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My personal Muscle Mangs Thread 2 Anonymous Wed Jun 3 00:32:21 2015 No.2108636 [Reply] [Original]

Last time I lost thread to unbump-monster. I will try upload more this time.

So yeah. since Muscle nude mangs are my first interest in art (second is cute stuff) I will try to draw some shitty at first but better at the end (with your critique and help ofc) muscle mang drawings.
So here we go with last steps of fresh art piece.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 3 00:32:49 2015 No.2108639 File: 514 KB, 3000x2141, Demong_mang.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2108636 1

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 3 00:33:21 2015 No.2108640 File: 580 KB, 3000x2141, Demong_mang2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2108639 2

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 3 00:33:53 2015 No.2108641 File: 765 KB, 3000x2141, Demong_mang3.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2108640

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 3 00:34:25 2015 No.2108642 File: 799 KB, 3000x2141, Demong_mang4.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2108641

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 3 00:34:57 2015 No.2108643 File: 622 KB, 3000x2141, Demong_mang5.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2108642 5

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 3 00:35:29 2015 No.2108645 File: 344 KB, 909x706, Demong_mang5-1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2108643 6

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 3 00:36:00 2015 No.2108646 File: 538 KB, 3000x2141, Demong_mang6.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2108645

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 3 00:36:32 2015 No.2108647 File: 675 KB, 3000x2141, Demong_mang7.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2108646

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 3 00:37:04 2015 No.2108648 File: 688 KB, 3000x2141, Demong_mang8.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2108647

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 3 00:37:38 2015 No.2108650 File: 2.30 MB, 3000x2141, Demong_mang9.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2108648

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 3 00:38:17 2015 No.2108652 File: 2.55 MB, 3000x2141, Demong_mang10.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2108650

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 3 00:38:18 2015 No.2108651 >>2108650 combo breaker

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 3 00:39:03 2015 No.2108653 File: 2.82 MB, 3000x2141, Demong_mang11.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2108652 next >>2108651 Also luol Also don't care

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 3 00:39:41 2015 No.2108654 File: 3.11 MB, 3000x2141, Demong_mang12.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2108653

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 3 00:40:22 2015 No.2108655 File: 3.00 MB, 3000x2141, Demong_mang13.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2108654 And a last for today that I finished not so long ago.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 3 00:41:37 2015 No.2108659 >>2108654 oh my god what am i looking at please stop.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 3 00:41:59 2015 No.2108660 >>2108655 yeah.. background dark cause I want to separate characters and back through rimlights.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 3 00:42:53 2015 No.2108661 File: 62 KB, 309x497, Nyashnota_pic_09.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2108659 So bad?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 3 04:55:59 2015 No.2108827 >>2108661 I'm not that guy but the guy who complained about your style of rendering (borderline pillow shading) and I still dislike it. The busy background made it even worse, there's no focal point now because everything is busy and such.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jun 3 04:58:45 2015 No.2108828 File: 6 KB, 173x200, a7bf55f28fc33b4ef5e8825a91198bf3.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>2108827 yeah. I noticed this too. Too much details around everything. Don't know what to do with it.

Anonymous Wed Jun 3 05:08:31 2015 No.2108835

>>2108828

I think, in the future, you should make it clearer where your lightsource is coming from and really push a starker contrast (notan) overall and between important and not important, to guide the eye to parts you want us to focus on. Right now everything is very saturated as well. In hte last thread someone gave you an excellent elaboration on my comment, look it up in the archives if you can't remember what they said.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jun 4 15:03:24 2015 No.2110269 >>2108655 You can detail this as much as you want, I'm not gonna fap to it until you fix that goddamn penis base

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 5 16:17:04 2015 No.2111388 File: 2.04 MB, 3000x2141, Demong_mang14.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Trying to fix some shit here.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 5 19:13:46 2015 No.2111595 >>2111388 Background looks much better! I think your colours are too saturated. Maybe try make some of the darker colours less saturated? Or the areas not in focus?

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 5 20:51:34 2015 No.2111694 >>2111595 Yeah I thought of it too, wanted to render skin like I always do without such saturation, but when I halving it - whole picture starts to be really greyed out. I'l try something in this direction still.

Anonymous Fri Jun 5 21:27:00 2015 No.2111727
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>>2111595
Also. I noticed that picture on my monitor in photoshop less saturated than when I'm seeing it in chrome. Actually the whole point of saturation is increased by browser.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jun 8 23:54:32 2015 No.2115035 >>2108636 The dark leg looks weird

>>	Anonymous Tue Jun 9 02:58:00 2015 No.2115248 >>2115035 I know lol. This drawing overall looks weird.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jun 9 07:20:58 2015 No.2115421 File: 520 KB, 900x675, LordDiablo.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] If anyone interested I'm drawing for blizzard contest. Will appreciate the critique and help. twitch /ivik_nier

>>	Anonymous Tue Jun 9 23:58:12 2015 No.2116500 Penis kills it

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