/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

I loved drawing this.

>>1906338
looks pretty qt

porn when

>>1906276
I haven't read vilppu (so please correct me if I'm wrong) but I'm assuming it's because you are supposed to use mannequins in order to get the gist of a pose, your drawing should then work to exaggerate the gesture, not be a carbon-copy of the mannequin which would just result in a stiff/boring drawing.

>>1906338

You mean you loved copying this.

>>1906368
Yes
>>1906343
You can find the original artist on /co/ I hear he might have what you're looking for

>>1906371
That won't do anything for you. You're copying something, that's already very stylized and cartoony. That won't do anything for your art. Stop wasting your time.

>>1906375
Yes sir

>>1906024
Kr0nhaters are silly

Reposting with some slight changes. Also,

>>1906348
One of the most important things Vilppu said was "You can't draw something that you don't understand". Once you understand WHY the underlying anatomy and structure works, it'll all come in naturally. Copying a mannequin blindly will only help at gesture and posing at most, IMO.

>>1906383
>SUPPORT MUH PATREON GUYS
>NEW PIC
>SUPPORT IT GUISE
>GUISE
>PATREON
>MUH
>PATREON
>MUH

>>1906402

It's almost like people want to make a living from their work

>>1906404
It's almost like they have no respect for art. Art shouldn't be done for money but to service both the artist and the world.

>>1906383
But how do I do that in manga studio?

>>1906415
How about you stop living in your mothers basement, or better yet stop living and leave all your art supplies in the dumpster at Walmart so I can pick it up

>>1906415

Ha, ok, whatever.

>>1906415
I see /a/ is back, shitposting

>>1906404

Good things don't last forever >>>/seekickstarter/

>>1906383
i probably came off as a hater, but i'm actually a big fan. sarcasm doesn't transfer well over the internet, so whatever.

Is it true that Miku-fag will fuck me if I get good at art?

>>1906375
That's not entirely true, you can learn a lot by studying how other people stylize something. It's best used in combination with regular studies of fundamentals however, otherwise you will have a hard time understanding what it even is that the original artist stylized.

>>1906415
honey..

>>1906415
if only the world services me back with food, electricity, internet, and eros.

It's almost like surviving costs money.

Finished it, I can see some improvement... Now to the next one.

>>1906524
Dude irises don't glow and bulge out like that. The upper eyelid should extend much further, and cast a shadow on it in most cases.

>>1906527

I only noticed now that you said it. It's probably some problem with a layer being inactive or something like that, because in sure I corrected the color of the eyes. I made a MESS with the layers in this piece. D:

>>1906524
is the girl on the left supposed to be cross eyed?

>>1906524
Can you?
The girl on the left is trying real hard to but her eyes doesn't seem to want to point in the right direction.

Out of curiosity is the girl on the right mean to be stylized as an animal with the hair like horns and the nose shaded like it's a snout?

>>1906524
Recommend giving Andrew Loomis - Drawing Heads And Hands a look

yep, it was a layer
Here is the corrected version.

>>1906524
Characters need a lot of work. Especially the faces. Looks pretty good otherwise imo.

>>1906533

Never heard of it, thanks.

>>1906531
Yes, I can. :D

>>1906415
you've probably never worked a day in your life

>>1906415
The aspergers is strong with this one.

>>1906473
No.

Is this looking better? I'm never really confident about my line weight.

nsfw here >>>/i/428986

>>1906800
B-but this is a NSFW board, anon

Also that vagoo hahaha

>>1906800
Perspective, anon

>>1906801
I know i just wanted to post both, i had a problem figuring out how to draw a loli pussy, i wanted it to be minimalist and the clitoris to be exposed, how could i have made it better?

>>1906806

Well I'd prefer if you stopped drawing to be honest.

>>1906823

>>1906415
News flash faggot, nothing should be done for money. But this is the world we are living in. You make money or you fucking die. Oh and when you're dead you can't make any other art aside from your discomposed body

>>1906441
>>1906507
>>1906858

>people cant have a job and do art as a hobby
>oh lawdy lawdy, pay for my art or i'll die, its such a cruel world

Sorry that you starve yourself of money on purpose and expect people to sympathize that you don't make enough from your mediocre art, sorry you choose an unstable as fuck method to get money instead of getting a full time job, How about you get a real fucking job and practice at the same time until you're not shit instead of putting on this pity party of an act? No, i don't feel bad that you chose probably the worst possible method of gaining income just because you're lazy and dream of never leaving your house because you can draw a pair of tits that people are stupid enough to pay money for.
Chances are you're shit if you're posting in this thread, if you where a professional you wouldn't be here, would you?

Doing loomis Im having a hard time with eye placement, does anyone know a book or such that can help me here.
I always end up kinda sorta guesing how to do it and it ends up shitty.

>>1906864

lol so mad.

>>1906906
Learn perspective and learn general facial proportions. It also helps if you familiarize yourself with the general structure and forms of the skull.

Spend most of today rendering butts.

>1-3 I really wanted to render Panty's butt, but it just didn't come out the same as the album cover. So many subtleties!
>3 added butt shines, immediately regretted it
>4-5 took a trip to /s/ to render real people. It's hard to get the color, intensity, and placement right. I guess it is just hard...
>6-8 big sisters from bioshock. Just another way to avoid drawing faces

I can't seem to get a good cast shadow on flesh color...

>>1906864
You just described me except I make some money but not enough to leave my mommys house.

>>1906968
The more often you practice faces, the sooner you'll get comfortable drawing them!

That said, butts are fun to draw and the non-shiny one in 3 looks pretty nice.
Here's a cool video on butts that I found helpful:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=scR4fIseBv8

Oh and doing realistic skintones with markers is pretty tough, but it's good that you're working more from non-stylized refs as well.

>>1906383
>ctrl shit alt N as a "shortcut"
is he retarded ? who press 4 fucking keys as a shortcut

I have a new layer over the button of F2.

>>1906583

>Rejected

>>1907065
do 500 gesture drawings then try this again

I did this but for some reason I fucking hate the shading. Something just looks off. How can I improove it, make it more life-like?
Maybe it is too saturated

>>1906806
>i wanted it to be minimalist
Stop making excuses and you'll improve faster.

You are symbol drawing, though it is the most obvious on the twat. You did what you think a pussy looks like instead of what it'd look like in that pose. It's very noticeable on the ass too.

>>1907139
I thought that he was talking about the kind of vagina that i tried to draw, as for symbol drawing yes when i draw from imagination i like to try and invent everything
and later correct anything that i feel i can't figure out on my own because i think that it leaves a stronger impact on me and i remember it better, i searched some references
now that you talked about the ass and i can see that i messed up the perspective on the pelvis a lot, the fact that it didn't even felt wrong at first shows how little i actually know
about that area and how perspective changes things in general, thanks anon.

>>1907105
You probably mislike the shading because every area seems to use the same value range.

>>1906988
>standart shortcut vs custom shortcut
Are you retarded?

>>1905056
>>remember kids, you don't render bad poses

CnC before render?

>>1907029
It hurts, anon.

>>1907185
?

so can i start to render ?

>>1907259
I think that her legs are a bit short, usually if you fold your leg the elbow will reach to your shoulder but this one feels short, she looks like a midget.
I dont have the time to confirm my suspicions now but try checking some references before you continue.

>>1907274
>elbow
I mean knee.

>>1906864
>worst method of making money
that isnt sucking dicks behind Dollar General after your shift ends.

>>1907105
just add more contrast change a bit the hue and tone down the reflected light a bit
also from this angle we wouldnt be able to to see the other ass cheek

>>1906968
you should spend some time on neck and shoulders as well

>>1907200
lots of things

there is no perspective or anatomy sense
i fixed the face and somewhat the pose too although i would have gone with one like the small one on the bottom left. yours has no perspective(where is the ground plane?
also fixed the hands and suggested another pose and angle for them
the drapery made no sense so i fixed that too, just do it in layer keeping in mind the tension points)

>>1907259
what this guy said
>>1907274

i think calf should be longer.

>>1906858
>You make money or you fucking die
i'd beg to differ.

>>1907393
unless you live in social utopia like scandinavia you'll end up on the street with no sources of income.

>>1907393
Do it then. Beg to differ. Lets hear it. Or were you just making obtuse statements for no reason?

>>1907259

Also her neck looks a bit broken to me

>>1907259
>>1907414

I should note I have an untrained eye... but aside from the broken neck:

the girl's right breast line I don't believe should go all the way to the collar like that

Also I'm fairly certain girls don't have penises fwiw

>>1907398
you can live for free, not saying it'll be nice but you can do it

>>1907418
>fairly certain girls don't have penises

are you 9

>>1907423
You can live in a sewer eating rats and shit too, but that doesn't make it safe or plausible to do. Unless you're a girl who has her body to give, or someone with connections, or just plain luck, you're going to end up a)being murdered, because people hate the homeless, b)dying of disease, cold, malnutrition, etc, and no one will give a fuck, because again, people hate the homeless. You won't be making art on your cintiq, you won't be eating good food, and your mind will not be in the right state to create art or follow your passions.

>>1907418
are legs good lenght now ? Idk about neck it looks ok i think.

>>1907259
They all have tiny legs. Might want to study proportion, form, and perspective some more. You can keep going for ambitious drawings, but don't bother wasting time trying to make them "finished."

>>1907449
well dose the main girl have correct legs ?

>>1907439

I think the boob line is better in this one, I still think the neck on the back left girl is off (head is offset just a bit too far?) Probably should get a second opinion on the neck since I'm a scrub

>>1907423
>being homeless is an option
scum of the earth rolling through

>>1907483

I'm homeless in America and doing just fine. You don't need to eat a steak dinner every day and live the high life.

>>1907259
>penis
main girls face isn't centered properly
megane girl has broken neck
main girl left breast too low
main girl thumb too stubby
main girl hips not centered
desk not properly aligned (did you use any perspective at all?)
main girl torso too long
sitting girls legs not proportional
megane girls skirt not sitting properly
random face far right

rendering you're barely even ready PERIOD

you need some practice

>>1907497
>implying I eat steak
You dont need to be high class but at least have something to care about.
I know being homeless is a slippery slope of, >you dont have a address? you cant work here!
>you dont have exp? cant work here!
>you dont have your last billing info? blah

>>1907497
Explain your situation, so we can take what information we can from it. I'm sure it isn't like how you're describing it, or you are not actually homeless.

>>1907367
thanks a lot anon.

I'm never gonna get this anatomy thing right ;_;

>>1907586
With that mentality probably not, just think of happy little mistakes. Happy fluffy soft and cudly mistakes as you go along.

>>1907595
why do the jap girls put literaly everything in their mouths ?
Ive seen them puting even door knobs.

>>1907617
They don't. It's just a fad to try and make themselves look Kawaii, which is something that permeates the entirety of Japanese culture.

>>1906984
>practice faces
Ya I was going to try to render faces tonight.

I'll check out that butts video too :)

>>1907313
>neck and shoulders as well
Ya when I finished #5 I noticed the negative space under the arm was wayyyy off. I might make it a habit of drawing every reference twice so I have a chance to fix mistakes

>>1906583
what if i cosplay as miku

>>1907706
No.

>>1907617
The same reason black and mexican girls suck good dick.
Its the rules of nature

>>1907724
...and then she farts!

>>1907971
>>1907977
sorry forgot to downsize

>>1906338
Very nice mikufag. Huge improvement

>>1906968
I do not like the pink you have toward the butt shines and on 4's hips. It must be darker i believe. But besides that you are doing nice. Very nice

>>1907595
That poor cat looks like it just gave up on life.

>>1907989

There's still no nuance or craft to anything he's doing, don't fucking coddle him,

We'll be 20 years down the road and he'll still be chicken scratching with a blue hard round on a gray background until he gets something vaguely resembling a anime character while the rest of us have either made it or killed ourselves

Coach says play better Mikufag

>>1907279

that sounds oddly specific, Anon

>>1908082
it was dark times

Is it obvious that her legs are doing what the picture on the right is doing? My sister saw it while I was drawing it and said it looks like her legs are crossed over.

>>1908125
No because the skirt isn't deforming for starters.

>>1908081
fucking sting man. i remember playing him on one of those old n64 games

>>1908126
what if when if when I was done I just added some shading like this? Also added what my sister thought.

>>1908130
dropped file.

>>1908132
still looks a bit weird, because the pink end of the skirt is still flat.

just look at some references and change yours according to it

pic somewhat related

>>1906864
>chose probably the worst possible method of gaining income
Well, gaining income by doing what you love might not be the best method of gaining income, but it's the way I like living my life.

>>1908132
Part of the problem is the angle of the foot. I think you'd get more of a frontal view of it if she's just raising her leg, not an almost sideview one as in your image (so there should definitely not be that much of the sole of the shoe visible).
That's actually a problem with the shading you added for the leg as well, it seems to be almost in profile view. The explanation sketch you added on the right handles both of these things better.

Could also help if you changed the design of the shoes - if the bows where on the outer side of each foot instead of the middle it might be clearer which foot is which.

>>1908138
would this work better?

>>1908139
Yeah that looks much better.

>>1908139
the way the skirt folds is weird

>>1908141
Cheers m8
>>1908143
In what way?

>>1907282
>>1907165
Thanks for the advice! I played around with it a bit and now I don't hate it as much anymore.
I kept the ass cheek tough - for the pose I used a reference, and the ass cheek was visible there. Also, I love ass cheeks.

Should I go with a cheap background like this or should I do a more detailed one? I think I could do a sketchy jungle or temple. Then again I really like this red.

Good?

>>1908164
the pose of the middle one is gud, I'd redo the one on the far left tough, something about her looks broken as fuck. Also the foot of the one on the far right and the foot of the middle one... ouch. I'd redo them too. What are they gonna wear, heels? Or are they gonna be barefoot?

>>1908164
Left's bum needs a fix

>>1908165
Barefoot. Clothes will yukata so I'm not sure does it matter how their butts look like

>>1908175
*will be

>>1908164
tried to fix the left one
It's a tricky perspective you got there

Not a great day
>1-2 got bored with /s/
>3-4 tried some animu cause I was sick of trying to figure out the real skin tones
>5 bored of faces, went back to figures, legs are too small on one, and too big on the other - but I discovered v91 is a good for shading and rv11 for highlights
>6-7 foolishly tried my hand at faces in pen

I should probably stick with real penciled faces, but they are sooooo boring

>>1908201
Have you tried drawing the faces of statues yet? They usually have a single color all over so you can concentrate better on the features and values. You can always learn how to do nice skintones later, that way faces might be a bit less overwhelming to figure out.

fixed a bit.something strieks you still ?

>>1908125

mangenta isn't really working on the lineart for the stockings and shoes there friendo

>>1908243

>mangenta

lol oops

>>1908242
The main character's legs seem a lot more normal to me now.

>>1908242
yeah, that schoolgirl has a dick.
> faggot

>>1908291
or maybe that dick has a schoolgirl attached to him ?

Redesign of a classic.
trying out a new style/technique.
Thoughts? critique?

>>1908341
i remember you. You did some pic from some game long time ago. It looks neat

>>1908382
Aye thanks, any critique tho?
Cleaned it a little bit more, and put and gradient on overlay in there now..

>>1908178
interesting

>>1908414
the inconsistent detail makes it hard to look at

maybe put harsher shadows and subtle outlines on the big tree to the left and touch up the scarecrow to make it consistent with the turtle also castle in the distance should be done a little better so it doesn't look so rushed compared to the trees right next to it

I see how you wanted the detail to fade out the farther to object is away but don't overdo it so much

>>1908414
lovin the carrot in the foreground

>>1907439
You spent all that time practicing and this is really the kind of garbage you are going to put out?

>>1907724
reposting

>>1908414
>right in the nostalgia

>>1908125
Her coord looks pretty boring. Try adding some accessories or something.

>>1908178
what kind of paper is this?

>>1909006
But I'm a basic bitch anon.

hello /ic/ recently my job hasn't been going well so i'm thinking of quiting it to become a popular manga artist. I have had some time to work on my style, and i think it is about developed. here is an attempt at a cultural "panty shot" that is a good tool to use for engaging the adience and throwing subtle hints of emotional undertone in as well.
For some reason the perspective looks off. I canot' tell why, could someone maybe give me a couple pointers on how to do a look up scene like this one? i've read some books about the grid method but it doesn't seem to work

Actually had a lot of fun drawing today. Wish I had a drossel to play with. I'd pose her so hard, then draw the shit out of her. The legs are kinda tricky, but we're working on it.

>>1906984
Nice butt video! His voice was soooooo annoying, but informative. I'll look for some more videos for studying.

>>1909028
very funi.

>>1909107
Shit, nigga. You really are giving me the itch to surpass you.
Won't happy any time soon, though. I just don't have enough time but I do like seeing your work and progress.

Do you guys use pirated copies of PS?
I was wondering if i should buy one.

>>1909188
do we look like we robed a bank ?

>>1909188
Don't ever buy it unless you are actually making money off it.

>>1909188
not pirated
cracked

>>1909107
Tableguy, I want you to know that youre a huge inspiration to me

>>1909188
I pirated every drawing program I have. I don't even use half of them anyway.

>>1909198
This, unless you are in a company , wasting more than 500 dollars in it is a waste.Do it if you can afford it , but try cracks, free trials or free programs instead.

Suppose this counts, WIP

>>1909188
Get Clipstudio instead

only $40 and does everything you ever do on PS, plus its geared toward comic making.

>>1909265
2spooky.

>>1909265
could you talk about your thoughts on character design?

>>1909265
spooky cute

Both WIP, all critique very welcome.
(supposed to be card illustrations for a board game)

>>1909330
is this frodo and his waifu ?

>>1909188
Cracked. I use it like once every 2 months, which is the reason I'll advice you to not pay for shit on a whim. You should figure out exactly why you need it first, not get it just because "everyone has it."

more shadow at the bottom?

also I am making a comic and I want the whole thing to look like this, but this page took several days and it doesn't seem feasible. /cries

>>1909299
As for designing a character goes, try to get into the mindset and role of the character yourself, think of what he is and what he is doing, and wearing. everything from major design aspects to little details should complement that. Lets say for example you have to paint a forest elf ranger, you want a lot of manouverability in the character, not too much naked skin because of camouflage and protection, and most of all, something to relfect the culture he/she is from. I recommend to always start off with the most conventional route with the design and from there try to push it to the degree you want. The more real your character feels the more impact it has, there is a fine line with a believable character and a character that has been taken too far design wise where it is no longer grounded to reality (for example, chainmail-bikinis, I never paint anything like that, and everyone is cool with it)

Its not much but hope it helps.

>>1909146
I'm a pretty low bar, your goal should be to practice more than me - which should be too hard since I haven't been practicing lately. I think I was getting carbon monoxide poisoning from my heater which makes me sleepy.

>>1909248
I expect great things from you!

>>1909361
Thanks a lot anon really appreciate it !

>>1909361
It depends on the project. Some requires things as you said some can be driven out of reality.

>>1909333
Frodo's waifu is Sam. This is not a Sam. which leads me to think that this is not a Frodo. I am good at math.

>>1909107
I see you looked at my post [fireball charming] in the other thread

>>1909612
>>1909602
Ill give you credit for posting in both threads.

I like the style of the bodies buut, why the tumblr nose on the knight?

>>1909628
because I'm trendy

seriously it's just a bad habit

I plan to redraw this tonight or tomorrow, but would like some feedback please

>>1909632
haha.
I understand. I also like your faces on the lower half. Simple, and easy to read

>>1909624
Ya it was great - are you the anon with the drossel figure?

I want to draw more again tonight but I'm stuck at work, and I have to finish a project at home for tomorrow

What do? All nighter?

>>1909656
Im the one who just posted the link to the shorts.

If you are up for it tableguy, then do an allnighter

>>1909679
>do an allnighter
What the fuck are you trying to do kill him?
>>1909656
Take it easy bro.

>>1909684
>if you are up to it
eat shit, cherrypicker

>>1908243
I'll change the colour of the line art at the end, I just like to work in the pink to give it the right feel while working then I change when I am focusing on colours.

>>1909330
I've fixed his nose up a little, it is no longer a pear...

pls /ic/ rip it apart.
I want to deconstruct my art and make it better.
Be harsh and critical

>>1910041
its good

>>1909806
>make nose rounder
>make his eyes look less crazy
>remove that weird filter or effect that hurts peoples' eyes

Anyone have any fixes for this?

>>1910041

hands are p. akward, should study some real ones and then stylized ones

>>1910041
>her lips
I like it

workin on this

>>1910041
Line quality is lacking. In general as things move towards the viewer the line is thicker and as it moves away its thinner (but only horizontally). It mimics how our eye perceive depth. .Needs more interior lines to describe form (especially on the hands) and the figures should be closer to the viewer in general with more extreme perspective distortions.

>>1910265
It's nice but the design of the clothing seems too arbitrary like you just drew whatever came to mind first. You need to have a clear purpose when designing a character.The hand and feet are lazy.The hand carrying the Pokemon is lazy. Line work is too even. Spend more time thinking about what you're gonna draw before you draw it.

did alt. threads just get better?

>>1910280
they always fluctuate. a few days from now it'll be shit, a few days later it'll be fine.

>>1910275
Funny

>>1910275
Not him but about the character design, that's how she is in game.

>>1910285
Its true

>>1910286
>>1910287
Take the effort and make it look practical.

>>1910290
What he said. I can't tell what kind of trainer she's supposed to be so it fails as a design.

>>1910290
>>1910294
Hobo trainer. But seriously though, it's accurate as far as fanart goes so that's good in my book.

>>1910297
If I had to guess I would think ghost type because red eyes and the cape thing. It doesn't look raggedy enough, it almost looks likes its moving by itself and made of fire. Also toes on the shoes would get it to look like sandals

>>1910265
I really like this, except for the hand holding the Pokéball.

finished btw

i like this ok but i just took a big job as a comic artist so rip into it so i can do my job plz

Not finished yet but it looks really wrong, any tips?

>>1910352
Here's a suggestion for how you could change it. Mainly the ribcage is too big and the brow is too prominent (should almost be nonexistent in a cute girl).

>>1910370
Thank you anon! I'll fix those parts

>>1910348
What you could do is be very conservative and minimalist with your use of detail. Look into Moebius and how he suggests a lot using very very little detail. Also you shouldn't break up your forms by having lines cutting through them since It stops the flow.

>>1910421

yeah i like your edits. thank you, ill remember this

>>1908952
the neck is oddly shaped. necks get bigger when they get closer to the body, and it is also too long. I think the angle of the face is weird. I think you should redo it. the elbow also seems justtt slightttlly high.
keep up the good work miku

>>1906534
it looks like you're using dodge and burn tools.
make it not look that way.

>>1909006
>>1909017
god fucking dammit I wish this didn't make me laugh.

Any comments?

>>1910340

That footwork looks fucking awkward as shit. When someone gets ready to unleash the beatdown I would imagine their feet would point outward instead of inward.

>>1910475
>sexy widdle baby face
kek


boobs need to be more soft, like her hands boobs need to interact with her hand as they are real anon.
How can you be real with your art if you arent real?

Remember
>We are all the same, through dick, unity

>>1910479
>unleash the beatdown on a gymleader
>not pushing their shit in

They cross their legs for the imminent rape that my party unleashes

>>1910489
>>sexy widdle baby face
What do you mean?

>>1910512
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sBOAfsQzf0U
0:14-0:17

really struggling on deciding what to do with the left arm OTL;; Any advice?

>>1910512
It means he's drunk and you're a child molester

>>1910520
ha, my mom did make a pina colata icecream thing for me that Im having right now.

>drunk from icecream
its the best

Did this a little bit ago, but was wondering if I could get any quick feedback, anything to improve on.

going to do the livestream thing for a bit, feel free to drop by as a tackle this

>>1910579

https://picarto.tv/live/channel.php?watch=lonku

>>1910519
my suggestion is to have the left arm in a similar pose as the right, with a clenched fist

>>1910579
>>1910580

finished streaming. thanks anons for dropping by

>>1909330
Jim Hawkins as a Hobbit

Working on a Christmas present for a 7 year old kid who is apeshit for Pokemon. Gonna try and finish laying down the flats before I go to work and then clean it up/render after

almost finished. wat think.

>>1910914
Looks like shit without the lines

>>1910914
>green semen
>making a pose in the back for no reason
>one nip is greater than anonther nip

Diagnosis:
Take a 2 hour break from it and do something unrealted to drawing and come back to see the mistakes

>>1910922
well those are pretty minor ones. I took a break and dont see much.

>>1910925
k

>>1910922
>that picture

I fucking had a nightmare of it last night and was compelled to doodle this shit. Goddammit I am still spooked and seeing that picture here out of bumfuck nowhere so randomly is not helping.

http://youtu.be/XzCItn2fhp0

>>1910932
>oh look its a ghost
>let me drive closer and flash my lights at it
>its getting closer but let me flash lights in defense
>man she is one angry ghost, i wanna go home

Id be angry if you followed me and flashed fucking highbeams at me too nigga.

last week i practised some. mostly from photos. im trying to memorize stuff.

>>1910932
>some asshole wrapped in a blanket with a wig and a stick
2SPOOKY4ME

>>1911030
I cant draw porn to save my life.
You helped me out a bit

thank you

I'm feeling pretty good about this one today.I also just realized the chest is looks off/awkward as well.

>>1911251
Ayy lmao

>>1911254
Oh you

I went ahead and fixed the chest. I also noticed the helmet "hood" was off, too, so I went ahead and tweaked it as well.

>>1911272
tweaked it again

>>1911286

>>1910922
>tim and eric hire a ghost.jpg

>>1911315
>implying
What are you implying?

>>1911286
Ok we've seen it. Now move on.

Captcha: 420

>>1911343
ok

>>1911251
do you only exist in 2 dimensions?

>>1911251
Ha no.
Is that necessarily a bad thing though?

>>1911365
Whoops mean to quote
>>1911351

>>1910914
These weird pictures where you can see somebody has been drawing for a long time, but has less basic skill than somebody who has worked hard for two months.

>>1911338
The chest looks weird because you've drawn it flat. The face also looks fucked up because it looks like you've half assed the 3D aspect, so it follows some of the rules of 3D space but not all of them. Basically just burn the picture, or whatever hard drive you've got it stored on and go research constructing objects and figures in 3D space.

>>1911338
You have to go learn your basics, dude.

>>1911030
can you link the refs? im mostly interested in the clothed ones

>>1906473
Do not sexualize the Suika

>>1906524
My god those faces are hideous.

Also make thier age show more, if you want a "Mature" look then make everything about them mature.
Slapping kiddie faces on a full grown woman especially a sexualized one doesn't look right.

>>1907977
Original Character Dounut Steele.

>>1910519
Change what the left hand is doing.
Usually I draw with an emotion in mind and then think about what I would be doing with my hands if I wanted to emphasise that emotion. Everything should fall into place if you do that.

>>1910914

Choose whether you want it to be a lined peice or painted. If you want the line work to show then clean that WAY up and put it on the top layer if not then take it off altogether and finish painting.

Also the radioactive semen is a turn off, if you were shooting for it being disgusting you succeeded.

Trying make it better with the bamboo

>>1911620
just search japan street fashion on tumblr.

>>1911369
>>1911365
yes

>>1910519
How about something like this?

wanted to see what i could regurgitate in 2 hours

helped me to loosen up alot at least, maybe i'll be able to do more things on weekdays faster now

>>1911793
you did all of this in 2h ? holy shit.

>>1911799
give or take about 10 minutes more because i couldn't resist polishing the detail, i really need to stop doing that

>>1911061
thats david cross you shitlord

>>1911807
are you sonic ?

>>1910914

eww, looks like pus dripping out of her dick

>>1911793
Theres something about the way you do hair that bothers me, but I cant figure out what exactly.

Wanted to try mixing a more realistic rendering and anime like some artists do... Not really satisfied with the end results, my linework was too sharp and it take much longer than I expected to finish painting. Anyway here it is.

>>1911863
Cross-eyed. Mouth and face in general look stretched and scary. Think more about the skull and how the jaw moves. Once you have that construction in place, draw the rest of the flesh and skin on top of that.

Is there a basic guide for how manga works?
Like I am not interested in drawing it, and I already can draw and have been studying basics etc for a year.

I just want to understand it in a macro way and not necessarily draw it. Thanks.

>>1911863
her face is fucking terrifying wtf dude

do you ever flip your picture m8
it looks like the shit in horror movies
>crosseyed

>>1911863
Andrew Loomis - Drawing Heads And Hands

>>1911863
For the love of god no.
You will end up like Jab

It's supposed to be cross-eyed, shes looking at the cum. I thought that was pretty obvious. Now.. what's the problem with her face? Heads do stretch when we open our mouths this wide, I don't get it, maybe I can't see because I looked too much at it? Indicate what you're criticizing.

>>1911921
http://bato.to/comic/_/comics/bakuman-r63

>>1911998
The features on the head are pointing in different ways (nose down, mouth up, to name a few). That and other things show that you didn't use construction and are just guessing and symbol drawing.

So once again,
>>1911983

>>1911472
>>1911434
>>1911351

I'm >>1911338

Is this any better?

>>1912008
Her mouth is not up, I don't know where are you seeing that, nothing in it indicates what you're stating. Look at a mirror and open your mouth and put your tongue outside, them comment again.

>>1912016
much better
but keep practicing the sticky and you'll get better even further
good luck friend

>>1911999
Thanks. I read some of Bakuman back when they used to publish Jump in paper.

>>1911863

damn your sense for what is aesthetically pleasing sucks, shame because your rendering jerk-off skill has potential

>>1912074
Ahhh thank you.

>>1911863
>>1912104
There was this one guy on /ic/ who said
>"If you can't jerk off to your own pictures, what makes you think others will?"

That was the changing point in my life

>>1912122

I wasn't touching upon that I was talking about turd polishing/ rendering so much that it becomes masturbatory (see: Kyle)

>>1912016
The body's too small for thehead, especially since youre drawing a grown man.

>>1912045
Learn to accept critique and realize that the face looks weird, okay?

>>1912129

I'm not saying it don't look weird, I'm saying what you're pointing out is wrong or at least you wasn't clear enough.

>>1912122

Not everyone can jerk off to drawings.

>>1912104

Hmmm... Potential = perseverance. I'll get better.

>>1912140
>Not everyone can jerk off to drawings.
while this is true, you should keep inventory of people that do.
I mean, thats what this is right, 2D porn?

>>1911998
Even cross-eyed, it didn't look like she's looking at the cum. Her left hand seems deformed, mouth looks weird too.

Everything i do is boring and flat as fuck. Im gonna stop rendering for a while and learn some drawing/color theory/perspective, because im wasting time

>>1912214
have you tried working with reference?

>>1912216
I did, actually. It still looks weird

But i learn more from quick drawings with reference than painting a full drawing with one

>>1912214

Maybe you should try more interesting poses, as in force yourself to rely on foreshortening to make it look three dimensional. Like a straight punch or something.

>>1912229
Thats true. Im always afraid of drawing poses with nice perspective.
Ill do some sketches doing that and see if i can draw less boring and static things.

>>1912231

Also, someone correct me if i'm full of shit here, but I think a lot of it is that we're seeing the object straight on so no matter what we're only seeing height and width. If you use a different viewing angle you can get the feeling of 3-D since we can see the depth as well, or it's more apparent.

>>1911998
Stop making excuses and just consult a reference if you can't see what's wrong with it.

Porn should be sexy, not creepy. That face is creepy.

>>1912145

Well.. For that matter I've been gaining at least 12 followers on tumblr everyday, so I think is not THAT bad. lol

How's it looking so far?

>>1911863
>>1911998

>Heads do stretch when we open our mouths this wide

Do you really think so?

If her nose is pointed down, it should mean her face is pointed down. That means the face should be slightly foreshortened, and the forehead more prominent. Yours is not.

If the jaw is opened so wide, then the mouth should be pulled down. Unless you strain to flare/curl the upper lips, the top teeth should be partially or completely covered. This is doubly true if her head is pointed down. In your drawing. her lips do not seem flared. In fact her mouth is structured like that of a blow-up doll. Not only do we see the teeth, which aren't curved as we would expect from a slightly top-down view, we even see her gums. This is the face of a horse.

If she is facing straight at us or pointing slightly down while sticking out her tongue, should we really see her uvula/throat?

These are the structural issues of the nose and mouth alone. There are structural errors in every feature, and you also make bad aesthetic decisions. There's no reason to even discuss color and rendering until you brush up on drawing.

>>1912264
Cute
Get rid of that lip lines asap
Jaw shading is lovely

>>1912265
He is a smug asshole who cant accept a logical critic. Dont waste your time helping this faggot

>>1911863
Is that fuzzy shirt in the background floating on a wall?

>>1912271
Also, follow up question.... why is the dick head pinkish, yet the fuzzy legs seem to belong to a man of color? What's going on there?

A cat is fine too.

>>1912270
I used to come here and post terrible Claymore fan art, I used to be like this. I am really happy after two years of drawing with what I have. What I draw now looks like it could be in Marvel or DC. Thanks guys, I know its hard to hear at first but being proficient is an amazing feeling.

>>1912354
Forgot pic lel

>>1911863
holy shit what's wrong with her left hand

>>1912265

Yes, heads do stretch, even when looking up. The intention was to make her face straight looking to the viewer, I guess the nose might be slight up and the teethes more covered as you pointed.

I need to get the habit of viewing my sketches after some hours of a break and flip it/zoom out. I tend to get lost when drawing looking at a monitor. The drawing seems so big compared to the A4/A5 I'm used to draw. Those are mistakes I never do on my sketchbooks, really(at least not this big I mean).

>>1912388

Oh, I see that now. Her hand is too small compared to the fingers, also it should be following the curvature of the boobs.

>>1912270

lol, you again. What a butthurt.

>>1912462
You again? Thats the first time i comment about you fagtron

>>1912355
I actually get happy when i post my shit here. You know how to take an advice, even if it is "agressive". I improved a lot as well, reading different points of you from -mostly- good artists is very interesting.

New Thread:

>>1912631
>>1912631
>>1912631

>>1912462
>Yes, heads do stretch, even when looking up.

I'm not arguing that it doesn't. I'm saying you did it wrong. You did just about everything wrong. This is the impression I, as a viewer, is getting from your pic.

>>1912261
Kad, my son, it aint bad to the people who are impressed easily. It comes with the territory like frosting to a cake. Of course you have people under your belt now.
Now, you have wings to grow

Can anyone give me tips? Maybe on the hand and the shells? How should the mouth be?

>>1912900

>>1912909
give her some sammich lol

gonna try to get into porn/erotic shit for dat cash $$$

>>1913034
>implying she isn't supposed to be the most anorexic of the princesses.

In the making

>>1913620
aaaand i gave up

Anybody like? It's still very rough though.