit recognition, and in the philosophical tradition it also means a methodical practice of doubt."

>>2260373

I'll try it next time! Still getting used to the idea of doing more dynamic figures and action pieces! Thanks anon!

You know, I am still looking for second eyes if I missed anything myself
>>2260296

For the record I don't think "bad anatomy" is as terrible a thing to say as some anons make it out to be (I would like people who mention it to point out specifics though)
To suggest you need to be a master in anything to know something is wrong isn't true
I want my art to be appealing to non-artists as well, so any level anon who can point out my anatomy is wonk is a constructive opinion to me
(why do threads always blow up when I post anything)

fuck u all nobody ever answears my questions here.

>>2260372
Okay i'll spoonfeed him

Fibia and tibia are as long as the femur bone, this is anatomically incorrect. It would be helpful if you think of the pelvis as a bowl shaped form, the abdomen is not a box form the rendering doesn't help. The naval is too high consider the anterior superior iliac crest this is an important bony landmark as it roughly aligns with the naval. The left Humerus is either too short or the torso is elongated, not to mention it is completely detached from the torso.

>>2260390
why did you stretch it horizontaly?

>>2260388
hai, nan deshou ka?

Where's that shoujo manga inspired guy again? I kinda miss those posts even if he didn't seem to benefit from criticism much.

What brush is more appealing?

>>2260539
right, easier to look at. IMO, its better to use a harder pencil texture if you want the left one.

>>2260539
in this situation I prefer the left, but I think that's might just be because the right one has some very sloppy linework.

>>2260313
Glad to know you like it.

I tried playing around with the resampling in this one isn't too bad but it is slightly over-sharp.

I also added more details, corrections, more contrasting values, etc..

First piece of mine that i've liked in a while, now please tear it to pieces

>>2260380
anons who are currently being breastfed complain about "vague" crits

>>2260612
is the flat look intentional?

>>2260625
To a certain degree yes

>>2260390
I don't understand the idea behind the form of your spike crown.
The two sides of it goes different ways, the far side of the crown follows the form of the top part, while the near side changes direction and starts to go towards the viewer.
I changed the near side so it would follow the top as well, and made it dig into the hair sooner, so that it looks like it sits on her skull rather than softly on top of her hair.

>>2260612
There are some minor things assuming your style.

>>2260666
thats because the crown was just symbolodrawn in afterwards, without putting too much thought into it

>>2260390
worked off this anon>>2260666

I think this anon is right >>2260393
, it does look stretched to the sides. It's a quick fix to make it more vertical. The construction of the figure feels kinda off, too- especially the neck-head area.

>>2260727
100x better, all it needs now is slightly more defined nose

>>2260706

Wait, You are a red-line anon.

Can you red-line my work. Be careful, I am using MS-paint.

>>2260539
and redline anon >>2260706

Those are really nice. Can we be friends? I'm more of a painter but I'm learning to draw. Would be nice to have someone to draw with, share knowledge, and keep motivated.

>>2260748
This is an Anonymous image board. If you want to make friends, go anywhere but here.

>>2259292

>>2260750
>Anonymous image board

Pffft, Tell that to the Tumblr advertisement threads.

>>2260753
If you notice it is always the same faggots who are more concerned about shilling their names rather than focusing on studying from a critique most of them do not post their work for that purpose instead it is one giant circlejerk.

>>2260706
Cute redline anon

>>2260755

Artwork and Critique

Not just Critique. And you sound like a whiny baby. No offense, I just met you.

>>2260760
Lurk more newfaggot.

>>2260765

That doesn't make any sense anon.

>>2260748
I want to stay anon but thanks though. Your art is cute. Are you the same guy from /jp/ thread?
>>2260738
sure

>>2260781
>sure

Yes! But, I am a shitty artist, I just like when people point out my flaws. I don't know If I going to be a better artist in the future.

>>2260748
different anon here.
hey if you ever make a group or something let me know. i'm always looking for peers too.

>>2260781
I haven't posted in /jp/ for a long time, but I'm glad if you've seen or remembered my drawings. You can drop me a message at my throwaway e-mail whyjohnsmith990 @ gmail.com if you changed your mind. It'll be nice not drawing alone for once.

>>2260797
Maybe i'll make one on irc or something. Just e-mail me if you're interested.

>>2260748
Perspective on girl in upper right is really good. Did you use a reference? If not, how'd you do it?

Working on this when I can.
Still touching up the linework a bit, but going to colour it soon.

>>2260666
>>2260727
Thanks so much for this, I'll admit I wanted to round this up quickly and just render it done. I was careless in the construction too...

>>2260378
I got bored
(Not original poster)

>>2260861
oops You have to attach files for them to send :3

>>2260862
Are you waiting for your critic?

>>2260864
nope, just posting cause I can.
I got very bored

This version lets you see my flaws, but is closer to what I was going for...
It sucks...

>>2260808
Do you have a blog or something, this is very good.

>>2260865
too bright me thinks

>>2260786
read the fucking sticky
:3

>>2260888

ah shit, I thought You were red-line guy.

Nice trips.

>>2260748

So has your life changed for the better since your art had been featured on Kotaku?

>>2260862
>>2260865
>>2260885

Ha! I would love to see that one colored by someone else... :)

background for a model i was taking pics of.
comments/crits welcome

>>2260271
Blog?

>>2259230
>can't even draw from reference right
m8...

Anybody have any tips for accurately drawing reflections in mirrors?

fall themed elf king.
supposed to be kind of a concept/portrait

>>2260923
you know how I know you dudn't actually read any Loomis? He actually is useful if you give him a chance.
they follow the perspective, so just imagine it's a window and an identical girl stands behind it

>>2260932
You caught me! I've only read his first one, fun with drawing or whatever.
Thanks for the tips!

>>2260923
Use persepective to project reflected objects into the virtual space within the mirror.

The mirror continues the perspective lines of the scene outside the mirror.

An object 1m in front of the mirror is seen as if located 1m behind the surface of the mirror.

>>2260932
ah dammit loomis beat me to it

>>2260706
That looks so much fucking better, thanks dude i'll try to learn from it

>>2260271
"Hmm, I have no ideas, let's just slap some horns on it!"

>>2260271
that screenshot is making me question reality, how the fuck is what, is that a setting in sai??

>>2260915
idk anon the lighting looks all wrong

>>2260915
darken the back side of the building to be darker than the side of the trees in direct light of the moon, then rim light the building to similar brightness of the trees, also make the backsides of the trees darker probably

>>2260378

>>2260378
Errors aside this is a damn cool concept

>>2260957
Never change.

>>2260957
>Hey this is looking really goo-
>Giant loli stomping a city

I admire your conviction anon.

>>2260920
hehe, i hoped someone would find it! was using it pretty loosely, just to get the pose.

>>2261007
No you weren't. You copied literally everything. The hair, the clothes, the expression.

Finally done

>>2261038
The colors are an assault on the eyes

>>2261038
I liked the linework ,but those values and colours aren't cutting it, anon. I suggest you decide on a proper light source first before rendering all those fancy things in.

>>2261071
in hindsight i should've lowered the saturation. too late to fix it now because they're on my blogs and i've sent it to the commissioner. welp, a lesson to remember next time

>>2261073
multiple light source, lotsa lights

>>2260748
Tumblr?

quick doodle

>>2261118
i like it. now add a giant loli

>>2260957
cam sial je ak tengok

>>2260975

Thanks!

>>2260974

I thought it was pretty obvious that I eyeballed the perspective.

>>2261158

Trying to mimic Bravely Default's style. Keeping the chibi proportions of the game sprites but with the lines/colours of the promo art.

Trying to mimic Bravely Default's style. Keeping the chibi proportions of the game sprites but with the lines/colours of the promo art.

the more keks I do, the kekker it gets

>>2261244
cute and kinda charming.
but you still really need to work on your fundamentals

>>2261211
is there more than just the one artbook?
>Bravely Default- Flying Fairy - Art Album [Artbook]

>>2260957
got a site?
I need to see more of your giant lolis.

>>2260957
cant help but think that its mopre of a joke than an actual fetish of yours anymore

>>2261295
no reason it can't be both~

>>2260957
one day rinfag will make a shadow of the colossus like game featuring giant little girls instead of actual collosi
>y u killin dem lolis doe?
make it happen.

>>2261289
only got dA and pixiv.
http://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=304834
>>2261295
it's a little bit of both

Someone please rip me a new one

would someone kindly rip me a new one as well?

>>2261393
>>2261380
read the sticky and join the beginner thread

a bit lazy

how would you simplify this expression?
>>2261688

>>2261745
>not taking advantage of a crabman's fatal weakness to the mighty necktie
It's like these adventurers want to die.

>>2261745
looks really stiff.
even the effects are pretty stiff looking.

>>2260606
You seem like someone worth asking.
Does having a Cintiq, or similar device, make the overall production process easier?
I can't seem to get to grips with a basic graphics tablet, do you think a more 1 to 1 experience might be easier?
Sorry for the daft question.

>>2261751
Where is that from?

>>2261766
The one thing most people liked about that piece was the movement in it. lol
Well, I guess it will look better when I get rid of the lines of the smoke.

>>2261745
The adventurers look more like they're statues or suspended in midair than as if they're in motion

>>2261782
i agree with >>2261766
i think its a good piece. i like your composition, the colors are ok, the characters and background are interesting. i dont think you should take the smoke or effects away exactly... i think that the smoke around the crabs feet and behind him are great... but the ribcage lookin effect leading up to him is stiff imo. i can see what you are trying to do with it, but i think you should redo that. i also think the pose of the wizard is stiff.
side note, i think the background tree on the right needs more form definition... looks weird to me.

>>2261785

Hmmm... I dunno what can I do about that. Add some sort of effect depicting movement? :|

>>2261792
The position of the jumping guy is kinda statuesque. It feels like his weight is waay too centered and balanced. In movement, you're off-balance to the direction you're moving at.

>>2260313
Okay, I think I understand a bit more. I'll try to desaturate some bits.

I decided to add a body for shits and giggles. Was it a good idea or should I have left it as a portrait?

>>2261791

Thanks, I'll look into it. I won't take the effects away, just vanish the lines which is one of the reasons I think it may look stiff.

>>2261782
>Where is that from?
One-Punch Man.

Too tired, guess I won't finish that today.


>>2261244
> Priscilla
Nice, we need more waifusouls fanarts.

>>2261797
blog?

>>2261797
She doesn't have eyelids.

>>2261773

Definitely, it's just easier and faster.

Nowadays I start everything on my Note4, Surface Pro 2 and physical sketchbook, the stylus/pen is just more fitting for initial linework and even light rendering, if I feel like coloring/finishing something I just plug my bamboo pen tablet and start working towards a proper final illustration.

I have no experience with a cintiq but I feel that for the smaller models it would not be too different than using my SP2, especially now that I bought a proper bamboo stylus and a small Bluetooth keyboard for the shortcuts.

>>2261094
pixelnoodle

>>2260876
Thank you! And yeah, I have a tumblr : thdark.tumblr.com

Newbie artist here. What can I do to improve my lines? My lines feel really scraggly and too rough. Also, should I focus only on fundamentals and not drawing anything else? I really want to draw cute anime girls, but I've heard that can lead to bad habits.

>>2261868
confidence. dont draw the line bit by bit, try a swift stroke.

new to this thread, what should i work to improve on specifically for this recent thing ive posted?

>>2261877
Who needs arms with legs like these?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YHL_Bk60F_4

>>2261868
Honestly, I paint specifically so I don't have a mental breakdown over lines. But I do hear some other artist suggest drawing with the entire arm, not the wrist. And also ghosting lines before actually putting them down.

>>2261840
Here's the closeup. Did I not make it dark enough?

>>2261829
Unfortunately, I haven't updated my blog with art in months, so my current ability is not reflected in the blog. I just made a deviantart so I'll start posting things there just now.

changed the helm and shades a bit.

>>2261868
>Also, should I focus only on fundamentals and not drawing anything else? I really want to draw cute anime girls, but I've heard that can lead to bad habits.
Motivation is important for gittin gud at any hobby. If you want to draw cute anime girls then do it, just make sure you also do enough studies to actually keep improving.

>>2261468
her head is sort of uh, sunken into her chest.

>>2261868
Good to see you practicing. Anyways, that's really the downfall of the pencil. Line with a good brush pen so you can vary up your line thickness and test out how to draw one continuous stroke.

It'll be easier to see where you fucked up properly once you've inked it.

Not sure how many of these I'll need to do before I get used to drawing her.

>>2261940
Colored an instagram pic using my finger with the "artflow" app on android. It came out pretty okay I think.

>>2261897
He's cool, but I think the texture of the background only highlights the complete lack of texture on the character.

>>2261918
I really like this. I wouldn't have thought that color pallet would work but it's cohesive.

>>2261940
Trying to keep her recognizable/on-model while she's making more exaggerated expressions wold probably help increase your familiarity with her. These are all fairly consistent with each other, but they expressions are all pretty moderate. Also, quit playing on my fondness for girls with big eyebrows.

>>2261877
>those knuckles
>that blush
fuck off with this tumblr stuff.

>>2261959
i can see what you mean
also, made a version with no helm

>>2260539
Left works well if you're doing some kind of watercolor or pastel for the colors. The right one is a bit blurry though, can you twek the settings to make it sharper?

>>2261889
The eyelid thing happens because naturally eyes are always curved down at the ends.
The eyelids you drew just look too thin and the shape you choose makes the eyes look like there's not an actual eyeball behind them.

>>2261918
The ear is a bit too big but in general I like it a lot.

I messed up hard with this little foreshortening, her left hand is glitched for real
rushed this one and didn't construct too much :(

>>2261977
meant to respond to >>2261946

>>2262053
The jaw is a bit too large on the left side of the chick. I like it though.

>>2261946
>I wouldn't have thought that color pallet would work but it's cohesive.

it's an analogous color scheme, pretty common
red/magenta/blueish-purple are all right next to each other on the subtractive color wheel

important note to take away from it is the balance tho, they were able to use a massive amount of super saturated magenta to fill the negative space/background because everything in the head is either neutral or super desaturated, save the red bit on the eye, which is super small, used to draw interest, while also setting mood. plus it just looks cool lol

Good morning fellas! Does anybody has a working cracked ver of sai 1.2? I searched all over the web and havent found anything sadly. Thanks!

>>2262053
Ohhhh okay! Thanks a lot Anon. This looks waaay better. I'll put in the changes.

>>2262110
Unfortunately I only have 1.1 but its fully cracked and comes with a shit ton of brushes.

>>2262196
does it has the lumi & shade layer mode? Thats mostly what i'm worried about, i used to have it but cant find a decent cracked ver which carries it along.

>>2262196
Can you put your version up somewhere for download, please? Brushes and all

>>2262211
I believe it does have lumi and shade. I got you covered.
>>2262244


https://www.dropbox.com/s/fuoxa5ek4sd1yz2/Sai%201.1.0%20full%20%2B%20brushes.rar?dl=0

>>2262254
*Thumbs up*
Thank you pal!

>>2262254
Hey, thanks! This version seems to have a lot more shit than my current one, so I might give it a try.
Cheers!

So, how long does it take you guys to make a colored drawing, from start to finish?

>>2262477
My last one took me about half a week in between my job and everything else.

>>2262477
All the sharp edges in the background is taking away focus from the girl.
Please don't cut her head off from her neck, it makes it look like she's wearing a mask, instead use a small patch of shadow to indicate plane change.
Raise her cheekbone.
No Frankenstein forehead.

>>2262491
it really takes a long time doesn't it?

>>2262504
interesting, thanks! let me see what i can do, brb

should I go with this set?

>>2262504
thanks she really looks cuter now c :

will keep it in mind for future drawings

>>2259656

>>2262542
The longest part is simplifying it just enough to not look jarring and unpleasant but at the same time to give a sense of depth, form, and space especially when coloring. Animu faces are as difficult as hands and feet for me.

>>2262556
do you do colored pencils because i need help

>>2262598
I'm painting over a scan image made with ink on my sketchbook with photoshop, what kind of help do you need?

>>2262570
i know what you mean, drawing a cute face is quite difficult!

>>2262611
how do you draw that ass with colored pencils
how do you apply the shadows on the base color?
do you use grey or simply use a stronger value of the base?

>>2262617
pls explain why you still suck after 7 years and carpal tunnel

>>2262617
drawing a cute face is the easiest thing to do, specially when styliced

>>2261848
Thanks for the info. Anywhere else I asked, I just got abuse.
I don't think it would be a good idea to jump into something as pricey as a SP2 or Cintiq. I might go a bit more conservative and try a Huion unit.

>>2262617
> drawing a cute face is quite difficult!
Drawing Moe Basic and Advance Techniques.pdf

>>2262640
damn this guy draws like a /pol/ drawfag

>>2261936
beginner thread
>>2261819
neat.
>>2261211
rarely do i not like something as much as i hate what youve done.
>>2260786
beginner thread more than anyone else.
>>2260748
VERY neat.>>2260271
holt shit nice.>>2259245
nice

>>2262629
well, it's done with photoshop layers
if you want to do it with pencils try it out, the trick is to burn the core shadow while leaving the shadow zone almost as light as the light part.

Layer effects+layer mask to erase parts is a blessing (thats how I make that shadow transition or that hue variations). It has been done in 20 min

With pencils you can't play with saturation or values that much, with markers might be.

>>2262640

I mean... It's better at least.
Compared to lots of "draw this again" pictures from deviantart it's incredible improvement. There are people who go for years and don't change at all.

>>2262669
it changed, but it's not better (nor worse)

>>2261940
And another

>>2262672
its clearly much better.
the anatomy is retarded, but the lines are far cleaner, the coloring looks alot nicer, they have confident lines.
Plus its only 5 months.

not sayings its amazing, but there is clear improvement.

>>2262669

It's kind of like One Piece, where all of the chefs try to get Sanji to leave because they have nothing more to teach him. He became too good and was missing out on a much bigger world...

Firez... if you're reading this, get outta here kid...

You're too good for this place.

>>2262680
>You're too good for this place
I don't think he's gonna fall for that, anon. He's no catbib and he knows it.

>>2262684
>catbib

tehmeh or nothing.

>>2262688
They're both great and levels above FiRez, what difference does it make?

>>2262696
They're a biased pedo, obvs

>>2262696
They both have been doing this for way more time than Firez so how is the comparison fair?

>>2262707
See >>2262680 and >>2262684

>>2262684
>>2262688
>>2262696
>>2262703
>>2262707
tfw thread once again buried by fanboy garbage once again. Seriously go orgasm on tumblr or something. The rest of us don't give a fuck who dwaws' da' best.

>>2262680
The idea of people "graduating" from /ic/ is only going to keep this place shit.

>>2262717
>not having 4chanx
>not just minimizing >>2262680 and watching it and every reply to it disappear as though they never existed
Stay pleb.

>>2262723
>use 4chanx
>rarely ever hides posts
>hide said post just to see what happens
>the last 20 posts disappear
goddamnit /ic/

>>2262717
>>2262723
I just don't understand how someone can sit here (literally all day) and argue about another artist. KNOWING FULL WELL that there own art continues to look like trash. Fucking let firez do his thing. He (nor those other two) clearly doesn't need/nor does they care what any of you have to say.

Grow up and worry about your own art and stop ruining the thread for the rest of us. This is what the 4th time this week?

>>2262731
I'll do what I want, Mom.

>stop ruining the thread for the rest of us
see >>2262723
It's not rocket science, faggot. You don't have to see any of this if you don't want to.

Tried my hand at inking some fairly new sketches.

>>2262731
You must be new

>>2262731
>implying
show art faggot

>>2261876
>>2261889
>>2261900
>>2261936
Thanks for the advice!

>>2262735
The fuck is going on with that nose?

>>2262740
>show art faggot
I have nothing to hide. Here it is. I'm not the best either but at least I don't have a hard on for firez and other faggots that came from here.
>>2262736
yeah. sure I am.

>>2262810
>that miku
I mean...I like the hands?

>>2262797
Woops, forgot to fix that.

>>2262810
How was kyle this shit back then

>>2262810
I know who you are, stop posting that. Leave Kyle alone.

>>2262830
The fuck is Kyle

>>2262845
You know who stop pretending

>>2262848
Seriously who? What's his story and where's his art?

>>2262850
Okay Kyle you can fuck off now.

>>2262848
Holy shit, Kyle's progress is actually kinda inspiring. I'd wonder how many hours a day he put in on average but it's probably best not to care and just stack my own bricks.

>>2262851
I ain't Kyle.

>>2262850
>>2262856
You're not alone, anon, I don't know who the hell he is either.

>>2262830
Never.

>>2262830
>I know who you are
who is he

>>2262830
sexy squid
i just got 6615 views on my site
people are reading my stuff
im so happy squid

>>2262830
>>2262972
What the fuck are you people on about?

>>2262848
What expression is that on the first one? It looks like sheer terror and confusion at the same time.