/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

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cyclops princess

might finish it later

cyclops princess

might finish it later

>>2150519
Which one shall I draw?

>>2150598

>>2150519
rorringu

>>2150588
>>2150682
I want you both to look at and draw your left hand 100 times but first I want to thank you both for contributing. I like the colors cyclops guy, and it's good that you sign some of your completed stuff lamia dude because you'll want to look back on it later when you're on Dave Rapoza's level getting your wing-ding waxed by west african women

>>2150711
Da fuck is wrong with dat nigga tho fam smh

Last thread's After-the-lock

rollin

Fuck, posted in the old thread. Anyway, I rolled for goblin princess a few threads back. Have my 2 attempts. Rolling for new princess, crit on these 2 is welcome.

>>2151267
Those are some small-ass disembodied skulls fam, also keep in mind the eye is in a socket thing towards the front of the face, as you've drawn them they almost look the same as they'd appear from the front.

>>2151267
Keep goin' though bruh. Believe in you're are self

Bad coloring is bad

>>2151297
Don't just call out your coloring, you need to work on your drawing too. Did you do that in mspaint though? Color me impressed that you stuck it out with that at the very least.

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>>2151260
Updated. Highlights and blending.
I still can't figure out a palette for the ship, generic yellow + silver for machinery pops out way too much and other colours look ridiculous. Will keep on experimenting.

>>2151411
>ship
I thought it was the top of a tower or something when you'd first posted it

>>2151411
The base of the neck of the sad head looks odd to me. It's like her spine is almost bending 90 degrees... it is making a really sharp curve

long time lurker first time poster... i changed her hair, i hope that is acceptable

>>2150519
Oupa oupa

>>2151411
Done for now, probably gonna move on.
>>2151468
Thanks for pointing that out. It isn't perfect but it was a good learning experience.
>>2151491
Love the pose, m8

>>2151491
>i changed her hair, i hope that is acceptable

How... DARE you? You did pretty good here m8. very nice sketch

>>2151553
I like it

(but I still don't get it, lol).

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we rollin

>>2151666
...so am i supposed to draw one of the monsters or the mega-princesses or one of both?

>>2151669
You flip a coin and draw either one of the mega-princesses or one of the beasts, Satan.

>>2151670
>satan cause 666 meme
this isn't /b/

>>2151684
>lighthearted joke found on most boards
>this isn't /b/

Stop taking yourself so seriously.

>>2151666
God DAMN

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ParUJ9Ll7dk

>>2151670
If he rolled the trips he can choose, but the characters are unlocked for the thread for the rest of us, we just have to flip for it if we want, kind of like the "Community Service panel

>>2151684
>mfw

>>2151687
>rolled satan
>i can choose either one

can i choose both?

>>2151697
>can i choose both?

Yeah boi!

Roll

>>2151684
It's a joke, cunt, don't get your knickers in a twist.

>>2151707

Not so happy princess

Rolllllll

>>2151735
>tfw trying to look at your picture

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TptGx8QrqrY

>>2151751
Here's a Nomad Princess WIP! ALMOST rerolled, glad I didn't tho because she turned out to be fun to draw.

>>2151760
Awesome linework and shading, I like this! As a small critique I'd check the angle of the nose though, it seems a little off.

Rollin

>>2151760
very lovely work, I feel like the nose might be tilted towards the viewer to a greater degree it should ever so slightly, though. Looks pretty good though playa.

>>2151764
>>2151768
Thanks for the crit, guys! Does this look any better?

>>2151771
woah sorry for the super big file, yikes.

>>2151771
I think so. It's kind of hard to tell though, lol.

;l
;l

>>2151771
?

Are Nomad and Merchant Princesses related?

>>2151771
That is just beautiful.
It makes me self-concious about how bad my doodles of Nomad Princess I've made in the last week are.

>>2151868
Nomads needn't be merchants.
Nomad Princess seems to be based on Bedouins while Merchant Princess is clearly not-Jewish.

>>2151868
Yo, what if ALL the princesses are related?

>>2151892
They're related through marriage with Sir Ace the knight.

rolling

I am extremely embarrassed about this pic as it is bad even for a quick sketch. How do I fix it?

If I am going to post gay shit to my blog it might as well be good gay shit.

>>2151687
what's the whole pic of that?

>>2151874
Thank you! Don't feel bad though, I'm sure your drawings are great!

>>2151825
I'm not sure what's different in this redline, other than that you made the brows thicker and stylized the eyes differently? Redlines are kinda hard for me to work with unless there's an explanation with them.

Anyway, here's the finished version! Kind of sloppy but whatever. :0

>>2152097
Very pretty!

>>2151267

Witch princess. I need to do more gesture drawing, all of my poses suck. Rolling for new princess though. Gotta keep workin.

>>2151271

Yeahhhh they're super tiny. I guess I didn't think about them as much. Eyes from the side are weird, I guess I should stop making the 'muh style' excuse and lern 2 draw.

>>2151926

Well first of all, unless she's supposed to be a trap princess too, deal with that crotch area. Yeah, I know the labia are exaggerated to be sexy in shots like this, but you took it too far.

Not confident enough to redline, but the torso looks too short and head is too big. You'll want to look up some shoulder and arm anatomy too. Try looking at Sycra's videos on youtube. If you already know how to draw a bit they're very helpful.

roll rollu °˖◝(0▿0)◜˖°

>>2152340
>unless she's supposed to be a trap princess
I forgot you guys don't have the bios (I usually hang out at /tg/ and /twgrl/).
Nomad Princess "Has a sweet bulge; is male". Sorry.

>>2152590
Gay. Good thing we don't care about the canon here ayy.

>>2152596
You probably won't like this doodle either then.

>>2151902
progress so far.

I saved this pic ages ago. How is it different to the OP?

>>2153158
Disregard, I'm blind

(totally not a thinly veiled re-rolling)

Rollin'

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Skeleton princess is sweet

>>2151666
>>2151697
progress report. went so slow because i was so tired of work. any feedback welcome

>>2153341
Siiiick

>>2153337
very modest goblin princess

>>2153341
....... Is her shoulder dislodged or is her elbow awfully short? Gorgeous other than that, even if the pink fullbody spandex makes her look skinny (or is that her skin?)

>>2153392
make her do something, thats stiff as fuck.
also shoulders dont work like that, think of anatomy bro
you would be much better off thinking in rhythm even in a simple pose like that.

>>2153404
yeah..well i was going to do something with the legs but it didn't work out so i pretty much gave up

gonna try to draw an interesting pose for jester princess this time

>>2153392
While that anon is right it looks pretty stiff and there are a couple other problems, I am stiff too because that is some cute shit good ups keep studyin' fam nigga g dawg

>>2153158
Amazon all the way

>>2153425
Thanks dawg i will

>>2153359
>thanks!

>>2153399
i'm not done with her elbow yet, her arms are supposed to start from that diamond-shaped armor piece, and continue on to a reaching pose. thanks for the input though.

also, yes it's most likely skin. she's supposed to be purple-skinned, rite?

...r-rite?

>>2153705
>she's supposed to be purple-skinned, rite?
Comparing the Dullahan and Primeval princesses, I'd beg to differ (Primeval's originally a fusion of Dullahan+Sword+Arcane) - but hey, that's your interpretation and it actually looks good, so I say keep at it. Maybe if you feel like it later you may do a practical armor version. Keep it up nonetheless, it's lookin' good!

Princess Dusk elf is waifu next to border general and knight princess. Criticism welcome.

>>2153154
stuck, not sure how to continue

>>2153934
>scars
>katar knife instead of kunais
>refine thigh positioning, especially right one (your left)
>net leggings
you're welcome

rolling

idk how to horse

>>2153767
>>2153341
>so focused on this piece, forgot everything else
>forgot to save
>fell asleep
>windows pulled a "scheduled auto-update" on me
>woke up with a rebooted laptop and no save point
>mfw

at least i still can trace from the screenshots, although in lower res :')

>>2153934
add lines, you ain't gonna render that shit buddy

love these threads and i'd love to add to it, but i feel like i'd be a waste until i get better.

>>2153513
qt again tho

>>2153920
Muh neck, nigga!

>>2154029
It's k, but I think her head might be a bit too big. relative to her body. Also a lot of the lines on her (human) body seem to just be arbitrarily slapped on and don't appear to follow the real anatomical landmarks.

>>2154032
Holy shit that sucks dude. Good thinking though goddamn

>although in lower res :')

Blowing up the image to the desired work size and just treating the disgusting artifact-riddled result as you would a rough would work pretty well I imagine. You could also leave a smaller copy to better observe the details as they fit into the whole as well. Keep going dude it's looking gr8 m8

Minotaur Princess. (so far)

>>2154081
Looking good mane.

Roly poly.

>>2154081
head looks a bit off, you should fix the face proportions man. avoid having her look like a pinhead with gigantic hair.

other than that, smashing job.

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rollin'

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lamia princess WIP

I'm having a hard time with her head, any help?

>>2154161
her head and the rest of the body feel disengaged. like, either she should be sitting up straighter or her head should be naturally lower. right now it feels like the excorcist-level discombobulation

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>>2154163
Ugh I have this problem in a lot of my figures :( 80% of the time they look unattached. I guess I should study the head/neck area more.

>>2154099

>>2154199
You better have done the work out nigga or so help me...

Anyway as far as criticism goes the worst offender I'm seeing is the proportions; they're not exaggerated enough to be obvious or appealing so I can only assume you made a boo boo nigga. The male upper body ideally is 4 heads tall, you're at about two and a half it appears. Keep working man you'll get there.

>>2154174
welp :/
wasn't expecting to draw a furry. The shading especially is kinda ugh.

/ROLL/

>>2150519
relel

>>2150519
Rollin

Roll???

>>2150519
Rollie pollie

>>2154261
the shading is quite decent IMO, but you gotta fix the hands man, it'll make your work like 2-3x better than its current state. look up cat paws on google and go from there. studying cloth folds might help too.

>>2154336
Not too bad for using fingers on iPad i guess

rollin!

>>2154039
just contribute your shit, it's the best way to get better.

roll for more princesses

>>2154402
Yeah boi

>>2153513

Attempting pixel art..I have no idea what to do with the head though (and how to shade it)

Riggidy roll

Give me moth princess. I DESERVE moth princess.

>>2154868
just do whichever one you want and say you rolled it on random.org (which is how everyone should roll anyway)

>>2154868
tough luck, witch princess. you're gonna have to make do.

>>2154869
You subversive son of a...

>>2154754

Done, can't color it sadly so I did what I could

>>2154930
Oy vey, what a cutie

(need loomis tho)

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rollerino

roll inbound

>>2153972
Thank you
but nah fuck katar knifes. The Kunais stay.

>>2150519
rollin

>>2155878
imma do rabbit princess, wizard master and satyr princess. wish me luck

>>2150519
Hey OP,

Why don't you add the new princesses into the world map? Like instead of Assassin princess being 01 & 02, make her just 01, and make a new princess 02. Same with the other princesses with multiple numbers.

This new OP isn't random enough and relies on us to choose a section to roll and to top it off, there's more coin flipping now.

Might be why the threads have been dying even after the introduction of new princesses.

>>2150519
roll

>>2156000
rerollin

>>2155912
I dunno this one's going a bit faster than the last one. The changes have all been relatively incremental up to this point with the exception of the last two ops so I was kind of pressed for what I'd do to keep things "interesting". Maybe I have gotten too silly with the meta though after all. I-I thought people liked coin flips!

>>2156001
Why would you reroll TRIPS?! D:

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k

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fuck it i'm going to sleep

rull

>>2156013
i like coin flips. keep it.

>>2156360
Arrrrl-righty then!

>>2156360
that's a convinving pirate 'princess' right there.

>>2150519
roolang

*dices rolling*

>>2154052
>>2154032
well, here's what i can pull off for the meantime. will refine it soon. now is bedtime.

>>2156603
Thas tight. The sword's pommel looks a bit fugged though and I'm left wondering where the feet at tho.

>>2156606
yeah i know,i didn't say it was final though, just too excited to share i guess

also i suck at feet. would you doodle a decent boot shape for a fella anon?

>>2156608
I-I...can't (I'm at work on a microsoft surface tablet) fug...it's looking good though man keep it up

rawl

>>2156535

That's all for now.

>>2156641
Dat pronation tho'

>>2156631
sorry for how terrible this is

>>2152331

Imp Princess! I know her head is too big, but what else is wrong? Legs too short? I dunno. Rollin rollin and maybe I'll try to color some of my old ones.

>>2150519
p

>>2156668
Seems a bit flat, mate.

>>2156662
>>>2156809
It's pretty good, you just gotta work on the face.

>>2150519
i've always wanted to try this

Roll

>>2156861
sorry for weeaboo tier art. open to any critiques

>>2150519

fuck it
roll

>>2156646
Is that good or bad... ?

>>2156013
I agree, it seems better if it had more princesses in the world map, instead of so many of them seperated in dubs

>>2156662
hey, it's me, i'm rolling again

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>>2156999
There's only a couple in dubs. The other ones are in voluntary "sub-quest" sections that you can activate any time. Maybe that isn't explained well enough as they were all activated by dubs before this image.

>>2156662
The breasts seem too flat. Not "anatomically" but "visually" if you know what I mean. For how far they droop down they should certainly have some more mass behind them. They look like they've been stapled on.

>>2156668
I like it. The head is a bit big and I think would, if altered, would fix any other proportional problems.

>>2156922
2 qt

>>2157002

>>2156883
Don't know what to do with Sword Princess...

lets roll

>>2157035
And most of those sub-quests are activated when you get dubs, is what I meant. It doesn't really matter though, it can stay the same.

>>2157642
No they're not though, read the image bruh. It says 'any time'. You just have to do a goofy task of some sort

>>2157647
Also it's understandable if you didn't catch that, that area of the image is easy to miss because it didn't change until this thread.

>>2157070
Pretty solid, I feel like the stage left breast should overlap with her stage-right one a little more though. Following the natural center line of the sternum down the front of her body that's how it looks to me anyway.

rollin'

rollin

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>>2150519
waifu get

>>2156668

Rerolling because I just drew Witch Princess. Also I colored my Imp. I didn't fix the head since it's already inked and I can't do lineart in SAI. I prefer to write off my mistakes and move on to the next thing anyway though....anyone else like that?

>>2159097
>...anyone else like that?

That's the only way to be, it's important to know what went wrong with a piece before you move on though of course.

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rolling for animu grills

>>2159557

Wait so trips unlocks the good ones for everybody? can i cancel that roll or smthing?

I sphinx princess'd

>>2159664
sorry for my shit background i rushed this one hard.

>>2150519
rolling

>>2159560
Yeah man you really don't have to roll at all it's just the theme of the thread but you can do whatever you want honestly.

>>2159664
That you did! Berry qt.

>>2159669
Speaking of that background though you should look at adjusting the "spacing" on your brush so you don't get those big ass visibly separate marks like that as you see in the background.

rollo

>>2156223
rolling again

roll

here I go

>>2156641
Orc lady, got lazy as fuck though.

>>2160015
well, resolution's gone to shit with a screenshot.

>>2159975
ugh....

>>2160021
woops sorry that was meant for my post >>2159975

>>2160021
>>2160023
I don't understand. You're linking the same post.

>>2160024
oh.. was sure I linked another post by mistake. I need to sleep.

>>2159853
Super adorbs. Looks like she has a couple of fingers growing off of her finger though.

>>2160018
>dat /fit/

Muh dick. Damn fine work. I will say is that I feel like the shins and calf area definitely look like they were an afterthought, though!

>>2160021
>those hips

Holy sheeit

Raider, ghost, eldritch and froggy.

>>2160115

lovely works, liking the cleanliness and approach changes

>>2160115
Very Mignola, i love it!

>>2160021
oh my, what childbearing hips you have.

Roll

>>2160115
Mike Mignola please stay!

>>2160166
That's not the only influence either but either way it's a fantastic piece. If you haven't made it yet you're surely going to some day soon, keep it up bruh

>>2151666
>>2153341
>>2156603
>>2156617
i outdid myself.

>>2160174
Fantastic work. The pommel of the sword still looks tad off to me and I feel we should be able to see her stage left footsie slightly but regardless I really like it, the hair shape looks really cool and the image you've used really compliments it

>>2159853
another roll

>>2160235
Very cute, I love the lighting.

Bird Princess

>>2150519
ROLLLLLL

>>2160404
uh reroll....

amazon princess

>>2160216
thanks for the input man, lemme see what i can do about it.

now i shall reroll

i always roll but never post
check em

eeeh

>>2160562
kek, nice work

Eeeeeh roll !

rawlin

Rollin

roll

KAMEN RIDER ROLLAH

>>2160700
OH SHIT dubs.
I dont know who to choose.
Post ending in 5 chooses

>>2160710
I don't know either

>>2160710
any of the dragon chicks

>>2160663
Pirate princess

>>2160731
Lookin' good fam

>>2160731
already did imp princess, reroll

>>2160732
>fam

This shit needs to stop.

>>2160735
smh

>>2160174
Wondrous! Well done, anon :D Certainly turned out fantastic.

Hey /loomis/, do you happen to save most images here, be it in a personal fold or somewhere accessible? I can't help but mourn for the many artworks that eventually are lost to the void of 404...

>>2160848
>>>http://tower-girls.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=list

rolllllll

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>>2160855
Shameful as it is I only saved the submissions from the first thread, many have likely been lost as consequence-but a kind anon has been uploading most of them to the booru. Maybe I'll try and solicit people to post their old work in the next thread if they can't find it in the booru. Hopefully we'll collect a few that we may have missed.

>>2160863
I'm guessing you meant this guy >>2160855

>>2160865
Forgive the shitty phone pic, I'm too lazy to turn on my scanner. :P

>>2160933
That is tight fam ffs tbh smh etc.

>>2160937
I'm confused but flattered.

>>2150519
keep rollin rollin

>>2160933
Very nice, pretty, cute; I don't perceive any flaws. Keep it up braw!

>>2160235
roll again

>>2161338
This is so cute!! Nice job.

Quick question - do we have to roll to do any of the Community Service/Adventurer's Guild characters, or do we just pick whichever one we like and draw them?

>>2161377
It looks like you have to get Double or triple digits at the end.

Also Im rolling!

>>2161442
Fuck! 2 away from Kobold!

>>2161377
>>2161442
Nope. Look at the top of the image it says "any time", conversely if you get dubs it tells you to proceed to the Dubs Dungeon.

My feeble attempt at a princess.

Loomis shall smite me for my chicken scrathing and incompetence.

>>2161487
Could be way worse, just keep plugging away bruh.

>>2161444
I think those trips have earned you that Kobold tbh

>>2150519

NYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSS.

rollin

reroll

roll...

>>2161562
The button of the rib cage is a bit to wide for me.

>>2161338

rolling again

rolling

>>2161716
what's the "button of the rib cage" ?

here we go
on the tower girl
rollercoasta'

>>2161715
Really liking the way you did the face on this! Very pretty.

Also roooolllllllll

Rolling for laters

Fucking hell

>>2161715
Very well done-nice rendering! The nose appears to sag on the stage left side though.

>>2161767
Very cute gobbo.

>>2161855
Nice work.

>tfw no tripod-princess gf

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>>2161832
Imp princess! Again, sorry for the shitty quality haha
Also I wasn't sure what was behind Imp Princess' head. A braid? A drill? Something else? I went with the drill option because it seemed easiest to draw.

>>2162090
I'm a drill guy so I definitely approve of your decision. Keep it up!

roll

>>2162070
maybe ill finish this later, here's monkey princess

rollin

roll

>>2162109

beep boop

rolllll

>>2162171
Im in love with your style, keep it up bro

>>2162326
Not terrible, the super baloon animal arms and the super long leg needs work though.

>>2161767
final roll

>>2162443
image didn't show for some reason...

>>2162444
Nigga I love u

>>2162443
NOOOOOO~!

>>2162444
>>2160036
>>2160255
>>2161372
>>2161924
>>2162460
appreciate the comments thanks
this was fun, i'm definitely be coming back and finishing the rest of the princesses, thats it for now.
take care

rollin

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>people just copy the thumbnail
That's not the purpose of this challenge is it?

>>2162737
It is and it isn't. You can draw whatever but drawing the pre-existing character with different proportions, rendering it out and so on is the most popular. The designs are cute so why not? You're still practicing a variety of things like gesture, sketching and rendering in the end.

roll

>>2150519
maybe rolling?

rollin

reroll

Rollin

rollan

I, too, am rolling.

>>2162833
>Dubs
Neat. Have a MILF princess.

>>2162860
Too young, waifish, and small-chested to be a legit milf.

>>2162866
Darn, thanks for pointing those things out. Well, now I know what to watch out for next time I get to draw a milf.

>>2162860
HNNNNNNNNNNG~!

>>2162812
(Sorry)

>>2160174
Beautiful! I aspire to this greatness!

>>2162835
Goddamn I suck at drawing slime

>>2162444
d-does this mean i get to flip a coin too?

>>2162985
If you'd prefer!

>>2162998
Damn, that's one sassy golem

rollin

>>2162338
Thanks man!

>>2163024
real nice

>>2163061
thanks man

rollin

this princess was interesting but i got no patience for rendering
drawing the crotch bow and the neck bow as crystals was probably a mistake
¯\_(ツ)_/¯

New thread ( >>2163147 )

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>>2150519
Rool