/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1903889
i am in love with your pieces, each one has a distinct atmosphere and feel. where do you draw your inspiration from? all that you do is so unique...

first time posting on /ic/, and first time fooling around with animation.

My homage to Roberto Bolanos. :(

>>1903916
Looks great, it just needs the character more consistent to the painting, and the stone floor lines to be more intricate.

>>1903916
yeah :(

Some Loomis hands practice

>>1903926

I tried to resolve him with fewer strokes, but it looked like shit. Maybe I'll try again when I have more free time.

>>1903907
well, thank you. i really don't know where it comes from, or if its a thing that comes.

>>1904021

A little DOTA2 fanart concept. Any thoughts before i begin?

>>1903907
creepy.. i like it.

>>1903916
): .. looks great though, great choice of color/texture. lighting around the door frame seems a bit to radiant, though.

Sorry for the shitty quality, camera sucks

working on a master study. I really like the way Bougereau paints.

Hi. Does anything look off? What would be some things I should focus on to improve.
Thanks

>>1904030

Thanks! The lighting was intentional.

im trying

>>1904163
why even bother to post?

>>1904163
Sticky

>>1904163
Just practice more, pick up a book like "Right Side of the Brain" or Keys to Drawing if you havent already. You're off to an ok start tbh. Your biggest issue seems to be conveying form, it looks very flat.

>>1903875

currently working on this for blizzards new hearthstone contest, completely made up character and armor by me by the way

oh and shes a goblin not an orc, just to clarify

>>1904173
oh jesus christ almighty

>>1904174

is that a good thing or a bad thing? you think it looks good or you hate it? i cant tell man... what you said could mean anything really

what's wrong with colors?

>>1904192

The shoes have no shadow

>>1904177

Read the sticky.

>>1904192
There's things wrong with almost everything in there.

There's no clear light sources, cloth material reflecting into a rimlight, values that aren't affected by the depth in the image, not proper use of perspective, bad anatomy that looks like bad photorefs.

Not to mention the disturbing motive and or the tacky effect to copy the green character straight off our view and paste it in her painting, despite sitting in a different view.

If you need an asspat I could write some things good too.

>>1904173
For Allah's sake stop using soft brushes and figure out a single source of light

>>1904163
>im trying
try harder

>>1904222
Thanks, I wanted lightsources to be these things on the ceiling and something from viewer's point of view.
>bad anatomy that looks like bad photorefs
Indeed, I used refs for lying figure's leg and back of sitting one, but is it so bad? Also I wanted green woman to be one of focal points, so I decided to leave values unaffected.

>>1904173
link to contest please?

could I have a red line on this please?

Thank you.

It's been a while since I've actually drawn or painted anything, it's probably safe to say that my momentum is pretty much dead and it has been that way for a really long time.

Though recently I have taken a liking to just doodling. Not thinking about anatomy, not thinking about anything. Just doing.

2-3 minutes of dicking around is more than enough for me to figure out how much of an edgy homosexual I am.

Something from the sketchbook...

>>1904279

>>1904129
painful too look at

Pls

>>1904276
Could I get a blue line?

>>1904276
Could I get a blue line?

>>1904273
http://madizzlee.deviantart.com/journal/Goblins-vs-Gnomes-Challenge-493956196

>>1904280
How an I doing? Got rekt'd on /b/

update

Im having a really hard time bringing this to a "finish"

>>1904342
crazy shit

>>1904342
my 2 cents: needs more contrast.
other than that you can probably leave it like this

>>1904347
reason why i leave out alot of contrast is cus i spend alot of time on the lineweight. which is rather my strong point i think. im really bad at painting... and that is what the drawing would be relying on if there is more contrast. ill try tho! thanks

>>1904280
Can someone give me a crit please!!? Obviously I must suck since I'm being ignored on all boards...

>>1904290

Explain plece

>>1904303

>>1904358
was waiting for it..

>>1904354
Imo you should post in the beginner thread.

copypasta from original post

>>1904380

Quick sketch, not much to work on.

I want to render the rest of it out but I'm not sure where to take it from here. Is there an easy way to get the figure to a position that is physically posable or should I just search for some ref and go from there?

Help with my shitty drawing?

>>1904081
I'll stop here

>>1904358

>>1904402
At least you posted in the right thread instead of making your ow-

>>1904395
go be abstract somewhere else

>>1904403
She looks like a sassy cute person.
good job on that.

I have no idea about colors

>>1904403

it's a little muddy anon.

>>1904402
Tummies and hips dont work like that

>>1904403
As the other anon said, muddy.

>>1904403
The facial values are muddy and the proportions are pretty fucked. Try to keep the color temperature and value masses in mind when doing a master study. Also edges, work on your edges man

>>1904423
If you did your work traditonally, it would sell like hotcakes

>>1904414
google abstract

>>1904428
google puppies

>>1904427
some people tell me that, but doesn't mean its good enough, that's why i don't try to sell, idk.

>>1904389

I think you should focus more on your construction lines. the pose is not clear to me.

>>1904440

>>1904446

now I get it. you could find a reference that is close to this pose or you could try to construct a box figure to get the volume and the proportions right.

>>1904246
>but is it so bad?
It makes your art feel like sewn together photos. In a bad way.

>Also I wanted green woman to be one of focal points,
Both characters are in focus now with same values/contrast/temperature and size.

>Thanks, I wanted lightsources to be these things on the ceiling and something from viewer's point of view.
Fair enough but now you have,
>directional light hitting greentits from our left
>reversed light source on her thigh and leg
>the weird bouncelight
>a warm light coming from bottom left
>a random light hitting the painter from the right
Stick with one diffuse volume above the monster and a cold one from our left.

Painter's back looks good. Skin feels very warm.

>>1904452
I tried doing a construction box but it doesn't make any sense to me the way it's coming out. I'm not quite sure where to look for a pose that's close to this one, either. I don't know if there are any sites with posable figures, either, which would help me a lot on this.

>>1904356

Please help

>>1904456

Forgot to add, I was looking for the sword fighting book with the various poses of one-three figures fighting with swords, I think it's all in Japanese but I don't know the name of it.

>>1904460

Also have this. I know the pose works, I just am retarded with overlapping and am being dumb with the perspective.

>>1904456
I cant stop thinking about Cammy now asshole
goddamnit

>>1904465

I'll trade you :D help a nigga out

>>1904434
k :3

>>1904342
atmospheric perspective and contrast grading, it looks more like I'm looking at a tabletop set than a city, aside from that it's fantastic

>>1904469
Nice.
for your question do what I'm doing right now.
Anything of this subject is rich with poses for the athletic person.

should I just quit while I'm here?

>>1904492
>should I quit
don't ever say that again.

For this piece, you learned something.
You arent good at anatomy, so conjour up skill in order to pass the test

>>1904482
that works for me, quick update.

just laying lines down to get an idea of the anatomy, I'm going to need to clean all of this up, though. none of it fits/is proportional.

If anyone can redline what I have on this, it'd help me a lot.

>>1904493
worked on the body a bit more, lost track of layers and time and forgot i was actually fixing the anatomy on the blue chick thanks to Mr Redline up there. How is it revised anon?

Can someone give me a tip on how to give a idea of depth on >>1904492 feels really flat to me.

>>1904512
derp. image would help hu?

>>1904410
Absolutely delicious, anon.

>>1904419
>>1904422
>>1904424
I can see it now. Thanks.
I'll rework it a bit. I'll post again later.

this shit is finally finished. critique yes?

>>1904173
is that suppose to be a golbin because it looks like an orc

>>1904559
you have no clue how chickens are in RL. you have to chase them before you can kill them.

>>1904173
fucking start over dude. please.

>>1904563
chickens were docile before the industrial revolution. lrn2history

>>1904567
also, the ones he's about to stab look like hens because you put red stuff on their heads. hens are males and it looks like you only got hens on your farm. how are they going to copulate?

>>1904576
they dont, its a gay cock farm; hes putting that one down because of a venereal disease

>>1904232
>>1904166
>>1904167
>>1904168
thanks :3 even the hatens

Trying to finish my first own digital art, any tips?

>>1904589
add greyed down dark complimentary colors in your shadows, and i dont see a clear light source

>>1904591
Where exactly do I add this shadows I struggle with this a bit, could you help?

crits?

>>1904599
I think the neck is too.far away from the right shoulder

>>1904595
value is something you jus need to practice. pick a light source and add shadows. do studies

>>1904173

I fixed her eyes to look more human, making them yellow instead of pitch black. I also made her neck brighter as well!

>>1904273

http://madizzlee.deviantart.com/journal/Goblins-vs-Gnomes-Challenge-493956196

>>1904565

dude im still working on it, it might look completely different once i done!

>>1904651
dude if this is your entry your are missing a lot of the criteria

>>1904653

what do you mean? Goblins are for the horde and like explosives, her fucking shoulder pads have fucking rockets on them, it meets the subject matter dude!

>>1904651
there is also an adults only version of this as well i guess, GOBLIN TITTIES FOR THE WIN!

>>1904279
made me kek
good job tho. v unique
>>1904342
this is fantastic. the colors are kinda making me nauseous for some reason

someting I've been working on... I used a rapidograph w/ noodler ink for each individual color and then scanned and put it all together because im bad at doing everything @ once lol. is there any way i could make this seem less...collage-y?

I'm glad I finally got around to redesigning the helmet like I've been wanting to. To me the swan helmet gives a very different connotation to the character, instead of the trite religious borrowings commonly found in big baddies, particularly those in fantasy.

>>1904667
flower* not color wtf im so tired

>>1904673
is that actually a 'beak' shape or is it an illusion created by the collar? if it is the latter that is a very nice touch and it's well done.

learning to paint forms

>>1904403
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8kfK46nruKM

i dont care about your opinion on ampony bones but dont copy the painting; learn from it

>>1904709

It's an illusion. The black gap is where the visor is. I should draw the helmet from other angles to make that more apparent.

does furry porn actually sell? where can i sell it?

>>1904651

Cleaned it up a lot added more shading added A LOT of details to her armor so much lines and details i think i over did it a little, what do yall think?

also i need to fix her legs, and i have other versions where her skin is a lot brighter but the brighter and greener i make her the less like a goblin she starts to look i think, so i dont know, but i know it is way to dark right now and i do need to figure out a way to fix it!

>>1904726

fix her vagina. its annoying

>>1904726
devientart/10

Any glaring problems i'm missing here?
Wouldn't want to spend 2 hours painting before I realize it's proverbial back is broken.

>>1904559

>>1904673
>swanson
>swan-son

ha

>>1904723

>>1904737
i cnt stop laughing

>>1904580
>gay cock farm
no homo, but that's a great name for a farm

>>1904718
that's a really nice touch,

>>1904737

thats what you get for rushing things up

>>1904749
>that utter

Is this supposed to be furry or did you just have a boner when you were drawing that goat?

>>1904753

Not what I was aiming for, I'll admit

>>1904749
whyboner

>>1904756

God damit /ic/

>>1904749

MUH DICK

>>1904749
>dat udder
>dat anus

Its an abstract kind of boner

>>1903875
When is it time to put down the airbrush, /ic/?
Are there good artists who use the airbrush a lot? Otherwise, how do you get smooth transitions?

>>1904730

i wasn't sure what you were talking about so i checked out some women in panties on google and saw that i still dont know what the fuck you were talking about because my freestyle guess work was spot on

but i tweeked it just a tiny bit anyway for shits and giggles, does it look better now or is it still annoying???

>>1904764
>mr_rodgers_wakes_up_in_2015.jpg

>>1904777
lol.
I think he looks a lot like the Joker or something
what a creepy face

>>1904775
>my freestyle guess work was spot on
ahahahahahahhahahaha
my sides
my sides
>muh freestyle yuhhh

>>1904775
Stop mirroring shit. If you have to mirror, you'll never be a competent artist.

Mr. Lincoln

>>1904764
>J-just dont overdo it and l-leave edges?

>>1904775
dude i still say throw this out and try a new pose atleast; also dont be so hard on the outline, establish a definitive light source, download a couple texture brushes for the armor. and add color temperature instead of a solid green. plus shade better; it looks like dirt is rubbed all over her skin.

>>1904791
a-a-are you making fun of m-me?
I can't t-t-tell if youre making fun of me or g-giving me advice anon
lovely boob

>>1904791
>Boob still looks lumpy like it has something growing underneath the skin.

>>1904794
It should be noted that it looks like fucking shit because it looks like some kid was like,
>Ehh, I'll draw half of it and paste the EXACT SAME fucking thing onto the other side so it looks symmetrical.

Exact symmetry. Not even once.

>>1904795
>not making fun
>>1904796
>s-sorry master I promise I will improve

>>1904801
Just down the res and no one will know any better.

>>1904796
well to be fair boobs are lumpy
they're like full of gross milk making vein things
but we live in the art world so boobs are perfect here so fix it anon>>1904791
>>1904794
>>1904775
that was more feedback than you deserve you shitbrick
pull shit like this where you post the same image over and over again and we'll start ignoring you just like on /co/
seriously, you fucked went out and edited those pictures like 5 different times to get past the duplicate image thing just so you could post them in both draw threads, fuck you dude

>>1904775

I quit that shit 2 months into drawing, get it out of your system now

how the hell do i get values/strokes that don't look like garbage. all im using is the hard round with opacity and flow set to 100 and all those options turned off. someone help please.

>>1904801
Oh well than thank you. :)

>>1904805
>>1904798
>>1904794

The dude's a delusional Deviantart shitter. Trust me when I say you're never going to get through to him.

>>1904811
it's true.
let him burn and climb out of garfields pussy

>>1904805
>well to be fair boobs are lumpy
Find me some pictures of real life boobs up close that show lumpy lumps underneath the skin.
I'll wait.
Yes, I realize there are fat nodes(?) underneath the skin. That doesn't mean they are clearly visible.

>>1904808
>>1904808
set to 100? holy shit dude, knock that opacity down to 50 man. blend with 30.

>>1904815
the tiddie looks fine, if you blending it into oblivion you will get the ultra smooth digital look which is just shit. its good to have some kind of light dissonance in shape

>>1904805
my man boobs arent lumpy.
0/10
confirmed for not touching titties

skull studies

>>1904819

one of the few good artists on ic. your colors are a bit muddy, though.

using ref from the ref thread

>>1904559

Seriously

Stop using texture brushes when you don't know how to work with them

>>1904850
you mean the tree?

>>1904726
Than's not a goblin and you know it. It barely even fits the theme. You're just too lazy to fix your mistakes and to do proper studies for a good final piece(like observing how a blizzard-style goblin looks like and what inventions would they make - basic observation skills)

>>1904732

>>1904854
He meant everything.
Here is a tip: toss all custom brushes, get the default hard round, set opacity to 100 and only change flow for gradients(flow - how much pigments the brush leaves on the canvas). It gets rid of those insecure strokes.

One more thing: Listen to the critiques of others, don't just do the wrong thing blindly again.

>>1904865
>One more thing: Listen to the critiques of others, don't just do the wrong thing blindly again.
point to me the post where someone warned me of this before.
i take all critique seriously

>>1904775
Stop fucking using soft brushes, Jesus Christ

>>1904837

i like this a lot.

I'd like to see you paint something in a video or something, I like the way you do your shit.

>>1904867
not him but I think I saw someone post ">using the photoshop grass brush" which is kind of the dumb 4chan way of saying that you're better off with basic hard round/square brushes in nearly every case, which anyone will tell you.

Like photobashing, theres nothing *wrong* with using fancy ones, but it's really only there for when you can create something *more* convincing with regular brushes but you don't have the time.

First time posting a wip here.
The lighting is shit, maybe ill need to use some reference i guess

First time posting here.
Here is a wip. I feel like its too flat and the lighting source is shit.

>>1904456
I get happy about how my gestures look and then I see stuff like this and I just want to quit art. Maybe it just isn't for me.

>>1905014

post your gestures

>>1905014
Those aren't gestures though. Those are figure drawings.

>>1905024
top kek

>>1905022
Here.

>>1905024
Yeah, I know. I wasn't implying they are gestures, just that I'm behind him by a lot.

>>1905028
Not really bad, though for gestures imo you should really do it traditionally (esp. with charcoal/graphite/etc.)

But yeah, quit comparing and git gud

>>1905030
My traditional gestures aren't as good, for some reason. That's why I prefer doing them digitally.

>>1905034
Then practice.

>>1905001
Those are the legs of a titan

>>1904867
Wanted to tell you this
>>1904888

>>1904888
Not that guy but, how would he learn how to create something more convincing with other brushes if he never uses them?

You have to fail in order to succeed and I think it's good that he knows now.

I would tell him to keep his brushes, but study their usage before putting them in your artwork.

what can I improve on?

>>1905090
on everything

>>1905090
nice rendering
his titty is too far under his arm
stiff gesture but idk if that is a joke or not
on the yellow, try warmer shadows

>>1905120
thx i will have that in mind next time.

I pitty myself, cus I suck at color. Should i go back to the BAS, grayscale and linestuff only?

>>1905130
no friend just practice do not be ashame

>>1904901
loving those eyes/brows mate
the nose looks like it is in profile, but the head is 3/4 view. fix the perspective and don't have such a harsh black line on the nose, the cleavage and the under eye bags.

The shoulders look kind of whack, though. Look at some torsos and fix that up. I know you haven't spent as much time painting that area yet but it's good to fix it now rather than later. Colour choice is appealing.

>>1904342
The fog really helped i think. added some spaceships for a foreground element.
Any last suggestions? critique?

anyone have advice on colouring a black and white painting? heard some people use masking. never used it before.

>>1904808
you should never use 100% opacity unless your just throwing down some initial colours. also dont forget to turn on the pressure sensitivity of you havent.

>>1905142
Thank you so much for the advice! I agree on everything you said.
I left it here last night, the most difficult part for me its gonna be changing the shoulders

What do ya'll think?

>>1905199
try to keep in mind how the pic is gonna be readable, it's starting to get a bit cluttered

>>1905188
man everytime i see this. just so badass

>>1905214

not sure yet.

How do i improve my lineart/colors/drawing?

>>1905265

try to draw more attention to the cats bumhole as that is clearly the focal point of the piece.

i updated my latest image :)

>>1905271

previously was like that

>>1903934
>>1904081
>>1904342
>>1904395
>>1904403
>>1904456
>>1904837
>>1905188

I like these good job!

I'll post my last piece.

>>1905001
Is she meant to look like she's about to cry?

>>1905188
great technique and perspective, well made.
only gripe is that it looks too clean for a "mining" town. also, where is the mine???

>>1905049
>Those are the legs of a titan
Thanks, will fix
>>1905285
Nope, is it the highlight?

>>1905268
What is it with all these attractive animal bums this thread?

>>1905214
progress

>>1905296
No it's the redness around her eyes and the sad emotionless expression

>>1905307
Gotcha i will change the expression

>>1905188
Mind telling me your process for this drawing? I feel like I could learn from you.

>>1905199
pressure sensitivity for opacity or size?

>>1905314
sure sure, lotsa sketching.
did like 6 pages of detailed ones.
then pick some and see how they go together in another sketch+ envirment tryouts.pick one. build base in 3d, choose best angle, pick good lightning. and then the real work begins :P

I just finished this for a friend just now, what do you guys think?

>>1905351

are these for a game or something? I liked it a lot.

>>1905351
damn man. im so fucking jelly of this

>>1905290
>>1905363
Actually wanted to go for a more futurstic look, with arabic style architecture. it seems too easy to just make evrything gritty and dirty. mining is done giant moveable mining machines, carried by the big space crafts. read the book dune, its what this is based on. good read classic

>>1905363
Actually an fzd student, building my folio.
i've allways been a d/ic/k, happy to share and glad u like :)

>>1905351
you read scott's book am i right? that's exactly what he suggest to do in one of the chapters.

>>1905324
i set both on as default. play around with the setting for a bit, i think it would greatly benefit you.

judge me as hardest you can. Ps. its made with paint

>>1905407

wrong everything

>>1905415
thanks, any tips?

Last update. Dont think it's worth continuing on this, either way any opinions?

>>1905417

learn to draw before you paint, read books, practice, sticky

ive been really playing around with making short comics, but i just realized ive been wasting time sketching in photoshop, using illiustrator is apparently how u begin digital sketches? i feel like giant retard that wastes life sometimes

>>1905422

learn to see and to observe rationally. Understand how thing work the way they work.

Tried a Robert Dejesus type thing. How I do?

>>1905434
I think you might've rounded off and receded the chin too much and lost the shape of the forehead and neck, missing out on a lot of key features to make the face recognizable as that particular person.

The original photo features a tall forehead, a very squared off chin, and fuller neck. I think next time you do a caricature, take the time to identify these major facial structures and be sure to emphasize them to help you capture the essence of the individual.

>>1905425
you can sketch in whatever you feel comfortable with, but i don't believe most people use illustrator for sketching

>>1904901
Thick brows save lives

waifu material/10

>>1905425
>that image
o-okay.
Is she enjoying the dick?

>>1905439
Thanks for the feedback, a tad new to caricatures. I've been having trouble picking out notable feature to emphasize, so your tips are much appreciated.

>>1905419
the main problem imo are the 2 fat pandas in the background. they lack movement. i'd completely remove them and put something else in the picture

>>1905442
thick brows only look cute in qt grills
>mfw i have thick brows and they look like shit

>>1905465
Dont worry.
Some guy will come along and confess his love for thick brows

>>1905465
It's all about shaping them. Angled up and away from the outer corners from the eye, peak of the arch that align with the outer corners of the eyes, keep the unibrow clear and clean, clear out any little strays outside of the deified shape.

If you want, get it professionally done, take a few good photos, and use them as reference for when you groom them at home. You can also get them plucked thinner if you still don't like them but that's a lot more maintenance if you're up for it.

>>1905271
the lip area looks blurry
overall good job

>>1905470
Nah im okay with my thickness of them. But yeah unkept thick black brows look like shit. Ill watch some tutorials and shit

these are the first few sketches of a character that i'm designing to narrate a series of educational animations ...an intellectual weasel.

critiques are most welcome & needed

>>1905494
play more with the proportions i feel like u can get alot more out of his body. might wanne take a look at some of the artists u like on how to push it:)

>>1904901

this is what i call attempting to polish a turd.

>>1905494
are you actually a science related student doin these as doodles or did you look up the schrödinger stuff?

>>1904495


small update.

>>1905506
Why do you think that?

>>1905441
i like sketching in photoshop, but i find i have to zoom in, do another detailing layer closer because everything looks kind of jagged and sloppy at first, just seems a little tedious, but hey thats art...

>>1905511
A suggestion: try posing like the person in your drawing.

>>1905509
i am a senior in high school, but will be attending college for physics next year.

i understand the basic principals of schrodinger's equation, but looked up the equation itself for i don't have it memorized U: kudos for noticing that.

>>1905498
thank you for the critique, i agree...my main focus has been the face, and i have put zero thought into manipulating the forms of the body.

>>1905494
You're better at drawing than most people here. You have gessture, perspective, values, style.

>>1905434
>That guy sucks so bad that he even disabled comments on his DA.

>>1905524
Did, it works. It's the perspective.

>>1905540
>And the anatomy, gestures, volume.

Toss the tablet, do studies.

>>1905535
thank you so much! o': i have been insecure of my abilities and hearing this made my night

>>1904901
eh

>>1905544

anatomy is better than it was yesterday. either post something useful or go back to /b/.

>>1905568
just because it's better than the monstrosity that you posted previously, doesn't been it's any good. what anon said is useful; you need to do studies.

>>1905583

show me a picture in that form and I'll study it. I'll pay you 3 bitcoins to find me one that's not OC.

>>1905563
why

>>1905511
I hope this helps

>>1905605


>>1904446

not even close.

>>1905511
I think you should give that head a bit more tilt forward. The standard 3/4 view parallel to the ground seems a bit static for such a dynamic pose.

>>1905619

it's not helping me, that's for sure. More of a turn to the left of the image or to the right? I'm afraid to overlap anything else seeing as how it's all laying on top of itself and ruining the shot but it fits for the comp.

>>1905619


or do you mean re-position the head to lay in front of the body moreso?

>>1905652
i am in love with you.

>>1905568
>ok, there you go
Study more gestures/proportions + think about the poses(are they practical/usable?) The most flashy one isn't always the best one.

I suck at perspective so bear with it please

>>1904081
hang on was this the one you were studying? I really like how you made her look older

>>1905666
>>1904446
Oh, and a question: did you paint over the 3d model for these?

>>1905028
I think you're off to a decent start. You'll never be the best at anything in the world, so don't worry. No one ever is.

>>1905501
what do you make these with?
looks like simple paint work

>>1905694
it is

>>1905666
5/5
Anatomical differences aside, great solution to that girls problem.

>>1905668
>68▶
>>>1905666


yes, I used it for the comp to try and work something out quickly, then realized the anatomy was fucked if I did that perspective for the form.

These are different angles from the same pose, it makes sense from the side but it doesn't work for what I'm trying to do.

>>1905697
Do you have a collection of your work or something so far? I think I'd like to download or view.

>>1905709
You would be better off creating your own poses because riot's in-game models are messy

Aaaand sorry for the complete redraw, it didn't help much i guess

>>1905712
its a blog on blogspot, called nonerandomdraw

>>1905716
Thank you. They're quiet well done.

>>1905717
oh srry, you have to add .br in the end of the url

I dont know what Im doing wrong but everytime I add hard lines he starts looking like an anime character
>Villpu give me the courage to go on

should i switch brushes? I don't know what brush to use

>>1905666
10/10 almost teal line guy quality
I'm curious (I wasn't sure who was talking to who in the other posts) did you use a 3D model for this redline?

>>1905718
http://nonerandomdraw.blogspot.ca/ worked for me. How long have you done this for?

>>1905724
1 month

Experimenting with style...

>>1905713

I couldnt think of an interesting dynamic one, but yours works, ill use it to my advantage somehow, thank you for the help.

>>1905723

nope, she doesnt have that pose in-game. that one looks better than her ingame shit, lol.

tips on posing

>>1904734
update

it's done now

orange tank falls off after being drained btw, kind of like the old space shuttle

>>1905733
The art style seems entirely different, from the clouds to the spaceship (broad smudged strokes to solid thin colors).

>>1905734
I tried to render the background to look blurry/ out of focus from the foreground shuttle, since they're far apart and the shuttle is moving fast.

will work on making future stuff more cohesive

>>1905733
nice phallic symbol u got there, nice n big

>>1905756
it's thrusting so hard

>>1904081
>>1905667
>was a young loli all this time
fuck.
I'll walk into the van on my own then.

>>1905733
MY COCK WILL PIERCE THE HEAVENS

crotock plos

>>1905798
scribbly, but the idea is there. push your values and have some defined lighting and you have yourself an okay piece

>>1905805
aaaayyy white danny brown

>>1905806
>danny brown
is my quick-response grammar really that bad?

>>1905378
neat, mind sharing what your experience at the school has been like? Would you recommend going?

>>1905723
Thanks i guess?

Just a scrub from beginner thread lurking here.

>>1905807
no the picture looks like white danny brown

>>1905605
this makes it look more like a pose and less like a real thrust rotation on the back foot as if she were throwing a cross might work though

>>1905805
better?

>>1905823

it's too flashy as well for what the poster was going for originally. it turns it into a boring, static pose, not dynamic like the poorly-drawn one.

>>1905826
i'd say so, yes. keep practicing friend

This is so good

Few more

>>1905838
What is? Everything? Or nothing?

>>1905803
this is wonderful. colors are on-point, really liking it

haven't done very much on this since i last posted, except the axe

tried to make a pallet, figure out some light sources
>inb4 blue and orange how original

still don't know what to do with her free hand

>>1905845
Love your shit. Have you made any money out of your work?

>>1905858
This image... gross me out so much..... I need to know where the fuck this is from

>>1905513

because you have very bad drawing skills, but above beginner level rendering

You need to learn to draw

you need to learn to render

you need to learn to polish

Likewise, you cannot polish if you don't know how to render.
Likewise you cannot render if you first don't have a non-turd like decent looking drawing first.

Work on your drawing, observational drawing, life drawing, anatomy gestures and learn loomis/vilpuu. Also read the 'Antomy for sculptors' book, you can find a torrent for the pdf somewhere or go to the previous book thread.

Not trying to insult you anything, just stating what you are doing right now, which is turd polishing, the initial drawing is extremely flawed and bad. Work on your drawing skills, then go back to rendering.

Loomis: http://www.alexhays.com/loomis/

>>1905910

it's grimes, a synth-pop hipster singer/musician from the us

she is cute as fuk, that image really does her no justice.

>>1905977
>>1904901
>>1905506
>>1905513

sketched a kiev rioter. not worth taking further i think.

>>1905977
nonono you dont insult me
Pls, im here to learn and try to make someone aside for qt anatomically incorrect grills. Althought i wasnt going for something realistic.
I will start reading those books and making some studies from real life

>>1905994
>>1905980

>>1905845
do you have a blog for your artwork or something like that? i'd love to follow your work

>>1905858
HD HAS DESTROYED MY EYES

>>1905980
could be stylized like Elizabeth

How do you guys deal with ADHD? I know that I'm capable of rendering something decent, but I can't focus or bring myself to start or finishing a project.

>>1906197
Find a reason to be interested in your art, just like you can turn off your ADHD while playing Halo

>>1906197
Adderall.

Ask your doctor for it.
Its god-like for concentration

>>1904819
i love this

>>1905980
you fucked it up even more and your chicken scratch is worse
also I see you made her head even bigger even though it does not work with the style this time. did you even use guidelines?

>>1906398
I have an appointment for ADHD soon! I can't focus on my art for shit. Does it genuinely help? Is it easy to dependent on it?

over textured?! learnin bout the texture son

>>1906657
Just a little. The issue is more that she's a giraffe.

>>1906536
Dude its THE BEST shit.
College kids use it in my class to cram study.
Its a guaranteed D to an A.

Side effects may include:
>Not eating for a long time but being okay
>Being irratated when someone bothers you in the middle of it
>drinking lots of fluids
>may increase anger

Today marks the beginning of the journey to "git gud"

Wish me luck, /ic/.

>>1906451

lol you're fucking stupid