/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

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I suck at coloring. I used colored pencils. The glasses should have been green, but the reference pic I used had purple glasses.

>>2158204
Is that Holo

>>2158269
No, it's Awoo but not Canadian.

>>2158269
Horo.

>>2158249
Loomis

>>2158313
What is Loomis?

fuck league of losers

>>2158350

The key to success.

I want to get a new style to draw trap comics but i have no clue whay kind of face would be appealing. What kind of style you suggest?

>>2158204
Why is this a faggot instead of Kraft Lawrence?

>>2158683
I don't know, why are you a retarded douchebag?
There are some questions that just can't be answered, I guess.

>>2158683
this.

>>2158249
It's not only at coloring that you suck. We really can't help you until you learn the basics, there's really no pointing in critiquing that thing since everything is just wrong.
Don't get discouraged, but you really need practice.

I'm h

>>2159124
I'm sorry. I meant to write "I'm having troubles on these spots. Red lines would help".

can't see anything that disturbs me so far, maybe her hand a bit too small but its ok-ish

what do you guys think?

>>2159229
wheres the lineweight at ?

>>2159236
I know I'm not that good but I'm trying to emulate seishoujou's stuff, not entirely style wise but linework&colorwise so I'm trying to have really thin lines with little to no lineweight.

Thoughts?

>>2159247

draw the other girl naked too

Just a sketch for now

>>2159244
You can still see some line weight work on Seishoujou's work. I think you'll need to use a little more on line weight on your drawing, specially on the girl's lower part.

>>2159247
It's cute.

>>2159258
Aww thanks!

>>2159250
10/10

>>2158705
Bad burn anon.

Lineart done. Now I need suggestions about the coloring.

>>2158204
>that feel when the only thing that makes you want to draw is furries and orcs of either gender.

>>2158683
I thought it was guts, but it wasn't even guts

>>2159757
wtf is up w her foot

more of a spoof than porn:

>>2159849
Yea, it's a shame.

>>2159247

Get a scanner
Rotate your pics to the right orientation.

Not my work, I can't draw right now. Two questions, where do you find inspiration for poses? And how does one learn foreshortening effectively?

>>2159976
movie stills
life

>>2159988
>having real life females to pose for you
>talking with real life females
you gay son?

>>2159976
>where do you find inspiration for poses
Acting out poses yourself. Reference pictures. Starting with simple thumbnail stick figures, enlarging and adding the anatomy and fleshing it out.

>And how does one learn foreshortening effectively?
Look in a mirror or look up reference pictures.

>>2159976
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eJWLaDSNBAI

>>2159795
having a focus is good

>>2159873
I had troubles in drawing it. But I'll fix it because it does looks like shit.

I could really use some help with this piece.

>>2158204

that pic sucks

>>2159229

love it, you draw legs really well

>>2160239
you need glasses

>>2159795

Same, its wierd because a few years ago I hated that shit. I guess Ill have to accept this fate as long as it gets me to draw.

Question, at some point I wanna make an FA account but I keep hearing about stupid admin drama and website having a history of security issues. Anything I should know, i dont wanna go full tinfoil with say aVpn or something.

>>2160270
Just conduct commission business through email and use a unique password for sign up. There is drama and terrible admins, but keep your head down and you'll be fine.

>>2160270
You can use Weasyl.

>>2160178
Are you serious with the right leg man?

>>2160326
the guy who wanted this picture was very specific on how he wanted it, but yeah the right leg is really driving me crazy now that I look at it more.

Long time thread lurker who finally decided to post. Here's something I've been working on lately.

>>2158204
>a pretty hot guy
that's new

furry commission

>>2161039
>Keppok did a half way decent male from the shoulders down at least

No shit, wow it's a minor improvement but an improvement

why is there a random penis in the bottom right that supposed to be an X-ray? it's too close to the rest

>>2161056
>not being awere of random penises floating around you.

how do i draw two people interacting?

>>2159255
Definitely, I've started coloring this but I'm still open to playing with it, I just wanted to see how it looks colored so I'd make less mistakes in the future. On the other hand I want to keep unity and don't really deal with lineweight for this project so clean and thin lines kinda help with that but like I said fappability comes first and I'd love to get better at drawing fappable stuff at the end this project.
>>2160242
thanks, hope I can color them on acceptable levels.

>>2161354
Learn how to draw simple 3D objects.
Learn how to draw simple 3D objects interacting.
tl;dr: read the sticky.

Commission im workin on, not finished

>>2159919
Fix the hand

>>2159918
Fix the villager's headshape and nose

>>2161039
Overall really nice, idk if it's intentional but the feet kinda look goofy

you make it sound so simple, but you're right. i'll simplify more.

>>2158204
Thoughts?

>>2161437
Fix the vagina.

>>2161454
gay, and not in a good way

>>2161454
long faces
pec anatomy looks fucked, especially the placement of the right nipple (the one the guy isn't touching)
also work on your eyes the style is a bit unappealing along with the balls of the penis, 2wrinkly4me

>>2161039
Your perspective is probably the main striking element of your work even though it still needs work. The girl's leg that's farthest from us looks like it's not even attached to her body since her body isn'tt aligned 1 for 1 with the male. At that angle I'd argue it wouldn't be visible to the viewer and if it were, we wouldn't see that much of it.

>>2161039
Hey, not trying to be an asshole here but how does her legs work?

>>2159795
More orcs are desperately needed. Especially if you can do gay/bi stuff and still do hot orc chicks.

>>2161366
I like how soft is your coloring. And the line work looks fine now that all the "attention" is on the girl's butt. Fix the lines on her dress and will be good.

>>2161454
I was confused if they're either sitting or lying on the grass.

And here is my progress. Should I play more with shading and lights? Or fix anything? (And yes, I noticed the girl's hands. I'll re-draw them now.)

>>2161576
The anime is pretty boring so far.

>>2161580
I prefer the manga for the same reason. They don't censor the violence, yet they censor boobies.

>>2161576
is she covered in poop ?

>>2161576
No, still working with shades. Should I use other tone or something?

>>2161650
see >>2161653

Sketch WIP. Not really sure if I should even finish it.

>>2161437
SWAAAAAAN

Your main issue there is the positioning of the vagina. This tut should help.

>>2161711
Please do.

>>2161759
>p-please support me

If you're going to give a tutorial out give a fucking tutorial out and not a fucking subtle advertising campaign.

quick drawing with no reference. ?????

>>2161772
>marketing and advertising yourself is bad

Well aren't you an inept basement dweller. You're never going to make it unless you know how to promote yourself and your venues.

>>2161783
Use more references retard.

>>2161803
lol ok obviously

Started this a few weeks ago and then got busy
Please explain to me why it is shit

>>2161559
>>2161551
I didn't even notice the legs,
thanx

>>2161783
study moar

>>2161921
There's something about battle suit sex that just turns me on beyond belief. There is no greater boner than warframe, Halo, or Samus suit porn for me.
Under all the loli, gay, furry shit that Ive been scorned to see, you have the best pick Ive ever seen in a porn thread.

>Mfw

>>2160270
Worse comes to worst you can open an Inkbunny or a Weasyl account.

Don't worry so much about the admin drama, it's usually fairly petty bullshit. The overall community is pretty decent still.

>>2161921
The main issue is that it's a flat side view.

You aren't realizing the forms of the characters, you are just drawing their profiles.

>>2162051
>battle suit sex
>Warframe porn

I never played the game but god damn did that shit cement my mask/helmet fetish like no other.

>>2161921
From a technical standpoint it is pretty much shit because it's flat (you don't have enough skill/knowledge to be able to convey strong visual clues that would make your image 3d - perspective, line weight and proportions) and you chose one of, if not the worst possible pov.

tl;dr your fundamentals are shit = your illustration is shit = your porn is even bigger shit = learn your fundamentals.

>>2162141
>From a technical standpoint it is pretty much shit because it's flat

This is literally the only part of your critique that says anything. Everything else is you projecting and trying too hard to sound like you know what you're talking about when you don't. You aren't impressing anyone here m8.

It's shit because it's flat and doesn't even look finished. Choose a better perspective that shows more form and flesh it out more. That's all that needs to be said.

>>2162141
Watch out for that edge bro

I'd like to know If I really fucked anything up in this pose or there is something I could do better before I finalize it.

>>2161564
>hot orc chicks

Ask and ye shall receive.

Trying to make a muscular orc woman between 6'8 and 7'0 ft tall. I've had this character concept for a while now, which is why it's difficult for me to design the body how I want it. I've take some liberties like making her hip bones and rib cage larger, and putting a lot more muscle than a woman of that height should have.

Also tried to experiment with a chubby/overweight version in thumbnails to the left.

Will finish later.

>>2162148
From there on I explained why it's flat. And, yes I know what I'm talking about. Don't really care if I sounded like you said.

>>2162148
From there on I explained why it's flat. And, yes I know what I'm talking about. If you can't see the shapes and line weight don't convey ANY perspective AT ALL, it's not my problem, buddy, it's only yours. Also, don't really care if I sound like an asshole. People that don't have the right fundamentals, HAVE to be made aware of this as soon as possible, because they are simply throwing their time away by drawing shit art instead of learning the right stuff.

>>2162188
The perspective of her torso doesn't match the perspective of the legs and upper part of the torso (arm and head). I know you are trying to give the whole body an interesting curve and you intentionally messed the proportions, but I think you went a little overboard with the torso.

>>2161711
i wish i could be fast enought for a one picture a day.

>>2162311
If it's a sketch, there really is no problem achieving that imo.

C-can I post again, /ic/? P-please no bully ;_;

>>2161772
You're not gonna go anywhere.

>>2162426
the rendering/coloring is super nice, but the literal waterfall coming from her crotch is gross.

>>2162438
>but the literal waterfall coming from her crotch is gross

You gay son?

>>2162426
that hand sucks shit - view Bridgman
learn the muscles of the hip.
learn to foreshorten correctly.
cloth is nice but needs improvement - mainly on shoulders
rendering is nice but i suspect you are using the blend tool. if you are - stop. it will fuck you over in the future.

>>2162426

The pelvis and groin area is all fucked up. Study up on the structure of 'em.

>>2162445
>useing tools is bad

go to bed.

>>2162464

He's right though. Blending without using the blend tool will give you a lot more control over your values and clearer colours, better edges, etc. Go ahead and use the blend tool but use it sparingly.

>>2162464
Don't get all defensive, if that is your approach to art you may as well switch to 3d. all I'm saying is rendering using the blend tool will make you dependent on it, restricting you in the future. You wont be able to render on other mediums too for obvious reasons.

>>2162469
nah It will look more painterly like. Porn needs that smooth transitions like kyle dose.

>>2162469
But he used the blend tool correctly.

Working on this double paizuri.
I've never really done this one before so I'm having some problem with the torso and the angles.

Also the POV of the guy's lower torso to pelvis has always been a tough spot for me.

btw i am using reference.

>>2161711

onely nice one so far

>>2162426
Hey figgs, bbcc here.
I think you made some progress with the whole "single perspective for the entire illustration" thing and you are not breaking stuff into smaller singular perspective points anymore. That's a huge plus.
However here you have a lot of trouble with anatomy and foreshortening. Especially the later is very obvious. Other anons already explained what's wrong with her hip area, but I think you need just a little guidance to understand how to overcome some very simple issues. Tomorrow I'll be streaming almost all day. If you have the time, drop by and I'll give you some tips and show some neat techniques about foreshortening, that I'm sure could help you a lot.

Also, love the coloring.

>>2161711
I'd love to pass this off as a sketch.
Most of my sketches still need to have inner construction man... i'd love to get to this point

>>2161711
Really nice, man! I'm just a little confused about what's between her legs... If that's a she-male and it's the tip of a fat peen we're seeing, then it kinda looks up-side-down, but perhaps I'm seeing it wrong...

>>2162148
t-thanks king bunny..

>>2162426
is she peeing?

>>2162597
it's a futa anon...

>>2161711
I used to think she's doing a "sandwich" with someone else's penis.

>>2162426
It has a lot of nice qualities, but it's obscured by the anatomy and foreshortening errors. You need to start working a bit more with references, it's one of the best learning tools. The trick to not end in the "copy machine"-trap is to first draw you initial sketch, THEN look for references of ladies in a some what similar pose that you can use to spot your mistakes (to make it easier, in the future, collect refs and make some folders). For the hand, you can just use your own as ref, just hold it in front of you, use a mirror, take a photo... just do something, cause a fucked hand ruins a pic for me more then most things!

More progress.

finally done.

>>2162544
can u link to steam when steaming here ?

>>2162628
lookin good

>>2162642
Just check his tumblr, he'll post it there.

>>2162298
>From there on I explained why it's flat.

No you didn't. You typed a long winded projection like a try hard dumb ass who doesn't know how to draw. It's flat because of the flat perspective chosen (dead on profile view) and it doesn't even look finished (hence the shitty linework). That's it. Now STFU and draw something for once.

>>2162673
OP here: 10/10 laughed pretty hard I woke up my cat.

>>2162230 here

I'll show you mine if you show me yours. Critique for critique, right?

>>2162426
The only thing I can say that no one else has, is that I don't really like the mouth. I know where it comes from, but I think it's less sexy and more punchable, for lack of a better word.

>>2162502
I like it so far. Is the eye on the left head a tattoo or something? Looks a little confusing, lol.

>>2162628
The arms are kind of weird looking, torso seems overly stiff and the breasts don't look natural.

>>2162638
Everything is great save for the boobs and the general contrast. The breasts seem inorganic and the nipples aren't placed right. Plus, the bright colors really don't go well with the super-white pillow. Consider darkening one or the other.

>>2162694
2162628 here: I had a lot of troubles in drawing his arms, if anybody can redline it would help me. I'll fix her breasts now.

>>2162694
2162502 here. No. The tattoos are just markers for me to remember which character is which

Thoughts? Opinion? Brutal crits?

Inset images will go in the grey boxes.

>>2162685
I guess you really don't see how a flat on POV can be represented with proper perspective, ha?
Oh well, you'll never get it, even if I try to explain it thoroughly, because of all the hate you have towards me.

>>2162628
honestly i think if her head were leaned back it would look more natural like she is enjoying it.

>>2162923
Like this? I thought on that, but I couldn't find a photo with a pose related like that. I'll re-draw the girl in this case.

>>2162910
is one of those things where the little details ruin an entire work
Read the sticky

>>2162910

>>2162932
>...and then she farts!

>>2162608
Yeah, that's what I was trying to depict. I guess I'll have to finish it after all.

>>2162969
Please continue it! I loved your style.

>>2162977
Thanks!

>>2162694
I've continued to rough it out a little bit more.

This was tough because these characters dont have a lot of hair in their face so I'm having a hard time with the face to forehead ratio

critique or help would be much appreciated

>>2162999
Guy you replied to here. Would you mind returning the favor by giving feedback to me?

>>2163010
Sure, this you?
>>2162230
I'm not very good at critiques but
I think her upper thighs might be abit too long towards the knees.

I apologize for such a weak review

>>2162694

>>2162638 here, would you (or someone) mind red lining it? sometimes after facing it for so long I've turned eye blind to its imperfections.

>>2163041
Dunno if this helps since I'm bad with redlines, but something that helps is flipping the canvas horizontally. It helps you to see the imperfections.

>>2162638
I just love this
Great work on the details, just lobelt work all around, really keeps you looking and appreciating. But, i don't find her sexy at all. I find the painting sexy but not the girl, if that makes sense. Her face feels awkward and stiff like a mannequin's. How about some bedroom eyes, or something. I think it's mostly her eyes that seem dull.

I think the right is much stronger than the left, kinda obvious i guess since it has more interesting elements and a more natural looking pose.

On the left one. I think her left hand's thumb is a little weird looking.

Again,beautiful work i wouldnt mind seeing more from your portfolio if you have more.
Sorry for any mistakes im on mobile.

>>2162638
The faces look pretty awful, but I like how you rendered her clothing.

>>2162932
Why is there a hand up her colon?

>>2163090
Quick sketch of >>2162628, but with the head leaned back. But never noticed it until you mention it.

>>2162438
>>2162450
>>2162617
>>2162445
Th-thanks, guys

>>2162544
Oh man, I can't today, I have to step out but I appreciate the offer, senpai. I'll join next time

>>2162694
>mouth
You know that's what I was actually going for. That stupid looking grin.

>>2162999
The eyes are far too close together on both of them, also one on stage right has an enormous forehead. I get that you were trying to do perspective but it doesn't completely read that way to me.

WIP Sketch for my current commission.
I think I made the pose a ted too "intricate". Don't mind the chaos with all the details, n stuff. I'm going to fix the line-weight tuding inking.
I Iwas wondering If I can sell the pose, or is the bottom girl's spine too bent?

I asked my art teacher what to do to get over an artist's block. He told me to draw what I HATE the most.
Not just what you find boring or annoying, but what hurts your eyes.

So pic related came out. My antifetishes.

I feel very light now. Drawing is very easy if you don't give a shit about what comes out. I can keep drawing for hours and hours because I'm not ruining my most private dreams and fantasies.

I guess I'll just give up on drawing what I like. It hurts too much to try so hard and seeing the end result looking like an insult to my fantasies.

>>2162948
>>2162958
Excelent advice, /b/rothers.

>>2163270
>StevenUniversefanart.jpg
Saved for reasons beyond my comprehension. Someone should post it on tumblr and watch em go wild.
That's some solid advice from your teacher btw. It's just to get you to practice, you'll be better by the time you feel like going back to drawing shit you like.

>>2163270
That image is [TRIGGERING] me, so I guess that means success.

>>2163042
Mirroring it is something I've done so much that I don't "see" mistakes anymore, which is why I'm asking /ic/ for help and advice.

>>2163086
>>2163080

Thanks, faces are by far my weak point. It's something I want to improve on, if there's recommendations (and red lines) on how to fix it, I'd love to hear them.

For portfolio, this is the first daki I've drawn, and I'd like to continue doing lewd art because it's pretty fun.

May I ask who lobelt is?

>>2162948
Sorry if I'm being dense, could you explain where in particular?

>>2163320
Not him, but probably the pubic hair.

One issue I have with your piece is that all the things in your picture look like it's made from the same material. The metals don't feel metallic, the gloves don't feel silky, the bedsheet don't feel it's made of cloth. Everything looks doughy.

>>2163325
The commissioner specifically requested old-school pubes. You're right on the materials, though. I'll work harder.

>>2163270
>I asked my art teacher what to do to get over an artist's block. He told me to draw what I HATE the most.
Not just what you find boring or annoying, but what hurts your eyes.

This is one of the greatest and suprisingly logical things I've ever heard. Thank you anon and thank you anon's teacher

>>2163090
she likes a good fisting, what's so wrong with that?!

>>2163241
the bottom bitch sorta has no cranium

how about some powerrangers merging action?

>>2163270
>I asked my art teacher what to do to get over an artist's block. He told me to draw what I HATE the most.
>Not just what you find boring or annoying, but what hurts your eyes.

Well shit. This makes so much sense I feel like an idiot for nothing thinking of it.

Trying to learn how to make fappable art but none of my drawings are ever arousing to me. How do you guys study porn to make erotic art?

>>2163498
No matter how much I try, I don't see it.

>>2163515
>not putting the black one as the dick

>>2163540
Most likely this is due to being a normal fag, not the original anon. but your planes are fucked up for the faces.. this problem comes up from time to time when drawing cartoons only all the fucking time..

>>2163564
I personally think the faces are the minor problem of this illustration when it comes to perspective.
I can't take you seriously when you redline the faces (which don't in a way that doesn't help and forget about all the obvious anatomical problems (especially the shoulder and upper back areas my illustration has). Now that I slept over it, I see where the errors are. Thanks anyway.

>>2163564
I personally think the faces are the minor problem of this illustration when it comes to perspective.
I can't take you seriously when you redline the faces (in a way that doesn't help me since I can barely understand what you are trying to correct) and forget about all the obvious anatomical problems (especially the shoulder and upper back areas) this pose has. Now that I slept over it, I see where the errors are. Thanks anyway.

>>2163569
Nigga plz, I don't have time to fix all of your shit, nor do I give a shit whether you can take me seriously.

I was responding to support the one anon who hit you with a crit.

>>2163270
SU crowd will love this

>>2163570
Never said you should fix it, neither I buy the fact that you are competent enough to be able to do it. I simply said you are overly analyzing stuff that isn't the major problem of this illustration.

>>2163584
Heh, not replying to your arrogant ass, just making sure other anon doesn't think he's the one who's blind.

Just cause you can draw anti gravity tits or spot that shoulder's fucked doesn't make you good btw.

>>2163592
I still think what you redlined doesn't fix the cranium problem, since it doesn't have anything to do with the perspective of the face.
Also, not trying to be arrogant. I'm just replying in tone with your redline.

>>2163290
>May I ask who lobelt is?
lol that was just a terrible typo. I meant to say "lovely".

Regarding faces, I think part of what makes the eyes seem dull is the way they are stylized: the thickness of the top eyeline is nearly the same thickness as the outline around the iris, and together with the white highlight, it has the effect of making the pupil pop less and flattening the whole eye and making it look painted on, as on a doll. I think it helps to think more of the eyeball and where they are on her head. However, your eyes have a distinctive almost boxy shape that I find very pleasing and I think you can find a way to make it all work while keeping that sweet style.

As for the other facial features, I don't see much issue. I think the left one has a prettier nose and the right one has a prettier mouth. and it's clear you are striving to capture subtle things such as slight puckering of the lips, which I think sets you apart from other artist who paint these types of things.

Same thing happening in the right picture with her right hand. What you did with that pinky digging into her thigh is just beautiful, please keep that up.

OK as for the left picture, left hand. I found a reference through some quick googling, not perfect but it may help a bit. The main issue I saw is the connection between the thumb and the rest of the hand, that flappy piece of skin. And maybe the length of the thumb. I think the relevant angles from the ref are the center and maybe bottom left.

>I'd like to continue doing lewd art because it's pretty fun.
lewd art any art, you are doing awesome work!
Srry for wall of text.

>>2163241
bought some colored pencils, and replaced the normal pencil with a pink one, and A3 papers instead of A4

HOLY SHIT SUCH A LEAP IN JUST ONE DAY AND WHY DO I LOVE SO MUCH DRAWING WITH PINK?

>>2163697
forgot to say..i know it's not shaded, i only want to know if the overall anatomy is ok

>>2163702
It's more soothing to the eye plus you lose sight of the subtle construction/sketch lines, which are a lot more prominent if you use darker colors.

>>2163703
His dick is fucken weird yo

>>2163270
one mans trash....

>>2163554
i always though the whit ranger was the biggest dick. but i have not seen that show in probably 15 years.

>>2163725
well, he's an alien. other than that, is it ok?

>>2163804
I would fix the anatomy in general (adding/deleting details), specially if he's an alien with a muscled man body.

>>2163855
He's meant to be a bit pudgy round the middle, but now that I look at it I probably should have put some more details on his abdomen - fat folds and such

>>2163241
i like the intensity, but bottom girls head looks malformed and it's too big! Also, top futa's peen looks like it's coming out of her stomach, but I think it can be solved if you just angle it upwards a lil' bit more.

>>2163270
That is the most Tumblr porn I have ever seen!!

Fixed some issues with the anatomy and perspective. I'm trying to save the composition by adding an interesting background. Not really sure how.

Critiques? Im especially looking for lighting critiques. If you need me to post just the line art then I have that too.

>>2163972
The cat girl on top should be holding the dragon (?) girl's tail.

>>2163872
Ah yeah, now i noticed the pudgy. I thought it was an Incubus, hence I suggested the muscles.

>>2163972
will I ever get close to your skill level, bbc?

>>2163320
im not going to bother telling you
requesting the redline where the guy literally redraw the whole artwork because theres way too much shit thats wrong with it

>>2161576
thanks, she's supposed to have skintight-ish skirt, idk what they're called

slow progress.

I'm still working on this pic. No idea if I should add a "window light" or not. Its a quick rectangle to simulate the window, btw.

>>2164179
its already fucked in the anatomy department.
stop

>>2164194
So I'm not the only one who's tired of seeing the same shit posted over and over with barely any progress?

>>2164226
>>2164194
Sorry for the spam. You're pretty right, guys. I'll re-draw it from zero in this case since its boring me as well.

Could I get some critique on this in terms of form and depth?

>>2159250
its not the worst but its not very good, continue working on anatomy and proportions, try copying poses n proportions from pictures of real people and work off of that.

I feel the legs odd, but I cant really come out with the correct position.

>>2163972
the perspective is off on that cat girls leg (lower part) and the drago girl doesnt look like shes touching the wall at all like that, might wanna rethink that

>>2164411
adding to my double dubs
the cat girls right boob (stage left) looks a bit big, and wheres the other leg of the dragon girl and the other arm of the cat girl?

>>2163972
>>2163972
Could you squash her face against the wall?

>mfw someone made a patreon crawler and posted it on /furi/

I'm spending way too much time on this illustration. :S

>>2163976
Don't be afraid to use contrast. Stretch the values more.

>>2164160
Don't just throw textures as a substitute for real texture. It's getting close to pillow shading too.

>>2164387
Seems fine to me, you could use a stronger gesture with her foot stepping straight on the bed or something
but it will end up looking like some greek god statue, this is nice and subtle i think.

>>2164436
horse dicks arm pit looks wonky. Ms Plant lady's body looks funky.

sorry for the quality

>>2164436

How do you do your line art?

>>2164679
Not really sure what you are asking me. What kind of tools do I use? Manga Studio and a customized ink brush.

>>2164436
tumblr or alike?

>>2164528
>Don't just throw textures as a substitute for real texture. It's getting close to pillow shading too.
I kinda see that but this way is faster for what I want to do I think, since I'm not only going to work on this one piece and I think softly illuminated rooms works better for VN's. Tho there are few things that looks odd to me and I can't put my finger on it, probably the contrast between environment and the characters.

>>2164690
bbc-chan on tumblr

>>2164654
gallery?

>>2164436
Finished lineart.

>>2164983
I'm so jelly

My anatomy is so trash right now

>>2163697
I have no words and I must comment.

>>2164983
I wish I had your ability.

>>2165080
This has personality though. Keep on truckin'

>>2165130
i see what you did there

Are there any books/tutorial series that i can watch to get jump started with hentai esque shit?
Or should i just copy shit from real porn and claim it as "Orginal pern pls support me on patreon"?

>>2165241
>Loomis

but seriously, knowing anatomy is critical. Normal stuff you may be able to hide shortfalls by clothing and armor and accessories and shit, but porn is mostly naked and any shortfall becomes incredibly obvious.

>>2165249
>knowing anatomy is critical

You can get by with shit anatomy knowledge in porn, easy. It happens all the time. You just need to draw convincing TnA. It doesn't even have to be correct, just convincing to the untrained eye. Porn consumers don't have an eye for that shit and they just praise polished turds, see Slugbox.

>>2165249
>implying drawing convincing clothing, armor, and accessories is easier than just naked bodies

That's not how this works. There is a reason life drawing sessions start you out drawing nude people, anon.

>>2165272
I'm saying people who have anatomy inadequacies hide them in clothing.

I drew it for the tuba guy on /b/, didn't quite hit the spot. Ideas?

>>2165273

People who have anatomy inadequacies hide them through stylization. It happens in both porn and normal stuff. Clothing isn't the crutch.

>>2164983
Pretty nice. Something about the catgirl's expression was lost during the transition from >>2164436 to the final inks though. Personally preferred the former, but that's just me. I think it deals with the way you altered her eyes specifically.

>>2165301
I wanted to give her more of an orgasmic stare.
Anyway I finished it, but I'm not very happy with the cat's face/head.

>>2165263
>Slugbox
>bad
/ic/

>>2165624
>Slugbox
>good
shit taste.

>>2165624
>>Slugbox
>>bad
>/ic/

I can understand fans defending slugbox but actual artists?
What the fuck.
Require some standards, my friend.

>>2165635
*acquire

Why not.

I know the head is at a weird as fuck angle, an likely to redraw the whole situation again, but before I do, thought Id ask for critiques.

>>2165640
Her skull has to be elongated like your alium for the back half of that cat ear to be attached to anything.

>>2165596
>orgasmic stare
Close the eyes a bit more. Nobody orgasms with their eyes open, at least not like that.

Catgirl's mouth has something weird going on with the mouth corners. Due to the trickle of blood on the left side and the crease on the right, it looks like she is sticking out her tongue. Actually through most of your drawing process that's what I thought was going on.

In any case, good job. I loved seeing how you worked on it and it all came together.

>>2165640
Well hello there /wst/ pal, nice seeing you here.

Check out the archives, DLFG had something to say on the anatomy of the tyrannid, I don't know if you already corrected it?

Agree with >>2165651
that something with her ears doesn't work.

>>2165651
>>2165704
I suppose that far ear doesnt slope quite right, ill fix that.

And yeah, something about five plates on the gaunt's head, certainly! Just thought Id see if there was anything else of note.

>>2165730
It's actually the close one that bothered me.

Any crits? Mostly interested in plane tones and lighting.

>>2165596
Ur awesome!

>>2165734
Considering lightning, can't find much wrong with it, only thing is her right arm . The part on the bed is hidden by her body so catches no light whatsoever. It needs to be darker.

>>2165730
>>2165733
Yes, it's the close one. To attach like that she'd need to have a really, really long skull.

>>2165734
DICKS ARE COMING OUT OF THE GOD DAMN WALLS

>>2165738
>>2165733
Fair enough, though the more I look there so much to fix. So going atit at another angle. Of course, super incomplete though surely not without plenty of its own problems already.

>>2165800
I don't think there is that much to fix tbh. Just work on the ear and textures on the tyrannid and you'll be fine for your previous pic.

Don't give up on us! Wst loves some tyrannid lewds.

>>2165734
It really feels great when prise comes from someone who draws such hot stuff.
Really dig the expression (her face is freaking adorably hot), the perspective and tones.

>>2165736
True, thanks.
>>2165751
These wil be some kind of draperies.
>>2165879
Ty, love ur Horo pics.

Anyone got a tutorial on how to draw cum

not how to color it, how to actually draw it. Just can't get the shape and feel right.

>>2166006
It's all about the line weight. Thinner (fast) lines are used for stretched out less dense portions, where the heavy lines build lumps, thicker and more dense parts.

>>2166010
what about shape and trajectory

>>2165884
9/11 would fap. Keep up the great work, anon.

>>2159244
Why the Fuck did you censor the dick?. Their is enough jap censors already. Stop that shit

>>2159247
Knees

>>2166170
Why does censoring trigger you anon? The implications and most of the visuals are still there. Why do pixilated dicks trigger you?

>>2166170
He didn't draw it, dumbfuck.

>>2166162
9/11

was

a

bang

Thoughts on this sketch?

>>2166272
I thought the dick on left girl's head was a hat at first

trying to draw furshit without understanding anatomy, perspective and volume is hard...

any feedback would be mostly welcome

>>2166390
I just wish there was something that was like 1. Do this a bunch of time, then 2. Do this a bunch of times, etc. manner of learning anatomy and form, I just feel retarded because nothing is sticking for me

>>2166401
i know that feel unfortunately too well

>>2166404
In the mean time, I just put crappy skeletons over reference poses and then use that as a guideline and still struggle to make a decent pic from it

>>2165884
I wish cocks would just come out the walls at me like that.

>>2166581

My fucking dick. 1000/10. Please more skanks.

>>2166585
lmao

>>2166589
>>2166590
First I thought it was because of the sketchy nature of the first images, but now I see your line weight is pretty boring in the finished pieces too. I guess it's a style choice. You should make better style choices.

>>2166601
Yeah, idk why but i actually do struggle to draw with varied line weight

>>2166605
Well, your work is hot and varied none the less, plus the coloring makes this "issue" not that important. But, yeah, I'm sure just a tad more varied line-work would make a huge improvement.

>>2166272
Did you have a reference for this? The anatomy looks very uncomfortable. The arm held up could not bend like that, look as where the other shoulder (of the one on her knees) is, the held up arm attaches too far behind her head.

>>2166390
Head: ok
arms:ok
torso/stomach: can't see much but okay I guess
Tail: i think you need to imply that there is some volume from the tail behind the buttocks. Here it's just as if he lies flat. Raise the entire hips just a little bit
legs: your shortning on the one in the direction of the viewer isn't good. Other leg had a problem with the knee and foot, they don't bend in accordance with each other. If II hide the foot it works though.

Practising furry: easy enough, go to a zoo and draw. Mostly animal heads since most of them are animal head + humanoid body + tail
For the general body, you can do torso+hips from porn movies. Just watch one you like and go ahead.

>>2166116
Common fluid dynamics. RL experience ftw.

>>2166590
>12.50%

how big is the originial resolution? and do you ever work fully zoomed in at 100
%

>>2166581
ive read it all in scottish accent.

>>2159229
Your drawing has diabetes

>>2166708
is that a good thing or a bad thing?

>>2166709
>2003+12
>diabetes being a good thing

>>2159229
top left corner. wtf is that

>>2166690
thanks for the tips, i didnt notice how the foot on the distant leg was fucked up.

one thing i was really unsure of how to draw was the neck, so i just hid it in fur, but this gives me trouble in general, underviews of head/how the neck should connect..?

>>2166723
supposed to be a window

>>2166726
>embossing 101

>>2166726
The yellow shading on the undies makes them look a bit dirty.

>>2166726
the linework feels just too sterile, also get some more interesting colors, those look like they came from the MS paint default pallet

>>2165263
No rules just tools, porn is all about FEELING the moment rather than just clinical rendering.

>>2166758
>porn is all about FEELING the moment
>arguing feelings

You sound like a tumblrina. I don't give a shit about your sex deprived feelings. Shit art is shit art. Slugbox's work is shit, but that's not surprising considering he doesn't care about actually being good. He already has a fanbase of grown adults who still act like they are teenagers who've never seen a vagina in person, like most popular internet artists.

>>2166780
>tumblrina
>not based villpu

Sounds like someones porn got more likes than your shitty oc and it's left you with a bad case of the salted butthole.

>>2166743
I just found a color palette and using it for this project, I still don't have great composition/color/value understanding but working on it. Tho right now this'll be finished after I'm pleased with the hair.
>>2166739
I think I need to correct my color profile, was using another monitor to check colors and everthing is bit different on this one.
>>2166730
All and all it should work for the scene.

>new commission
>awwwshitnigga
>it's my waifu being penetrated by filthy tentacles with a diaper fetish
why

>>2166801
now im curious, can i see the palette please?

>>2166804
Mind posting it?

>>2166806
its this

http://scruffyscribbler.deviantart.com/art/358-copic-color-set-for-Manga-Studio-5-390745445

>>2165596
Looks really great! Did you do it all digitally, from sketch to line work?

Sorry for having no finished drawings to post atm.
There are so many characters who have surprisingly little porn made of them in the internet. Charlotte is one of them.
Especially the picture I used as reference, which I'm sure many of you recognize.

>>2164436
These are excellent god damn I love how 3d these feel.

>>2161711
What do you use for the line art? I've been struggling with this and feel like once I get the line art down the rest will come easy.

redrawredrawredrawredraw

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>>2166989
>>2166989
>>2166989

>>2166553
Just move to San Francisco.

>>2162999

nice tingle

>>2159124
Too many lines on top of lines man. It's impossible to see what's going on here. Be less afraid of drawing a definitive pose or gesture, maybe start with a simpler skeleton to make that easier.

I think you made a mistake by adding facial features so early on in the sketching progress. You're getting too attached to them and make bad compromises on the pose, just to preserve the details you like. As far as I'm concerned, the head should be a feature-less skull-shaped blob until the pose and gesture is set in stone.

>>2166586
Bruv, ya gotta gimme your blog.