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Post your nsfw, critique others.
Ask advice, and so on etc. etc.

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>> No.1997944

How do you render skin, mine always looks like shit and im tired of using sai

>> No.1997954

>>1997944
separate light and shadow then add the amount of modelling tones you like on given family.

>> No.1997958

>>1997954
what is modelin tones, google gives me guitar amps

>> No.1997961
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1997961

not sure if this is the thread for this.

for now i think i broke her body in wrong place(s)

could you give me some advices?

>> No.1997963

>>1997958
it's actually just values/tones to help show/model the form.

>> No.1997990

>You die suddenly
>Your family decides to display your artwork at the funeral.
>They go through everything you've done and find all that porn.

Was it worth it?

>> No.1997994

>>1997990
I don't think my corpse would care.

>> No.1997996
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>>1997990
My dad would beat my corspe in a mad frenzy when he finds out I draw the gay.
He absolutley hates gay people, to the point of violence.

>> No.1998001

>>1997996
Your dad sounds like someone i'd share a beer with, you on the other hand sound like a faggot that needs to be beaten straight, literally.

>> No.1998003

>>1998001
I'll fuck your ass if we ever meet IRL

>> No.1998009

>>1998001
>you on the other hand sound like a faggot that needs to be beaten straight, literally

That sounds pretty ghey m8, and counter productive.

>> No.1998026

>>1997961
are her hips supposed to be noticeably narrower than her chest?

>> No.1998031

>>1998026

no. i thinkt hat's the problem, thanks.

>> No.1998038

Guy >>1997996
Here
>>1998001
First off, im not gay.
Secondly, my dad doesnt have any friends at all, not even one. He goes to work as an EE, comes home and sits in his room watching tv and doing whatever. He only talks to my mom and his brother. Thats it.

I know hes dead inside. I just dont know how he got there.

>> No.1998043
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1998043

do I have potential to make toon smut or am I just wasting my time?

>> No.1998046

>>1998038
you should spend quality time together and draw porn with your pop

>> No.1998049

>>1998001
You sound like one of those edgy faggots with father issues who act as conservative as possible in a desperate attempt to gain their approval.

>"look daddy, I hate gays too, please approve of me!"
>"Mhm, so why don't you have a girlfriend yet, son?"

>> No.1998056

>>1998049
There's something hilariously pathetic about people who hate a group of people THAT much. Like their whole existence is ruined by the mere thought of someone who isn't exactly like they think they should be being alive. It's like a gay person's that kid who's holding out his finger going "I'm not touching yoooouu~" and the homophobe is that bratty ass little snot who's just screaming and crying and freaking out about not being touched like "MAWM MAKE HIM STAHP". It'd be funnier if they didn't go out and actually fucking kill and hurt people for it though.

>> No.1998098

Any good resources/guides to producing porn images?

I mean, I can only go for a painterly look, whenever I try making something simpler or more cartoony, it looks like shit.

I tried looking through HF for good artists, but I always end up thinking something like
>Jesus Christ, none of these guys can draw noses, look at this pseudo-anime bullshit, they're not even on the right plane, how can anyone fap to this
etc. etc.


tl;dr: what are good coloring (or other) guides applicable to porn

>> No.1998101

>>1998098
>>1998098
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FMUYG1hkY5c

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PXvWSaNeM4s

Will this help?

>> No.1998105

>>1998101
I'll give it a shot, thanks.

>> No.1998107
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1998107

I finally finished something

>> No.1998108
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>>1998105
yeah it's not neccessarily porn related, but it should give you a better jumping off point for creating stylistic things.

As long as you keep building your foundational skills.

A quick guide on dicks from KamiTora that helps me.

>> No.1998119

>>1998107
>msf

my nigga

>> No.1998126

>>1998043
You only waste time when you don't improve or give up.

>> No.1998135

>>1998046
Funny thing is, he was an artist as well.
He drew Animals and stylized portrats, and his lines are super straight, to the point where he doesnt even need a ruler while doing construction work around the house.

>> No.1998137

>>1998098
Doxys Toots

>> No.1998173
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1998173

>>1998038
As your dad sounds just like me (just I don't watch TV, I'm on 4chan, instead)... I'm even also an EE and only keep contact with very few people. Close friends, family, my girlfriend.

Why is he dead inside? Well he hates gay people. he isolates himself from the world. To me it is clear, as I see the same reactions from myself. he's probably a disgruntled conservative. His ideals died a long time ago. he's the last survivor of an ideological world. Try to see the world from his perspective: there is a witch-hunt against traditionalists and paleoconservatives. the world out there is ridiculous, the laws make no sense, the economy suffers from all the leftliberal mismanagement, your cultural heritage (what matters most to those people) is irreversibly destroyed. I don't know how old you are, but you most likely have not lived in those "ye good olde times". The West is degenerate and ridiculous and there is no place for people with old ideals. We lost the fight and now we just wait to die. Deep inside we know it's over. there won't be a revolution and civilization will not be rebuild. Everything will go down the drain, because the new generation will not be raised by our kind. The idea will not be carried on.

The "progressives" will celebrate for a while before finding new outrageous things, before finding the new victim (it's just about victims in their politics), the new Feindbild. Soon there will be One Race, One Government, One Justice. All on some kind of basic living fund support by the media-elected ruling class. No one will ever oppose anything, because fighting, self-sacrifice, violence and taking risks is not part of the progressivists toolbox... and why would he oppose, really?

It's over.

You may celebrate now, but I doubt your grandchildren will thank you (this is more directed at everyone here, as we artists are even more liberal and progressive than all the other liberals and progressives).

>> No.1998223

>>1998173
>artists are hippie liberals
>this is what people actually believe
If anything, drawing porn for the internet made me less tolerate towards liberals and the like, because I know my audience.

As for "progressives", topkek. Many artists are hardcore traditionalists who like nothing better than living "in the past" and keeping it alive.

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1998230

don't now what else to do with this, as always I'm learning anatomy so inb4 loomis etc (not rly concerned about accuracy at the moment as it gives me a headache to get it perfect) Just kind of lost rly

>> No.1998237

>>1998230
The anatomy being all kinds of fucked aside, why is every edge soft?

>> No.1998242

>>1998237
it's because the artist is inexperienced and isn't differentiating between hard and soft edges yet.
It's simply too much for him at the momment, it will come as he practices and observes the world around him.

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1998243

>>1998223
Well i am an artist as well and not a hippie. But you browse this board as well, right? Well you must have noticed that this board is "progressive" to the extreme.

The cliché comes from experience, like so many stereotypes. People think that stereotypes are meant as absolute generalizations, meanwhile they really just represent averages and statistical expectations from experience.

I know that there are exceptions, don't worry.

>> No.1998246

>>1998237
btw anatomy pointers are always welcome, also I did use a reference image off deviantart and ironically managed to get it pretty accurate from the maybe bad drawn picture

>> No.1998250

>>1998230
This picture represents the limit of your ability, and there's nothing left to do but leave it as is and get back to learning.

>> No.1998255

>>1998246
Head is flat, elbow is too high, hand is too big, that ass belongs on a centaur, etc.

Why the fuck are you using a drawing for a figure reference? Did you flip the image to try and fix it?
You draw like a mediocre gradeschooler, go srudy.

>> No.1998273

>>1998255
ass and elbow yes I agree (though it is cartoony and I've seem asses drawn much bigger) but I cant see where you get the flatness on the head...looks a little longer than the standard but other than that

>> No.1998305

>>1998230
[ - ] Image is worth discussing
[ X ] Loomis

>> No.1998374

>>1998243
>But you browse this board as well, right? Well you must have noticed that this board is "progressive" to the extreme.


It's because so many people on this board are younger than 22. I.e., college kids, getting forcibly indoctrinated every day by the leftists who've seized academia (where leftists congregate because they can't deal with real jobs).

I was very similar when I was 21-22 and was basically getting force-fed leftist agitprop for 10 hours every day. It's gotten even worse lately, with the advent of SJWism and identity politics.

When they get out of school, reality will tend to assert itself.

>> No.1998406
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1998406

I feel so depressed.

>> No.1998422

>>1998406
Why?

>> No.1998423

>>1998422
I can't paint for shit, and I'm stuck inside of lineart, also the tail looks ugly and I'm not really up for spending time on it since I know I'm gonna fuck it up. I'm stuck in the same color shading palette and I'm not progressing. I use orange, red, blue and maybe dark brown sometimes. I don't know how people can realistically paint people. Once I liked the shading I had, but now when I look at her it looks like she's covered in weird bruises. I'm just so tired you know?

>> No.1998436

>>1998423
I'm going through some similar problems too. You have to push yourself and keep trying it and failing, but the info will start to assimilate and you'll make breakthroughs. You're probably just going to need to blaze through them for a while though. Spend long on one or two, then try to bust one out quickly, fail, read up on it again, do a slow study again, try another quick one, fail again but improve. It sucks but it's pretty much what you have to do.

>> No.1998501

>>1998423
You can't paint because you cannot draw well enough yet. Spend some time (as in more than 1 week) on learning values with before you attempt color. Take your time to really understand what you're doing. There are no shortcuts.

>> No.1998503

>>1998501
*with grayscale

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1998524

>>1998423
>I can't paint for shit, and I'm stuck inside of lineart

Lineart is everything. It's not something you're ever 'stuck' in. Good drawing is conservatively 80% of what makes a picture good.

If you're trying to rush ahead to the painting stage because you think you can fudge your way past a bad drawing by pushing paint around, you're only going to end up frustrated. Line drawing is where the magic happens.

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>>1998107
don't you have a tumblr? i'm going to need a link to that and any other places you post same with brekkist

that looks pretty good

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1998620

>>1998406
I am an extremely amature artist and if this helps you at all it will be a miracle, but here you go.

You gotta work with stronger colors so you can see what you are even doing, and use more directional lighting. Pillow shading is a no-no.

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1998645

>>1998531
But if you know brekkist isn't it easy to find mine?
http://keppok.tumblr.com

Brek only posts his art on tumblr, he has a twitter but doesn't use it much.
I have a pixiv too full of my old shota and loli I think

anyways everything is under keppok or brekkist, and is linked on my tumblr.

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1998649

>>1998374
>It's because so many people on this board are younger than 22. I.e., college kids, getting forcibly indoctrinated every day by the leftists who've seized academia (where leftists congregate because they can't deal with real jobs).

>tfw 19 years old
Thats the only thing you got wrong

>> No.1998650

>>1998524
God bless that lost artist

>> No.1998653

>>1998620
please dont make tutorials

>> No.1998657

>>1998524
>Line drawing is where the magic happens.
What if I don't have cintiq? It's impossible to draw lineart on tablet. Even Hampton uses cintiq

>> No.1998663

>>1998653
Don't be an asshole, what he made is clear and simple. It's not fancy but it gets the idea across, showing anon how to plan lighting based on a single source and shade accordingly. Even that little cube that shows how warm and cool light should transition is a nice touch. There's nothing wrong with anon's example, and I don't see you doing anything to help the other guy improve.

>> No.1998716

>>1998657
Pencil+paper+scanner. Not hard bruh

>> No.1998723

>>1998650

he's back!

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/user/WinterX/profile

sort of. not a lot on his page yet.

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>>1998657

Carlo Arellano uses a tablet, iirc. At least, he mentioned that he did in one of his old demos.

You can do it... it's just harder. Try turning the Wacom sensitivity down a notch.

>> No.1998738

>>1998657
>It's impossible to draw lineart on tablet.

Even though a million anime artists do it everyday?

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1998752

>>1998173
Yeah, you do sound like a pretty sad person. Maybe you should kill yourself.

This world isn't for you anymore.

>> No.1998767

>>1998657
Having a bigger dick doesnt mean you fuck better girls anon

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>>1998752
>his final moments were in front of hundreds of people listening to him
>cameras, audio devices, journalists all sitting down watching him speak
>he died from Public Speaking

>> No.1998806

>>1998767
But it does mean you fuck girls better.

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1998819

>>1998098
Stylization isn't bad if you actually Do know your stuff, you know that, right?

>> No.1998821

>>1998223
I'm an artist and I'm the most conservative guy I know.

>> No.1998824

>>1998821
you're the only person you know

>> No.1998836

>>1998824
I suppose you're right ...
:|

>> No.1998896

>>1998657
10/10

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1998950

Trying to create passable shadows. Looks ok i guess, but will polish it more.

>> No.1998957

>>1998950
thanks for the high resolution, now I can use it as a wallpaper.

>> No.1998966

>>1998436
>>1998501
>>1998524
>>1998620

T-thanks you guys

>> No.1998970

>>1998657
>It's impossible to draw lineart on tablet. Even Hampton uses cintiq
Wait, what? Is this true?

>> No.1998972

>>1998657
use sai

>> No.1998973

>>1998970
>It's impossible to draw lineart on tablet.

its 4x times more comfy and easy to do it on tablet you people are retarded.

>> No.1998975

>>1998973
Tablet or Cintiq? It's not the same thing.

I only ask because I'm struggling with lineart on my tablet, and I already heard artists implying Cintiq is much easier to work on when they review tablets.

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1998977

>>1998975
Try practicing handwriting on it.

>> No.1998979

>>1998975
just foken use confident strokes you have ctr z you can redo it whenever the stroke is shitty. zoom in very close too its easier. you can also make a new layer make a stroke, if its close to what you want you use warp tool on it and morph it the way you want, then merge layers.

>> No.1998980

>>1998977
My handwriting is shit, though.

>> No.1998993
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>>1998980

>> No.1999013

>>1998107
I don't like the bluriness of the lines, but the feeling of the forms is top notch as always.

>> No.1999017

>>1998273
The head look like a thumb growing out of the body, with some fake hair slaped on it, and then the face features looks like are painted on the surface lol. Just look look how the neck is the same, even bigger than head.

>> No.1999018

>>1998374
>Blaming your own shortcomings on the others
>"I'm the only rightful person on the whole world, everbody else wrong, it's not me that is fucked up"
>Blaming Jews/Gays/Leftist/Mexicans etc, on your life failures

kek

>> No.1999029

>>1999018
>only unsuccessful people hate x
topkek

>> No.1999031

>>1999018
>not seeing how actions of huge grups influence you

lel

>> No.1999089

>porn thread
>jews and handwriting

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1999142

>>1999089
Didnt even visit this thread yesterday, and I wake up to jews and handwriting.
For shame

>> No.1999154

>>1997926
Serious question : why you guys do porn when it's the lowest common denominator and it'll follow you all your life. Are you that desperate for money/attention ?

>> No.1999159

>>1999142
this picture wow.

>> No.1999162

>>1999154
maybe for fap time they draw nsfw, and when finished get back to normal work. this way they can profit from their earthly weakness

>> No.1999164

>>1999154
aaand its also the easiest art job to do.

>> No.1999165

>>1999154
I don't do it for either.
http://imaajfpstnfo.blogspot.de/2015/02/ch-ch-ch-ch-changes.html

>> No.1999168

>>1999154
I don't understand how it is anything different than drawing whatever. Spaceships or something.

It's not like you put your name on it.

>> No.1999169

>>1999165
this is satire right ?

>> No.1999176

>>1999169
No it isn't.
I genuinely think that erotica is the best you can do to improve your art.

>> No.1999183

>>1999168
A majority of people are doing because of pandering and because it's easy to build a fanbase, then you have the 1% of autists that actually enjoy drawing porn and that's fine.

>> No.1999185

>>1999176
okay so it's satire and you're pretending to be retarded on top of that, great job you got me.

>> No.1999186

>>1999176
No it's not, you're limiting your poses and dynamism for appeal and you only draw the same shit over and over.

>> No.1999187

>>1999154
Because it's entertaining.

>> No.1999190

>>1999154
>implying artists didn't spend 90% percent of their wor time drawing/sculpting/whatever nekkid people since art was a thing
Also, fuck you, I like porn.

>> No.1999192

>>1999186
Look at my stuff, dude.
It's right there on the blog.
Is any of that shit appealing?
I don't draw porn to get attention.
I don't draw it for money.
I draw it for myself.
>>1999185
You are just an idiot, aren't you?

>> No.1999197

>>1999154
>it's the lowest common denominator
That just means everyone likes it. So why are confused that people like drawing it?

>> No.1999205

>>1999197
popular != good

>> No.1999206

>>1999205
Porn is fucking good, you would know if you weren't a miserable permavirgin.

>> No.1999208

>>1999205
My dick says otherwise.

>> No.1999210

>>1999206
virginity has nothing to do with the ability to get porn

>> No.1999212

>>1999154
I actually find it fun.

>> No.1999213

>>1999210
Then how come there are no virgin pornstars, faggot?

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1999217

>>1998107
yeezy taughht you well
yeeezzy taught you welll

>> No.1999221

>>1998135
>your father is so homophobic he can only draw straight lines
now that's dedication to a cause

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1999225

>>1999221

>> No.1999230

>>1999221
10/10

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1999246

It wouldn't hurt for me to push myself to draw characters to look a little more exaggerated for porn purposes would it?

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>>1998173
>republicans an democrats both fuck the economy with military spendin
>old people live much longer than we ever thought they would at the time an are overstressin medicare
>it's only gettin harder an harder to kill a black person an get away with it
>same goes for rape

damn, look at all these yung hippie dippies ruinin muh murican values

for real tho, why don't you guys move to the (rural) south, home of the dyin breeds? cost of livin is dirt cheap, surrounded by like minded people. long as you're passably white, you'll never face anything worse than passive aggression for p much anything you'd say (unless you start gettin personal, or talkin bout someone's family (even if you can hold your own, remember almost everyone's got a gun))

>> No.1999252

>>1999247
How am I supposed to draw my cartoon porn in the rural south, you... you liberal enabler

>> No.1999254

>>1999031
all those damn left-wing mexican jews, their influence has such an impact on the lives of skinny middle-class white nerds who bitch about the fancy universities they go to being infiltrated by people who don't hate everyone like they do

>> No.1999258

>>1999254
>look ma' I'm projectun!

>> No.1999279

>>1999254
good goy.

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1999280

>>1999252
you don't draw it in fuckin public, son, what are ya, an idjit?

>> No.1999285

>>1999280
wat

So how do you do it, then?

>> No.1999290

>>1999285
i go to a friends house an then ask if i can use the bathroom, then set up shop in there

>> No.1999300

>>1999285
Gather a family meeting, sit on a round table and draw porn alltogether.

>> No.1999304

>>1999300
I don't know, that sounds like it'd be pretty uncomfortable. Wouldn't sitting on chairs be better?

>> No.1999312

>>1999304
to each their own i suppose

>> No.1999321

>>1999252
You draw it around your good buddies
Or you draw it really well.

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1999369

fuck i should have go for simple cellshade. any tips ?

>> No.1999372

>>1999369
please don't ever draw "furry face" ever again. What the fuck is that even supposed to be.

>> No.1999373

>>1999369
snout and chin need fixing

>> No.1999374

>>1999369
You going furry tsumisumi?

>> No.1999375

>>1999372
welp i would need a redline cause i think its a cute.
>>1999374
ye will branch out one day.

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1999394

well this was fun,

kind of annoying translating sketches from a shitty picture of the traditional version, but oh well. At least I learned.

Also: I seem to keep on biting off more than I can stand to chew at a time.

>> No.1999399

>>1999394
and sorry I keep using the usual stockings/gloves.

I just love heels.

>> No.1999411

>>1999154
What this anon said
>>1999212

>> No.1999421

>>1999394
Your line art is is delicious and you convey volume and forms pretty well, but the anatomy is hurting my eyes a bit... Particularly that first dick girl is just fucking broken! I know it's heavily stylized, but you still need to follow some anatomical rules to make them appealing. Also the colors are a bit to saturated for my liking, but that's more subjective.

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1999423

>>1999013
Oh yeah, I wanted to try something new with the lines, and since I haven't used Sai in a while I'd thought I'd use this brush.

>>1999217
Who is yeezy? ;-;

>> No.1999431

>>1999394
These are hawt. You make money?

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1999432

Spent a lot more time on this then I usually do because I don't like the ink stage much.
Moving on to color soon though, the part I like.

>> No.1999445

>>1999394
So you're not gonna give us a link or anything? Are you just ignoring all the comments you get?

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1999447

>>1999431
I've never tried.

>>1999421
Yeah, I just kinda ran with everything as it came up.
The past few days I've been experimenting with proportion, so I've just been letting my pencil just kinda run rampant.

I actually just realized I still have the document open still, so I can still fix some thing.

So I'll do that real quick if I can get it to work.

anywho: I just wanted to say I liked how the last two figures turned out, sans some of the mistakes(like the hand), so if I could get any feedback on those in I'd appreciate it.

Sorry if it seems like I'm making excuses or something. I'm just trying to explain my thoughts. I've been awake for way too long, so my head is

well, it's seen better days.

>> No.1999463

>>1998950
whats with all the wibbly wobbly shit on the waist? its not how a waist looks wtf
>>1999246
the girls arms are throwing the whole thing off. also it looks like the vag juices are coming out of the labia, and not dripping out and down her vagina.

>> No.1999466
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>>1999423
Yeezus

>> No.1999484

>>1999432
Learn gestures. This is static as fuck.

>> No.1999485

>>1999423
how did you get those brushes (fine_pointy)? I'd expect those to follow with the software, but I only have 4 different textures when I purchased and downloaded SAI.

>> No.1999489
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>>1999485
Well, there's actually an updated version of SAI1

I didn't know until I had to redownload it when I reformatted, but it had more brush options, textures, and modes.
It's SAI 1.1.0

>> No.1999490

>>1998056
aww did someone call you a fag at school today?

>> No.1999491 [DELETED] 

>>1999489
Wait what. I purchased it less than 3 months ago.
W-where do you update?

>> No.1999494

>>1999489
I downloaded the 1.2.0 (update files only) but got no new brushes or textures..

>> No.1999505

>>1999494
Huh, well I duno then. I'll just upload a .zip of mine to mediafire then.
http://www.mediafire.com/download/vl1p71acqnxls15/Sai+1.1.0.rar

Make sure you're executing the right file, though, because I have a few versions of sai that are all different.

>> No.1999515

>>1999505
file got DMCA'd. Thanks for the help though. I'll probably reisntall tomorrow, and see if that helps

>> No.1999517

>>1999515
That's weird, the file shows up for me just fine. I even downloaded it.

>> No.1999519

>>1999517
Ah, never mind, I see now that it's been restricted to my account.
Sorry bro, if you want you can give me a throwaway email and I'll send it that way.

>> No.1999520

>>1999519
I-it's okay, I could probably find the brushes somewhere. Thanks for being so helpful though, I really appreciate your effort for going to such lengths!

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>>1999445

s-sorry

Here you go:
http://necrosmos.tumblr.com/

I did what I could with what I have. I at least fixed some of the embarrassing things I think, so I'm gonna stop so I can move on to something else.

>> No.1999575

>>1999544
Finally, I thought you were gonna make me beg you for it lol

>> No.1999672
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1999672

Trying to figure out animu, getting those head proportions was a bit of a challenge

>>1998645
I really like the way you sketch

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>>1998645
are you the same person who drew this by any chance?

>> No.1999708

>>1999690
oh, no. I'm not, but I remember that picture and asked for their blog and they didn't have one

>> No.1999717

>>1999484
Yah, most of my work is static like this. I will practice gesture more.

Thanks

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>>1999369
snoot and chin are off center

>> No.1999771

>>1999369
>>1999765
mouth an snout are in a different perspective from the way the face is pointing

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1999920

>> No.1999965
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1999965

old work

>> No.1999975

>>1999965
You need to work on your paneling or story flow or whatever it is comic artists need to know, I have no idea what's happening in that pic, and my eyes just kinda wander around.

>> No.1999979

>>1999965
Oh...
I don't want to be a downer man but jeez, do you think that's sexy?
I mean look at that face in the bottom right

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>>1999975
Then I did what I set out to do if your eye is wandering around.

Also if you don't know how to critic it...

Then shut the fuck up.

>> No.1999984

>>1999979

People makes stupid faces during sex.

>> No.1999988

>>1999982
If you set out to make a shitty comic, yeah, you did it.

Your composition, pacing and panel layout it is shit. Sorry.

>> No.1999990

>>1999988
>If you set out to make a shitty comic, yeah, you did it.
>Your composition, pacing and panel layout it is shit. Sorry.

Your critic is shit. Do better.

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>>1999982

>> No.2000031
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2000031

>> No.2000037

>>2000031
even in bra, boobs would still respond to gravity

>> No.2000039

>>2000037
You're thinking of human boobs in a human bra.
Typical human.

>> No.2000040

>>2000037
Padded tight bras?

>> No.2000148

As a complete ignorant in drawing, I wouldn't fap to a single picture from this thread.
They all lack anything erotic except >>1998524

>> No.2000160

>>2000148
>I don't draw
Hello 90% of /ic/

>> No.2000195
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>>2000037
>>2000039
>>2000040
Still hang

>> No.2000198

>>2000195
>elf boobs
>magic bra
Fakin 'umies

>> No.2000199
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>>2000148
I would be upset at this, but I cant be.
The endgame result is making a picture that is erotic enough to fap too. Quite frankly, we suck ass at it. Too much focus on anatomy and not on gesture.

What works?
What makes porn pop for viewers?
What are some of our own niches and fetishes that we can add to improve it?

Im going to take a moment to ask myself these questions

>> No.2000203

>>2000199
>those question
Literally the only reason I read these threads.

It's definitely exaggeration that's the key, but in what direction?

What is it that makes a picture sexy?

>> No.2000217
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2000217

eh i have yet to post anything ive done but im liking the early stages of this still have a lot i need to do though

>> No.2000233

>>1999965
>>1999982
Looks like you drafted up a rough and went with it, without exploring any other avenues of composition.

>> No.2000236

>>2000217
Don't pillowshade

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>>1999965
>>1999982

this is gold

>> No.2000263
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>>2000259
10 sec in paint

>> No.2000272

>>2000217
wtf is that face
wtf are those lines
wtf is that shading
wtf is that vagina
wtf is that hand
wtf are the folds in the clothes
back 2 beginners thred

>> No.2000289
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2000289

>>2000203
Well, from my research on eastern and western drawn porn, people like simple shapes and simple colors. By using as few lines as possible, while conveying mass and volume, is the best way for the viewer to be happy

>> No.2000292
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>>2000289
Interesting

>> No.2000384

>>2000289
See, I have a problem with that pic. She has no nose or lips. The blowjob looks like the guy just put his dick into a box with eyes drawn on it.

>> No.2000393

>>2000199
>>2000148 here. I'll give my unbiased opinion based on fappiness factor

>>1997961
Not porn, just a sexy pose. If it wasn't furry crap, it would have potential to be interesting
>>1998107
The rendering is top tier. Face has no features, it could be a male if not for the rest of the figure. Her body language is scary
>>1998406
Everything that comes to mind is "what is she thinking?", if you're not 12 and excited about tits just being there
>>1998524
Very good linework and coloring, great expression on her face
>>1999394
That's a mix of broken anatomy, weird fetishes and a saturation that makes it hard for a person to look at this picture for more than 5 minutes (could be my monitor though)
>>1999432
This is interesting. But please (and that's for everyone), draw feet well. They're a secondary sexual feature. I see so many perfectly drawn tits and as many poorly drawn feet, lips, eyes, hands and so on.
>>1999965
That's straight up boner killing.
>>1999999
Focus is on tits, the rest of her body language is weird (try to cover her face, what is she trying to do? Why is she not covering her breats or trying to fight the beast?
And if my boner ever had the courage to show up, there's akways a funny guy with a funny expression in the lower right corner to kill the mood.
>>2000031
This is nice. A great expression on her face could do the trick. Might as well draw the rest of her legs and something in the right hand.
>>2000292
Beautiful proportions, pose, expression. And very simple. That works.

Face expressions make porn enjoyable. Attention for details. Not just a pair of tits attached to a body, but hands, ears, eyes, eyebrows, feet, every single part having its own role in expressing the body language appropriate to the situation. And no weird shit like impossible poses, huge dicks with tits, furries and such. They have their target, but erotism is far away from that

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2000394

is the pussy ok ?
is it ok to make the man a bit unique and not anon-like even when he dosent belong to the universe ?

sketch

>> No.2000419

>>2000393
I love comments like this. It helps me >>2000292
More than you know.

>> No.2000438

>>2000292
>lips
>cheeks
>ass
Disgusting

>> No.2000451
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2000451

>>2000438
Im actually interested in what you think is passable for arousing.
It could help us decode our problem.

>> No.2000456

>My work in the op
So this is what it feels
>>2000451
>>2000438
Me too!

>> No.2000461
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2000461

well

>> No.2000467

>>2000461
if i was a gay furry i would fap.

>> No.2000472
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2000472

>>2000393
B-but I wanted to draw her mostly featureless and scary

>> No.2000479

>>2000472
dont worry hes a moron

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>>2000461
WHAT THE FUCK
i like it but
WHAT THE FUCK

>> No.2000504

>>2000472
Patty Wagan still makes me hard to this day

>> No.2000505

>>2000461
>not drawing a proboscis

>> No.2000532

>2000236
What's pillowshade?

>> No.2000535
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>>2000532

>> No.2000543

>>2000461
STOP
pls STOP
S T O P
T
O
P

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>>2000461
can you draw gore magala sexy pls
btw, your anatomy is fukin great
>>2000504
Why would that ever change

>> No.2000552

>>1999672
Nigga zets kawaii!

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>>2000461
GAAAAAAAAAAAABE

>>2000550
keppoooooooooooooooook

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>>2000461
Dammit, gaben, you're turning me into a degenerate

And I kinda like it

>> No.2000746
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2000746

How do you guys go about set dressing?

If I paint people fucking in an entirely white room it looks too creepy and unnatural. So I try to include props and furniture but I don't know what to add. I look for references but if I google "room" or "restaurant" I only end up with clean and sterile magazine photos. Not helpful at all.

So how to use set design to add naturality? Pic related, it helps a lot to make the character feel alive.

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>>2000746
Another example. Much more natural and believable than figures floating in empty space.

>> No.2000753
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>> No.2000756

>>2000612
>>2000602
'gaben'? Is that who this is?
I want to see this person's blog, someone give me a URL!

>>2000746
look up girls on tumblr that post photos of themselves all the damn time, just copy their rooms.

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>> No.2000769

>>2000753

Son, we need to have a talk.

Meet me downstairs and tell your sister to leave the room.

>> No.2000771

>>2000746
draw a rectangle, that's your floor plan, put shit on in places you'd likely find it, use your friends shitty messy ass rooms for inspiration (oR YOUR VERY OWN) or jus do like >>2000756 said, but don't straight up copy, that could very well lead to you comin off as super creepy if you ever get found out you're jus hard copyin some girls room that you don't kno. after that move to the walls that would be visible in sketch background, then construct the perspective in the back of the sketch, an align the walls/floor with the perspective of the background sketch, then draw up from the floor where you placed things on the floor map. you gotta get the perspective guides right tho or else it'll jus fuck everything up in the floor/wall plans. there you go, simple background design, jus embellish/give things form that need them an do em up with with consistant stylized lines or whatever feels like it'd work

>> No.2000776

>>2000461
This is very well done, and gay beyond the realms.

What made you do this?

>> No.2000778

>>1999154
I actualy like to draw porn.
What if it "follows" me? PEople fuck, they come all over each others faces, stick stuff up each other's ass, the have no grounds to judge me.

>> No.2000789

>>2000461
gonna need a tumblr link

>> No.2000797

>>1999154
It's the most human scene, along with death. All your ancestors fucked and died. Why shouldn't we express it?

>> No.2000809

>>2000797
>All your ancestors fucked and died
Prove it, you charlatan.

>> No.2000822

>>2000394
I think it's too far down. And a bit too short in length.
Also what is the picture of, spanking? With who?

>> No.2000823
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2000823

>>2000756
>>2000789
http://justmegabenewell.tumblr.com/

>>2000776
230 USD

to be fair though the guy commissioned me this because I draw gay bugs all the time and I think he was just being nice and playing to my interests.

>> No.2000828

>>2000823
wow.

>> No.2000839

>>2000823
You prefer varied commission requests, or would you rather they play to your preferred areas?

>> No.2000840

>>2000823
How long did it take you to start making like 1k a month with this stuff from when you started your fa/tumblr?

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>>2000823

>> No.2000844

>>2000839
varied for sure. Its nice that in the past month I've finally been getting some straight stuff.
>>2000840
like around two years, I was just in school fucking around though, just started taking it seriously a bit ago. I can do a batch in a week plus a couple days so its more like 3-4k a month

>> No.2000845

>>2000842
>dat dan
Anon I love you.

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2000846

>>2000823
>I draw gay bugs all the time
How in the blue fuck does anyone think of this shit?
goddamn

>> No.2000853

>>2000823
>>2000844
So you can actually make money with gay porn? That's nice. Did drawing porn affect your life at all? I mean, you seem to be pretty open about posting it, have people you know confronted you about it?

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>>2000846
bugs are hot $tuff anon

>> No.2000856

>>2000854
>all these details on the genitals
S-senpai, I...

>> No.2000861

>>2000853
>So you can actually make money with gay porn?
>not knowing about bara
>not knowing about female NEETS obsessed over yaoi
>not knowing about Incase

Shiggy

>> No.2000864

>>2000861
I certainly know about all of them and I'm part of all of them but I don't have a DA or tumblr and I still can't comprehend how people are so willing to spend so much money for such art.

>> No.2000865

I've noticed a lot of popular erotica artists use a really soft rendering style with seldom use of hard edges and stark contrast. I wonder if that's a coincidence or if the latter just isn't good for commercial porn.

>> No.2000866

>>2000846
I know man. Now that I'm on FA, I look at other people's stuff and I admit I'm incredibly impressed, envious even, of some of the insane things these guys come up with. They'll throw all kinds of stuff together and splash whatever the fuck color in there. They create characters with a lot of personality. Meanwhile all my oc's have the most boring ass t-shirt and jeans designs ever. I sincerely need to step up my game, and I feel like I'm learning a lot not just by looking at furry porn but drawn porn altogether.

>> No.2000867

>>2000864
Also the question was more about others confronting you about it. Like friends, family gf/bf etc.

>> No.2000870

>>2000853
Everyone in my real life knows, I'm entirely open about it. I had to tell my family since I had to explain where all the cash was coming from but for friends and others I just bring it up because I think its funny and cool as hell to make bank off of stupid porn. Besides my very conservative and christian mother I haven't had a negative reaction yet, most people think its pretty cool.

Generally as long as you're confident and not a stuttering sperg you can get away with anything.

>> No.2000871

>>2000864
>>2000867
When they ask you what you do, you look in their eyes intensely. Lean in, and say in a direct and commanding voice,
>I draw anthromorphic porn, and I am able to make a living off of it
Then you lean back. You feel the glares of a thousand people not only in the room, but in the next room over and so on. You then take a sip of your coffee or a bite of your food and thank them for their time. Though, no ome will say anything but maybe whisper "soggy knees", but its only a whisper. And like a gust of wind, you exit the building and wonder what you're going to do with that tossed salad and scrambeld eggs.

>> No.2000872

>>2000870
>Generally as long as you're confident and not a stuttering sperg you can get away with anything.

Ive been working on both.
I got my speech problem in check, but not the confidence yet. Ill figure it out

>> No.2000873

>>2000870
>I had to tell my family since I had to explain where all the cash was coming from
My sides. I don't know where you live, but in my country people would probably commit suicide after hearing you make 2-4 times their salary by drawing porn.

>> No.2000874

>>2000866
When I first drew porn, it was difficult because I had never drawn characters interacting with eachother before.
So it opened up new things for me too do.
I found that its more about the linework and subtle color

>> No.2000875

>>2000870
>Generally as long as you're confident and not a stuttering sperg you can get away with anything.
True, true.

>>2000871
And how long did it take until you started to make money from commissions? I mean you had to draw all this porn for yourself before people started noticing you.

>> No.2000881
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>>2000865
Examples?

>> No.2000884

>>2000865
More like they can't into chiaroscuro because porn artist focus on good drawings rather than good rendering. Flat colors -> smudge a little shadows in is much faster than planning a coherent light structure.

>> No.2000885

Not him
>>2000875
Everything takes time, and this is an investment.
Try listening to the "Trifecta of Success" episodes of a podcast

>> No.2000888

>>2000884
When you trynna bust a nut, you thinking about light angles n shit?

>> No.2000891

>>2000881
Kyle comes to mind, Sunibee, dude here >>2000823 I don't mean to bash it, or anything, I enjoy the work of these artists; just trying to analyze the market, you know.

>>2000884
Dunno if it's because some can't into it, but it makes sense to focus more on the drawing, I guess. Streamlining the process.

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2000914

>>2000891
You just gotta make skin seem pudgy and cute and soft

>> No.2000934

>>2000884
they can't into chiaroscuro cause they couldn't care for it. as andrew wk puts it, we do what we like cause we like what we do

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2000945

>>2000884
>>2000934
Hmm

>> No.2000948

>>2000945
yo, when you show me a shadow a can blast it to, i'll give chiaroscuro more attention

>> No.2000949
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>>2000914
Thanks Kep

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>>2000948
Alrighty

>> No.2000975

>>2000870
Do you do do everything through FA or part email? Do you just open commissions and some guy messages you and then you send off 3 sketches they pick one then they send you half the cash to your paypal then you send them a low quality final piece with watermark then they pay the rest and get the big version? Sorry for the questions I just don't want to get fucked over.

>> No.2001048
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2001048

Some small progress.
Her legs are quite distracting, i want her to crush my neck with her thunder thighs.

>> No.2001067

>>2001048
for the love of god, I don't care whatever she's wearing, change the boobs, and work on her hands. The hand resting on her hip makes the pose very awkward.

>> No.2001197
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2001197

first try at this kind of stuff, what do you guys think?

>> No.2001243

>>2000822
miku

>> No.2001277

>>2000873
>2-4 times their salary by drawing porn.
hahhahahaha

fucking Russians man, I remember there's a RUS artist on here that also makes a decent amount and he was afraid of anyone finding out because it's pretty much a death sentence to be found gay and or furry there

>> No.2001278

>>2000846
>>2000854
>yfw Whitemantis

>> No.2001292

>>2001197
If you were shooting for a cubist piece it's actually pretty good

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2001298

>>2000873

>> No.2001323

>>2001048
Turn it into Judith please

>> No.2001326

>>2001243
I hope it's Date a Live Miku, she needs a hard spanking.

>> No.2001347
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2001347

>>2000768
Is this srawing made on graphic tablet or what?

>> No.2001350
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2001350

>>2001347
Yours?
Yes.

Theres a strange subtleness when you can tell if it was drawn on paper or on tablet.

>> No.2001351

>>2001350
I-I'm just asking because I'm a complete newfag ;_;

>> No.2001355

>>2001197
If it's still a sketch then keep going, if not then sorry.

>> No.2001363

>>2001351
Thats fine man.
Welcome to probably the 2nd most slowest board on 4chan

>> No.2001845

I always kind of scoffed when people said drawing smut could become your life if you weren't careful. I caught one small foothold and the tide is rising. It's still very very little but I can see what they mean now. It's exciting but a little terrifying.

>> No.2001984
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attempt at some goblin porn

>> No.2002026

>>2001984
curve her jawline a bit more, it feels boxy.

>> No.2002057
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>>2002026

>> No.2002070

>>2002057
Hey im the request guy im liking it so far keep it up Also thanks again for accepting my request.

>> No.2002282

>>1998243
your new name is peter

>> No.2002393

>>2001845
"He who fights with monsters should be careful lest he thereby become a monster. And if thou gaze long into an abyss, the abyss will also gaze into thee."

>> No.2002412

>>2002393
yep, dont look into buttholes too much folks.

>> No.2002420

>>2002282
You're welcome! I'll finish it tonight and post it on the draw thread

>> No.2002427

>>2002420
Alright im looking forward to it.

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2002464

to do list:
- rework hands
- finish hair, other small fixes on linework layer
- maybe some changes to eyelashes

>> No.2002507

>>2002464
Anon, why do you keep posting when you don't listen to us?
Fix the fucking boobs.

>> No.2002521

>>2002464
The boobs?
That pose is kind anatomically wrong. She seems like a wooden body without any kind of bend.

Of course, the boobs are immune to gravity also.

>> No.2002523

>>2002464
>- maybe some changes to eyelashes
>worrying about eyelashes when everything else is wrong
Like my teacher used to say, the highlight on the testicles is the last thing you faggot

>> No.2002526

>>2002507
>why do you keep posting when you don't listen to us?
Sorry about that, but i like them this way.

>> No.2002536

>>2002526
Not any of them, but if you disregard critique, what's the point of posting here?

>> No.2002548

>>2001363
what is the slowest?

>> No.2002550

>>2002536
I'm not ignoring critique, it's just too late to change the pose. I will try to improve my posing skills next time.
Also, some anon said that hands sucks - and i'm working on them. And like i said before, i agree with you guys about boobs, but its just happens that i like em this way.
Sorry again if i look like an ignorant idiot.

>> No.2002552

>>2002526
can you post some example images of works you like, now you've got me curious as to what you're aimin for

>>2002523
you teacher sounded very mean

>> No.2002554
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>>2002552
I love qazieru, ban, legoman. Lilith stuff is great too.

>> No.2002626

>>2002550
>>2002464
At least don't make the boobs start directly under the clavicle, that's bullshit and you know it. Not even muscle babes have boobs that high. Just fix the middle crease to not go all the way up to the clavicle.

>> No.2002758

>>2002548
/h/

>> No.2002761

>>2002626
The boobs sag from the chest muscles via gravity

>> No.2002764

>>2002393
I embrace it.
No really, I actually am enjoying drawing it like a lot. And there are some porn comics I legitimately want to draw that I think people would like. Besides in a lot of ways I'm seeing more success with this than my sfw art so if it becomes my life, hey at least it might be one I could actually live off of.

>> No.2002785

>>2002764
You have become the monster.
Enjoy your time on the darkside of the force.

>> No.2002808

>>2002785
I hear they have cookies.

>> No.2002823

>>2002393
Been playing Baldur's Gate, I see.

>> No.2002849

>>2002761
Yes, but they don't start sagging under the chin

>> No.2003048

>>2002464
>Dat filename
She's definately lacking in muscle for that statement. Get a firm grip on the skeletal system then tackle muscular. I only have half the muscular system and I see errors aplenty.
>Too late to fix pose
Not really, it's not even that bad. I could tell you how to make it workable but better to advise you to get a mirror/camera and do it yourself. Feel the pose. Which muscles are active and which are lax, where are you twisting and turning, where do you feel your bodyweight the most?

Breasts sag from the cooper's ligament, which origin is the clavicle and goes into the deep fascia of the chest (so they hang from both). It's entirely possible to have the cleavage that high (though you won't see it in firm chested women in flattering internet pics), when gravity is in effect... which it isn't.

>> No.2003061

Would displaying porn burn many bridges with people? I want to start displaying and creating more porn, but it seems isolating and I want to make sfw and nsfw works, not just one kind.

>> No.2003072

>>2003061
Seconding the question, I'm curious too.

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Current sketches. Dick's perspective is off but that'll be fixed another day.

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its a giant sea monster buttfucking a skyscraper and ejaculating from his ass

>> No.2003174

>>2003168
Skyscrapers have butts?

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2003186

sorry I'm still using gradiented backgrounds with a single pose. I've been having a hard time deciding if I want to spend time developing full compositions with this sort of thing.

but I'll leave it at that.
Incidentally: right or left?

don't forget there's always the secret third answer

>> No.2003194

>>2003186
>dat whipped cream cum

>> No.2003221

>>2003186
I prefer the left; she looks less like a fresh baked Christmas ham. Also turn down the saturation on the bg a bit, it overwhelms the character.

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>>2002057

>> No.2003296

>>2003294
>>2003294
>>2003294

Bump limit

>> No.2004125

>>2000461
to me it seems like the ass could need some work? I dont think that continous line of the left cheek works well, looks like there is a massive gap between both cheeks, at least it seems unnatural to me.

>> No.2004191

>>1999920
neck looks wayyyy too long, so is the lower half of the leg, if it's foreshortening, dont make one bit almost irl size

>>2000031
if you dont fuck off im gonna start reporting every single one of your posts god fucking dammit

>>2000854
i am scared