/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

awsomesauce, another pornfag thread

fucking 12 year olds.

first nsfw thing ive completed, the colors are pretty fuckin basic i know. New to digital.

>>1941019
no no the colours are rather attractive. with the odd framing you could almost get that into a gallery, only you'd have to have more amateurish lines or very vectory computer ones.

but i guess you're not trying to make fine art..soo..ignore me i guess.

>>1941006
thats ilegal tho

Been working on this, I'll finish coloring it later.

I tried.

First attempt at porn here. I like how it came out and if I hadn't drawn it myself I'm sure I'd fap to it.

>>1941100
more artistic

>>1941102
More artistic? Got it. Thanks for the insightful critic. I'll get on that right now.

>>1941116
i mean it's not very pornographic, kinda hot but not something to fap to.

>>1941118
I guess I have wierd taste. They say you should draw the porn you'd like to see especially if that sort of thing I'd hard to come by. So that's just what I did. But I can't fap to my own art unfortunately so I won't be doing any more porn.

I like older girls with younger teenage boys who do it as bffs

>>1941075
is she only amputeed because you can't draw limbs?
why does she have one boob

>>1941193
nice me too

Ah, /ic/! I finished that gay comic I was working on finally. I don't ever want to see it again.

But I'll still ask- what do you think I should work on drawing better? I feel like I could have done this faster if I had more of an idea of what I was doing.

First time drawing something in like 5 years.

I need another pair of eyes to give some feedback.

Is this finally a thread where /ic/ will critique my hedonistic ass commission sketches? someone red line the (viewer's) leftmost purpleman leg, I can't get it right. Other fixes welcome

not the best at anatomy or forshortning and colors, whats my weakness

>>1941283
try using guide lines and shapes,

>>1941312
I wouldn't know how to fix the leg but the perspective of the left arm seems off and pectorals seem a little short.
Otherwise pretty good, even if I'm not much of a fan of the subject matter.

WIP trap

>mfw i just realized composition and perspective are gonna be important if i want to draw nice pron escenes

this has been a reality check of how little i know about everything
>>1941312
>>1941330
nice dicks !

>>1941319

drawing

>>1941345
dayum

>>1941352

You know it's true.

>>1941330
The trap is pretty amazing anon, the guy on the other hand looks like a midget, as if he lost half his torso, maybe you wanted to foreshorten him or make him look as if he is leaning? but it doesn't look like it.

>>1941361
if I added a penis would you have liken it?

>>1941330
>guy does not have the HUMAN DECENCY to give trap a reach-around while fucking him in the ass

>>1941366

Nah man, crudely drawn dick doesn't get me going.

All joking aside, do yourself a favor and read the sticky, work on your fundamentals. Or forever wallow in less than mediocrity. Your choice.

>>1941120
jesus, you faggots with your "I can't fap to my own art!"
Nobody cares, stop POINTING IT OUT CONSTANTLY.

>>1941395
this whole board is repetition
soon there will be another thread about tablets again.
soon there will be a beginner that asks how he leans most efficient
soon there will be a newfag making own thread for shitty art
etc etc etc

Enjoy that it isn't dead.

>>1941281
I like the general idea but there are several things bothering me:
1. You have this very distinct style in the first few panels with flat colors and bold lines but then you go and fuck it up with chicken scratch to, I guess, indicate volume.
2. Anatomy overall is okay but could be a lot better. Also consider consistency, sometimes her hips are wide, then suddenly she looks like a holocaust victim in the next panel.
3. You can't do fucking poses. This might hurt the most I guess but your fucking poses just aren't very hot, the worst offender being the "I'm cumming" panel. What the hell is she doing with her arms?!

I hope this helps some.

>>1941281
I like the general idea but there are several things bothering me:
1. You have this very distinct style in the first few panels with flat colors and bold lines but then you go and fuck it up with chicken scratch to, I guess, indicate volume.
2. Anatomy overall is okay but could be a lot better. Also consider consistency, sometimes her hips are wide, then suddenly she looks like a holocaust victim in the next panel.
3. You can't draw fucking poses. This might hurt the most I guess but your -fucking- poses just aren't very hot, the worst offender being the "I'm cumming" panel. What the hell is she doing with her arms?!

I hope this helps some.

>>1941395
Cry more faggot.

>>1941422
Nah, all's been said. Go back to not fapping to your art.

>>1941432
Not that guy but I can not fap to my own stuff because I know where I struggled and when I am looking at it I can't help but notice the mistakes and then I get mad and it's a turn off.

>>1941438
git gud

>>1941375
okay, got it and whats the sticky? just wondering,

>>1941263
I like drawing amputees, and I lost the other boob.

im sketching this will make clean lines on top. any mistakes ?

posting a screencap because "deteceted possible malicous code in image file" fuck that.

>>1941486
dont see anything wrong with it, carry on

>>1941486
distance from bellybutton to pussy is too big
lasso the bikini bottom and move it up

>>1940993
by the way, source on op image?

>>1941020
not him but, are you serious?

>>1941193
/ss/ is the way too go keppok

>Commission
>Halfway through realize still cant do nice walls and cant do cardboard textures
>Oh I know, FLOORS
>Still get paid

>>1941337
whos the girl?

Quick stuff I do when taking break from animuhtion practise

>>1941462
first thread in the catalog yo.
You need some sweet new books to help you feel the contour.

>>1941580
Too much white in her hair.
reminds me of a mosquito leg close up

>>1941598
yeah, i keep forgetting where i'm supposed to put highlights

>>1941594
>using adobe reader like a scrub
go back to reddit, faggot

>>1941281
hahahahahaha

>>1941555
http://pururin.com/gallery/7680/rppp.html

Was on the drive back home from a short vacation with some friends. We got bored at some point so they asked me to draw lewd shit.
Quick made this up on the lappy.

>>1941604
>using a basic application
>reddit

wow, you sure got me.

>>1941580
what perspective

>>1941580
How much did you get paid for this?

>>1941653
why

>>1941580
I see that you tried to apply the master floor technique.

>>1941645
It's a learning experience

>>1941399
Life is repetition dude.

>>1941656
Just curious. I want to start doing commissions aswell and want to see what people in different skill levels get for their work.

>>1941580

>see someone paid for this
>produce work that is lot better than this
>have not made a dime

welp

>>1941663
>dat hot wax action on the floor

Lewd.

>>1941663
too bad that guy is going blind.

>>1941330
>draw little boy
>give him stockings
>"trap"

>>1941697
Sounds like you expect people to magically find you.

>>1941714

I was going to point it out, glad you did it first. This is not trap just normal gay sex.

>>1941747
>normal

I dont draw this stuff.
I am a Innocent lamb.
...
Have a shitty tingle.

>>1941407
THANK YOU! This really does help. I thought anatomy would be one of the bigger problems here but it turns out I didn't give enough attention to anything else important!! Consistency, style, and poses. Maybe I'll try copying pin-ups or something. Just keep doing gestures or something, anything that helps. Consistency is pretty big too so I'm going to have to do some exercises for that as well huh.

Thank you, I'll work on improving with these in mind.

>>1941712
What?

>>1941697
post your work man

>>1941312
dafuk is wrong with you mayne

>>1941312
this is so gay and i hate you for drawing it but i think that's very well drawn. love the angle anataomy and pose!

>>1941767
mark my words,
by the end of 2015, the gays will have taken over everything and have all the rights.

We gonna fail like Greece in the ancient days

>>1941847
>>1941892
"the gay" is in demand.
Hell its been in hot demand since 2013.
Hop on the money train faggot

>>1941976
really like this style. plz tell me you have a blog

>>1941336
>>1942005
even if you are almost unknown ?

>>1942300
The spectrum for standards by fanbase in drawn porn is like: Really specific weird shit, normal, gay, beast, furry, any combination of the last 3. So if you aren't a double amputee there's someone with money and a boner for dog dicks that will be willing to trade.

>>1941747
> just normal gay sex

flashnews ; sex with a trap is a gay sex.

>>1942322
Really?

You got what I said.

>>1941046
Oh shit man good stuff you open to suggestions of who to draw with a /penis/?

>>1942303
>normal
where do i find these people?

>>1941594
Can you upload the anatomy for sculptors one please?

1/??

>you will never find a good place to get crit on your furry porn

hey guys i want to make some fanart for you know exposure

but i have no idea what is cool nowadays and iam just drawing mindlessly

which anime/videogame/etc is cool at the moment ?

im this anon btw
>>1941336
>>1942300

>>1942491
check fapping charts

http://rule34.xxx/icameout.php

>>1942524
>http://rule34.xxx/icameout.php
holy shit anon thanks!
didnt know these things existed :^)
guess i got some work to do
>it actually explains why a zelda/samus fanart i did is the most popular

>>1942524
>http://rule34.xxx/icameout.php
>spider-man

>>1942465
but that's the whole point of this thread, just post it dude

I am>>1942005

>>1942300
It takes time to gather a following group, but doing that cuts the waiting time.

>>1942394
Doing vanilla stuff or strictly SFW

>>1942465
post it dude

>>1942491
>>1942524
>>1942572
>>1942574
Also, just to top off on this jam; You find whats popular by looking for trends and lingo online. Thats a bit broad, so lets break it down. We have some nice boards too see whats the 'hot nigga' of the season.
>>>/v/
>>>/co/
>>>/tg/

About the I-came chart, consider that it shows what is popular and what is not. Take advantage of it too see what characters are oversaturated, and which ones arent.

>>1942491
I'd say draw any character from either Big Hero 6 or Overwatch.

All I've been drawing lately is /d/ material. But that anon seems to know what's up, maybe I'll switch to doing more /y/ stuff, I think I'm better at drawing guys anyway.

>>1942106
sure do! svaltevolt.tumblr.com

>>1942431
>>1941486
>>1941193
>>1941312
>>1942300
>>1941336
>>1942793
Where the blogs at doe?

>>1942835
Well, I'm >>1942793 and my blog doesn't have very very much on it because I just sort of started getting into nsfw and am still figuring out what I wanna do or should do, but here's a link so you can check it out: http://onyxhorn-aries.tumblr.com/ I'm also open to suggestions on what I should do more of. I assume "color" would be one lol

>>1942841
Be upfront about the commissions, don't hide it as one of the posts, that can easily get lost. And provide the examples what people should expect. I know they're like all over your blog, but you want to do the "research" as convinient for your potential customer as possible.

>>1942851
Yeah, I tried to embed the commissions post somehow, but I couldn't figure it out, using their editor, and even spending a day looking at html tutorials. I know there has to be a good way to do it, no idea what to do though. Also yes, I was thinking about it yesterday and you're right, I definitely should make more of a commissions poster with examples, like you said. Still I need to figure out how I can put it somewhere it's easily seen. I wish they had a "pin this post" sort of function like twitter.

>>1942856
http://onyxhorn-aries.tumblr.com/image/91663651898

>The D for Disney
lel

>>1942744
>>1942688
h-here I go

>>1942856
>>1942860
Also, Thats some sweet jam you got.

>>1942856
>scrolling
>see Powergirl in the blue sweater
ah.
I remember that was posted in /co/

>>1942860
>>1942884
Haha, I had forgotten I made that goofy joke. Thanks too, btw.
>>1942900
Yeah I used to draw more regularly over there but lately I've been on /v/. I think pretty much everything on the blog right now was either from a drawthread or was a commission. I have some ideas for personal pieces, I just need time to do them. It's funny though, I started doing this to make a little bit of money, and explore other avenues of art, because everything with my sfw stuff was in a lull, and now that I've been trying to do more nsfw, my sfw has suddenly become more demanding. Not complaining for sure, but really, just as I was getting into it? lol

>>1942005
stop posting this on every fucking thread jesus

>>1942835
well, I'm
>>1941193
and it's http://keppok.tumblr.com

Here's something I'm working on lining since I'm always a sloppy piece of shit and I'm hoping to finish something nice

Help! I struggle with foreshortening, can somebody fix the left leg or point out what's wrong?

Also the neck looks odd

>>1943123
is this vono

>>1941019
mother of christ

>>1943115
Wow, this is actually very good. Best post in this thread so far, methinks.

>>1942876
update

I was told that things were "off" with this, but nobody really specified past the hair and part of the mouth.

Does anyone here have a better idea about what's so wrong with it? Aside from not having lewd bits yet.

>>1942744
>>1942769
thanks for the help!
i think iam just gonna change her head for one of the overwatch characters haha

btw is it me or the perspective is off?

>>1943123
There are two parts that I can see I fudged but the idea should be there. Try to overlap your forms. The foot in your image looks like a badly designed animal prothstetic.
Good form on the rest though watch how you angle the hand on her butt. Hope it helps man.

>>1942921
You can't deny it grandpa

>all this amateur porn in here
Goddamn, its a strange fetish too have but, it fuels me.
Now I gotta concentrate on not fapping and drawing, haha

>>1942744
Very helpful. Thanks.

>>1943287

Things are not just ''off'', most of the body makes no sense.

Read the sticky anon and draw a lot, good luck.

>>1943393
OH JESUS FUCKING CHRIST

>>1943345
Thanks for the help man, I tend to add unnecessary lines when fore shortening when it's simpler than it seems like the line you added.

>>1943429
If you drew the rhomboid muscle, I'm not seeing it, not that it'll matter when you finish her hair. Pretty much put that muscle in connecting to the middle of the scapula make it so it resembles a log(x) function and attaching to the middle of the base of the skull. then the neck should be as you previously intended it with that lighter line. I'm no pro so take this with just a grain of salt.

>>1943393
Thanks man. Its reassuring to know that I started closer to correct than I ended up, especially with the shoulders. Hopefully I'll learn to stop making things worse in frustration with more practice.

A great resource for improving all your NSFW works is gonna be by Tom Nguyen and it's called something along the lines of Incredible Comic Book Women. It goes over S-curves and keeping things simple, those are components that make women beautiful and less manly.

>>1943447
Mainly practice, but also note some other things. Some of your issues include perspective and anatomy. Knowing where fat, muscle, and bone are and how to express them through value and shading is very important. Also, use guidelines to assist with placing and proportioning. a favorite of mine is establishing the length of the breastbone. this length can be used virtually anywhere from the ribcage up up. it expresses the width of the collarbone, resolving shoulder width issues and it also helps with head size, which can be used in establishing head size, which is the key to completing the rest of the body as the human body is 7.5 heads tall. From there research other good guidelines. since the vagina is a little above the halfway mark of the entire body and we now know how tall she'll be with head sizes, place it about three headlengths down from the top. easy peasy?

>>1943454
sorry, lemme correct a few things. forgot to say always start with the torso because that's gonna be what everything connects to and the breastbone length determines the distance b/w the top of the head and nose, which determines head length. hope these two messages don't confuse you more, because they are great advice!!! :)

>>1943447

No problem and you will with enough practice.

>>1943457
I get what you're saying yeah.

What I mean't though was that I had the right shoulder dropped closer to the left collarbone before redrawing it. That and making the breasts fit worse by making them small in a lazy way did a lot more harm than good.

No real excuses for the other mistakes though.

>>1943457

>>1943489
I was always told it was 8 heads, but I guess that's a really minor difference. Maybe opinions have shifted in the last 5 years on that idk.

I actually have one question though if you're still around. How would you apply the head scale to something like >>1943123

>>1943495
Great question and you're probably right about the 8 heads, but 7.5 works for my hentai.
I saw this awesome tutorial on youtube that applies that thing I did in step 4 where I stack circles. only you overlap them and make them larger as they approach you kinda like foreshortening them. a little more difficult, I admit. I definitely couldn't pull that angle/pose off.

Here, have some terrible furfag smut. I did this one afternoon for a friend. He loved it, but I'm far from happy, I didn't really invest too much time into it and have considered redoing it or going back to it. What think smut minded d/ic/ks?

>>1943513
>Bicycle handles

I've seen Honda guys do this to their roofs of their rice rockets but this is ridiculous.

>>1943515
Yeah, that's part of his gig. His "master" had his horns turned into handles, for slut pounding purposes. I don't know, this is what I had to work with.

>>1943518
>His "master"

Every. Fucking. Time.

>>1943518
Its probably in the top 10 of most absurd things I've seen.

>>1943518

Why is being left handed so hard?

>>1942491
Korra stuff is pretty popular but I think its somewhat saturated. Ton of Korra related shit. The important thing is to find a character that there really isnt much material of and just draw that character. Has to be from a popular series.

Amagi Brilliant Park has a nice cast of girls to choose from. Junketsu no Maria seems like it will gain popularity this season and there really isnt much fanart from it.

I think your best bet is to find something that is fairly new and seems to be gaining popularity. Be one of the first artists to draw fanart (lewd usually helps). Problem with picking something that is really popular is that there probably is too much fanart that yours will get lost.

>>1943553
You could also consider doing something for really popular characters that don't have much GOOD art.

>>1943557
Like Midna, Peach and Samus.

>>1943445
Something like this? I'm trying to make sense of the back muscles, but it's a very complicated region

>>1943620
forgot pic

Thoughts?

>>1943732
Face looks like a child, doesnt fit.

Also belly button and vagina are way too close.

>>1943393
Hands don't disappear under tits like that.

>>1943732
The butt/legs are squeezed to much, since she's spreading her legs, also, your forgot some sinews/muscles around the vagina.

>>1943732
The shoulders and back/scapula are hella wrong legs are wrong. Torso is weirdly proportioned. Tits dont look like that. Inner legs dont look like that on that angle. Face is dumb.

>>1943495
7-10 heads is what most people seem to work to. 8 heads is standard, but its a little taller the the realistic average.

>>1943292
-Left hand seems to be a bit longer than right one
-Legs are slightly too long or the torso is misplaced too far to the right (and I suppose it's not since she's hugging her legs, suggesting a forward lean)
-Relative to point above, feet are too far to the left and/or forward which makes the floor seem steeper than what the floortiles would allow it to be


ps. rights/lefts from girls perspective, can't be arsed to change now

>>1943624

I like the direction you're going in. There's a guy on youtube that goes by the name of Sycra that has really great anatomy tutorials. I have the link, but if you don't trust it, just search the title and profile name under, "how to draw the shoulder [sic]" - Sycra.

Linkey: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hctC43wq0pY

>That face when literally no one else likes your porn.

How can you people all be into the same generic shit. I mean these poses are so unbelievable and cheesy. Oh and don't forget the cheesy smile and cum on face... The state of weeb porn is deplorable at best.

>>1944085
I think the issue is you just draw poorly and unattractively.

>>1944072
Thanks I'll watch them

Something I've actually been working on for someone else, but I don't feel like the pose has enough life to it. I'm stalled out and hate it.

i can never "finish" a drawing

>>1944086
You're probably right. But I doubt that that's entirely true.

>>1941281
thats some eisner shit right fucking there

>>1944072
He's a great guy for beginners. His art is so simple and easy to follow, while still being technically advanced enough to respect.

>>1944091
Have her arms grab onto something or such, twist the torso, maybe have her lean on something. Unfortunately bad poses is something you have to restart almost totally for, but I would advise it. It's a mediocre drawing which could be a lot better.

>>1941832
>being this new

>>1944118
Yeah, which is why I dropped it. I mean, you can even see where I had to adjust the arm in the background.

I always come into the worst difficulty when I try to do anything without a reference.

>>1941281
>>1941336

i love it

Where do you guys get your reference material?

>>1944123
If you want to cheat for easy reference, a lot of pixelovely or sketchdaily poses can be transposed into sexual situations.

>>1941584
that's a fun gif. I like you.

>>1943773

>Face looks like a child, doesnt fit.

I can see why you'd say that yes.
Is it just because of the tongue or other details as well?

>Also belly button and vagina are way too close.

Yup, thanks for pointing out.

>>1943789

I'm still trying to figure out what looks good down there, mind being a bit more specific?

>>1943795

I'm aware that the torso/back is broken. it's looked good in my base but something went wrong while I was inking, I tried to fix it but couldn't get the job done.

Could you go a bit more into detail on the other points?(tit's/legs/inner legs)

>>1943788

Your right, but I don't think that what he should be focusing on that right now.
Al tough I should have mentioned it.

>>1944214
Looks too round compared to the rest of the body.

>>1944215

What exactly?

>>1944217
The face. Generally kids have less defined facial structure until reaching adulthood.

>>1943788
What do you mean exactly? Are you saying the fingers should come out onto the upper arm? or something different.

>>1944218
Okeey, i'll keep it in mind.

This is like a beginner thread.

>>1944249
nah there are some really good drawings here

>>1944085
>How can you people all be into the same generic shit.
Ill tell you a secret anon.
People like what they already know whats familar with them. Pinup, ahego, licking of the peen, tounge on cooch, its all familiar.

>>1944249
We are cultivating their inner perversion anon. Isnt it great?

>>1944343
Kinda boring when that's 90% of what you see. Most of the time I'm like what great design, but such a shitty pose or arrangement.

>>1944383
Have you frequented any drawthreads? People's requests are basically a meme unto themselves. They could practically all be filled with reskinned templates. I think it's the stupidest shit in the world that these guys all want a different head on essentially the same body and claim they can't get off if it doesn't have the same head. Then they complain about artists who "sameface" and "samebody" but if you deliver them a drawing that's different, they don't actually like it. People don't know what they want and if you wanna do this for money, it's not worth the effort to be an artist's artist about it. If you get popular enough and care enough maybe you can start doing more without losing money, otherwise I myself prefer to put that effort into my sfw.

>>1944383
Have you frequented any drawthreads? People's requests are basically a meme unto themselves. They could practically all be filled with reskinned templates. I think it's the stupidest shit in the world that these guys all want a different head on essentially the same body and claim they can't get off if it doesn't have that one head. Then they complain about artists who "sameface" and "samebody" but if you deliver them a drawing that's different, they don't actually like it. People don't know what they want and if you wanna do this for money, it's not worth the effort to be an artist's artist about it. If you get popular enough and care enough maybe you can start doing more without losing money, otherwise I myself prefer to put that effort into my sfw.

>>1944416
I know right, I only jack off to basquiat impersonators like a patrician.

>>1944418
Damn that joke was 2smart4me.
I had to actually look that shit up.

>>1944434
Hot right?

>>1944436
Y-yeah...

Thought I would post this before the inking process, suggestions?

>>1944734
Drawing a nude body, does not make it porn.

>>1944783
Not really sure what's going on with the mouth. Its really ambiguous as to what the shapes the lines are supposed to indicate.

>>1941610
...

>tfw I jacked off to gay hentai for the first time.

>>1944882
Don't worry anon
It just means you were always a fucking faggot.

>>1944888
Well you should, because I'm going to turn you into my boy bitch if you don't get the fuck off my shit.

>>1944383
>>1944416
Think of the Pokemon/Call of Duty theory.
its the same game, but with minor changes, and casual people call it the game of the year, every year.

>>1944790
tell every booru that

>>1941075
You failed.

>>1941100
The left tit is all fucked. And mother of christ, why is every pornfag here obsessed with chicks having dicks?

>>1941193
Good figure study

>>1945139
>>1945139
Because most of /ic/ sneak on over to /d/ I've heard you faggots squawk your parroting over there like anatomy is off and sameface this and that. You faggots can not even have a good fap without being autistic about a drawing and its mistakes.

Who would fap to something that was obviously drawn by a 12 year old? NSFW art is supposed to be engrossing and get you horny, it's hard to get horny over something when it's proportions aren't even fucking possible.

>>1945139
>why is every pornfag here obsessed with chicks having dicks?
Its the Bailey Jay jam.
Also, a lot of closet gays

>>1945168
4chan is filled with closet gays. I had no idea that "OP is a fag" was so literal these days.

>>1945154
Im not sure about you, but I get off to poorly drawn 34 more than better drawn 34.
Its something about the innocence of the artist gets me rock fucking hard

>>1945141
Hey thanks.
>tfw never studied figures
>tfw never drew from a reference

is it easy to tell? It's hard for me to not draw from imagination.

actually trying to draw environments now

>>1945172
No I mean, in all honesty it looks like you've taken a few classes. This is a lot better than most can do if you did it quickly. I notice you focused/drew only the "fun" parts, however. Make sure you put some focus into the less interesting parts, too. It makes a world of difference.

>>1945171
That is definitely different. Whatever floats your boat. However, this is a place called "art/critique" so I if something is shit, I'll let them know so they realize they need to improve.

>>1941583
Detective from gargoyles

>>1945185
Yeah, I usually get the general idea down and only work on the parts I like, I heard for people who aren't artists it's hard for them to tell where a picture like that might be going.
And I draw really fast, it's hard to finish anything since I'm jumping around sketches all the time.
and thanks

>>1945174
cute i like it

>>1944734
Like, seriously. Could somebody ever even include this in their masturbation routine?

>>1945171
here

>>1945455
i already fapped too it.
I like it

im learning how to make pictures look nice. I mean polished but no luck so far. faces are trubble too.

If you're into foot fetish hentai with wonky anatomy and excessive use Gaussian blur, I've got precisely the thing for you.

I made this in the early morn', upon seeing https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xeo6tJgmiX0

The gif seems to float around, but I never caught the name of the original creator. His stuff from what I've seen looks pretty fun.

>>1945736
>shyguygirls

This is a thing?

>>1945729
Careful with that rendering, that torso is all sorts of messed up and confused. Don't be afraid to look up reference to compare with what you're doing.
Also, the eyes are unfocused, and looking in different directions. Further, the lines that I assume represent eye lashes are pointing inward, which eye lashes do no do.
Also, that line of highlight going horizontally across the nose kills the form of it. It flattens it out, and having the vertical highlight above it indicating the bridge further confuses it.

>>1945738

You'd be surprised.

>>1940993
wip.
What do you think?

>>1945742
i dont see how torso is messed up.

>>1945766
Go away Iiniku.

>>1945766
I'm at work so I can't provide a edited image comparison, but carefully look at your image, and the reference. Flip the images if you need to. Specifically, look at where you placed the bottom of the ribcage, and how wide you made it in comparison to her shoulders. You've drawn a very long, and wide torso, that does not match up to the rest of the body. Also, as for rendering, the way you've rendered the shadow cast be her arm on her torso makes it appear to elongate the ribcage further. From the looks of it you misunderstood the reference there.

>>1945774
yeah now i see.
fuck, another time wasted.

>>1945766
>tfw you are out of shape
>tfw you want to look this good again
>tfw you are 20 years old and feel it's too late to look cute like this

>>1945787
I'm 27 and I have that build.
Break out the jogging shoes and yogurt nigga.

>>1945787
shes 30-something i think

>>1945787
lol, that isn't old at all. You can still do it, it's just hard to motivate by yourself. You need a work out buddy.

>>1945787
Post nudes and we'll decide.

>>1945789
She's over 40 years old.

>>1945787
tl;dr
please have sex with me

mistakes on this one ?

>>1945823
It's more likely that she gained weight to keep people away.

>>1945729

>>1945872
t-t-thanks.

>>1945780
You should consider learning how to create a greater illusion of volume rather than just drawing the shadows. The picture is good but appears flat.

>>1945788
are you a t-trap?

>>1945889
yes

>>1945902
kill yourself

>>1945902

>>1945904
Isn't the transgendered suicide rate already too high?

>>1945914
Not high enough apparently

>>1945924
mean and rude.
good looking traps are better then woman.

More line weight needed perhaps?
Other remarks are welcome as well.

>>1945927
So everyone remember, be attractive or none of it counts.

>>1945880
You're right. I do need to focus on that. It's hard. I need a better understanding of anatomy so I can add to the photographs I use as a reference.

I need to pay rent

>>1945971

The flow and setup of the body is quite nice but your piece is lacking in the erotic factor.

The stretched leg and the way the lower back connects to her ass need some more attention tho.

>>1945994
honestly, looking at his pic I forgot I was in the NSFW thread.

>>1945996
at least she's masturbating.

>>1945998
She is? Doesn't look like it..

>>1946002
She's using the edge of the table to grind on.

Schlicking 101

>>1946003
How utterly barbaric.

>>1945971
Is drawing porn and furry shit the best way to get dosh?

>>1946005
whatever get's the job done.

>>1946006
>the best way
If you're fucking incompetent, yes.

Seriously, if you were actually good the best way is go get actual work from companies and such.

>>1946006
not the best way but the easiest way. I don't how these people find clients though.

>>1945729
put the eyelashes on the outside. Sometimes it's cute exaggerating the lashes pointing towards the center of the face, but only if the head is turned (attached pic of what I mean)
Also be wary of putting the eyes too close together. Sometimes it has a charm but in this case I think it's overdone.

>>1946006
don't ask me, I'm not getting paid

>>1945729
Honestly I think its adorable. There are a couple of issues, but you've succeeded in making an appealing form and expression.

>>1946027
I love perspective, your drawings are great, pls give me your blog

>>1945935
I did a thing. I can't really help you with translating that angle to the manga face so i just drawn it in my semi-realistic bullshit.You got lazy with those arms - they make your drawing look very flat. Add some form to them.

>>1945746
Can't fucking read the text.

>>1946027
Very well done. The obscuring of most of the bodies doesn't even look rookie in this.

>>1946034
I don't have one, senpai
but thanks

>>1946043
Get a deviantart, a tumblr, something.

>>1945889
No, I'm a woman. And as a matter of fact I just got back from a walk to the store to buy more yogurt.
>>1945902
Very funny anon, very funny.

>>1946035

I try to make the best of it anon. Thanks for the input.

>>1944094
nice, do you have a blog or something?

>>1946051
I try.

>>1945816
/pol/ plz go

>>1945927
>good looking traps are better then woman.

fuckbois are better than traps son

>>1946003
still something to fap to even though I didn't know what was happening. do you have more of this shit?

>>1946011
>>1946013
>/ic/ has professionals getting mullah.
go figure

>>1946051
post pics of body
for reference

>>1946034
keep truckin with that /ss/ keppok

>>1946064
Aint dat much bro

>>1946074
I meant the artist. If that artist made one piece I like, maybe he likes to draw porn I like

It's >>1942793 here again. My nsfw blog isn't getting any traffic and I'm not sure how to get it going. I've been doing fanart, and I think I've been tagging pretty well, although there are some pics I'm thinking of re-tagging since I learned about the 5 tags only deal. What can I do to get more people looking at it? More color? Generally better drawings? More recent fandom art like... I dunno, Big Hero 6 or something?

>>1940993
I wanna develop muh style and I'm looking for hentai artists to draw inspiration from. Any recommendations? I'm mainly looking for different types of coloring but b/w art is fine too.

For a drawthread awhile back.

>>1946138
Pussy is too high, but gaddamn my waifu never looked so good.

Need some eyes on this.

>>1946151
And another pic.

>>1946152
I reversed googled it, and Im having a grand time.
Im too tired to give you critique.
sorry broski

>>1946185
All good. Thanks anyway, anon.

>>1946138
legs and pelvis could have been drawn better but delicious dayum.

>>1945139
why do you think they're so obsessed with learnin to draw

>>1946138
boobs are slightly off on da chest, remember to think of the ribcage as a 3d rounded form an place the breasts accordingly (i altered the ribcage to be a bit thinner instead of redrawin the boobs, i'm doin this in mspaint). also the extension of the pectoral muscle into the titty usually doesn't directly line up with the outer contour of the boob tissue (i included a lil ref)

also, her mound of venus is a bit too short, like almost non-existant unfortunately, but dat labia majora is nicely drawn, jus needs to be placed lower (in the pose she's doin currently, you wouldn't actually really see much of it)

also, her right (our left) leg should be a big chunkier/musclier(?) in my personal opinion to be more proportional with her ass

overall tho you seem to be gettin there nwn

Kill me

>>1946340
head is way to small in the upper right hand corner, tho the rest is decent

be careful with the bottom right corner, the angle of that shot requires the dick haver to lean really far back or else you get that "clippin through 3d model" camera angle

>>1946125
Anyone?

>>1946399
Its a slowboard man.

Do some fan art, like a series of it, it will get rebloged by collector blogs and then liked rebloged by the people that follow that.

Pic something you like, that a bunch of other people like, and draw a bunch of shit about it. Post comments like who should I do next?

>>1946416
>Its a slowboard man
In my defense, I posted that 5 hours ago.
Anyway I've been doing fanart but either people aren't seeing it, or they see it but just aren't liking it, and I just wanted to try and get some insight. I wonder if it's the lack of color, but I see many other popular blogs that just have lineart. I'll do some self-evaluation, and maybe do a poll post, like you suggested. Thanks for replying, anon.

>>1946416
>>1946399
>>1946125
>>1942793

here da secret, capitaine, find someone who's a big name popuartblogger an see if they got an OC. draw fanart of that OC an tag it with their username.

do this for multiple artists, they'll see it an reblog it (sexposure)

jus make sure you don't do this till you got a sizable amount of work in the quality you want to be known for, otherwise you'll be the one like https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iHQxE-CNKkA instead of the people askin for sauce when your work inevitably gets reposted on image boards

>>1946430
First let me just say
>the bass was phat
This idea had occurred to me in a much stupider form - I was gonna look and see if Shadman/Spazkid had any oc's and do this, and I didn't because I realized that was fishing for whales with string on a stick. I'll do what you said. I was looking around for some other nsfw blogs to follow today, didn't have a whole lot of luck. Any tips on how to find em?

>>1946433
Spazkid does have an OC and reblogs like every picture of her.

>>1946433
>Any tips on how to find em?
Really what I mean is like... ways to narrow it down pretty quickly. I didn't get recommended a lot of art blogs when I tried a few searches, and it was hard to know which of the reblog blogs to follow. A lot of them had like one pic of what I was looking for and the rest filled with furry/pony.
>>1946437
Oh cool! What's her name so I can search her? Also yeah if there's a high chance he'd reblog a picture of her, I would definitely wait until I had more finished stuff on there.

>>1946430
also very important, space this out a bit, don't jus post all the fanart of other people's work at once.

this fo two reasons:
1. you don't wanna come off as obviously drawin people shit to get attention, taints the experience for the receiver an they may be less likely to reblob (as opposed to if they like it a lot, they might rebagel multiple times)
2. keepin a consistent stream of content works better on attractin people rather than jus postin as soon as you finish (tho hey, i'm not ya mom, jus some kid on the net offerin advice (an sometimes when you're in demand an already got a followin, postin erratically can work in your favor, people may keep checkin on your shit to see if anything new dropped BUT YOU GOTTA GET EM HOOKED ON PHONICS FIRST))

of course the exceptions to this'll always be QUALITY over quantity, you'd much rather have people all complainin bout a lack of content than to oversaturate your brand with low quality shit an have em lose interest.

>>1946439
the majority of people draw pony an furry cause those people have personal characters who they gotta pay to see drawn, unlike licensed characters which tend to get drawn for free (unless they have a very specific thing they want them to be drawn doin (like fuckin their OC, which is probably a furry/pone))

besides, i saw that drawin of isabelle you did...

>>1946439
Smash Girl
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/614710

>>1944103
It's the entire truth. If your art was good then you'd have a crowd after it. It might not be the exact same people who like what you call "generic", though there'd definitely be a big overlap, but people would like it.
You're looking for an outside party to blame for your failure. A pretty bad personality trait to have when it comes to self improvement.

>>1946443
Okay, I getcha, that all sounds reasonable. Not saying I'm above drawing some fur-ish stuff, I mean right there on the banner is my avatar, some kind of...anthro...ram...man. That request was from /v/ though, and I was trying to do monstergirls so I took that one up. Not even gonna lie, I'm probably gonna draw more of her. But I'm not branching into poke/pone/soni lewd, and that's all I was seeing. I know there's demand for it but whatever. I had a crazy idea to maybe try a nsfw comic...? Not serial, just like a one-shot small story. A doujin, I guess. People like that, right?
>>1946444
Nice, thank you!

I need ass help.

>>1946460
Mmmm.... google bubble butt and and give him one.

>>1946138
damn, pussy must be on catnip cause dat shit tooo high

>>1946038
"Aaaah - I've been looking forward to this all day!"

>>1946420
5 hours is nothing.
Your hear me?
NOTHING

>>1946500
A-alright man, I hear you...

>>1946543
That's awesome

>>1946353
Thanks for the critque man

We need to make New thread.
Bump limit has been reached

I don't know if I'm doing it right...

>>1946918
Well, it's not erotic at all but it IS really nicely drawn, you certainly know how to work a pencil. Post moar?

>>1946770
I think we should move over to this anon's thread >>1946127

>>1946943
fucking link it then you cretin.

>>1946946
What a jerk...
>>1946092

>>1946938
Well thank you anon. Here I deliver more. If still interested I can even deliver more shit.

>>1946943
Why should we go there? I'm ok here.

>>1946918
>>1946963
Wow i am really digging these drawings. Theyre sexy and a bit lewd but they also have like a classical elegance to them . Would love to see more

I left this slab drawing soak in the Puget Sound for a few days before firing.

>>1947022
hipster as fuck.

Come in drawers

>>1947032
>>1947032
>>1947032

>>1946340
I would, but I do not have the means to do so.

Forgive me.

>>1946973
Ok, here you go some more.

>>1946973
Unless you like dongs instead of pussy, so here you go with this one if that's the case.

Well how's my trap boy ?

>>1943287
You draw shitty, thats all-

>>1947388
It needs bigger tits, and a more feminine face. You want your trap to look like one in terms of a well defined set of knockers up there. What about the hair being long and flowing?

>>1947388 (You)
It needs bigger tits, and a more feminine face. You want your trap to look like one in terms of a well defined set of knockers up there. What about the hair being long and flowing?

Thanks for the advice , but i think that will be more like a futanari , i want him to be an extremely girly boy . :D

>>1945824
the neck it's kind of thin and too much to the right, because of that, the trapezius it's also strange.

>>1947388
the shading is really weird around the torso

>>1945824

Left leg does not come forward enough and the cross contours do not show proper foreshortening.