/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2247552

Ok, put some more hours rendering this one, also followed the advice of some anon about adding some variations to the forms(thanks again btw).

messy

>>2248367

Indeed. I can't figure what is going on.

October dump

>>2248410
you're gonna make it

>>2248403
here's the figure without the background

why did the pepe thread get deleted

This is my first time fucking with stylization. Everything about this shit feels weird.

critics welcome

here we go

>>2248192
Shading on shield and sword is still wrong. If there is a second light source causing those values, it needs to affect other parts of the image as well, and the sword and shield are still in positions that would be lit by the rear light source.

>>2248410
are the bottom left rocks refd? i love the colors

>>2248410
Forgot your trip

>>2248419
pepe a shit

>>2248410
Anon, do you post anywhere besides here?

>>2248410
you are doodlerz on tumblr i know it

>>2248410
What's your brush setting for the color study?

>>2248412
thanks

>>2248696
no, but I used ref for the desert

>>2248754
andrae0.tumblr.com

>>2248765
doodlezbd? I'm not him. I envy his line confidence and construction though.

>>2248766
This one, from doodlezbd's brushes

>>2248775
anti-loomis-kun?
have you been lying about not having a blog this whole time?

>>2248410
super jelly of your figures
how did you practice?

Is that samefagging?I can't understand why some doodles/studies clearly done without much effort are getting so much attention. I mean, it's good stuff, but nothing impressive to that point of cock sucking.

>>2248963
post your work.

>>2248415
>I use a polynian figure as reference
Stop this

>>2248964

Nah... I know how much of a witch hunt that would cause. It's just that it's not that impressive really, the reactions surprised me.

New mosquito girl fanart.

>>2249017
>...and then she farts!

>>2249025
every time you say this and every time i giggle

>>2249025
Good

>>2248982
so you're just jelly? shouldda say so from the beginning mang

>>2248827
anti loomis has a tumblr and it is very easy to find if you have half a brain and access to google

This job killed all the progress I made in drawing regularly. I'm so tired I can only doodle shit when I'm lucky
fuck everything

>>2248694
The sword and shield are supposed to glow a bit on the inside. Like a living muscle.

>>2249143
maybe if you actualy tried to draw instead of partaking in /b/ cancer orgies, you would have improved.

>>2249189
Fifty bucks I'm better than you. wanna try?

>>2249143
>>2249189
>>2249200
incoming epic art battle showdown

both of you put on gay trips and fight each other

your prompt is now drawing the OP mosquito girl

>>2249200
be unsummoned back to /b/ memefag

>>2249017
Some tests for the lewd variations I planned to do, though I guess that at the time I'll have them done posting them on the porn thread should be more adapted.


>>2249143
> Veronica

Good tastes.

>>2249205
>>2249202
Done.
>/b/
>memefag
you're fucking retarded

>>2249282
this is terrible, r u trolling us? xD nice bro

>>2249063
I don't know about that. I give warosu, iqdb, sauceno, and google a workout every time he posts going back for months and I never find a hair of this guy.

>>2248981
I'm not sure what you mean by this. I didn't use refs.

I'm working on this, trying to stylize it but I don't normally try for stylization. Anything look off?

>>2249344
I think you should push the gesture more. Have him putting more weight behind his punch instead of just sticking his arm out.

>>2249348
Cool cool. I don't want him to actually look like he's attacking someone though, he's supposed to be doing more of a hype thing. Anything else though?

>>2249202
>>2249282
The challenger from /b/ has posted!

Awaiting a response!

>>2249350
having him punching up into the air would probably give that effect

>>2249384
Alright I'll work on it some more then, thanks anon.

I I was going to paint this with watercolors, anything I should change beforehand?

I I was going to paint this with watercolors, anything I should change beforehand?

>>2249567
have you considered changing basic construction

like it's not awwwfull but the pure amount of symbols on the faces and the watch hurt to see

>>2249571

I did kinda resort to drawing symbols though, now that you mentioned it. How did you tell?

I had a rough that I ref'd since I redrew it on watercolor paper, but I didn't really have her face down.

First couple pages of me attempting gesture. Halp

>>2249629
u're wasting your time, take more time on each gesture, you can't do them in short times if you're novice

this is not the thread for that kindo f posts, go beginner thread and keep working on it

>>2249642
Whoops, meant to post in the beginner thread, my bad. Thanks for the feedback though

some kind of assignment.
Critique welcome

>>2249653
Plus character.

A quick question. If I need to draw line art in PS , should I use the pencil mode instead of the brush mode? it feels the brush mode is a bit "blur" at the edge and is not good for small detail? Seldom draw line art, wanna know how people usually do if they need to make animation style thing in photoshop

How do I learn over exaggeration?
I want to be able to draw stuff with a rounded jaw and arms that dont get thinner around the wrists
But when I just try to do it, it makes me look like an asshole

lil imp girls

>>2249661
nice~

>>2249655
nice dildo, they seem happy with it

>>2249672
lol , u found that

>>2249673
don't get inspired in historic bad designs kek

>>2249681
lol
Just for fun. I have no idea people find that out that quick

>>2249655
Your characters are so fucking stiff you could build a bridge with them.

>>2249690
I'm diggin that expresion

today is insect girl so I'm doing a ladybug

Trying new coloring style

yup, stealing a stealer
is her ass correct? I'm can't think clearly about it

>>2249782
Her right ass cheek looks tense.

>>2249785
whe's like surprised, her ass is too
to make the other cheeck the same i just have to only make it less round or spherical right?

holy fucking shit, I'm experiencing adrenaline while inking her face, my ink pen driftted full charged of ink, holy shi, it did not splashed, pff, cant handle this

>>2248691
hey, how do you make those white areas. are you using a marker or white ink?

what brand? i can't find any white markers or ink where i live.

>>2249017
I vote this one over
>>2249282
this

>>2249802
dude just use gouache.
You don't have to bother with other colors than white, probably.

>>2249802
I use acrilic too sometimes, but my paper can't tolerate too much
the pen I use for white is "GELLY ROLL 08 SAKURA", it's getting empty and I neither know where to buy new one

>>2249810
>>2249815
thanks guys

Hand/arm sketch for today.

i'm so proud of this right now, I'm not used to do anything close to this kind of quality shit from imagination, please, critique me

should I do a bit of shading with more ink, adding lines to forms more intense?

I'm not sure if paint it with markers and color pens or try digitally
any inputs?

>>2249881
kinda looks like bio armor from the guyver, i like it. cant critique due to not being good enough.

>>2249881
got a tumblr anon?

>>2249890
https://www.tumblr.com/blog/albertomoldesart
made it yesterday, filled it today, will be updating but nothing to see kek

>>2249690
>waits patiently for someone to shoop this expression.

>>2249881
Very niiiiiiiiiice

>>2245672
I'm not quite happy with the progress, i dunno why did anyone have any thoughts?

They're supposed to be Hawaiian/Samoan/Polynesian/etc twins.
Probably put some pineapples on that pizza to show this?

>>2249297

Same. Only thing that turned up was that permanoobs post.

>>2250316
this is good and terrible at the same time. did you photobash that hand or something?

Trash talk my stuff please.

>>2250446
Entire body is just midtone with line work.

Please shade.

>>2250446
Fuck, i'll fix that once i get acess to a pc.

Does western comic style belongs here too?

>>2250475
Go ahead.

>>2250476
I totally forgot the lightning. Fuck. Also mouse is fucked up because i tried to ink in a moving car

So how much space do artists have to stylize shit until its considered bad?

>>2250316
perspective off, the back legs of both characters are completely off.
Also , generallt , these kind of completely symmetrical scene is boring as fuck. have a little bit difference in pose

>>2250482
Almost infinite space, you can go the full range from perfect human rendering all the way down to "WE NEED TO GO WIDER" down to moeblobs and you can be respectively good or absolute shit at either.

As a general rule however, people who don't know their basic fundamentals will attempt moeblobs and fail miserably - see almost every picture under "chibi" or some other weeb shit on DA.

Consequently people who know what they're doing can probably pull off anything along the range fairly easily. You'll see this a lot in comics, where often certain humorous panels or the ending 4koma will be done in a more stylized technique than the rest of the comic.

I don't know why I typed all of this out.

>>2250517

how am I doing so far? looking for crits on anatomy, pose and forms overlaping, its kinda complicated this thing

the plot is fun isn't it?

>>2248410
do you have some tips/resources on color? i like the way you use color.

>>2250596

>>2250519
>>2250517
this reminds me of makoto kobayashi, i love this look, any place i can check more out?

>>2250391
Nope, drew it myself.

>>2250492
I agree they're kinda boring, like that.
I had a few other ideas like maybe one would be chasing after the other with an empty pizzabox or something. I need to turn the knives into shuriken, maybe I can make them look like little pizza cutters while i'm at it...

turned noise didn't it?

>>2250816
cute and gud, but those tentacles are moving like hands and it's not easy to get what's going on with them, she also has wings, but those things are not clear

>>2250790
Where's the head-holding chick looking at? Past the headless chick's foot? Why?

>>2250517
>>2250519
sinix and zed had a baby. cool.

>>2250878
fuck, didn't realiced that, wtf
I made in the sketch how it would be her head and brainless made she look at there, might redo it with some white gelly pen :P

>>2250675
Kobayashi is dope, i really like the old 80s roundish looking mech stuff. i have a tumblr but i dont have a lot of mech drawings http://lostdatathings.tumblr.com/

>>2249567
Legoman lips.

DBZ is garbage and everyone who draws it is autistic, including you.

>>2250790
what fokin keyboard has "intro" key ?

>>2250517
Reminds me of Derek Stenning's Cosmonaut stuff. Lookin' good nigga.

>>2249017
got a blog or sumthin?

>>2251122
Woman on the left's stage right leg is bowed to India and back. Ruins an otherwise good picture. Guy's face is fucked though.

>>2251143
whats fucked in his face ?

>>2251146
He looks like an ugly woman.

>>2251152
i dont have this feeling at all.

>>2251153
That's because you're stupid.

>>2251153

It's the combination of long hair and bulging lips.

>everyone who "gonna make it" draws in photoshop
So SAI stabilizer is really hurting your accuracy and progress, right?

>tfw im still failing the anatomy big time, so i just leave it out ;_;

any help would be mostly welcome!

>>2251234
Go to sleep Ahren

what are your toughts on the pose? i feel the lower body looks wonky and stiff but so far i havent found another way to make the legs look "elegant".

>>2251319
Make her very slightly pigeon toed

>>2251319
the anatomy is off. you have her torso and presumably pelvis oriented in the same direction that her head is pointed, but both of her legs are pointed straight towards the viewer.

>>2251348
>implying she can't turn her torso to the side

>>2251394
Do you know how hips work? Are you fully aware of the area they occupy and how they relate to other body parts, the legs in this case? Take a closer look.

>>2248775
where has he shared his brushes?

>>2251290
Don't leave out anatomy and go back and learn it properly

if you don't then give up

you can't draw arms and yet you omitted one while leaving a terribly done one in why?

>>2251394
No twist is shown.

>>2251284
It doesn't matter. But you can check for yourself.

Pixiv lists the program used on a lot of the entries there. Go through your favorite artists and see if there's a significant difference in quality depending on the program. If you want to get technical and extend that study to include all your favorite sadpandas, clip studio/manga studio probably has the most "made it" artists, but that only makes sense because that's what the program is for.

>>2251234
>that rin
I want to lick your Rins and Sabers all over.

>>2251423
by arm you mean hand?

Thing is with MGE designs is that a lot of details get obscured so you have to just guesstimate your way through some parts

also fat Jabberwock wip

>>2248410
Do you have any kind of goal with drawing? Animation? Illustration? whatever else there is? I've been curious for a while

>>2251439

It's good but I feel like the jaw shouldn't be as wide. It seems you have gone over most of it with ink so that's something to remember next time. I really like the legs, though

what are some good brushes for clip studio paint/manga studio?

Tear me apart andrae

>>2251916
body is shit, tshir drawing does not follow forms, amrs, feet and legs are not constructed

>>2251916
Head is too far forward on neck

Face is offset to her right like a flounder

ears too low

knees are drawn directly facing us although they should point right

wtf shading on nose

>>2251916
why are you even asking for critique? who is supposed to know what is intentional what is not? if it's a stylistic choice or not? tbh it looks nice, but nothing groundbreaking. ask critique on your pieces that follow realism strictly, not on stylized stuff.

in my opinion at least.

>>2251916
i told you before, stop drawing so lazily, only people with tons of experience can be lazy and still make something good.
learn anatomy.

I'm fucking dead

I tried out a tutorial I saw somewhere and it didn't turn out very well. Thought I'd post it here since I don't usually post things I like.

>>2252274
simool

>>2252277
I don't know what that means and google isn't helping

>>2252274
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>>2252294
I think it's fairly obvious he's trying to do a cartoonish figure m8

>>2252305
A cartoonish figure still needs to have some sort of construction behind it.

>>2252305
If so then I like it.

>>2252312
The construction is not horrible, I think my problem with it is the eyes. The nose + mouth is a little too low as well.

>>2252312
depends on the level of/style of cartooning
and while i'll agree that what that anon is going for is a bit too flat/underconstructed, something like parappa the rapper is fine because it has strong consistent proportions along with good composition and color theory in the designs
y'kno, just good thing to keep in mind, as the good lord light vilppu taught while defendinkg us from dark loomis: no rules, just tools (but also still learn your fundamentals)

>>2252324
>parappa the rapper is fine because it has strong consistent proportions
...because it has underlying construction. You don't think they throw down lines at random and he just appears, do you? He is made up of basic shapes.

>>2252329
i was gonna post a correction saying that i meant to put "proportions/shapes" but i thought "nah, they'll understand what i meant" but i guess i thought wrong...

>>2252331
The point is that it still has construction. Your argument is "It doesn't need construction as long as it has construction."

>>2252274
>>2252277
>>2252294
>>2252305
>>2252312
>>2252317
>>2252324
>>2252329
>>2252331
>>2252356


that picture is shit because the eyes are fucking symbols and there was no underlying construction for the face, or skull, or hair volume, or really anything at all. It's all guesswork with not much thought put into the placement of facial features. The entire thing is a series of flat lines slapped on top of each other and rendered sloppily.

parappa the rapper isn't even a good example because in game he's a flat piece of flexible paper which is pretty much where that drawing is in terms of quality

>>2252356
i'm too tired and you're too annoying, you win i guess

someone please bully me.

>>2252387
quality ink work on the dress even with no tones i like the simplification

mr skeltal has no shading anywhere, not even in the pits of his mouth

for this reason it is hard to tell if he is in front or behind the brim of the hat

tl;dr shade your humans your hat and clothes are fine

>>2249881
Go digital, you don't want to go experimental on sketches you actually liked, I know.

>>2250482
Stylization doesn't make art bad. Being bad makes art bad.

>>2251582
I sketch and ink on SAI then color in PS.
I never mention SAI on my tags because everyone knows unless you're japanese that shit is pirated 99.9% and some people are cunts about it.

Tools aren't gonna make you better if you're already past certain threshold of quality. The only factual pro of PS over any other software is that you can streamline parts of your process with custom actions, brushes and filters.

>>2251916
this >>2252071

>>2251779
I still have no idea. Might be good if I make money from it, since I'll probably never get a job when I finish my degree.

>>2251916
Don't listen salty fags. It's cool. People will pay you money

>>2252387
18+

>>2251931
I thought it was based off of an Animal Crossing character with some dodgy nose colouring

>>2252387
The arm of the skeleton is really weird. Be aware of it next time

Having a bit of trouble.
Is this too 'heavy?'
Any other issues?

>>2252888
you might want more thin lines, but keep going

Can I post different stylizations or does it have to be anime?

>>2252923
anything

I'm finally working on my comic that I've put off for years and trying to get back to the original stylization it had... This is just a rough draft, but what can be better about it?

>>2252931

The ear is too big

>>2252937
>my anus is bleeding

>>2252937
How do fix?

>>2252940
by making it smaller

>>2252941
Like this?

>>2252931
>>2252945
Spend more time on your sketch. Find reference, don't rush

>>2252939

No I meant the ear itself is big, not the gauge.

Although on that subject I wonder if people who get ear gauges are thinking long term.

>>2252947
> I wonder if people who get ear gauges are thinking long term.
Edgy teens dont think about it, they just want to seem edgy.
Normal people? yeah, they do

which one? any suggestions?

going to play more with color blocks before rendering anyways

>>2252946
ty, kind sir. I've just been heading towards a deadline so it's been a little rush-y

>>2252947
>>2252948
I have one inch plugs in myself, and never had any problems with them in accordance to finding a sturdy job.

>>2251122
Your facial proportions are kinda wonky, the guy's face seems to turned in a different perspective than the rest of his head.

>>2252951
The contrast is better on the right one, though you're going to need more of said contrast in her face, else we'll only look at her butt.

>>2252951
Your perspective seems a bit skewed. And your forms aren't reading too well. The facial markings seem out of place as well.
I guess finding the center line of the figure will help in not distorting the drawing.

Do any of you guys deal with problems of losing the drawing when you are painting over it? I guess this only applies if you are trying to go for some sort of realism painting. I'm losing the expression in this woman I'm trying to paint.

>>2252965
>I have one inch plugs in myself
Oh, so you're a faggot.

>>2252951
>>2249782
the reason her butt looks a weird little is that the right cheek's gravity is too high. it's fat at the top and skinny at the bottom. like she's upside-down or it bounced up

>>2253037
why did you crop? is that the extent of your tunnel vision?

>>2251773
This looks great so far! I love your line weight. The only thing that bugs me is the arm that's closest to us is a bit thin for her thickness.

>>2253284
oh ok, are you talking about forearm or bicep?

>>2253242
You need to double check your proportions and perspective m8.

:B

>>2253334
looks nice nigga. Feels like a Ghibli animation.

Trying to paint some titties. This is a cropped image.

>>2253347
I think this is the best compliment I ever received! haha... Thanks! :D

yay i made a drawing!

>>2253409
lefty pls, those legs a ridiculous. i like your drawings, but you obv need a reference when drawing foreshortening, since you don't know it very well.

is this a correct way to use that golden ratio spiral thingy?

any crits/suggestions would be greatly appreciated

a quick thing for alessandra susu's birthday

>>2253618
hi godshot

>>2253620
(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و

>>2253409
i waited 7 years for this

Here's a recent-ish picture of one of characters. I really like how it turned out.

eye balling perspective

Tried doing something pixely

>>2253455
The Golden Section is bullshit. Just draw what looks good.

>>2253830
one leg is longer than the other
otherwise it's cute

>>2254213
>what looks good
Man, "what looks good" coincides with these compositional guidelines a lot of the time. Are you just telling him to not place too much stock in them, or something?

>>2249567

Looks terrible anon.

>>2251234

You got a nice Rin there

>>2254213
Seriously though is there anything that exists where the golden ration wouldn't line up with a picture? I just see that squiggle placed on random shit and somehow it always fits.

>>2254210
The entire point of pixel art is that pretty much every single pixel knows its place. It's meant to be tight and clean.

Work on a smaller canvas and try using thinner brushes.

I like your lighting though! Reminiscent of those old Lucasarts adventure games. Quality isn't so great in areas however - obvious scribbles and general uncleanliness prevail, especially in the armor.

>>2254210
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Tfh0ytz8S0k

>>2254219
Yeah. Rule of Thirds works very well, but don't try to adhere to one specific ratio line-by-line. His picture looks good as it is.

>>2254223
Exactly; it always fits, so even if you throw things down randomly it'll work to some extent. Most of the famous examples don't fit as perfectly as people want to believe they do.

>super thin lines

>>2254256
You almost turned me furry there. I'm digging that bottom left expression.

>>2253418
I know the legs are not great, how would you handle them?

>>2253735
silly anon. This OC ("Undead Imouto") didn't even exist back then. Her design is still a work in progress, in fact! How could have been waiting 7 years for this drawing?

>>2253975
daaaaamn

>>2254322
>silly anon. This OC ("Undead Imouto") didn't even exist back then. Her design is still a work in progress, in fact! How could have been waiting 7 years for this drawing?
im pretty sure he meant in terms of skill.

>>2254374
Still better than 90% of /ic/.

>>2253409
god, what the fuck

>>2251234
pretty sweet. maybe try a little thinner lines, might give you more range for detail/accuracy/visual interest

>>2252951
right one for sure. much better value distribution

>>2253975
thats hot mate

>>2248410
goddaaaaam. loving it.
where are you from? what tablet are you using?
sources of inspiration?

Been playing around with this style.
really unpretentious and relaxed workflow. no preplanning, no underdrawing. just going with the flow and erasing here and there, so structure is a bit wonky.
feedback please?

>>2254388
another one.

Bought this really thin pen and thought I'd try it out. Didn't even realize the leg guards and shit were facing too far forward until i got it into photoshop gdi.

>>2249661
holly shit that's great

>>2248412
>>2248696
>>2248727
>>2248754
>>2248765
>>2248874
>>2250648
>>2254388
samefag autismos bad figures and study likin' losers

feed me faggots

I'll probably add more plants to the background and call it a day.

>>2254431
really constructive brah. thanks for your input.

>>2254431
Somebody's jealous

>>2254389
literally zero skull construction

where is her brain

>>2250816

>>2254485
How long does it usually take you to color from >>2250816

>>2250912
Spanish keyboard has Intro key, according to wikipedia.

>>2254496
this one is still quite rough, so probably about a day at most. been down with a flu though, so i took a bit longer

>>2254401
pose very stiff. very detail

what can I do to improve this?
I already know that I have to redraw the hands and I'm not sure her shoulders are right like this

>>2254519
a little more distance between the eyes

>>2254317
neat. better than your usual human figures at least.

>>2254256
>more down syndrome furries

I'm not sure if it's the right place to ask this, but I (very late) heard that the NGNL illustrator/mangaka often lifted parts of or entire poses from doujin/pixiv works.

How does this compare to photobashing?

>>2254538
instead of just pointing it out, what could i do to imrpove it?

>>2254560
japanese trace hunters take this shit serious.
i think we had this thread in the beginning of the year.

Trying to get more expressive in the way I draw, along with making my lines cleaner.

I know that there are other artists who draw a rough sketch and then transfer that to another sheet of paper, but as of right now that's too wasteful for me.

>>2254601
At least they did damage control now.

>>2254601
He didn't trace, tard.

>>2254388

I like it, are you going to add color?

>>2252274

Listen to the other anons. Another issue they haven't pointed out is that your drawing lacks any hard edges. Its all so soft and looks blurry as a result. General rule of thumb is that edges get sharper at the point of interest, for your image that would probably be the eyes.

Guys, what's the best place online for learning manga? Is there a good online course?

>>2254218
Ah, I only just noticed that. But thank you!

Here's another, transparent and very slightly animated.
(If you couldn't guess, I really love cartoon style stuff)

>>2254688
whoa love that pic! could you post the rest pleasE?

>>2254699
it's by xaxaxa
http://xa-xa-xa.deviantart.com/art/croquis-2-78332818

>>2254564
it's a meme at this point but underlying construction of the face will prevent you from guessworking how far the eyes need to be apart in the future

>>2254688
>best place

Right here, in /ic/.

We have threads for complete beginners, to people working on studies, to stylization, etc.

We also give you free artbooks.

>>2254610
i like them all, but maybe the first one could be stretched more to exaggerate shock or pain or whatever emotion that is. The third one's face is my favorite though. very ugly-cute.

>>2248104
its been a while guys
how much has mikufag improved?

>>2254794
>how much has mikufag improved?
i wouldn't get my hopes up

>>2254742
so basicly you saying "draw the eyes closer together"

>>2254801
Nah he saying "draw eyes little bit far away from each other"

not going to ink ever again after this month

look i made another drawing~~

this is the best I can do today. damn how low I've fallen.

>>2249661
The way you draw noses reminds me of jet fighter porn

wtf

>>2254996
1. you emphasize the eyelids, but you aren't putting enough emphasis on the pupils themselves. there are many ways to do this, but yours look dead, flat and like symbols
2. how are the light spots on the pupils on opposite sides? it (normally) does not work that way. this much autism is not allowed.
3. ears should be lower. even more so in this angle. not necessarily as low as i did, but lower than what you did.

eyes are too apart for my taste but eh.
i won't even get into the body, but at least fix the faces. do some face studies. go to the beginner thread.

>>2255064
gj making it into shota

>>2255064
dude, your version doesn't look any better than the origional

>>2255064
I like the chubby face.

>>2255069
I'd say the eyes look better at least with the reflections

everything else is about the same

>>2255064
you're right about the pupils and ears.
why did you slim down her face though? : (

>>2255068
huh, that's probably because i changed the cheeks without changing much else. it does look a little bug eyed thanks to that.
but that's beside the point. i mainly wanted to say that he should take more care when drawing pupils.

>>2255088
see above. i just wanted a better curve for the cheek. i should've adjusted the other stuff with it i guess.
>:(
just go man.

>>2255103
why the red thing though?

>>2255064
> ears lower
I know its anime but ears dont work that way

>>2255111
apparently you don't because they do.
question: do you think the placement of the ears depends on the eyes or the cheekbones?
better go study some faces anon.

>>2255064
made it worse. the mouth is the biggest change and you made it flatter and more symbolic, lefty's cuter.

>>2255107
It's part of her design? Blood bag litterally.

>>2254794
i don't know you and don't want to know.
your poses look reference because unimaginative.

>>2255116
dude, look in the mirror, your ears are somewhere between your brow and the bottom of your nose

>>2255124
unfortunately that is still how it works.
like i said, it doesn't have to be as low as i did, but lower then what lefty did.

>>2255120
your logic confuses me, where's the correlation between reference, imaginative and poses

>>2255152
it goes like this: the poses are boring > referenced poses are usually boring (unimaginative) and low detail > thus, there's a 97% chance his poses are referenced
sometimes i forget to dumb-down my posts so that humans with lower IQ can understand

>>2255166
This is low lvl shitposting, trollchan

Thoughts or critique before I continue? It's really hard to tell where I should put the figures in the background relative to the HL or how large to make them when they're 'standing' on wavy water.

>>2255204
go for it! that butt is delicious

>>2255204
Left calf might be a bit too short.

omg i made another drawing

>>2255253
who is she? a cross between sailormoon, spirit schoolgirl and yakuza

>>2255257
that's not a bad observation

its a friend's OC, she has fire powers and has a bad temper.

>>2255204
outline too heavy on that bg yelling girl.

>>2254743
I need structure. Here it's everything too... disperse.

Do me

Any Sai users have a good guide/tips to inking/lineart?

>>2255376
when doing thin lines, turn your min size of the brush up more, but let opacity run the full gambit
pay attention to your line weight, where it gets thin and where it gets thick are very important and you are not paying attention to that

>>2255253
Lefty, I like your ideas but you really need to work on perspective and anatomy to really have them be dynamic, natural, and shine. You're learning to run before you can crawl.

>>2255253
would it kill you to not post like a fucking autist?
cancer.

Developing an antagonist to a comic in progress.

>>2255497
Reminds me little a bit of Li from Cardcaptor Sakura, proportionally and in the way of the outfit.

>>2255500
Funny you say that (nice dubs, on trips, on dubs)
I basically took the smuggest motherfuckers in anime and put it with the smuggest nigga in hollywood.

is this cute? mayor flaws in the pose/anatomy?? just realiced her torso is too long compared to legs and fixed that already

>>2255507
it's really cute, neck is a bit long but I can't personally find any other flaws.

>>2255529
will short the neck next

>>2255218
Cool thanks, I definitely thought so too after you pointed it out.
>>2255264
I'm aware, but this is just a sketch so it's all placeholders.

getting to cute+kek zone, crits welcome

New thread
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>>2250316
devon?

>>2253975
angle of the head looks weird

>>2255253


You need Hampton

>Get the pose with gesture
>Block in and check the form/perspective with 3d shapes
>Refine the forms with knowledge of anatomy

>>2249629
You need to draw the core values of what makes a human body a human body, and what gives us our shapes. The head torso and the hips are the three main components in drawing a correct looking human body. Look up sycra on youtube it helps out alot. Sorry for the shit pics, i do these small sketches while i have nothing to do, so theyre not meant to show perfection, just to show how the insides work

>>2251290 ^^^ read it.

>>2254482
>what thread am i in

>>2256557
This is not gesture

This actually lacks gesture because they all look stiff

>>2254210
Cozy as fuck but perspective is wonky

The guy and the fireplace is not on the same plane.

It's hard the read the surroundings due to perspective failure

I assume the top right part is supposed to be a lake (at least a body of water) with moonlight reflection, but it's hard to read its actual position and distance

seriously, try to draw a horizon line and rough perspective lines for the objects.