/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

photo study

>>2242869

still stuck with this
have no idea if im doing this right

>>2242849
Quick face from imagination.

>>2242869
>>2242870

you made her look like a dude

>>2242884
very nice

>>2242889
I know I fucked up the proportions. his torso is squashed. but that's why I am attending life drawing classes again.

>>2242885
Dude you're getting worse.

>>2242891
i don't think i ever got better

>>2242890
Those are some huge manboobs.

>>2242895
I am sorry that an anon has to break this to you, but the human race consists of two sexes, males and females. that is a female. check wikipedia for more info.
you should immediately reconsider your priorities. that thing between your legs - you can also stick that into a femme.

>>2242869
ur 2d shape copying skill is not bad, but you're not thinking anything about forms
your colors are kinda naive, even if you pick green on greens, it's not close to your reference
resume:
>not too derp outline copying
>you did not attemt to understand forms
>you're not considering saturation and values too much
>you've drawn a lot of details without nailing bigger volumes

>>2242909
this a study or a trace?
>>2242885
beginner thread please

May I make a request?
I would love to have a Duck playing the banjo please

>>2242918
>filename

8ch pls

>>2242923
Wh..What?
This was a request i got a while back

>>>/b/
they have drawthreads for cancer like this

>>2242930
ment for : >>2242926 >>2242918

>>2242932
I know bud!

>>2242918
>>2242926

>>2242934
then get the fuck out of here and stop shitting up this place

>>2242937
Oh my god I love you.

>>2242938

>>2242940
Good, because I hate you.

>>2242944

>>2242917
At least lurk in one draw thread before you post

>>2242944
you're not me, but this is true. I hate everyone though.

I use paint because I'm too lazy to use anything else should I even
??

hand study

is it gay that 98% of my drawings of people/humanoids are male

>>2242956
work on your lines, more confident lines will make your art better.

>>2242958
cool, but that blue looks weird man.

>>2242956
I mean if you want your art to not be as shit as it is now, it would be a good idea.

>>2242958
The fingers are confusing my brain

>>2242961
>cool
thats the point of the blue :^)

>>2242974
I like to think there's just one guy shitposting his ms-paint drawings with no text in all of these threads, here's a reply, maybe you will stop now. Be free, shitty drawing ghost poster.

>>2242968
oh stop it.

>>2242917
It's considered pompous to critique anything with little or no experience.

>>2242974
it's cool, it's all flow-y but made with pixels

>>2242981
free for what?

Im going to go on a tear of super kitschy, uninspired, psuedo-meaningful illustrations and sell them to "spirital" fuck wads.

>Anatomy not 100%?
Who cares?!
>Lighting doesn't make sense?
They wont even notice!
>Technically has no meaning?
Yeah right, bro you just don't get it. Its all about vibes.

I'm going to photobash, special effect brush, and PS filter my way to success.

How fool-proof is this plan? Give me more tips on selling out. Here's my first

>>2242992
free from the curse of needing to post here

>>2242998
yes, i need to post less, i think sometimes, even if i don't know, is for the attention

>>2243000
you probably need a friend, or art buddy.

>>2243007
what is an art buddy?

>>2243014
someone you shoot the shit with while drawing and shit, you know you draw things for each other or together, etc.

>>2243016
the problem with this is that friends tend to be nice when it comes do giving a critique, here people have no problems with saying its shit

>>2243020
Art buddies aren't art pussies, they're art friends. A real friend will tell you brutal shit, because they actually give a fuck about you.

>>2242962
Head and face is arguably the worst part of the drawing. What I'd do is go study the planes of the head, then do some portrait painting from life. If you can't get a friend or family member to sit still while reading or watching tv, use your own head and a mirror.

After that, go find artists who draw stylized faces that you like. Do tons of studies of their work - paying attention to what they emphasize, what they omit, and try to figure out why. Someone like Adam Hughes might work, but you should pick someone who you admire - ideally multiple different artists. If done correctly, you should absorb some of their shape language that you can then apply to your own work.

>>2242996
not bad, but you should just put all your time into rendering the fuck out of everything, normies are easily distracted by shiny sparkly things.

>>2243022
so, i think /ic/ is my only art friend. i'll try to find one, but i'm not very good at this things, untill then i'll post here with a certain regularity, but i'll post less.

>>2242958
the upper hand is ok, but I can't tell wtf is going on with the lower one, it looks like some of the fingers are below and above others.

Also, that pinky looks really tiny, and it looks a bit like she has only four fingers

also seconding what the other anon said, tone down the blues a bit

also her arm, but I assume you just weren't done with that part.

>>2243023
Yep, I see that now, gonna study those guys' approaches andd styles

>>2243024
oh yeah, thats on the agenda. pic was a WIP, i forgot to mention

Small drawing that teacher wants me to blow up. Any mistakes or improvements before I do so?

>>2243046
Idk how to rotate on phone, sorry.

>>2243046
Ref the tiger.

hands

>>2243059
I see that you have the same fucked up middle finger as me

>>2243046
both are flat, it's stupid, you can't mix different references that would not work as photobash without making any changes on your drawing
>no forms
>no volumes, tiger can't be over her leg, behind her leg and over her face, that makes absolute no sense, making it more flat than it already is due to your lack of fundamental understanding (you're only copying 2d shapes)

I could have spent more time on this detailing and what not but I get bored after I complete the fun stage, which is the laying in and constructing

small still life

>>2243059
middle row, far right with your thumb between your middle and ring fingers--dat's your best hand yet, do more of that style and quality

>>2243115
I didn't mix, the girl wasn't off of a reference but I get that the perspective is fucked up, thanks

WIP i just finished today, Work for a Friend for their birthday, likes Dragons.

a landscape from ref

Hey guys, was bored at school and did this.
What do you think :V

>>2243280
Seriously, where are people like this coming from?
I can't tell what are trollposts or not anymore

>>2243281
What do you mean?

>>2243282
People who obviously don't give a shit about improving their art.

>>2243282

/ic/ is mean. Go to the sanctuary of the beginner thread.

>>2243285
Some people are new.

>>2243287
>/ic/ is mean. Go to the sanctuary of the beginner thread.
Where is the beginner thread..?
>>2243285
That's mean.

>>2243290
>that's mean
Exactly my point. Instead of saying, "what could make it look as if I was trying" you got defensive.
>>>/i/

>>2243293
So, what could make it look as if I was "trying"?

>>2243294
Use a reference.

>>2243294

Don't used lined paper.
Take a better lit photo next time.
Don't caption it with anything along the lines of

>I was bored

>>2243282
The problem isn't that you are posting novice level work with thoughtless commentary, it's that you are doing so in a thread where it doesn't belong on a board where you didn't read the sticky for.

The only credit I can give you is that you weren't clueless enough to make an entire new thread for that doodle.

oh man I don't like my faces, but they always end up looking like this. insecurity keeps me from getting better.

working on studies right now for a joke painting involving Ruben's Fall of Man.

>>2242849
part one of a triptych

>>2243227
I think the bases of the lamps should be parallel with the viewer's eye, it really screws the perspective

>>2243046
this is a fucking awesome concept, but it is flat and the 2 differing refs screw it. I would just eyeball it

>>2243375
Anon, this is astounding.

>>2243267
There are forms but they are hard to see because of all your fucking smearing

>>2242909
dem hips

>>2243375
I hate your hands and life drawings usually but this study is nice

>>2243537
fuck off loser
>>2243396
thanks

>>2242909
Really dig the way you painted the legs and the colors+contrasts in general, but the knees are a bit wonky.

i think i got this
>>2242889
thanks

Hey guys, working on this, I would really appreciate ideas for a background or anything else you guys could suggest.

>>2242996
more wip of my sellout art

>>2243606
I would hold her silhouette as more of a priority. The blood swooshes don't really compliment her form, I would marry them up better. Even if it doesnt make 100% sense, have the blood flow in a way that contours and builds upon her (if that makes sense)

>>2243609

It seems a bit overblended in parts with visible brushstrokes.

For that sellout look I'd recommend you try keep it clean. Lasso tool/Clipping Masks and cleaner gradients would help, especially for the hands and lighting of the head.

>>2242849
Too boring? Worth continuing?

>>2243613
>>2243606
maybe something more like this

Currently working on this for an album cover.

>>2243635
that perspective would never happen for buildings that far in the distance. If you still want to make them as such, please set up guide lines and a vanishing point. Every vertical on every building should point to the same point. They still will look super weird. Maybe a fisheye (concave) horizon line will muddy the waters.

You definitely should LOOMIS, but the artist of this album probably wont care.

>>2243635
a couple more graphic design notes, as it stands its way too dark. It's probably about 20% darker than you see it on your screen. When it goes to print, the whole thing will be black except for a few places.

Keep in mind where the artist name and album name will go, design with that in mind the whole time and design toward that

>>2243636
>>2243651
It's actually my album. I'm a musician before someone excellent with a pen so this is all good for me to note.

It's unfortunate, I really want to use that city line, everything slanting in, but I do want it to be more realistic in that regard. I'll make sure the guide lines all point to the center of the halo and adjust building accordingly.

Artist/Album name is currently slated to go directly under the horizon line.

I know I've heard the term before, but my searching "Loomis" refers to the artist rather than a technique/check system as the use of all caps in an acronym suggests. Are you suggesting I read Loomis books? I don't mind the actual style I'm using; it's hard to be realistic when drawing a lady with caracal features.

Thanks for your comments, I'll definitely rethink elements for this.

online course first week, gotta do char study x1 page, then 5 pages of variations of the character proportions (this part will be fun)
atm so autistically understanding yoshi kek
I have to do the same with architecture and vehicles for next week!, and also keep doing inktober, kill myself

>>2242849
Did this lil Head rotation animation for a project I'm working on.

>>2243700
are you alright with constructive criticism? I don't want to sound mean

>>2243700
it fucking sucks

>>2243701
<:o)

>>2243704
Haha! You stole my meme. I'll steal it back later :))

>>2243704
o no. Any feedback besides? Just needing more inbetweens and better structure to the face?

>>2243706
I don't know. I'm just memeing tbh

>>2243706
It does need way more inbetweens and a better face form

There's my piece i just did btw

>>2243712
ah I do love a good bit of memeing d:^)

>>2243700
>>2243706
His profile is that of a shark's

>>2243720
Cool man I guess it was just a test anyway. I'll shove in some more frames on the next one. Cheers

>>2243724
I quite like that though. Very roman ya dig

>>2243728
I mean I guess so

gotta rest

>>2243676
sorry i wasnt more clear, here's a link with all of Andrew Loomis' pdfs

http://www.alexhays.com/loomis/

study "Figure drawing for all its worth" and "drawing the head and hands". Very valuable stuff.

I really wouldn't advise pointing all of the buildings at the halo unless she was inside the city and the buildings are towering over her, it will look really weird. Do alot of research on skylines - even fisheye lenses cant produce what youre looking for

drawing from head is fucking hard

>>2243744
about 5-10 hours of studying Drawing the Head and Hands and you'll be 200% better.

>>2243200
beginner thread from now on and ill consider helping you

>>2243751
thank you

>>2242849
This animation looking correct?

>>2243740
Shall do.

I wanted a sort of mystical feel about it, that something's definitely -off.- She's surrounded by the city and yet outside of it. and I did look at a lot of refs, but kinda went freehand and played with an idea. I see what you mean about the fisheye though, so I'll redo that and see how I like it. Thanks again for constructive crit.

>>2243877

Remember guys, we have an animation general.

>>2236037

>>2243877
I'd be much less jarred if the last frame didn't show twice as long as every other frame. I keep looking to the feet because it kinda seems like they're getting larger in poses facing the front, as if he were on a platform moving a few inches to and from the camera as it rotated him around.

Generally though, it looks good to me.

>>2243694

>>2243738
+16 variations to go :/

>>2243966
what online course is this again?

>>2243960
I see he only played mostly with simple shapes overlayed, that's pretty impresive

>>2243936
>I would make the Right (our left) hand longer and a little bigger. It would be suiting to have it long and narrow like his limbs.
>Do plenty of research on cloaks and hanging fabric, his skirt wouldnt hand in perfect pleats like you have it.
>Belly button isnt quite centered on the torso
>you would probably see some of his left shoulder poking out in that stance
>his left forearm gets too fat, too fast - judging from his other.

>>2243970
brainstorm school with James Paick & John J. Park, it's not cheap but this way I can get:
>userful assignments (a lot of work per week)
> good design education (you actually need luck to find this)
>building design portfolio rather than waifus
can't suggest the course yet, started yesterday

>>2243947
sorry man I'll shift over there.
>>2243950
Yeh cool man Ive tried to fix it

How do you guys like my painting of Luigi? Critique is always welcomed.

my least favorite model was there today. and she's gonna be doing this pose for the next two weeks. might not go to wednesdays until the model changes

>>2243995
or maybe you could go there and just draw her head the correct size

>>2243995
>blaming the model

>>2243995
Same proportions issue.

>>2243877
here's the line version

>>2243990
left side of the forehead goes out at too extreme an angle, some shading on the nose doesn't make sense, fix the neck vagina. A sprinkling of edge cleanup wouldn't hurt. I've never seen anyone's eyebrows behave as such

I like it [thumbs up emoji]

>>2243998
>having preferences
she sucks. today she ate some cookies someone brought and said "Muy delicioso, as they say in Spanish" like she just saw an episode of Dora the Explorer. She also dances between poses and is really proud that she watches old movies. Fucking ugh. At least she didn't bring her feather boa.

>>2243995
that head is huge! and the nose is flat.

>>2243995
nobody on ic can see your underdrawing

chances you go so early to concrete outlines and details are great, don't skip that class, keep going but don't do it as you're doing it, because it's all wrong, you need to follow forms, your next day you should completly ignore her face, don't do anything on it, just focus on everything else

>>2243046
>excellence
The only thing is if that's a tiger, it tiny. Scale doesn't matter so much when its imaginative realism, but yeah, ref it

>>2244006
my favorite artwork is the statue of david. that's what I base my style on.
>>2244007
im not gonna completely ignore the face. That would be a waste of time.

>>2244023
then keep being an idiot who cares to do detail before form

>>2243995
>>2244023
>>2243997
>>2243998
>>2243999
>>2244006
>>2244007

THIS IS WHAT OP SEES, TRY TO IMAGINE A WORLD THROUGH HIS EYES. ONLY THEN WILL YOU UNDERSTAND

>>2243995
>>2244023
>>2243997
>>2243998
>>2243999
>>2244006
>>2244007

THIS IS WHAT OP SEES, TRY TO IMAGINE A WORLD THROUGH HIS EYES. ONLY THEN WILL YOU UNDERSTAND

>>2243966

>>2244033
10/10 would kill to see that post fresh again

>>2243973
Thanks fam

putin tbh

>>2244033
lmfao holy shhit

>>2244052
yoou should make a book of all these tbh

>>2244033
op here, that looks pretty good lol. If I could draw like that I'd be happy. you guys are too critical. ill be fine.

>>2244033
do one for this drawing. im so terrible lol. look at how big that head is! i sure don't know what im doing. if only i could copy photos in photoshop like the rest of you but i just don't have the chops. i need the chops. where can i buy all of your chops!

>>2244057
>implying

>>2244063
damn all of this salt

>>2244065
dude thats terrible

>>2244063
I figure study too but not in any of my sessions have I met a person who is as big of a baby as you lol

At least you made it clear you feel superior because youre not using photo references. Smoke some weed and take a good look at your life, smallheart.

>>2244063
great lines, very neat. how many family members liked this on facebook? you signed it too, cool, how much did it sell for?

>>2244083
3. how's the gay furry incest porn commissions coming along?

It's a bit different to draw when drunk.
Pls tell me what u think (very basic).

>>2244083
my bad, your probably one of these concept artists ive heard so much about

>>2244044

>tbh

could u fucking not

>>2244063
You practiced drawing hands and then thought you can now tackle the whole figure

I know you

You think its ok to skip constructing and taking your time eyeballing. Probably means you think its ok to skip critique or any other uncomfortable thoughts

This leaves us without much substance to appreciate. I suggest you apologize to us

>>2244097
smh

>>2244090
Nope I just don't delude myself into thinking observational drawing is the epitome of skill

>>2244086
Yo I wanna do those, that'd be qt

>>2244063

You should really lay down a bit and come back to earth with us lol. While your stuff is cool, you still got a shit tons to learn and it's not by doing some good lines and nice looking shadings that you'll hide your flaws forever.

I'm wondering where did you get that habit of drawing big heads.

>>2244063
>being so cocky that you think calling yourself terrible is sarcasm
Wow I hope Im never in that deep.

>>2244063
dude you're a pretentious little bitch get the fuck off the internet you whiny crybaby holy shit someone in another thread said you had a god complex but i hope that our lord isn't this much of an insecure, over compensating cunt. get good faggot

>>2244063
You are probably the best artist you know. You will be fine. In a few years, you'll be the best doodler in your office.

"Hey Guys, check out this drawing Brian did of the boss in drag! it looks real and everything!"

>>2244063

>>2244120
>You are probably the best artist you know.
well when someone posts something here to change my mind I'll try to be more humble. you can't do anything about me for the time being.

>>2244063
You will forever be known as the bitchboi to me no matter how good you become.

>>2244063
You're just asking for hate every time you post.

>>2244131
stop making excuses for being obnoxious

/ic/ sure loves its drama. Now I remember why I left.

>>2244139
People come here for something other than the drama??

>>2244131
Don't worry about it, just work hard and be humble, don't take critique to heart, but do learn to sift through good and bad critiques.

Keep at it.

>>2244139
Why did you come back?

>>2244139
if you don't tolerate argument's against your work, you're gonna stay shiftlessness
you've not been bullied, you're just an attention whore after you recieved good feedback
go take some air

>>2244063
>>2243995
Well. We just got trolled by Brian Bitchboi. I guess /ic/ is still really easy to troll. Pics posted were most likely by someone he knows on facebook. Hes still salty that the artist is getting attention for horrible works, though

That's my theory, no artist lacks that much self-awareness and self-doubt.

>>2244139
Quick to crucify cocky artists. Toting an ego on this board is a cardinal sin so everyone simply talks shit in the manner of polite women.

I'm not gonna leave but I am hiding theae threads from now on. Sucks cuz its a draw thread but then again that idiot baiter is the one who starts these so nothing of value is lost. Fuck all of you who gave him (You)s as well.

>>2244154
hope so

>>2244151
Im not that anon.

>>2244146
I don't know... bye. This place is cancer.

>>2244135
yeah but every once in a while someone enjoys something i do like
>>2243375
you guys have very specific tastes that i don't always cater to. but I'm aware of what you guys like of what I've done and what you don't like, and I'm currently working on some things I think you guys will really enjoy. even if they don't sell. The figure drawings are whatever. It's just practice. A guy sitting in a chair doesn't captivate audiences as much as it used to.

It also usually depends on the model. If it's some ugly fuck I'm not gonna take my time with it cause they are ugly with or without me. I'm shallow. If it's not a 20 something white girl with big tits why bother. That's what sells. Not some old hag with saggy tits and a fucked up nose. I'm more likely to give someone feet for hands cause it's not selling either way.

>>2243995
>>2244063
You're probably going to be great some day, but holy shit you need to work on your attitude. I completely hate you and your views. I'd actually kick your ass if i got the chance.

>>2244161
How about understanding anatomy and form and applying it to creative work...........

>>2244067
>>2244072
>>2244083
>>2244119
>>2244170
>>2244154
>>2244120
Post your work

>>2244196
I dont have enough mercwip tho

>>2244161
shutt thhe fuuucckk up and stop crying dude you're proportions are WRONG, deal with it asshole. jesus christ.

>>2244196
this is my work. notice how someone gave advice and i didn't shit my pants like a child?
>>2243990

i am a shit beginning hobby artist and i'm not sure if this thread should embarrassed or amused

cheers brian, this one is for you

update, tightening up the graphics and shit

I need to come back to the face, i think I might restart the face altogether after i looked at it I think I found a better way than how I did it just now

>>2244260
shes hot, post pics.

>>2244272
She is a babe

>>2244274
those legs

>>2244292
I bet she's got them lil monkey toes that could peel a banana

>>2244274
Gross.

shitskin/10 would not fuck.

I think I like it

>>2244328
Nice colours, sloppy edges and shapes. I'm assuming you had ref for it? Post it if you did. Otherwise find some ref and observe the edgework and shapes in it and fix up your painting.

>>2244196

>>2244303
>uld not fuck
fag., she looks white to me not that it matters. good work on the painting Op.

>>2244333
Yeah I need to work on my edges, any advice for that? Should I be trying to simplify shapes down to manageable blocks?

The ref was a still from a documentary... It looks so much darker now that I have it on the same monitor, I need to fix that.

>>2244339
I actually prefer the mood and colours in your painting haha! But yeah if it was an accident then that's a sign you are not observing very carefully. I think the foreground in yours could be a bit darker.

As for your ref, notice how soft the steam off the water is. You painted it with a hard brush and have lots of little brushstrokes and marks in there and it ruins the effect. Try to mimic how soft it looks compared to the rest of the image. Same with the bits of snow in the foreground, some places the edges are hard and some are soft. You painted it uniformly, but you should try to add in that variation you see in the ref.

>>2244196
if your gonna respond to other posters in my place at least say something more innocuous than "Post your work". they already don't like me.
>>2244207
calm your tits
>>2244208
calm your breasts

Portrait. Thoughts?

>>2244328
From the ref it looks like you didn't sketch it out or practice drawing the scene first. All the inaccuracies you have could be avoided simply by drawing the scene out first.

>>2244391
I don't believe you have to draw every pebble and tree in the right location when doing landscapes. They're open to more interpretation. Getting the general idea and atmosphere down is more important to me.

>>2244088
i'm no pro, but the perspective seems off on the giant. the angle at which you see his head seems disproportionally close to how far the point of view is.

Just started this, but I just wanted to know what you guys thought. I'm working on a Note 4, and I'm really impressed with the S pen

>>2244445
Forgot to post picture kek

>>2244445
>>2244447
Use some reference, the proportions and forms are all pretty off. Also not sure what you are going for exactly...comic style? realism? It's got some qualities of both but is successful at neither. Try to figure out what you are going for then work accordingly. You can also try using a bigger brush in places as right now it's all done with tiny scratchy strokes and looks kinda bad.

Finally got a hold of "Color and Light- A Guide For the Realist Painter", and decided to take a crack at a simple sphere like the book showed. Fucking muddy AGAIN, christ. This is killing me. I understand the reflected colors, and where the values are supposed to be, but every time I try to smooth a transition of the value in a spot here or there, it turns into this.

I'm using Paint Tool SAI, brush tool, 100 density, 75 blending, 30 dilution, 75 persistence

>>2244449
Yes the outline and the scratchy shading are going to be worked out next. As for the style, it is basically my own style that has formed as a result of drawing for 20 years with no formal instruction or good criticism. It's sort of a combination of both, but it's not intentional

>>2244460
I'm not sure what specifically is in that passage of the book, but I can address a bit about your painting.

First--I don't use Sai. Presumably there is some sort of airbrush like a soft brush in Photoshop, which is what I would use. But for the paintover I used only a hard round because it is closer to what you used, and I wanted to show that it was more of a value issue than an edge issue.

So, when painting overcast lighting, you essentially have very little to do. The object will be pretty flat looking and most of its appearance will be determined by the local value. Planes facing upwards will be ever so slightly lighter and cooler, and downward ones are warmer and darker. But all of that is very very subtle. You will not get a strong cast shadow like you have, and depending on how diffuse the lighting, you may have no shadow at all except a tiny sliver of darkness right where it meets the ground (occlusion shadow).

The problem with how you painted it is that you are using too extreme values for an overcast scenario. You have almost pure white and almost pure black on the same object, which gives it a metallic look and makes the local value/colour ambiguous.

Yes, it looks flatter in the paintover. But that's what the lighting situation does to the appearance of objects. When you have equal lighting from all directions then there are no strong shadows that show volume and form. Obviously a direct light scenario (like sunlight) will look very different and need a different treatment. And also a glossy ball or chrome ball would look different too but that's more advanced stuff and for now you should focus on matte surfaces.

how is this looking so far?

>>2244498
Pretty flat

>>2244514
is fixable with playing with saturation and values?

I want to reduce the number of guidelines, because these are taking too long to make, but on the other hand, I'm quite sure I screw up if I reduce them.

>>2244523
the values yes, its already pretty saturated. i would suggest adding different colors into the shadows like blue or the midtones grayed down complimentary color although i dont think many people here would agree to this.

>>2244523

Always. And also get some ref for water, rocks, cliffs. Right now you're just going:

>water is blue
>rocks are brown
>foam is white

Everything interacts with each other and affects color and these things, remember that. Also your light source kinda is all over the place.
Perspective could use some work too.
Just my two cents.

>>2244608
I agree.

Study

>>2244623

Didn't you do that nice hand/lower arm study?

>>2244624
Yep

>>2244634

I think it says a lot about you as an artist when you're already recognizable by the way how you use colors and approach your studies.
Keep it up m8

I had to redline my own shit cause I fucked up so bad on the head. How does this skeleton look? I just kept the body the same.

>>2244258
dem knees are gud, its hard to make knees look gud
Pretty nice keep it up
Feet look a little too big, Also green on the legs is too apparent

derp

>>2243972
you should see what he did with saints row and genki..i would burn my eyes if i tried to do this if i would be able

Any feedback appreciated.

>>2244893
Full size version.

>>2244893
Gorillas are too copy pasta. Composition is a bit boring. Tree poorly designed. Photos not well integrated for this stage.

>>2243960
Man i would love to play a game where i can cruise around town with my waifu painted on a car.
i'm going to check out this midnight club l.a.

>>2244899
Knew most of that already, but thanks anyway.

>>2244935
I'm also not really sure what you are trying to get across. Who is this man? What is his reaction to the giants? Why are there giants? What mood do you want? What is this scene really about? Why is he wearing a ski mask?

>>2244896
Are you the retard that spent six months trying to fix the dog turd of a painting with stone stairs and shit in the foreground and a gigantic white sphere in the background?

Because the narrative in both of these are beyond shit. Why the fuck is there a single fucking tree in that glade? Why the fuck is a conventional western stone wall used to separate properties and or fields in the middle of a gigantic EMPTY fucking field?
Why is he standing as if he is being insulted and why does he have a dog there? And why the flying fuck are regular gigantic fucking gorillas walking around in a climate they have NO connection to what so ever.
Why is he wearing a finnish hood hat?

Fuck man, Your picture is so full of logical holes it makes no fucking sense.

>>2244936
Everything derailed after I wasn't pleased with how it looked after following the thumbnail. There really is no story behind it.

>>2244942
That said, thumbnail isn't that interesting either.

>>2244896
The different elements in the pic don't flow together very well, looks very collage-like. There's a lot of different large areas of color without much blending to make it flow so it reads very awkwardly.

It's a nice concept.

>>2244942
Your background isn't in perspective with the foreground characters.

>>2244945
Stop encouraging poor workmanship, Morty.

>>2244949
True, thanks for pointing that out.

>>2244960
You are welcome, Morty.
You can do better, I believe in you, Morty.

>>2244958
I wasn't trying to! I was saying I like the idea, (giant animal things in the foggy distance with some person sizing them up), but not the execution thus far. Your critique was a bit more accurate and specific.

>>2244939
That wasn't me, no. But thanks for the feedback.

>>2244939
>>2244949
>>2244958
>>2244966

You are the definition of cancer.

>>2244967
I like you.
>>2244970
You can do it!

>>2244939
>>2244949
>>2244958
>>2244966
Jesus fucking Christ

>>2244973
>>2244975
I know!

>>2244976
Why don't you put on a chocker and smoke a cigarette with the other tumblr girls that totally are not like all the other girls.

>>2244893
I actually liked it better when it was still the gray buildings and huge gate/door. That made some sense.

Are Rick and Morty fans the new bronies

>>2244978
Because this is more fun.

>>2244983
Not a Rick and Morty fan, but no
All shows have their cancer fans
but pretty much nothing compares to bronies or sonictards or little kids shows/games with creepy adult fans in general

>>2244980
Yes, but I felt like it was cramped and boring. I just wanted to be able to call it finished.

>>2244989
Yeah, I understand. But the current version seems far from finished too, even more so than the previous.

>>2244988
Rick and Morty isn't made with a young audience in mind, Same as Bojack Horseman.
Sonic, Adventure time, MLP, These are aimed at young viewers.

>>2245000
That's what I was saying? That it's not for kids so it's inherently less unsettling when people sperg over it

>>2245003
I'm agreeing with you.
Sorry if I didn't make that clear enough.

>>2245010
Ahh. S'all good m8

>>2244000
You fucked it up.

>>2243024
> normies

Bye.

>>2242849
1/3

>>2245172
2/3

>>2245173
3/3 under heavy progress

>>2245172
>>2245173
>>2245176

I DON'T GIVE A FUCK IF YOUR RITUAL IS GOING ON BENEATH A COUNTER. JUST RESIZE YOUR FUCKING IMAGES. JESUS.

Oh, sorry. Stupid caps.

noses how do you work

>>2245180
i can has feedback

>>2242996
Do you have a dA/tumblr/any way I can contact you?

>>2245181
you must be kidding me, completly erase those nose holes and draw them again, use a reference if you don't understand noses

>>2245181

The problem is definitely the nostrils, specifically that bit of skin (cartilage?) that goes around them. They protrude out a little.

Im done for today, I could really use some help on it when I get back to it tomorrow.

>>2245181
watch cubebrush's video on painting noses, it's probably what you are looking for in this style

>>2244139
Yeah, this place gets worse and worse all the time.

>>2244139
>>2245233
>/ic/ sure loves its drama

And you're both being overly dramatic, so you fit right in.

>>2245277
the fuck is this shit

>>2245277
Please man, make a compilation of your work to download. They all make some sort of story somehow

>>2245295
there's no way this isn't a samefag.

>>2245298
I'm not >>2245282
I just got into the thread. This dude posts frequently in every draw thread; his work is interesting.

H-hi guys...

>>2245306
Read the sticky. Post in beginner threads.

>>2245306

its you again

that guy raikeon hi stop doing portraits like i said you fucking dweeb

>>2245255
>you're both being overly dramatic
Wow, I made one post this entire thread and it was humorous, I mean it's fuckin Lando and Boba Fett, come on.

>>2245306
Pandering to tumblr now instead of Deviantart by adding a tumblr nose?

Just read the fucking sticky

>>2245326
>and it was humorous
It's getting harder to tell what is and isn't tongue-in-cheek all the time.

>>2245332
I guess but that's why I put in a funny picture.

Early WiP. Any tips for clothing/drapery?

>>2245277
do u have a tumblr or deviantart or some sort of gallery anywhere ?? i honestly love ur work

>>2245295
>>2245301
>>2245339

S A M E F A G
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good night thread

Man drawthreads looked to be doing well recently, this one started going off the rails a bit.

>>2245371
Agreed, the past couple of ones actually had some good stuff in them

>>2245306
youve posted this like 5 times already fuck off

Mods please ban him for a day or 2

>>2245339
i have a blog: nonerandomdraw dot blogspot dot com

Okay so I changed the expression, and repositioned the face a little. Obviously not done, just wondering if I'm going in the right direction. Be gentle

>>2245442
the mouth seems to be a little bit flat and wonky, try doing more studies from real faces or doing more anatomy/light studies

>>2245442
It's shit, even if it was just a plane study it would be shit, you cannot place facial features precisely or even closely make them the right size, you have no idea How light works in general. Study more and stop uploading it in the draw thread, this is for actual drawings that have nice qualities to them or at least ones that you're proud of

learning how to ink.