/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>not drawing for a month
>got in the mood
>picrelated is what I got

I really should draw more often.

>>2001582
you really shouldn't

>>2001582
Not too shabby. Her front "hair tuft" looks way too flat though, like it's hugging her forehead.

>>2001618
Her entire head is fucked lol

i'm retarded, pls help me

re-posting becasue other thread i got no tips, and the thread was dead

>>2001772
I like your drawing. good proportions, and her expression is great. Try inking and coloring it.

>>2001772
>hand hiding
>feet/leg hiding
>standing still = boring
>boobs do not sit like that.
The expression is good.
The hips to sholders proportions are good.

>>2001772
help you with what? i think it's pretty nice, maybe a little flat. the arms and hands are also fairly vague and lazy.
also balloon boobs.

>>2001789
>>2001778
thanks!
it's definitely pretty boring, i have a problem thinking of interesting things to draw from imagination
i also drew this of the same character in a sort of better pose but i didn't really like it
>>2001816
thanks. i'm kind of stuck right now so i'm mostly trying to figure out what i should be working on to get better

>>2001789
her boobs are being squeezed by her arms, but yeah

Still WIP, guys is it normal to work, like 4...5x slower in digital as oposed to traditional, or do I need more practice? Also, I got intuos small, too poor to get a better one...

>>2001848
looks nice. keep up the work

>>2001848
>is it normal to work longer
Depends, what exactly is taking you longer to do? If you're still inexperienced I'd say just keep practicing, if you've been at it for a decent stretch of time and are still taking a ton of time to do anything, maybe you're doing something wrong.

>>2001853
Thank you anon
>>2001861
It has been about 4 months, tho I only have an hour or 2 at best for drawing per day, but still, 4 months.. I'd say it takes me too much time for just about everything, maybe I have a shitty workflow..

>>2001826
what i do is i try to push myself a little. you can try new angles, new perspectives, new designs.
or work on your fundies in general.
your linework could also be better, and you seem to draw on the small side?
well, decide for yourself how you want to expand.

>>2001582
Work on your colours/values, it's holding you back a lot.

maybe i'll finish something for once.
opinions?

>>2002025

Really digging this. What program are you using?

>>2002047
manga studio 5

I bit more than I could chew. Should I keep going with this or give it up and try something else?

>>2002065

Keep going. I'm seeing good confidence with those lines.

Thing what I drew. Been doing exclusively studies and still lives, in an effort to get better in all areas. This represents a deviation from that pattern of practice.

>>2002065
Fuck yeah VTM. Therese's pose seems a bit weird, like the chair ain't right.

Stuff from a while ago.

>>2002076
Thanks, I like how the lines, faces and hair came out but I keep fucking up hands and legs. Some come out great and some look like shit no matter how many times I try to redraw them.

>>2002091
That's how I feel too, and also I'm not sure about the base colors I picked. Or I could just crop out the blunders and study some more anatomy before trying it out again.

>>2002087
Love the colors and style but I think there's something wrong with the legs. I know it's stylistic but it feels like he's ready to fall and the leg on the right is just wrong. Overall I like it though.

>>2002094
Love the hair.

>>2001840
There would be more tension in the shoulders (lifted, I suppose is the word?) if that were the case. The arms would be way closer and 'pushing' harder on the boobs.

>>2000983
currently working on his left (our right) hand. It seems a little washed out to me but I don't really know how to liven it up. It definitely doesn't look how I envisioned it which is frustrating.

Thanks for all the advice in the previous thread. Going to stop know because my tendons and wrist are numb and hot as fuck

>>2001999
Thanks, man!

>>2002240
love that crazy intense green and that pure white on that mountain element, funky stuff.

>>2002120
lots of kids seem to be getting back into evangelion these days. i remember in like 2001 when it came out, what gives?

>>2002245
rebuilds an tumlr

>>2001848
the secret to digital bein faster is all da lil shortcuts you can't do in traditional (or that take way longer to do in traditional)
like everything else, you gotta find your process, but your process may jus be very slow

>>2002105
calling it done. I'm ready to move on.

>>2002255
i would get rid of whatever those brown scribbles in the sky are, they make it look unfinished.

>>2002255
>>2002267
The brown things kinda look like when you're playing a game and the model hasn't finished loading yet

>>2002267
>>2002277
I don't know If I want to get rid of them, But I do agree that they need to be bumped back and maybe elaborated on. Too worn out to do much more than this for now though. I'm going to bed.

>>2002065
long foot is long

>>2002025
How do I get good like you?

>>2002454
But that look meh

>>2002461
the anon is consistent in what he produces though and I like the way he sketches

>>2002025

>>2002465
He can't even draw hands

>>2002101
Appreciate the crit. It is an effort toward stylization, hence the goofy legs. Other people have said that they think that's the most successful part (I think the hands were, personally).

>>2002467
this board srsly needs more people like you

>>2002087
>>2002101
I think, the crotch line should go down (from his right leg to the left one), not up.

>>2001777
I like it, Finn's body seems to be oddly positioned because of that bump though

>>2002025
So far so good. I think you should research more about the setting and mood.
Since you don't really have an established background, I'd recommend something like an evening light pouring from the window (from the left or whatever) and highlighting her body. It could be in a classroom or bar area, etc.
Watch out for the perspective of the bottle, table and item on walls, they all don't match. Lay down your perspective grids, and construct from there. FWIW your figure sits rather nicely in perspective.

Any suggestion before I start painting it?
Also the hand on the left is looking a bit weird in this one.

>>2002294
Dope, I like this a lot.

>>2002547
That adam's apple looks pretty huge dude

>>2002565
ups, i completely forgot about that

>>2002547
woah give this to daft punk for their discovery movie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

>>2002547
lookin' dope, aniki

>>2002547
prty bad aesthetics

>>2002630
>>2002647
thx m8s
>>2002669
I'm not used to draw handsome guys, but believe me, you don't wanna see my other attemtps, they all look transgender

>>2002709
your mom look transgender

stolen

stolen

>>2002954
ok?

i also don't really understand how that happens, and i have considered that maybe it's not normal...
i am mostly talking about form and figure from imagination though.

>>2002954
y u do dis 2 me senpai :_;

>>2002954
>minna chotto kitte
"Everyone cut a little"? Is that how she ended up dressed like that?

>>2003028
Pretty sure it's a typo for 皆、ちょっと来て

>>2003031
I thought it was みんな ちょっと聞いて, but I wanted to make a terrible pun nonetheless.

>>2003034
Well, that's why you simply should not use romaji ever.

Sup, looks like this might fit here.
looking for critique

fug

>>2002547
Probably a little late, but try standing in front of a mirror and crossing your arms in a confident pose.
Your elbows should be more in front of you and there's a more vertical line from your shoulders to your elbows. The way he looks now makes him look a little scared in body language just judging by how he's holding his arms and his elbows a little close.

>>2003254
hard shadow under er chin doesn't make sense considering the lighting seems to be coming from topright

>>2002467
jesus you weren't even trying and that blows most of my shit out of the water

>>2002547
he has a MJ nose

>>2002529
oh i see it now, ty.

Hey guys, I just started drawing on a tablet again because I need the flip tool and I'm bad at drawing things straight/symmetrical.

That said, I'm also really, really bad at seeing my own mistakes. Could anyone redline this or something? And at the head-ear connection area, what do people usually do? Make the lineweight thinner there?

Mouths/lips are super awkward and hard too, would be great if anyone had a good tutorial for those.

Hair also needs work. I find it hard to make the same bangs interesting and varied.

>>2002467
hopefully fixed the balance.
i wasn't actually trying to hide hands! i just tend procrastinate on them.
and yeah, i should've started off with a perspective grid in the first place. now it's kinda hard to think about the space since the figure was made in an arbitrary way.
oh well.

>>2002531
thinking and experimenting about the mood right now. still not sure what i want to do, especially with the background.

to explain some things: this is yano from shirobako. the initial idea was to show off the stockings and maybe have diesel somewhere in the picture as well.

>>2003372
Awesome picture. Question, are you coloring by shading with gray? I heard that you weren't supposed to do this and you were supposed to just choose another value. Which way do you feel is... correct? Better? More efficient?

>>2003396
learn color theory and how light works. especially with skin.

>>2003401
Alright, sounds good. I'll go read up on those then. Been neglecting color to get better at figures and linework and... drawing in general.

>>2003260
why the fuck does all cartoon porn have to be something out of a god damn horror movie?

>>2003396
Doesnt look grey at all to me. Just severely desaturated purple-pink.

>>2003451
Well, I mean to me it looked like he drew shades of grey in thick lines all around the picture, then layered them where he wanted the color to be darker.

>>2003441
because sadism is fun

trying to make poses more interesting with perspective

>>2003525
learn how to boundin box, that is the secret to your desires nwn

>>2003546
>boundin box
Elaborate plox

>>2003566
the idea is that you can bound a box around your figure, from the top of the head to tip of the toes. Then you can easly draw a box in any perspective you want, find it perspective center, wich will be also center of your figure. And then just find the other proportions. It easy, becouse you can find perspective center where the diagonals of the box intersect.

>>2003618
show don't tell >>2003525

>>2003648
>>2003648

I finally got the time to set my colors underneath, how can I improve it?

>>2003648
>blind leading the blind

>>2003666
head seems too big on the right side of the image, head seems too big in general when compared to hands/body/facial features. Would problably be a good idea to see if you can reduce the width of the face.

>>2003648
if you're going to do extreme perspective make it really extreme. you'd be surprised how much it takes for something to look really out there.

>>2003453
the shaded parts are actually low opacity purple. the rest is indeed a very light grey. i was just experimenting though.
this is how it looks like without all the kek on top.

>>2003672
Thx anon, i don't know how I didn't notice that, also I made the left eye bigger and it's looking better so far

wip though would like crit

>>2003729
Legs and feets, not even one looks right. Like that one feet at the bottom, even with this crazy perspective, it looks like it is size of the girl's chest. Also perspective on the swords its wonky and uneven

>>2003688
Looks so much better

>>2003688

>>2003746
I'm shit at coloring, so this is an actual question (not like a snarky comment): Shouldn't you try to work with a much smaller palette?

>>2003754
I suppose I should have quoted him
>>2003688

>>2003737

Thanks. I guess I'll just add bits to it over time while I study up on anatomy of the legs.

>>2003754
nah not necessiarily.

it just looks like a lot because all his mixing is visible, that's pretty much what a traditional painters palette would look like. pic related (but unrealistically tidy i reckon)

>>2003275
i love these, blog?

>>2003754
Yes I should, but I'm painting an already created character
> Pic related
and almost every color on the middle-left was only for testing and choosing (the ones on the top are the ones that I used)

>>2003765

>>2003746
Thanks for the paintover m8.

>>2003761
trad artist are such a dirty peasants.

>>2003666
guy looks like his right forearm is in two parts

>>2003685
Your perspective is still wrong, it makes the table look slanted. Boring design as well.
Enhance your composition by adding more relevant elements overlapping each other.

>>2003843
thanks.
i'd start anew but then i'd be not finishing things again

>>2003843
So add more vaginas?

>>2003847
You can continue if you wish to. I think the figure looks nice, bg just needs some work is all.

>>2003857
If that's your answer to enhancing then more power to you.

2D Animation student here, this is a character design for a pose to pose animation, can you give me critique?

>>2003921
I already see her knees is wrong and I should change her weird arm but I am curious to what else I can change

>>2003921
That looks french as fuck

>>2003927
she needs lips

>>2003927
i hate the french my buddy got me this artbook from france on dragons and it had some of the lamest looking shit i had ever seen in my life. i still keep it though just cause the gesture was nice

>>2003927
French style so in a positive way or is that slang for ugly or weird? I always draw manga but I am looking for a more western/my style (influenced by manga)

>>2003928
I suck at drawing lips, but I like that idea, I am trying to move away from too much manga influences so lips are good

>>2003952
yeah french stuff is generally considered pretty good, a bit like animu but more humanistic(less formulaic and stylistically inbred).

>>2001848
An update, kinda happy with this one so far, tho it still needs more work..

I went full realism with this pic.

All in all, this is my best work yet. To think I went so far in 2 years. If I had known art could be so easy, I would have started sooner.

>>2004088
Lego?

>>2004088
Ironic shitposting is this shitposting

>>2004088
lol

>>2004088
Wrong upload, silly me.

>>2004103
Blog?

>>2004103
>full realism
you realise, that there is no lines irl?

>>2004103
lol those hands

>>2004103
wait are you a legoman ? since when legoman can render like that ? whats going on ?

>>2004144
It was actually rendered by this guy.

http://maniacpaint.tumblr.com/

This is Lego's lineart.

http://40.media.tumblr.com/32e294df7c2611b98af0d83749d418d5/tumblr_neb97x0L581rd8tfco2_1280.jpg

>>2004153
And all was right with the world.

>>2004153
>Tartakovich.

This guy should learn some loomis.

I'm not really getting her knees, or the bloodthirster in the background.

Had to do the linework for this twice because I'm an idiot. Still plugging away at it though.

>>2004252
>isometric perspective

>>2004257
I was about to say the same.
Looks like orthogonal perspective.

>>2004252
The railing is too short. Of course it's possible for ir to be made that way but looks unrealistic because it would never stop someone from falling, you don't usually see them at that height IRL.
Also the girl's right (her right) arm looks elongated.

Now I need to see if I can add a boy riding it into this.

something i've been doing the last couple of hours

>>2004466
cute

>>2004466
i like, is moe~

>>2004252

There are a lot of cool details going on in your lines, but the placement of the figures in space seems a little confused regarding the perspective. Any depth from the perspective gets flattened by the flat coloring, and how you don't separate the two people in the front into the foreground, and whatever is behind them into the background. On the left side, it's very clear that the woman is in front of a machine behind her, but on the right, it looks as though the two men are on the same plane. The guy in the cockpit should be a little bit smaller compared to the other two, but if you don't want to redraw him, I think that either lightening up the equipment that the guy on the very right is standing on, or darkening the guy in the cockpit will separate everything.

cosplay galleries make good refs for animay.

WIP of a cinematic pan.

>>2004741
sketch

>>2004703
Any good sites for galleries?

>>2004466
Beautiful, anon.

>>2003921
Posture on the profile view is incorrect, she's leaning backwards as if she's about to fall, but normal posture would have you leaning forward but catching yourself with the ball of your foot.

You can check this by putting a line from the center of the head down, usually it will end up at around the center of the foot.

>>2004809
Thank you anon

WIP for a 2.5d animation. Colors/other stuff is totally not final.
Starting to make turnarounds and body rigs for it now.

>>2002954
whats your blog may i ask

>>2004318
Boy added.

>>2004741
>>2004743
Really like the sketch!
Careful not to make the whole thing too stiff with the rendering.
It could happen especially when working from a smaller canvas to a bigger one.

Some concepts for a graphic novel.

>>2005352
Love the style, I hope the one on the right is a dude.

>>2003525
>>2003648

>>2005746
thank you so much.

>>2001360
am I kaki-fly yet?

>>2005803
lol no

quick sketch

How is this for the main character in a moblie game? Any advice to make him gayer would also help.

>>2005803

I'm impressed. Any more of this?

>>2005859
>him

>>2005881
Great, so he doesn't have to be gayer.

>>2005883
Gay =/= feminine.

>>2005883

He doesn't look gay. It just looks like a flatchested woman with a really pointy chin and feet.

Gay, no. Trap, maybe.

>>2005890
>>2005895
So, any advice? I had something like a gayer Guybrush Threepwood in mind, I don't want to make him bulkier if possible. Makeup is also out of the question. Are there other issues in general?

So sketching

current thing

Criticism, please.

>>2005902
Honestly just give him a more flamboyant haircut, not a giant ponytail. Guys don't wear giant ponytails, even if they are gay.

>>2005910
>>2005915
hive mind

>>2005915

So she fights orcs right?

>>2005917
I'll try that, thanks.

maybe this is the place for this? im getting no feedback in the draw thread. oil on canvas.

i need some crit if anyone has a moment. sorry for the white line, my sai is fucking up

>>2005964
looks half way between beginner and intermediate
can't such much on your rendering but you need to study human anatomy/structure more. The bent leg is the thing that's the most off; it looks tiny.

>>2005923
yeah, and the patriarchy

>>2005983
i see what you're saying, thank you! that leg is really troubling me. is this any better?
and do you maybe have any tips on improving my rendering, i feel like the inside of the cave is the worst part

>>2006004
I tried to do a redline to help you out but it didn't turn out to well.
I think part of the issue is that I need to practice foreshortening more, BUT, the perspective plane on your drawing might also be too slanted, making it difficult to fit in that hind leg

>>2006002
>that booty
>patriarchy

The fight must be easy.

>>2005910
Good stuff, I like the footwear.

>>2006094
the yellow one is better imo

How do I draw short hair? My mind blanks, should I just draw a bunch of small tufts or something?

>>2006136
ear is way too high anon
fix that before you worry about the hair

>>2006137
Is this better?

>>2005915
>>2006002
do you have a blog?

>>2003618
>>2003648
>>2005746
thanks a lot guys. gonna keep practicing
this shit is so fun

fuck I don't feel like finishing this
I guess I'll post it here in hopes I will get a slim chance of critique

>>2006173
I can't draw for shit, but i tried.

>>2006141
That's clearly kyle.

>>2006181
Who da fak is that

Do you guys have any tips on how to pull off a decent colouring without rendering the shit out of your drawing? I'm not that good when it comes to colours...

>>2006281
And here's the linework.

>>2006181
yeah i was thinking that but kyle never posts on tumblr anymore

>>2006281
Oooo...this is cool.

>>2005948
Bruh... /ic/ doesn't care about real art.

>>2006335
>>2006281
First off fix Pearls face, looks weird

>>2005948
I think you aren't getting a response because /ic/ is only good at critiquing the technical part. Also since its so abstract, any criticism given is usually ignored because
>muh style

>>2006137
He's tilting his head figgot

>>2006374
What exactly bothers you in Pearl's face? Is some line placed wrong?

are there any decent books on color theory or anything online that i can really learn a lot about unique palettes and such?

>>2006400
anon go home, you're drunk

>>2005948

Your composition leaves much to be desired. What is the focal point of the painting? Is it the person sitting in the chair? Is it the castle in the background (that doesn't look as though it's in the background because of how you painted it)? Your placement looks incredibly flat because everything is smack dab in the middle. Also, none of your colors are coherent, and they all clash and compete with each other. Your eye is drawn to opposite sides of the painting, because the colors are all so bright, and there are no value differences. Your heavy stylization aside, it just looks really amateurish.

>>2006409
just sample purple kelceons images.

>>2006404
Not him but It seems to be the cheek line. It adds too much age to her face. Try cutting off the upper half or removing it entirely and see where it leads.

>>2006532
You could also try adjusting/flattening the curve.

>>2006532
>>2006534
Thanks! But do you think that the colours look wrong or if there is anything I could add/improve on?

>>2004741
>>2004743
Calling this done for now. Any feedback would be appreciated.

I have a feeling I'll never make a finished drawing ever again.

Yeah that sounds good.

>>2006921
Great color balance, once you flesh out the rest with ambient light it'll shine real nice. Not sure how much of the central figure you will be able to discern with the light right behind it, they might even stand to be mostly darkened out for contrast's sake, but I'm sure there;s some way to retain a little detail in the face.

>>2007032
Ambient light from... what source?

>>2007078
Well considering there's a already a second and third light source according to the bottom most figure, adding one more on the right to cut the back of the middle figure out of the background isn't too far fetched.

>>2007411

Hey guys, I'm new to anatomy as I've mainly drawn portraits. I'm not quite sure how to position my anatomy as I drew from a relatively "tough" angle to portray for a starter. Atleast in my perspective that is.

>>2007412
you have some nice arms dawg

first attempt at any sort of cartooning/stylization.

I have no idea how to do faces.

>>2007424
thanks asshole :)

>>2007424
is /ic/kun getting fit?
he's a little less chubbier than the last time I saw him

>>2007448
I dont really work out I just have a physical job so I've been losing some weight that way. I was pretty fat beforehand because I was unemployed and would just sit on my ass all day and eat. I have weights and whatnot but when I get home I mostly want to dedicate my time doing something art related.

>>2007453
If you weren't a builtfat dude I would swear you were me.

>>2007411
Now that you point it out, fair point. Just a rim light or something, ya? I'll ry it out and see which one the prof likes more.

thx anon

>>2007427

Faces aren't the only thing you have no idea how to do. Anatomy, man. Get reference for your poses. It's obvious you didn't use any.

Well, I tried to do something.

I'm about to go to work so I can't fix it right now, but I think the breasts are uneven and there's some weird stuff going with that armpit area.

how do i improve my lineart and make it thinner? everytime i do linework i get carried away with the idea of having a dynamic lineweight and get these thick as f strokes as a result.

>>2008012
">How do i make it thinner"

Idk...Use a smaller brush?

>>2008012
>and make it thinner?

Maybe uhhh...Use a smaller brush?

>>2008012
Work at a stupidly high resolution. The power of lineweight is somewhat relative to itself, so start with the thinnest lines you'll want to see for major contours and outside lines, and then go over in another pass to thicken parts, and then add the thinner supplemental/detail lines from there. The lines you start with should be of uniform width, just to be safe.

The problem with thinner lines, is that you have to be more profoundly aware of the subject when laying them down. They don't allow you to approximate visual information like thick lines do, you have to have a real understanding of the form of what you're drawing with thinner lines.

The way I see it, if this is the level of your work, you will probably only become frustrated when attempting to use thinner lines. You can however, assuming you have the patience, get more specific by drawing with adjustable vector tools, and setting shit up juuuust right.

I just opted not to bother inking thin until I got my drawing hand properly coordinated, and learned to fine tune the soul of my hand tendons after praying to The Varnas of Garthok. Venusian patron deity of inking.

>>2006173
its pointless if you don't finish this, I suggest you continue it and just fix any errors(if any) later

>>2006004
i think i fixed it

>>2005859
The fucks up with his left leg?

>>2008236
Neck is a little too long, making the head look like its floating away. Otherwise cute!

>>2008236
One day I wanna see something you draw without reference

Your eyes are looking less creepy nowadays though

Latest, dem crits loved <3

>>2002294
Still from a loop i'm working on.

>>2002294
Still from a loop I'm working on.

>>2008350
Her features are a bit too round and lips big, makes Asuka seem Ameri/Chinese rather than German/Jap.

Dunno why you aberrated her face/head the most, it's already a focal point and chomatic aberration works better as a peripheral sort of thing.

Otherwise looks pretty solid Kron-wannabe tier, Eva fans will eat it up. Makes me wonder what you "studied" after though.

>>2008350
Just browse through your dA, your arts are relly amazing (kr0n/sakimi-tier), but in my opinion you should get out of your comfort zone and draw something else other than qt girl and pretty woman.

>>2008380
pics not mine, just in case

>>2002025
that table really needs some adjustment, perspective I mean

Still some things I wanted to change, but I've been working on this too long now, need to draw something different.

>>2005803
right leg too long,and her waist is detached

>>2006206
http://kairunoburogu.tumblr.com/

Half the post I make on this site is posting the link to kyle's site when people ask. I'm ok with being a disciple of kyle.

>>2008489
>I'm ok with being a disciple of kyle.
Post your art (':

>>2008489
I prise kyle erryday.

>>2008490
I pulled this out of my arse for /co/ last christmas. When I get on my computer I'll try to find a drawing that I actually learnt from. Good lord I forgot how awful it was, but it's one of only two drawings on my laptop. Perhaps if I add another hour to my daily kyle worship, I will improve faster

>>2008236
Be careful with the neck mate.
Also with the face. The position of the nose indicates that the face is angled upwards but the position of the is not on position.

>>2008250
Which fuckups?

i guess it's done

>>2008603
Nice dude. That pokemon isn't steel type anymore though.

>>2008617
Disregard that, I suck cocks.

>>2008603
the ghost one is unclear as fuck

Hey mikufag share your ushijima collection polx

>>2008630
get him to show his boipussy.

>>2008603
are these your favorite pokmeon?
if so, good tastes

>>2008452
>no eyelashes

Eh

>>2008694
derpymoon.jpg

>>2008694
distant eye bigger than the font one

but looks nice overall

>>2007798
Kind of the blind leading the blind here so ignore my proportions etc, but try to feel how comfortable a post is for you to do before you draw it. Natural poses look less wrong even if they are a bit off. Keep it up!
Also upload a smaller res.

>>2008710
>>2008701
ty

>>2005746
>the 0033 or /ic/ but in english

I dont know about that anon, but he is actually better than the blueline guy

>>2008752
>>2008744

>>2008752
post something if you think can do better than blueline senpai.

>>2008766
He's saying that 0033 is better than the blueline guy, which is true by far, you defensive faggot.

>>2008767
All Blueline Senpai has ever done is help, he never once insulted or shitposted or anything like that, he just went out of his way and bluelined providing helpful information, and now you're shoving him away just like you did with teal.

Don't post if you can't say anything worth a damn. Go cry and throw yourself out the nearest window you sorry sack of shit.

>Blueline
0044 fits better.
Anyway >>2008767 is retard

>>2008630
I will once I have internet
>>2008645
No.

>>2008673
Now that I look back at my other figures I painted, none of them actually have eyelashes bare 1.
Guess I've just been so focused on showing the thickness of the lids, that I completely forgot about the eyelashes.

>>2008092
not that anon, but you're pretty cool.

guys. Is tagging on tumblr above 5 useless > or should I tag above 5 tags ?

>>2008863
Cycltit?

>>2008875
not me

What software is best for drawing comic-style drawings?
>preferably free/cheap

>>2008918
Manga Studio/Clip Studio Paint can be found at a discount.

>>2008918
probably manga studio, it has alot of feature specifically for comic making, but you can do that sort of art in any program assuming you know it well enough.

>>2008603
>sexualizing pokemon

why do

>>2008922
>>2008921
Thanks, I've had my eye on that for a while, just wasn't sure.

>>2008452

Your stylization is really uncanny, so he looks creepy. I tried doing a paintover of his face to give you an idea of how I would stylize him, while trying to render realistically. Is he supposed to be a child, or tiny adult? Because for a child, his muscles and anatomy are way too pronounced, and should be smoothed out where baby fat lies.

In regards to your coloring, it's really flat. Not only are your colors really unsaturated, but your values are really weak. You should push saturation and work on your shadows.

>>2008935
You tell em' anon.

>>2008935
correct me if im wrong but dat booty makes it look like a girl.

>>2008935
Thanks a lot for this, and yes he is a kid, I wanted him to show a bit of muscle to look a bit skinny, but I made the proportion of the limbs to thick.
I've been trying to force myself to desaturate more, but I guess it went overboard.

>>2008982
it doesn't look like a kid at all with that obvious lordosis and pose. you should go for tiny woman, and give her tiny tits. also i hate this paintover >>2008935, and your colors are ok for me.

Swiggity swag, what's in the bag

>>2009005
>merc_wip

Go away Ethan.

Tfw you suddenly realise all your recent improvements in drawing much have been symbol drawing, because perspective takes you back to beginnerland.

>>2008869
If you have tags that will help you organize your own blog, then put those as the sixth and onward tags (i.e. 'works in progress', so that you can find all of those on your own blog).
Otherwise, pointless.
But hey, the current search feature renders most tags useless unless someone REALLY can be bothered looking for something.

>>2008935
I agree, with you on the uncanny valley thing but you have also made the face more feminine which probably isn't right either. I also like anon's bright values.

>>2005746
>>2002467
Anon you're my favorite and one day I want a redline from you.

her organs are supposed to be spilling out but i have no idea how to do that. any tips?

>>2009062
study more than just surface anatomy

>>2003293

You aren't drawing eyes with form. It's really flat. Even anime follows the form of the skull and face.

>>2008603
>reifag :]

>>2009090
No, that's Rinfag

Just made this today I guess I had an Aladdin/Majin buu theme on my mind and found it an interesting idea so I drew this, any thoughts or suggestions...

Just made this today I guess I had an Aladdin/Majin buu theme on my mind and found it an interesting idea so I drew this, any thoughts or suggestions...

any thoughts on these face designs? I just got into drawing recently

>>2009069
Oh my god thank you for responding!

What can I do to fix that, and could you point me to an example where the eyes follow the form?

>>2009196
>>2009069

And are my eye still fucked up here?

halp

>>2003293
>>2009196
>>2009197
not that anon but i would recommend studying real faces
and also try to actually think where you are going to put a line to avoid chikenscratch, that mix of chicken scratching and erasing is no good man
>>2009192
>face designs
same goes for you, try to actually learn to draw a face before designing anything
>>2009274
dont use symmetry tool
>>2009168
same for you, and learn to scan
>>2008819
>I will once I have internet
im interested in that too, thank you

>>2009197
You've placed em to high. And draw the ears again. They're way too small.

>>2009497
Freaking awesome bluelines, thank you!

>>2009513
Sounds good, will do.

>>2008364
I remember that, post progress if you wanna!
Looking good!

>>2009795
>>2009795
>>2009795
>>2009795

>>2008935
what do you mean by values?

>>2009611
Will do anon. I'll post update in next animation thread.

It's a work in progress, it's a fucking monster to do, I can't even upload it to 4chan, it's over 4 GB/MB(I can't remember which)

Also yes, I couldn't do the hands, spent 30 minutes only on the sketch of the hands, it looked disgusting.

So instead I'm going to register to tumblr and hashtag it with diversity/body positivity/handicapped/loveyourbody tags.

>>2002065
It looks shitty because that chair has no cushion, lower the "frilly bit" and fill in the space between her ass and the chair with said missing cushion.
Also maybe rotate it a bit but that's a personal taste thing.