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2201616 No.2201616 [Reply] [Original]

That take me 2 h to make this.
Any critics ?

>> No.2201631

>>Drawthread

>> No.2201651

How long did it take you to get to this level

>> No.2201672

>>2201651
2 h

>> No.2201821

>>2201651
About 3 month of training.
But you have to learn construction first

>> No.2201828

High school level work demonstrating a poor sense of form & weight.

>> No.2201831

Is it based on a photograph, or is this actual still life?

Lighting looks rather flat. This is why I thought it was using a photograph as the reference.

>> No.2201841
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2201841

>>2201831
A photograph.

>> No.2201846

Chicken scratch.
Hair looks like straw.
Lips and nose look nice. Why did you half ass the eyes.
No details that could (should) be there in the bra.
Values in body not even there.
Some background would be nicer.
Looks like you got lazy on me Op. Strain your brain more and finish it.

>> No.2201872

>>2201846
What "Chicken scratch" mean ?
"Why did you half ass the eyes" Yup you're right, she's a litle derp aren't she ?
I don't know how to do a good background
"Strain your brain more" how can I ? And yes I'm too lazy with my draw recently, I hope I can change this.

Thank you a lot for your constructive critics (And sorry for my bad english I'm a French fag)

>> No.2201897

>>2201872
see this thread:
>>2200826

chicken scratch means your lines and hatching are hasty and not very well thought out.

>> No.2201960
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2201960

>>2201616
Use circle shading for skin.
>Pic related
ALso dat chicken scratch; Jesus were you dropped as a baby?
If you going to make a line, shit or get off the pot.

>> No.2201962
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2201962

>MRW when you followed through with signing it

>> No.2201990

>>2201616
This is fine for two months. Ignore the cancerfags spamming your thread, they are just steaming out because they can't draw a face
>prove me wrong
>I.. I I don't have to! I was just g-giving constructive criticism!

>> No.2202025

>>2201872
wow ur engrish is qt.

>> No.2202045
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2202045

>>2201962
>mrw

Fuck off back to reddit and tumblr you normie piece of shit.

>> No.2202054

>>2201616
i could do this in 30 minutes

>> No.2202062

>>2202054
m'kay

>> No.2202223

>>2202054
GEE THANKS FOR THE ADVISE MISTER!

>> No.2202286

>>2202223
de rien!

>> No.2202338

>>2201616
I could do this in 10 minutes while wearing boxing gloves

>> No.2202445

>>2201846
fuck off man, a guy's been drawing for three months and you shit all over his quality as a person. like seriously where the fuck were you at three months.

>>2201616
i think it looks good OP, i think you're on the right track, if there's one thing i really suggest you look into it's gradients.
if you keep going the way you're going you'll be alright, just keep studying and don't try to do a 'style'.

>> No.2202576

>>2202445
Thanks man, that's really nice of you.
And what's "it's gradient" mean ? (sry always a frenchfag)

>> No.2202580

>>2202576

Un dégradé de couleur est une transition progressive d'une couleur vers une autre.

"Dégradé de couleur" on @Wikipedia: https://fr.wikipedia.org/wiki/D%C3%A9grad%C3%A9_de_couleur?wprov=sfia1

>> No.2202589

>>2202580
Ah okay, gradients = dégradé en gros.

>> No.2202843

>>2201960
Well k anon, I will try this next time

>> No.2202887

>>2202445
He asked for criticism, not hugs. I would expect any one of you to do the same for me.

>> No.2204349

Anyway, anybody know how to digital art ?