/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2063998
There's already a study thread, why didn't you just post this there?
Also this chick looks like an alien.

>>2063998
Holy fuck she's not cute lol

>>2063998
>that face

Well...That was fucked.

>>2064029
Did you actually sign that shit or am I seeing a wayward scribble?

>>2064032
I auto sign shit for no reason. It's a habit.

>>2064005
>>2064008
This is supposed to be somewhat humorous.

I'm very... very... Aware of her face. We have to practice unconventionalism though, huh?

>>2064037
Stop it, looks amateurish.
Your art will be recognised by your style

>>2063998

ayy lmao

I tried

>>2064029
>>2064020
>>2064073
>>2064078
things ic doesnt know how to do: measure

>>2064073
>>2064078

Common problem of probably every amateur artist in here: stop worrying about painting and color when your drawing sucks so much. Get VERY good at basic drawing, proportions and feature placement, then worry about moving on to value and color.

That bitch needs some Loomis, god damn

>>2064085
>quotes a post where someone took the photo and comically enlarged and shrinked the facial features

Are you blind or something?

>>2064085
>pointing out the photo that obviously wasn't a study
>thinking you know what you're talking about

>>2064050
Unconventional is fine. Why didn't you continue the study thread that was already going though, that's how they're supposed to work. In fact it would've been perfect in that one because it was unconventional too.

>>2063998
ayy lmao

did this in the less than 10minutes
could not grasp her weird eyes and somehow shifted her face too far to the right
she kind of looks black

>>2064880
>less than 10minutes

>>2064882
yeah probably

>>2063998

>>2064883
then dont post your garbage. everyone here can shit out a lame ass sketch in under 10 minutes as well

Difficult face is difficult

>>2063998
fashion illustration style

(not getting bored 30 seconds after starting to measure and half-assing a picture, not at all)

>>2063998
eyes are wacky...
and the face is hard, good practice tho

She needs Loomis

>>2065106

Pretty creative and fitting

>>2064103

>>2065081
Try flipping the image

It could have been worse. Need to work on proportion, hair, ears and overall everything.

>>2065188
I think you need to read that shit in chapter 4 of "drawing on the right side of the brain" if you haven't already and do the exercises, like drawing Picasso's Stravinsky upside down.

>>2063998
Hahaha

>>2065194
You kind of fixed her. Except for the neck.

>>2063998
this chick is called masha tylena, for those wanting more pictures of her. there are theories she has eyes that big because of chernobyl radiation.

>>2065232
>there are theories she has eyes that big because of chernobyl radiation.
She does have eyes that are slightly bigger than usual, but 80% of the effect is just make up, lighting, more make up and being told to keep her eyes wide open.

>>2065243

Her narrow face isn't helping that's for sure.

>>2065243
She's pretty. Reminds me of creepy-chan.

>>2065202
Implying there was something to be fixed to begin with

Reminds me of this.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RkZLl1CUT9s

is that steve buscemi?

Felt bad about the lined paper

Holy shit, this is hard. Finish this off later.

I tried.

>>2065327
She has those eyes. It makes her almost as charismatic.

Gave m'self 45 minutes. This was fun, good practice.

>>2066550
fuck, uploaded the biggun'...

got mad

>>2067315
good, it was going to be sub par at best

>>2067315
>expecting to be gud
just draw to have fun.
your agenda to be good will lead you only to ruin.
have fun.
do not expect to be good.
enjoy seeing progress.

>>2067333
i know right? absolutely disgusting that i cant even get a simple face shape right

>>2067343
anything less than good i cannot find acceptable

>>2063998
she looks like a poorly studied face

like what the average girl in hs would be able to draw

>>2067387
JOJO!

she looks like maisie williams, taylor swift, and carrie fisher mashed together

OP i thought you said the next study thread will be vehicles :c

>>2067653
>>2066687

>>2067628
this is it. thread is now closed, thank you for participating everyone

>>2063998

Fuck it. I can't do it.

quickie

Fuck, this study is slowly murdering me.

>>2067704
amazing

>Wandered off

>>2067739
>>2067808
Keep pushing

>>2067748
Best one so far in my opinion!

>>2067820
Nose mouth area is different, cheeks are too round

>>2067739
Try again, draw bigger and look at her face more like ...a furniture than a face!

Give up. My measuring skills aren't up to par.

>>2063998

I tried. I'm at the later phase of beginner/intermediate and having trouble with pure pencil technique and drawing two eyes correctly (I always get one eye right and the other wrong). I just can't grasp a good sense of pencil technique and it leaves a huge mess on my paper (nevermind the horrible right eye).

>>2068028

I think this one is the best so far when it comes to correct measurements.

>>2068273
>I think this one is the best so far when it comes to correct measurements.
Well thats only if that is what he was trying to study.
Lots of people here just seem to just be(badly) copying

-.-

don't have a scanner or a tablet so this.

>>2067820
It's rule 63 kakyoin

>>2068317
you made her better, good job anon

>>2068352
Lol her eye is fckd up man, but thanks

>>2068301

I'd like to see your take on this.

>>2068352

Still not a proper study, which is the point of this. She looks like an entirely different person.

>>2068892
>not a proper study
define proper study please
what if someone just want to study skin(or whatevr else besides measurement)?
is it accurate measurement the only way to study this or the only thing you can study from this i should say

>>2068999
The title of this thread is "Study dat face." The faces don't match, the study is a failure.

I can't even study human faces correctly, I'm not going to bother with this

hahaha those eyes man

>>2069029

What he/she said.

>>2069038

How often do you draw/study female faces? She looks a bit manly and I think that is 90% of your issue since it looks like you might get the measurements pretty accurate.

bootin

>>2069078

From a quick glance it tells me you nailed it.

>>2069078
Eyes are pretty much perfect, but the head in general is a bit thin.

Got bored when I remembered I can't draw and that it would take me hours to produce something merely mediocre.

>>2067748
Oh god please fix her hair.

>>2069045
>>2069029
No need to argue, even tho my study is failure, i cant progress without failures so thx fo yo feedbacks.
:P

>>2069038
took a break and fixed some proporton issues
>>2069047
>How often do you draw/study female faces
actually i draw them a lot haha. i drew this one but it was a quick doodle without paying attention to measurements a lot haha

>>2069133
No expert but, as per the other anon's complaint, I think maybe you need to soften the lines/make them less straight. Especially around the chin and brow areas.

meh

her face is so hard

>>2063998

I find myself getting bored half way through drawing a lot these days, is there anyway to motivate me to finish things

>>2069143

Aw, wasn't that much of a complaint. I was mostly curious.

>>2069133

Better!

>>2069197

Good! If I should point something out, her lips/mouth area is not very alike.

>>2067315
lmao

>>2069262
>>2069133
just realized i forgot to quote
> i drew this one >>2065194 *

Oof

>>2069287

>>2063998
What's wrong with your faaaace?

>>2065232
>theories
[citation needed]

I feel like I could sit there and work on this till my fingers fall off and nothing would change

>>2069264
Thanks! I will more attention to them next time.

>>2070415
*pay lol

>>2070086

Have you read Hampton? He has an excellent overview on facial proportions in his anatomy/gesture book. It helped me a lot.

>>2069287

I'm so sorry but this is hideous :'(

I was brave

>>2069478
Lol, exactly the face that came to my mind

>>2070615
Really? All I see is Cumbersnatch.

>>2070626
Dammit, you just switched that shit up on me. Can't unsee

>>2063998
idk it's just so weird when i try to make it more narrow

>>2064020
oh god

>>2070639

Overlay your lineart on the picture and you'll see where you went wrong.

>>2064020

>>2067704
10/10

>>2070570
Why does this look off?

ayy lmao

>>2070645

i did what you said, but i don't know. i think she really does have weird face proportions tho.

>>2067591
gay...

>>2068028
>>2068267
>>2067748
amazing

>>2069259
you may need to find something else you like to draw, or even do other activities so you don't get burned

>>2067704
i think i might know who you are

>>2070777
nice trips

and yes she does. thats no excuse tho

>>2070804
The third one is yours, isn't it?

3~4 hours.

>>2070880
The eyes are a little off

>>2070896
yeah, I tweaked at it a bit more.

>>2070902
Fixed the eyes now fix those brows

>>2070536
no,but I will, thanks

just realized I had my reference at 60% opacity, fuck. I'm too disappointed to correct it now so I'll finish it later.
around 2 hours, I'm pretty slow.

>>2070902
loving that nose man.

>>2070813
probably

>>2063998
Fuck this shit I'm out

>>2071219
It's off a bit porportionally and color-wise, but I like the rendering overall

>>2063998

>>2072022
i love this

>>2072022
beautiful.
>captcha: unizP

>>2069287
>>2069478
>File: Nicolas-Cage.jpg (148 KB, 800x1203)
how is this possible

Was nice to at least try. Getting back into art is rewarding even if I'm shit.

>>2070804

Thank you anon <3 you made me a little more confident today!

That face creep me out

>>2069133
got bored

>>2065106
lol are you serious? what the fuck is up with those lines?

This is hard

>>2072022
Perfect

w2c ayy lmao gf

>>2063998
ink brush practice

>>2072997
Is this Bendthedickt cumcumber

>>2073015
damnit lol. i should do pencil first then brush if its that bad.

>>2073015

bendytoots cuminmybutt

I can tell that she is from European descent.

>those cheekbones.

Holy cheese whats up with her eyes?

Why this chick look so weird

Here you go!..

Here you go

>>2073108
I think I'm sort of maybe figuring out how to do this.

>>2073363
More progress. Really don't wanna do the hair, I always have a hard time with hair. I know I need to bring the hairline down a little and I think the nose is a little big but mostly I think it's coming together.

>>2073134
kawaii

>>2063998
Her name is
Masha Tyelna

I found her in this slideshow
http://www.jolie.de/bildergalerien/markante-models-1720353.html

>>2074592

>>2074592
She looks like a really realistic doll in that picture.

>>2067343
thanks
I keep forgetting to have fun. Drawing seems to drain the energy out of me lately

>>2063998
Dude, this sucks because I just realized that I didn't make her face long enough. good face to study though

>>2074593
Funny how something so small, can make someone look so ugly and outright retarded.

>>2063998
I'm satisfied with my proportions and the way her face is slightly tilted to the right but that's it

>>2075614
I actually think there's a lot of likeness here.

.....had to finished it.

First time doing any type of study on this channel

>>2065109
The face is the size of your fucking thumb.

>>2065325
>>2065366
Holy crap why are you so much worse at ear placement than everything else

Is this any good? How could I improve it?
I've been staring at it for too long now so I might be missing something.

>>2084621
It looks skewed, as if head is being pulled to the top left. You can use image > skew to try to fix this if u r using photoshop. Or try it manually for challenge.

>>2084656
My bad. It's Edit > Transform > Skew
if you choose to go that route.

everything is aliens

>>2084805
ayy lmao

>>2064050
do we, really?

how is it going?

>>2084621

Flip the image horizontal to see it with fresh eyes.

Looks like the eyes arent aligned properly and the neck/head is tilted awkwardly. Try to center the head a bit.

>>2086353

forehead is a smidge too big and the ears shapes are way off

>>2086353
lazy rendered

>>2064073
you've captured the essence of the face with so little detail. cool

>>2067591
top score.

I also tried. 5 min sketch.

A slightly drunk 30 minute study

>>2090941

What do you think? Sorry it's a bit shit. I'm rusty.

>>2069115
It turned out alright

>>2063998
Goddamn whenever you guys post people that look like a photoshop edit always fucks my shit up

gave it a go

aaaaaaaaaaay

>>2095229
dont push hard values that soon if u're on pencil, keep, imagine you're working on layers, keep redrawing the same things you've already done to fix them

>>2095292
that looks like rollerball

>>2063998
That lighting flattens her face but I'll give it a go.

Coudn't get a grip on her face

>>2095302
And here's the attempt, largely fucked up but got to learn somehow. Feedback is appreciated.

>>2095353
Gotta spend more time getting your angles right.

>>2070777
nope she doesn't, you just don't know shit about proportions

>>2095229
get your proportions straight first and then go in, but seriously crosshatching looks incredibly ugly and unrealistic. look at how Zorn used values, or any professional traditional artist. nobody hatches like that

>>2095337
she looks like a preying mantis

hack fraud reporting in (tips please?)

>>2096149
more observation.

in the reference the alien girl have: top of her ears line up with the eyebrows in a horizontal line
If you put a vertical in lacrimal gland this will touch her nostril and if you can't see your mistakes rotate your draw horizontally

have fun, keep going, study proportion and ayy lmao

quick sketch, she reminds me of splice or something

>>2096164
many thanks anon
ayy lmao

Noobs aren't welcomed but I want to practice it more. I try to construct the head first and then i just copy the lines.