/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Posted this in the last thread but I've worked on it a bit more.

I don't own a tablet so I have to do all of my painting in PS with a mouse so please excuse the lines being a bit wobbly, I'm still cleaning them up.

This is a present for my degenerate boyfriend who really digs his domineering futa succubi. I've never drawn anything pornographic in my life which has also lead to the realisation that I actually don't really know how to draw cock and balls so tips/advice/corrections/red lines would be super appreciated.
Also my lighting is like.... help.

btw I'll be blending all of the shading together once I've finished applying it.

Also she is going to be sitting on a guys face.

I-I hope he likes it.

Drawing lineart on bamboo is pain in the ass.

>>2207455
I don't think we need your life story about this piece, kek. Anyway, the ripped leggings look tacky as hell they way they look now. Are they even drawn on? Looks like you just used a texture.

>>2207458

I used a fishnet stockings brush.

I know he likes stockings, a lot, so they stay.

>>2207455
Your boyfriend is a faggot, peg him already you know he wants it.

Was going to post on the beginner's thread but they are doing animals so I'm going to try my luck here.

How does this look?

>>2207455
isnt futa suposed to have both sexual organs?

>>2207455
Work on your anatomy.

>>2207463

>implying we don't already do that
>implying a cheeky prostate tickle is strictly homosexual
>implying you've never rummaged around in your chocolate cavity in search of untold ecstasies

>>2207465

It does but tbh the little guy's face she is going to be sitting on will obscure any detail of that entirely.

>>2207470

This is possibly the least helpful comment I've ever received.

>>2207464
>>2207470

>>2207476
Outside of the million retarded flaws in your image you didn't think "hey, this character is squatting down, maybe i should draw his anus"?

>>2207483

Crazy idea, real wild, but try reading my original comment first, unless you want me to draw a mystical floating anus above a man's face.

>>2207483
>>2207470
Comments like this are the reason I don't post my art on /ic/. People are so busy tearing into you they don't actually bother trying to help you.
I don't really know what this board is for unless you plan on having your self esteem torn apart without actually leaving with anything worthwhile i.e. a redline.

>>2207489
I read your blog post and I don't see how that changes anything I said.

>>2207494
Maybe try out Permanoobs and go kiss the asses of the "elite", then.

>>2207558

Then you have two problems here either being that you have exceedingly poor eyesight, or that you're retarded. Clinically.

Explain to me, in the easiest way possible considering your limited understanding, how somebody's anus is going to be visible from that perspective when they have their ass placed upon somebody's face.

>>2207560

Ignore this faggot obviously he doesn't understand perspective or seems to believe that the butthole is situated on or directly below the testes in which case he shouldn't be trying to give advice on /ic/ full stop.

>>2207558

>I read your blog post and I don't see how that changes anything I said

>also she is going to be sitting on a guys face

Obviously not.

>>2207455
>drawing porn FOR your bf
>not with him

>>2207583

If I drew porn for him whilst making porn with him my lines would be even worse :(

>>2207583
Shut up Keppok you normie. Keep up the good work though, there really isn't enough Wayforward girls porn out there.

>>2207583
Any advice on >>2207457
Kepp-chan?

>>2207583

Also please advise me :>

>>2207588
Thank u, I try.
>>2207591
I am not good with mechanical stuff.
Try to avoid tapering the edges with your lineart if it isn't necessary. When two lines converge they should be blunt, instead of feathering (unless you're drawing hair/fur) or trying to show the line fading (becoming more obscure)

>>2207592
where's your art, son

>>2207464
If you're going for that unrealistic sort of lewd stuff I'd say it's fine but if not just work on your anatomy

>>2207583
No one gives a shit Kep. Just keep grinding so one day you won't just be a Brek rip off.

>>2207601
Thanks!

>>2207494
>Comments like this are the reason I don't post my art on /ic/

Then dont post fuck face

>People are so busy tearing into you they don't actually bother trying to help you

People shitpost here, nothing new. If its a simple, "work on your anatomy" you should probably work on your anatomy. Look at squatting poses, analyze if the back arcs, and pay close attention to the legs.

>I don't really know what this board is for unless you plan on having your self esteem torn apart

Welcome to the fucking internet.

>without actually leaving with anything worthwhile

The fucking sticky is a starting point, question threads are for questions, and book threads are for books. You can leave with some, "worthwhile" information, you just have your head up your ass.

>redline

What the fuck is wrong with you.

If you're from tumblr, shut up and lurk.

>>2207604
u tryna hurt my feelings? Bitch I'd cut off my tit to be a perfect brek ripoff.

>>2207603
I meant to exaggerate the proportions, is that what you meant by unrealistic?

>>2207625
>Welcome to the fucking internet
I hate that mentality with a passion. Things don't change if nobody thinks they will. If the status quo is shit, why wouldn't you want to change it for the better?

>Have an oldie with a shitty background

>>2207683
Yes, if you're going for that my only advice would be to clean up the image

>>2207692
would be hotter if it was just a guy with a fat ass. Herms and shemales and futas are all gross.

>>2207692
>Things don't change if nobody thinks they will
Implying change won't occur over time.

>If the status quo is shit, why wouldn't you want to change it for the better?
The "status quo" is fine, fuck off and get back to your studies anon

>>2207455
Pretty good considering you're just blasting through with the mouse. Seriously just get a cheap tablet. The adjustment period will suck but man you'll get results quicker.
Critiques. No butt hole
Not color variation on the skin
Also what is other hand doing??

reposting in new thread.
>Do you spot any major anomalies, except for the part I outlined?

>>2207773
Lets see.
Tits have weight. Good.
Expressions on point.
Air ship bad ass.
Hand doing mystery ass things. Nice.
Only critique is that dick is ruler straight to me.
Doesn't feel weighty or even that real?
besides that loving it. What coloring style are you going to use?

>>2207777
Not really sure how should I call it. Semi-realistic cell shading?
Same as I used in the previous FF14 piece.

>>2207782
see that dick got a curve.

>>2207601
>where's your art, son

This one >>2207455

>>2207782
got a tumblr account floating around somewhere?

>>2207630
Why would you aspire to be a cheap, dollar store brand of KJG with same face syndrome? No wonder the dude is stagnating if you're his main source of critique.

>>2207785
Yeah, you are right about the dick being unconvincing and dull looking. Will definitely fix that. Thanks.

>>2207788
bbc-chan

>>2207773
that thigh on thigh thing is going to be tough to sort out. I imagine they'd mush into eachother somehow?

>>2207793
I'll make the dick a tad shorter and move the upper girl to the left or maybe I could just lower the bottom girls legs so that they're straight. I think there is also a problem with the lower girl's torso being too long right now and I could fix it with that. Ahh, the joys of drawing giant over sized cocks and trying not to break anatomy.

>>2207798
giant cocks are made to break anatomy in more ways than one.

>>2207455

I'm being slow as balls today but at least it's moving.

>>2207976
Why are you posting updates of something you obviously have no intentions of fixing? A lot of anons gave you feedback regarding the shitty anatomy and stuff. If you don't intend to apply those suggestions at least stop spamming your wips and post just the finished artwork.

>>2208013

>why are you posting updates

I want to. Deal with it cuck,

>a lot of anons gave you feedback regarding the shitty anatomy and stuff

One guy (probably you) told me that my anatomy way bad, fucked up by saying that I hadn't included an anus despite me having said twice that she's going to be queening a guy so her butthole will be obstructed, and then he realised he was wrong, fucked off somewhere in embarrassment and then neglected to point out of any other issues in detail.

If a person's anatomy is wrong then you need to actually "tell them" why it's wrong so that they can fix it, not just keep saying "it's wrong, it's wrong".

>>2207773
ayy i like the ship...we need to talk about this dick girl problem someday..

>>2208021
I guess you are just an attention whore who is bad at drawing. Oh well, keep us all posted on your continued progress with any new progress pics or vid clips. Show us what you got man. Wanna see how freakin' huge, solid, thick and tight you can get. Thanks for the motivation.

>>2207771

Sorry I missed this whilst I was sleeping.
The tablet thing is something I want to address at some point soon, but the adjustment period is something I'm anxious about truthfully.
Butthole isn't drawn in because she's going to be queening a dude.

>also what is other hand doing??
Was going to be pressed against the floor behind her supporting her weight but I'm being a lazy slob in drawing it tbh.

Thanks though.

>>2208030

You're a very angry little man aren't you.

>>2208021
So what you're saying is you want people to treat you like a toddler because you're incapable of problem solving yourself. Got it.

Your BF has questionable taste in women if he chose you.

>>2208032
why are you drawing with a mouse? tablets are cheap as hell
>still to expensive
go to ebay and buy a used one?
>still to much fam
deliver extra pegging to the bf for the bling. nice drawing btw its nice for mouse.
>but the adjustment period is something I'm anxious about truthfully.
i spent 2 YEARS being afraid of the damn tablet, it will hurt you more when you look back and realized the time you lost, dont be me and do it.

>>2208040

Fucking kek, can you imagine if throughout the entire educational system if instead of teachers instructing you they just walked past and screamed "WRONG, WRONG, IT'S ALL WRONG FIX IT".

Noice ad hominem though, angry man :^)

>>2208047
teachers are paid to do it
we aren't

Nice analogy m8. You've got the mind a child.

>>2208041

>why are you drawing with a mouse? tablets are cheap as hell

Honestly because I'm a student and with the intensity of my course and my workload I couldn't justify dropping $$$ on a piece of hardware I know I'll barely use for the next 4 years.
I don't live with my family so there's nowhere I can store my stuff, nor do I have a car and live out of a suitcase so I have to keep my possessions to an absolute minimum. Everything I own I have to drag across the UK myself on trains and buses and it's really difficult with my fragile lady arms.

Once I have some free time and am able to draw frequently again I'll probably bite the bullet.

>>2208050

lol why are you even an art-centric board if you've zero interest in actually helping people grow and develop their techniques.

Abusing me is getting either of us nowhere you know, so what's the point? If you really are so superior to me in creativity then why don't you go do something productive and help other people on this board out?

I never understood why some people on 4chan are so negative and aggressive.
It seems like people do it just because they can and there's no real reason or rhyme to it even though it only ends up fucking them up as a person long-term.

>>2208053
You're the one refusing to problem solve. People have already told you what looks wonky and you brushed it off because they didn't redline shit for you. You just want people to do the work for you. That's why people are giving you shit. You don't actually care about improving. That much is obvious.

>>2208056

No, nobody has told me anything.
You seem super sure in your conviction so it'll be easy for you to go up and find out where people have pointed how the anatomy is inaccurate right?

I actually do want to correct it because it looks off to me as well but so far you've only tried to tell me that "there's no butthole" when I've already explained why there's no butthole. Nothing else.

If you're so good then gimme a redline because at this point I'm starting to think you probably don't know what you're talking about either.

>>2208056
>>2208050
>>2208040
>>2208030

>>2208062

I'm actually just starting to think he's shit at art kek

>>2208047
The on person on this board I agree with. Good on ya. Sadly, obviously being behind you in experience, I'm sorry to have nothing to offer you. But, if these guys are your teachers, something might be wrong. It's more like that one friend who is supposedly incredibly smart, but too lazy and dickish to do anything other than say "Ya fucked up, git gud."

>>2208067

Th-thanks mang, I appreciate it.

>>2208065
nah its totally your boyfriend trying to stop you from visiting 4chin and getting you to photobash

>>2208070

I actually only learnt about Photobashing yesterday, or at least learnt that there's a name for it. Looks like it could be bretty cool, if not a little cheap.

>>2208070
>>2208072

>2015
>thinking skill matters
>implying you need to draw to be good.
get with the program man, follow the money

>>2208076

I don't want to make money from drawing though, it would suck the fun out of it :(

>>2208032
I'm 6'2''

>>2208079

Sure you are friend, sure you are.

>>2208078
In my case I'd rather be
>I like drawing
>Cool, can I pay you to draw this for me
>Yee
Than
>We need some scrub to leech art from
>Can I draw for your money?
>Maybe

>>2208081
Still butthurt because I think you should review your anatomy in general?
I mean, I could give you advice, but your attitude and attention whoring is a big turn off, sooo, sorry dude. Keep posting your progress lel.

Also, stop drawing lineart with a mouse. There are things called pencils and scanners/cameras that are much better tools for transferring your artwork into photoshop.

>>2208084
i just want to make enough to pay the rent and buy a restaurant dinner once a month and ill be in heaven.

>>2208087
The fuckin' dream will never die

>>2208084

Nah bruv', I mean I've actually had people commission me before and I'm actively working on a commission right now but as nice as getting paid for shit is I feel like turning into an active career applies to much pressure and just sucks the fun and creativity out of it.

>>2208085

You can't draw shut up.

>>2208093
Yeah, that's fair. I can't draw something that ain't me. I'd hate to get paid to draw stuff that isn't me.

>>2208021
I can help. The anatomy isn't that bad tbh. Your main issues is with perspective keys. I hope this helps.

>>2208116

This is absolutely amazing, like a curtain being raised infront of my eyes, thank you so much x

>>2208119
dont blow your load on one redline new guy

>>2208123

I just really appreciate it when somebody takes the time and effort to actually help when they really didn't need to.
It's become something of a rarity on 4chan as of late which kind of blows.

>>2208123
What do you mean with new guy?

>>2207976
the shading kinda looks like she has bruses everywhere

>>2208127
>they really didn't need to.

And yet you feel entitled to it, which is why you bitch and moan at the people who don't do it? Dumb bitch logic 101.

>>2208147

Holy fuck are you still here? We've already established that you can't draw and don't know shit so why are you still here kek

>>2207583
You and Brek are a couple? That is so cute!

>>2208149
>We've already established that you can't draw and don't know shit
>We

Maximum kek.

>>2208129
I think that sentence is missing a comma,

"don't blow your load on one redline, new guy."

Still that doesn't really make sense, since the artist is a grill..

I'm pretty sure I've seen the anatomy and lines of the redline hero here before, they are really delighting.

>>2208170

Not her but you've been blowing out a lot of steam in this thread and we've yet to see any evidence of your claims...

>>2208116
Good effort but you didn't fix anything.

>>2207782
great image, but the blood on the chin creates a very strong visual tangent for me that makes it look like she is biting down on a tentacle that is curling around her chin.

>>2208200
its a red line..plus the original pic was fundamentally solid enough, its in the process of evolution c'mon man..just let it go~

>>2207773
would really love to see your drawings on environments and machines.

>>2208229

The red line was good; that person doesn't know what they're talking about and is probably the same asshole that's been shitting up this entire thread with his jealousy.

First time drawing porn in my life, also first time using SAI. I like the binary pen.

It's been a while since I'm in the mood for drawing porn and I've been thinking about making a nsfw blog, any tips of how should I start?

Vanilla version.

>>2207789
damn, you're trying really hard to hurt me but it isn't working.
This is why people leave, because making personal jabs and shitting on an artist is commonplace here.
Trying to bring others down is only a temporary fix for your own insecurities about art.
>>2208165
yes. thank you, lol.

>>2208285

Ignore them, pretty sure it's the same talentless moron in this thread that's trying to shit on everybody.

>>2207442
Please post how you perspective.

>>2208230
These are the two subjects I suck most at haha.

>>2208419
you make decent environments for your characters, i guess it will come with time.

>>2208350
I eyeball it most of the time or I use perspective circles for construction: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eJWLaDSNBAI

Sometimes for more complex poses I also use the first 2 methods doxy explained here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xM9Slkphjls

>>2208350
practice

anybody else have trouble with getting too turned on while sketching and having to fight the urge to cum, like sometimes i need to sit on a towel or else i'll flood my apartment

>>2208445
Whoa, your illustrations must be really something. Do you mind showing us an example of the ones that turn you on the most?

>>2208445
I have the same thing going on, I just go, dj the bean then back to work.
It almost only happens during the sketch pase too.

>>2208445
hahahahaahaha figure drawing every time hjahahaha

>>2208445
>>2208448
>>2208449
Cmon guys. Let's see if you really are that good, or just have a good immagination.

>>2208445
figure drawing yes

>>2208449 (you)
>>2208473
slow down anon i said i get horny with FIGURE DRAWING watching nice tits so close to me is different from getting horny by drawing something..thats like..degenerate stuff

>>2208447
>>2208473
i'm embarassed kind of and don't want to be identified by my art ;-;

>>2208448
>dj the bean
holy shit, i'm holding on to that one

does anybody know any artists who do large insertion well?

>>2208480
>i'm embarassed kind of and don't want to be identified by my art ;-;

stop being a faggot, faggot. youre not gonna see anyone here in real life

Sketch of something I'm working on.

>>2208504
not true i posted some art here and saw people on streams and DA calling me out, i cringed and haven't posted since, 4chin is bigger than you think.

>>2208478
ah, i thought you meant your drawings get you horny. my bad.

also, fixed the clipping of the pelvis'/thighs' region and inked. still don't know what to do with the dull cock. I guess I'll figure it out during coloring.

>>2207782
cool stuff. do you mind if i ask how much you earn on a weekly/monthly basis? have been recently getting more curious about doing nsfw art for money. have you considered patreon?

>>2208573
showing your work here is never a good idea. nice lines bb, so does this mean you get turned on by your drawings?

>>2208580
Enough to make a living.

>>2208595
Why is showing my stuff here a bad idea?

Regarding the question. Nope, my own stuff doesn't turn me on.

>>2208597
>Enough to make a living.
>mostly lewds
living the dream~

>>2208580
if bbc goes on patreon he would become a meme in this pla...>>2208573 PLEASE GO PATREON! go on DA and do fan art then we can use you to make fun of sakimi!

>>2208478
>>>2208449 (you)


OH MY GOD HE KEPT THE (you) WHEN HE REPLIED TO HIMSELF

minion page

>>2208622
I-I know this is a porn thread but....

>>2208622
what one earth would you do if you died and your relatives rummaged through your shit and found this?

>>2208635
I lold but, he'd be dead so he wouldn't give a shit.

>>2208573
I find drawing sexy pics turn my fetishy thoughts into productive shit and prettiness.

>>2208635
>What would he do
He would be fucking dead that's what

>>2207583
shantae?

>>2208597
dang, i remember when you first started posting here, giving you critique and shit, now lookatcha, all grown an shit, makin a livin.

boy howdy do i need to get off my ass and actually produce content

>>2208665
pretty sure BBC-chan was making a living off his stuff before he posted here. His original posts asking for critique triggered the fuck out of /ic/ because racist /pol/ faggots browse this boards and this porn thread.

>>2208673
i still need to get off my ass

>>2208495
That is looking great so far, so I believe in you!

>>2208674
you and me both

>>2208549
Looks fun, and from what little I see from the lines, it looks like you managed to avoid a derp face.

Personally, the size of the cock is distracting. Like there's big and then there's death by impalement. Regardless of realism/unconfortability, it isn't as interesting to look at since you're not simulating anything resembling real penetration.

But I'm also one of those fags who asks if it really needed to be a dickgirl. So maybe ignore me.

>>2208597
The real question is, how much time do you need to use to make that living? Also, do you think you could do what you do in less time, if you where more disciplined? (Not saying that you are not, just wondering if you see a potential. Also, no need to answer any of this, if you feel this is too personal. )

>>2208597
>Enough to make a living.
OK, weird question. Which Euro-land are you from?

I have a weird theory on Europeans and the independent artists they produce.

>tl;dr
>I cast detect slav

>>2208676
danke~
i'm guessing you can already tell who i'm drawing, hahaha

anybody else enjoy the idea of their art arousing others?
crosspost i guess since hella slow tonight

>>2208761
i think your art is quite sexy, please don't forget to post the final version

>>2208673
What anon said. I have been working as a self employed freelance illustrator for 5 years and NSFW only for 3.
Also, thanks for the kind words and all the interest guys, but let's not make this thread an AMA.

>>2207442
Aren't the eyes a bit uneven and the bellybutton placed too low?

>>2208761
Is this Kep?

>>2208682
Thats fair. I was originally worried about the cock size but everyone seemed to love the giant size.

I also have another piece for critique btw. Thoughts?

feels like a boring angle

>>2208573
the cocks dull bc of how straight it is, coloring wont exactly fix it

>>2208573
the cocks dull bc of how straight it is, coloring wont exactly fix it
>>2208969
her hips/legs are too low and i think stockings body might be too small
>>2208761
>anybody else enjoy the idea of their art arousing others?
I do but i got a long way to go to do that heh
crit?

dicks everywhere

>>2209118
I didn't mean coloring will fix it, I intended to say I will figure something out at the end. I really wouldn't like to change the pose, so I have to think this one over.

>>2208761
No. I get really sad and disgusted when I even consider other people are masturbating to my art. I feel raped. I want them to stop.

>>2208969
nah it works due to the expression. Just do some quick shading on it...
I must admit i've been tempted to color in your work.

>>2209118
>>2208573
Have a big throbbing vein wrap around the top a bit, Break up the straight line

>>2208761
yes, because i like knowing there are others who are into the same weird shit as me.

>>2209249
have at it

gonna finish on sunday, need to sleep now.

>>2209249
of all the good b&w lineart you can find around you chose this?

>>2208837
not kep

>>2209118
work on your ankles/heels (even if the character's maybe digitigrade), maybe work on line flow, the face is good but maybe make that snout shorter, unless you like it that way, i like big giant cool snouts and varried shapes too and everything in between, but when drawing porn of more feminine characters i tend to stick to very exaggerated small nubby snouts (kinna anime-ish) closer to a house cat (regardless of species) cause it like triggers shit in the brain that makes you go "awwwww", this is basically just advice on how to appeal to the masses, feel free to disregard.

>>2209289
dick on the left should be waaay lower, don't pillow shade

so, how do you draw tentacles? They are basically a staple in this line of habit, but I cant seem to get them down. But it's just another thing as I have trouble getting the volume down on most objects.

Just think of a triangle and a cylinder having a child. Look for ref man

>>2209232
Post your work.

>>2209281
>Shyguy9
>vore

not tonight lad

>>2209299
thanks for pointing that error in the anatomy out ! made a quick hotfix wil update on sunday.
also i don't see where i would be doing pillow shading (if we both speak of the same thing) But can understand confusion since the major shadows are still missing.

>>2208622

>>2209281
Saved

>>2209251
this is a good idea
>>2209281
noice
>>2209299
yeah i gotta work on my legs in general, fuckin suck... thanks for the tip, its a commission but ill see if it works.
also, check'd
>>2209311
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eJWLaDSNBAI watch this

Hello, its me again, what do you guys think? Anything i'm missing?

Hello its me again, this is something i've been doing recently.
Do you see anything I'm missing?

>>2208622
i will never forget this

>>2209476
you've butchered the anatomy drawn from imagination there.

>>2209512
Where? her left leg? her ribcage?

>>2209514
tits, armpit, left leg, arm.
Positions and general shapes of those are wrong.
I can't draw better but I know when I see something off. Good job on the face though.

>>2209529
Yea, I think you're right. I'm going to fix it

is it weird to fap to your own porn art?

>>2209536
Yes.

>>2209536
No. I do.

>>2209459
Thanks, i'll watch this video.

>>2209213

I definitely fap to my own.

>>2209556
>>2209213
Like staring into

>>2208845
Firstly, I definately feel like the first part is asking for a fearful look backwards; if you do maybe work on the neck/head a little. Another thing is that perspective is a little meh, no sidebob action, the ass is fine but maybe tame vs some other artists like to go. I'd expect standard ludeness like wetness dripping down her thighs and that sorts.

Your tits look ok, you made the nipple part of the overall shape vs just puttint it on after the fact and that adds to it. Expression is on the riht track so far once again; and I get vague fit tones from her physique which is good for my boner-business. Can I lurk you somewhere like a tumbr? I like watching artists improve.

>>2209568
>if you do maybe work on the neck/head a little
This wasn't very helpful, let me elaborate. She should be turning her head more perhaps, which would contort the neckskin a bit. If she's not looking back at the viewer than maybe as is makes more sense. The spandex material of her pants also implies there's material still going between her cheeks, but it doesn't quite feel that way with how the spandex below goes with the curviture of the upper thigh/ass.

>>2209512
Is it better?
I'm thinking on a way to get this arm right, pretty hard haha

>>2209578
maybe the arm is even smaller...

>>2209578
I'd suggest studying basic anatomy more before you try something like this, or at least have references if you're hellbent on completing this.
You would learn more, faster.
Sure you're good at drawing what you see, but your anatomy studies are not strong enough just yet to extrapolate anatomy.
but ayyye, idk.

>>2209586
surely I need to study anatomy, I'm kinda studying it by trying to imagine until it gets right or at elast close.
I understood what you said, i'll at least finish this one. thanks for your advices heheheh

Sketchy something.

>>2209608
>being this humble.
I do love it so far though.

Help please. I've been stuck on these legs. I just don't know if they look right or how to go about it.

>>2209634
do you mean you need references?
if so:
img13.deviantart.net/2322/i/2010/171/8/7/sailor_sit___kneel_49_by_senshistock.jpg
porn-o-blog.com/updates/specialexamination/sasha_01.jpg
allstarporn.peepholist.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/08/blonde-tattoo-nude-breasts-shower-bathroom-labia-shaved-pussy-spread-legs-squatting.jpg
http://pre07.deviantart.net/c7d2/th/pre/i/2011/297/5/d/lara_croft_crouching_by_val_raiseth-d4domyg.jpg

>>2209608
Those tits have to hit her chin. Unless she's actually flatchested and has implants.

>>2209644
Yes yes yes. Thank you. Searched forever.

>>2209608
Gravity also affect tits dude, away from that looks great.

Second furry, thoughts?

>>2209648
>>2209667
At first I had them over her face because muh realism and gravity. It looked less appealing. I think I will have a guy or two grabbing her tits, so that it wont look as retarded as now.

>>2209571

alright thanks for the feedback! The Wii fit trainer piece I felt needed a lot of work and your comments definitely helps me sort of organize a list of things to work on.

Also if you are looking for a tumblr its sinfuliconic.tumblr.com

>>2209812
>Also if you are looking for a tumblr

being THIS desperate

>>2209816
>being that desperate for 4chan filth to follow you

I don't get it either.

>>2209816
>>2209844
I ASKED him for a tumblr you useless faggot niggers.

I swear half the fuckers here are perpetually trolling to get /ic/ porn threads out. Smug cunts.

>>2209845
If you asked him, then it's a totally different story. My bad.

>>2209845
cry moar you worthless degenerate.

>>2209860
>he thinks everyone on 4chan is a useless entitled bitch on disability
Actually no.

>>2209596
you're a fucking retard. you're not studying if you're guessing with your imagination what she has under her jacket, which is something you can't do because you have so little knowledge in anatomy you don't even know what a rib cage looks like. you're wasting time and not learning anything. stop being a lazy cunt and google loomis pdf

>>2209881
you might as well be, crying about people being mean on 4chan.

Latest panels. I am making these really quick and loose, yet trying to keep the line-work as clean as possible. There are some perspective anomalies (symmetry of the guy's face). What do you think? Still appealing enough to be called a finished clean ink?

>>2209735
vilppu would have done better.
>>2209608
did you use reference for this? nice but then again..wheres the motion? kek

>>2209926
>did you use reference for this?
I didn't actually use it during sketching, but yeah, I was given a ref pic to see what chun's pose should look like.

>>2209856

No shit it's a totally different story you fucking mong. Holy fuck. Stop cruising /ic/ like some kind of fucking ego police, shitlord.

>>2209893

You, need to stop posting immediately, you fucking merc_wip no progress ass no name nigga. Go back to shitposting Loomis Loomis Vilppu.


Not even related to anything here but I'm fucking exhausted of you fucks. You're the same kind of faggots that probably cry when people like tehmeh succeed and make more than you ever will.

>>2209937
>tehmeh
who's that?

>>2209932
>uses reff still messes the boobs.
what happened?

>>2209937
>No shit it's a totally different story you fucking mong.
Oh, but fuck you very much, dear sir.

>>2209940

One of the few that come here, make a tiny name for themselves, get shitted on and still made it despite all the loud assholes praying for his failure.

>>2209937
post more of your work

>>2209926

>>2209932
i wonder what kind of porn you watch..

>>2209941
I explained it earliear. I want to keep them in the position they're now, just gotta figure out some way to keep them in place. I guess I'll go for the same approach I used here for her left boob.

>>2209943
still don't know who that is. do you have a link to their gallery?

>>2209948
What do my personal tastes have to do with the stuff I draw for others?

>>2209949

I'm digging this style so much.

>>2209951
Damn son just ask your grandma how to google something.

http://ollylawson.tumblr.com/

>>2209952
sure...dodge the question

>>2209952
>What do my personal tastes have to do with the stuff I draw for others?
everything? thats how you build a style? what a weird question.

>>2209956
sorry, I thought it was rhetorical sarcasm. my favorite porn is vintage 80s stuff and x-art like erotic porn. I dig Tinto Bras' movies a lot.

>>2209963
>thats how you build a style?
I'm not sure I agree with what you are saying here. I build my style each time I draw something, no matter if it is personal stuff or a commission.
I was talking about fantasies other people want me to portray. It's not mandatory for me to absolutely like something I am drawing to be able to pull it off. For example this upside down pose isn't really appealing to me. The same goes for the oversized cocks and boobs I have to draw all the time. That's wha I meant when I said my personal tastes don't necessarily reflect in my commission work.

>>2209955
why would I bother, when you can just posti it yourself.
thanks.

Also, I already spent too much time asking about his guy (really disappointing gallery). And why the fuck am I still typing?

>>2208622
A cross would be too nice for degenerates like you.

>>2208573

>>2208622
My eyes are literally watering I don't want to live on this planet anymore why would you do this.

>>2209608
the distant foot is bigger than the closer one?

>>2209999
the ship idea is really popular i see it so many times, i wonder where it originated from.

>>2209949
this a commission?

Please help with the anatomy!

>>2209658
n-nox?

>>2210060
i literally spent an hour trying to give you a red line but in the end like a fucking faggot i forgot to save making me hate myself, fuck you for that so ill do it on pencil. DISCLAMER I"M TRASH..k, you need to do more basic shapes and forms her back looks like an old accordion everything is too close, her pose looks super uncomfortable but its nice to see you trying to push yourself, add mass to where the muscles would pile up together its sexy~, be careful of lines that create tangents because they become confusing= her boobs and her right(?) arm kinda blend together, don't bend the knees so hard they look broken (unless its a fetish) ayy i realize you're adding perspective to yours but still its a mess, gambate figgoot~

>>2210148
Thank you so much for taking the effort to do a full red line! I'm sorry to hear you messed up on the saving, I've been thee myself, and it sure is strong of you to keep going after that!

I agree with you on the back being too squeezed up and the tangent line thing not being a good idea, I'll try to sort that out tomorrow. And yeah, I need to get out of my comfort zone!

I cleaned up the lines from what I got, still need to apply what you mentioned though.

>>2210148
>DISCLAMER I"M TRASH

Then why are you giving advice? The dynamics of the gesture is completely lost on your attempt. You made it extremely stiff and dull.

>>2210157
because the crit itself is what really mattered, not the drawing i simply drew something to try and illustrate my point. wheres your crit of his work? yeah, 2 hours and i dint see you help, now go draw.

>>2208478
>merc-wip.jpg
It's merc_wip you newfag.

>>2210166
no u.

>>2210156

That spine is straight up busted at a 90 degree angle dude, no lower torso, just ribcage and hips

You've got a nice way of doing lines, just nut up on doing constructive figure drawing like Hampton and crank out some gestures and you'll be on a right(er) track

>>2210163
Your anatomy is just as shit as the person you're trying to help. Your critique was pretty worthless. Now go draw more porn for that autistic pony fandom. You're useless here.

>>2210175
>ayy being this ass ravaged
kek again where was your help?

>>2210156
I don't usually draw this sorta stuff, and I'm not really amazing to begin with, but I figured I'd try and outline the problems I see.

It's mainly the way the torso's position, and the knees. The butt is fine, I think. Hope this helps!

>>2210181
>implying you helped at all

Kek. This post >>2210172 is more helpful than any of the irrelevant shit you posted.

>>2210188
nah i'm done here.

>>2210188
look at this special pickle. you felling better now?

>>2210007
Yeah, have to fix the size and position of the whole distant leg.

>>2210012
yes

>>2210156
you're welcomed, i tried. sorry i sucked, maybe someday. also something is up with her but its weird..like, size wise. either way you have nice lines man.

>>2210181
That person was pretty rude, but it is true that you're in no position to teach. You may be able to tell his drawing is off, but if you yourself can't fix his mistakes it effectively means you don't have the required knowledge to fix them and thus nothing of worth to say to him.

>>2210258
even an average person can tell you have problems with your drawing yes i'm terrible but i don't believe my input is worthless because i cant match his skills. do you really believe only people better than you can offer you valuable information? that's kinda arrogant.

>>2210261
You don't need to be better than the person to point out an issue. to offer a solution you need to be able to execute it though.

>>2210261
Keep doing what you are doing, the artist appreciated it and so did I. Your feedback even without your pic was pretty spot on. Esp. The bit about the tangent and the skin bunching up. Just dont respond to these people, theyre egging you on at this point, your work is done.

>>2210271
sigh, sounds fair.
>>2210276
no they are kinda right i do suck for now i think i have the eye but lack the hands, i'm gonna go into lurk mode till i can be more solid. still, nice lines~

>>2210060
So instead of you sitting down and looking for problems in your drawing, you want someone to spoon feed you? Mind you >>2210172 is from an anatomy book. If the image was helpful, it emphasizes the fact you're not studying on your own. If you truly cared about fixing your original drawing, and getting better, you would look at a few references as well. You should also spend more than 5 mins on a drawing and beg people to help you.

>>2210148
This is why no one should redline

>>2210261
>that's kinda arrogant.

It's not being arrogant, it's being honest.

>>2210288
he's kinda right though, the viewers opinion might not be reliable but its not always wrong. kek man i imagine /ic/ getting crits by normies
>"hey anon the eyes are too big, i cant draw but i'm just saying :D"
>"loomis?, vilppu? watts? miyasaki? do you know those names?"
"n-no?.."
>"please don't correct me"

>>2210294

>>2210298
>the viewers opinion might not be reliable but its not always wrong
>comparing focus testing to art
nice cherry picking

>>2209924
yeah you're work always tends to be on point
Especially the expressions. I think the one complain ic had was your dick veins tend to be quite flat? the never feel like they have volume
.More painted on than anything.

Rayman arm to show shit. Bottom dude is a just-above-the-knee- amputee, so the missing leg is intentional.
Aint planning on taking this past the sketch stage, but I'm trying to improve on said sketching stages. Grant me those one-hit KO crits.

>>2210299

> Seriously considering drawing porn/lewd requests for furries because they always favorite the anthro art I draw for drawthreads.

It just seems like a goldmine, I mean they're liking thinks I drew that aren't even good.

At the same time I'm not sure if I want to be known as a porn artist at this point in time.

>>2210315
make a second account and learn a different style problem solved, the fetish community is really nice tbh. look at mike innel for example very few people know he draws lewds on different account and he makes a killing, even sakimi does the naughty bits.

>>2210315
>do furry porn like a crack whore giving blowjobs for crack money
>receive mad dosh
>when you feel bored/disgusted/jaded delete fucking everything and begin anew
The internet is your sandbox, anon!

>>2210317
what was the name of this french dude who did this?

>>2210319
Joel Jurion?

It may be someone else because he still draws little boys getting diddled.

>>2210321
is he the guy who was working in a medial anime? if so then yes.

>>2210294
Do you have difficulties reading? It was already said multiple times you don't need to be a chef to tell when food tastes like shit. You do need to be a chef to tell the person how to do it right though.

hmm

>>2210294
Normies can point out what looks funky but they can't offer solutions. To offer solutions worth a damn your skill level has to be on par or better. Figgot only knows how to polish turds and pander to autism. That's why he thinks he's in a position to offer any kind of advice even though he isn't. His art is shit.

>>2210343
shes literally cutting the guys mushroom tip with her foot.. that's hot yo.

>>2210140
yepper

>>2210343
>...and then she farts!

a commissioner wants me to do two different images with the same characters 69ing each other with equal emphasis on both characters in both pictures.
>mfw trying to figure out how anatomy works in this weird ass pose from different angles is the most difficult thing i've ever done

>>2210405
I think you're doing alright so far.

>>2210405
Also, here's the second one. Anatomy is way more off in this one, I think. The position of the bottom one eludes me.

>>2210411
I'm glad you think so. I'm getting paid a lot for these, gotta make em look good.

>>2210157
>>2210175
>>2210258
This is all about the fact that ability to see doe not always corelate with the ability to draw. The original poster pointed out all the major issues, in a way that made sense. I think that the fact that he was actually constructive, humble and generous, combined with the fact that his sketch actually outlines some of the issues, is great, and should be more common in these threads.

The irrelevant shitstorm that followed thiugh, I'm not so sure of. Both him and I know that we have our flaw, doesn't mean that we can benefit eachoter.

>>2210172
Thank you so much for your feed back and tips, I'll check out Hamptons and gesture drawing!


>>2210284
While I mostly agree with you comment, I have to point out that this is a citique thread, and that giving constructive critisism is kinda what we do here. It's fully possible to git gud solely by practising on your, but doing that would make these kind of threads kinda worhless.

As I said, I do agree with you, and should practise more, but the problem is I don't really know where to start. As my time is pretty limited, I don't want to go through all the exercises in the sticky, I want to finde some thing thet would help me improve noticably, even by only putting down a few hours a week.

(But now I'll check out the Hamptons and gesture dawif, as the other anon pointed out.)

Also, this was done for a requester at /b/. I set my time frame to 2 hours and didn't want to put too much effort into it. I just thouht that if someone was able to fix some flaws is the time I was cleaning up the lines, it would benefit both me and the requester.


>>2210348
He practices Loomis and his sketch is by no means unnecessarily polishes. The way I see it, he is using his time to help and improve, and may very well get really good at some point.

>>2210481
>this is a citique thread
uh huh sure.

> It's fully possible to git gud solely by practising on your, but doing that would make these kind of threads kinda worhless.
>measuring worth

>I don't really know where to start
The sticky is the best place

>I don't want to go through all the exercises in the sticky
Then admit you refuse to do the sticky. Read through the sticky and look at exercises that interest you. Once you have done a few, that interest you and "mastered" them, then do the other exercises. Stop being lazy and think.

>I want to finde some thing thet would help me improve noticably
The sticky really goes over some information that can help you, but then again, I am unsure if you actually read it.

>I set my time frame to 2 hours and didn't want to put too much effort into it
You cant polish shit anon. If you dont put effort into your drawings and ask for crits, people will know you didn't put effort into it.

There are book threads and question threads. Ask some questions in the question thread. Download some books in the book thread. Do some references. The tools are there.

>>2210494
>The sticky is the best place
Whenever some idiot says that I can just facepalm.

>>2210494
How long have you been on /ic/? Most people know that these threads come from people being offended by people posting lewds in the draw thread, which are for crits. If you are unsure of what we do at this board you may also want to read what it is called.

I've read through the sticky, and while I don't argue that it could be a good idea to go through it all if you had unlimited amounts of time, this is not the case for me.

I spent two hours yesterday doing my best to fulfill some anons naughty fantasy, purely for free. If some anatomy master felt the same goodwill I thought they might be willing to offer me the same grace.

Doesn't matter how shitty my art is, I was asking for a unconditional favor, just like the one I was doing.

>>2208761
That's all I ever wanted

Do post em when you're done.


For posterity.

>>2210538
was for
>>2210452

>>2210510
Are you the abusive chubby mom anon with the eyes of an abused loli?

>If you are unsure of what we do at this board you may also want to read what it is called.
Spoon feeding, this board is about spoon feeding.

>if you had unlimited amounts of time
It can take less than an hour just reading the sticky and bookmarking artists or books you find interesting.

>Doesn't matter how shitty my art is
If the construction is shit, the final product will be shit.

I dont know what to say to you. You could've looked at some references. You could've done a quick gesture of what you planned on doing before you added the lewd bits. You could've sat on it for awhile before returning with fresh eyes.

>>2210542
>this board is about spoon feeding.
..Wait, so this whole time you've been trying to complement me on my understanding and contribution to this community?

>you find interesting.
I'm doing what I find interesting. What makes you think that reading the books I find interesting will give me any better results? I'm asking for an informed guidance to where I should put my efforts, which are already given to me by the other anon.

I don't like using references for my work. While I think they can be great for building understanding and skills in practice, I believe they makes for a stiff piece, determined more by what refs you found, rather than what you originally wanted the piece to look like.

I did a gesture, but was not able to add correct anatomy on top of it. Fresh eyes might work, given that I actually have the skills to correct my flaws.

>>2207625
salty af

Instead of getting your panties in a bunch, why don't you just admit s/he's right in that those redundant and worthless "dude loomis lmao"-tier comments aren't actually telling anybody anything they didn't already know?

>>2207455
>I have to do all of my painting in PS with a mouse
r u a wizard

>>2210187
Didn't see this one at first! The way you did the torso looks much more realistic, still I wonder it it's possible to show it more in profile, without having to snap her spine.. Still, thank you for combining my idea with some proper anatomy!

I tried to work on her torso without loosing the original idea for the pose, better/worse/still the same?

>>2208274
looks like chocolate to me

>>2210602
What can I do to finish drawings faster?

>>2210623
Finish drawings faster? You set a time limit. To begin with your drawings will be awful, but as you improve, so will the quality.

As I see it, improving can result in two things, drawing the same thing faster, or drawing better in a shorter amount of time.

Why doesn't ShindoL like women?

Does this look sexy? Why or why not? How can I make a sexier version?

>>2210685
jesus, no. Study anatomy a LOT more. It looks like you have some vague conception of how the female form works, but a lot of this is way off. Another option would be to try to draw more on-model. You're trying to stylize away from her original look, but you don't have enough knowledge to do it. Use pic related as reference, and, ideally, if you're trying to draw Garnet in a sexy pose, use a ref for that too. Also, just study anatomy, a lot. Draw naked people. All day.

>>2210695
I legit don't know what sexy is anymore. Give me a ref and I'll see if it becomes sexy.

>>2207692
I like the current status quo. It's just new people that don't like it.

>>2210626
the better you are the longer you finnish the full illustration

>>2210738
?

Is there any where to post own rule 34 art? I think some one pointed out some listing where you could see the most popular subjects a little while ago.

>>2210774
http://rule34.xxx/
http://rule34.paheal.net/
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/

>>2210481
>As my time is pretty limited, I don't want to go through all the exercises in the sticky, I want to finde some thing thet would help me improve noticably, even by only putting down a few hours a week.

So you're just another piece of shit looking for shortcuts. It makes sense now.

>>2210785
I'm a full time student, so a few hours study a week is actually quite ambiguous. I never asked for shortcuts, I just asked which way would get me to my destination most efficiently. Wasting time is no virtue.

>>2210785
I'm a full time student, so a few hours study a week is actually quite ambitious. I never asked for shortcuts, I just asked which way would get me to my destination most efficiently. Wasting time is no virtue.

Pardon the rough, but I'm having issues with nipple placement on this one.

If you see anything else abnormal please let me know!

>>2210797
Practice your line-work. These lines are so inconsistent they ruin the artwork.

>>2210740
??

>>2210792

Reading what's in the fucking sticky to understand methods. Doing studies and applying the knowledge from those studies when drawing from imagination. There are no shortcuts, and that's exactly what you're asking for. Suck it up, read the recommended books and practice the methods.

>>2209924
Do you talk to yourself a lot?

Every sense the moderation has been outsourced to some easteuro trash this place has really gone down the shithole. Half you force memes while the other half looks for confirmation.

>>2210822
In the past people commented on stuff for which I didn't really need comments. This time I explained the pic and specifically asked about the stuff I wanted to be criticized.
What's exactly your problem for acting like such a douche?

>>2210712
I'll never think people shitting on each other is likable or how things should be. "Git gud, scrub" isn't really critique. How others feel is important. I'm not saying activley avoid offending people, or apologize EVERY TIME someone says "muh feels". I'm just saying don't actively attempt to hurt people.

Someone once said "Don't waste my time with your shitty art". It's only a waste of your own time if you decide to tell someone you wasted your time
>>2210542
>Spoon feeding
All I'm asking for is people to tell me "Oh, ya fucked up the leg in this way" and be done with it. If somebody's feelin' a red line, go on ahead, but, I won't beg for it
>>2210827
>Seeking approval from 4chan
kek

I'm just gonna point out this entire thread has been memes and arguing.

>>2210913
>"Git gud, scrub" isn't really critique.

It's not offensive either, unless you're bitch made. You're on an anonymous board, what's the point of not being blunt and trying to be "likable"? Fuck your feelings. Stay on tumblr if you want people who on egg shells.

>>2210828
In the past you and your pedo boyfriends shit up this entire site let alone this board. If nobody is smelling your shit and giving you a thumbs up you throw a fit, probably trash that trailer of yours. Kekit you dumb shit.

check

NEW THREAD
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>>2210591
Nice. it falls nicely in the believable-ish but sexy comes first realms.

>>2211549
Sexy surely does come first in this regard! As I've stated, there are lots of stuff I want to improve on, but nice to hear that my art already is starting to hit the right spot with some people!