/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

hmpfff

>>1875862

nice proportions. but why the FK do you draw in ms paint? dude get PS. pirate it, nobody cares.

What do you think?

>>1875868
but why is it better? im not trying to offend u, i just don't know, thx

>>1875875

doesn't the pixelated look bother you? it's just an amazing piece of software for digital illustration.

It's just a sketch before I make it into a bigger picture but is the perspective all right here?

>>1875853
I really like how this looks but you might want to try to vary colors you use in the foreground and the background. The general rule is the further the object, the cooler the colors should be

>>1875878
it really doesn't bother me, but of course none of this drawings are what i want to achive. i'll try photoshop, thx for the advice

>>1875903
all your art is done with mspaint
why?
i mean the thumbnails look good and you have decent art but the binary tools ruin it. use programs that have tools with anti-aliasing, and that you can blend.

>>1875943
BANE?

Sargent study

>>1875946
bane?? don't know what u talking about

>>1875971
Stop right there, fucked up anatomy! Srs bro, foreshorten the arm and give this guy a neck.

>>1875953

>>1875981
srry, still don't get it

>>1875992
could you at least limit yourself to 5 a thread? or sparse them throughout?

>>1875985

>>1876004
ok

>>1876007
when will you finally get a tumblr?

>>1876100
I'm wearing glasses, so I get it.

Some thumbnails, which one of these should I choose?
Maybe work on both?

trying some new brushe. thanks to the anon that made the brushdumping thread that's getting zero attention :v

>>1876131
abandon both
left looked like fetus in a beer jug

>>1876136
Link the thread, you fat head

>>1876140
Because it is?

>>1876141

>>1875858

Started this tonight, about 2 hours in at this point (I'm very slow because I try to learn to "feel" the form still).

Do you guys have remarks about general issues that need fixing first? (btw, the hands aren't in yet because I haven't decided what I want them to do at this point. I'm not planning to hide them)

My main problem right now is that I've never painted anything further than that point and have no clue about how to go on from this point... Do you focus on one area and detail it out 100% or is there some intermediate step before? Also, should I bring color in before the detailing or afterwards?

I'm sorry, I'm a huge noob at this, but I'm grateful for all advice!

Thanks a lot in advance!

Started this tonight, about 2 hours in at this point (I'm very slow because I try to learn to "feel" the form still).

Do you guys have remarks about general issues that need fixing first? (btw, the hands aren't in yet because I haven't decided what I want them to do at this point. I'm not planning to hide them)

My main problem right now is that I've never painted anything further than that point and have no clue about how to go on from this point... Do you focus on one area and detail it out 100% or is there some intermediate step before? Also, should I bring color in before the detailing or afterwards?

I'm sorry, I'm a huge noob at this, but I'm grateful for all advice!

Thanks a lot in advance!

>>1876171
>ver painted anything further than that point and have no clue about how to go on from this point... Do you focus on one area and detail it out 100% or is there some intermediate step before? Also, should I bring color in before t

you should have probably decided what to do with the hands before getting this far.

also i THINK the nose should protrude upwards a bit more at the angle the head is at unless her nose is really flat but you may want to take that with a grain of salt since i'm still learning about this myself.

>>1875950
who is sargent?

>>1876177
my military officer

>>1875981
top kek

for you

Here's a little portrait from reference, keeping the brush at least on 40% so I'll stop airbrushing so much.

>>1876132
Really yummy colors, I love this kind of stuff. Ya blew it on detailing the lower part of the plate though, because the shape got lost in the process.

Quick likeness sketch, please critique. Ps: thank god for loomis

Found my Cintiq after a long time!
Can't wait to get back into digital painting.

Here's some imagination sketching

>>1876182
Thanks for your honesty.

>>1876244
forgot to add this

>>1876173
push the values. theres practically no contrast.

study

>>1875870
more definition.
very little compositional ballance as well.
keep chipping into it anon

>>1876132
Looks extremely drinkable.

Which is bad, because I'm an alcoholic that's trying to use art to fill the void in my soul that I'm usually pouring booze into.

Y u do dis?

just starting this, already don't know if I have the will to finish.

>>1876320
It's root beer. Read the filename. You can drink as much as you want and the worst that will happen is diabetes.

>>1876246
Nice anon. like this one.

So done with this one.

>>1876367
more contrast

Just finished this one. Finally

>>1876182
Another one.

>>1876311
Nice. Lighten up the top of the nostril a bit and it's good to go.

>>1876377

I know it's done but the fellow needs more cranium.

meh

>>1876383
Ooops, I mistakenly removed a considerable portion beforehand (you can almost see it). I will try to fix it. Thanks for pointing it out

I also resumed this piece today.

>>1876131
left reads better

you are allotted one marinated leaf a day in the loomis asylum

>>1876446

Honestly, your persistence and dedication to drawing is admirable.
Especially considering these are done in ms paint.

Also, even though your ideas make no sense/are an amusing satire about what constitutes about artistic genius they hold a semblance of creativity that most on /ic/ couldn't produce.
It's random and unprovoked but with a microscopic addition of true artistic intuition

>>1876450

honestly too. that is the best thing i've ever read about my work, i'll keep your words for the hard times. thank you

>>1876450
Oh so it's one guy. I've been away from /ic/ for two years now and thought maybe there was a collective riot going on where angry anons spam these threads with scribbles in some sort of protest...

>>1876459
that is the second best thing i've ever read about my work, i'll save your words for when i'm overconfident

>>1876460
post more rarely, I personaly can't stand what u r doing and dont get why everyone admiring urs crap.

>>1876466
fuck her in the ass!

im trying something new here

>>1876182
this one is nice but >>1876381 creeps me out a little bit. but maybe thats what youre going for idk

Gotta hop back to the illustration train, work in progress. Critique more than welcome!

>>1876466
i agree, i have to post more rarely

>>1876475
Maybe put the time and effort you are "wasting" painting multiple paintings and posting them on here to painting something more polished and bigger? Im sure you would learn more that way, break your boundaries.

>>1876470
Not trying to do anything other than sketching from reference, the creepness is probably my fault.
What are you trying there?

>>1876474
Asymmetrical antlers trigger me.

>>1876474
Maybe give the throne a little more oomph and give it slight frogs-eye perspective? Hard to say much this early but gosh do I love your color palettes. I think I asked this sometime earlier but you went to art school right? Would you recommend the one you went to?

>>1876482
Well really it was supposed to be practice with drawing water but then my mind wandered and that came out. The hand is the new thing iv only done a few but it was part of the whole anyway so i went for it.

This one is with just charcoal it was done a few days ago.

>>1875971
There is no supposed to be anyone inside.
Kinda like its being controled by someone else or its somehow activated
But i guess it doesnt read that well.

A study I'm doing. I'll also try and color it without using the fucking color picker tool

not looking forward to that

>>1876489
Feet look like rocks, loosen up!

About color picking, you can start by thinking "is this color I'm looking for more greenish than the one I'm currently at, or more yellowish?"
After you've found the Hue, saturation and Value aren't much of a hassle.

>>1876487
meant to quote this >>1875978

>>1876482
Will fix, thanks.
>>1876484
Thanks for the feedback, ill look into it. Yeah I went to an art school in southern finland, but all they taught there was gallery-pseudoart-bullshit, needless to say I didnt last long... Thats pretty much all the proper education ive got.

>>1876207
yo do you have other stuff

So I tried to draw Bill Evans. It went... sub optimally. I'll think of it as "lots of growth potential"

>>1876489
this is hard

>>1876474
the idea is stupid: why is a flame above her head? isn't it going to burn her hair? why is the bird not afraid of flame? do you even know birds? all that can be solved if you just put flame in the background.
what type of work do you usually do? photobash?

>>1876483
head is too large

>>1876553
Just shut your whore mouth already.

So, I'm still learning how to draw in general, but this is my first try at a finished digital art project, any tips before I continue it?

>>1876553
does my work look like photobash?

>>1876553

lol. not even sure if you are doing a parody of retarded /ic/ critiques, or if you are doing a retarded /ic/ critique.

a flame above the head is a symbol of enlightment in alot of cultures.

bonus info: there was some spanish nobleman in early peru who comissioned some guys to do a sculpture of him for his mansion. he told them he wanted a little flame ontop of his head. flame is 'llama' in spanish. however peruvians also have the animal called llama, which the spanish don't know about. so the sculpters shrugged and gave the guy a little llama sitting ontop of his head.

i believe this is guy

dun. how shit is it?

>>1876571
He is trolling. Or he genuinely believes that art must reflect reality completely.

And on the topic of your picture, I like it. The antlers are a bit asymmetrical, but otherwise it's good. I like the colour palette especially.

>>1876567
Keep in mind the various colors of skin and how they're influenced by the light source and light reflecting off surrounding objects. Don't think that shadow is just a darker value of the same hue.

Also, push your values more, especially in areas where the light is occluded, such as between the fingers and behind the microphone on the palm.

>>1876574
lol try painting trad first

>>1876577

i did once, it was a very humbling experience.

>>1876576
>Don't think that shadow is just a darker value of the same hue.
where do I read more about this

>>1876575
Thanks, I know he is trolling, just couldnt resist replying

>>1876584
I see. Go on, then.

>>1876553
My chao doesn't seem to mind

>>1876381
subtly expressive, keep it up anon

>>1876543
k-kawaii

>>1876583
emm, not that anon but try to read Alla Prima. Generelly is a nice book for artists and have coverage for your problem.

>>1876576
Thanks for the tip, I had already figured out the skin needed more shadows, but regarding the jacket Do you think it's ok?

>>1876602
Can I still get some good insight/info from the guy even though I don't like his loose style?

fucked up proportions a bit i guess. He doesnt look like model i was drawing

>>1876607

alla prima but its a huge bigass book. the nathan fowkes course on schoolism (i think) about designing in color and light is pretty amazing, teaches you a cubic fuckton on this topic. but its a huge class too. will take alot of time of concentrated watching and painting along. still worth every second imo.

>>1876613
is it on cgpeers?

>>1876629

yup just checked. designing with color and light.

>>1876474
Drawing is mostly good. The tip of the nose and mouth might be a little low and downward facing - doesn't match the rest of the head with the given horizon.

I feel like your color palette is very samey. Maybe it's just me, but I think all of the pieces you've posted here feature the same navy blue background, a dark rich yellow for skin tones, reddish accents (hair in this case and in another portrait).

I don't know if that's just the colors you use in an underpainting, but I'd take more time considering your palette, and really figuring out your direct and ambient light sources. I'd spend time doing color thumbs before settling in on anything.

What I'm doing wrong? I didn't draw his face wider enough?

>>1876483
You should establish the background first so that you can paint the figure with accurate colors and values.

>>1876652
What you're doing wrong is you're only taking vertical measurements, but no horizontal measurements. Actually read the Bargue Drawing Course so that you know the approach you're supposed to use to copy the plates.

>>1876652
I think he means it the other way around
Measure both horizontal and vertical
Your horizontals are pretty good but your verticals are way off
Draw slower to think about each line more carefully

>>1876655
>>1876660
Thank you very much, both of you. I won't make the same mistakes.

>>1876660
>I think he means it the other way around
By vertical measurements, I meant how far away things are when measuring vertically, like using a ruler in a vertical position. If horizontal lines are drawn through those measuring points, you now have something like in OP's picture.

/tangent

fuck perspective

>>1876665
..yes that's what I meant by vertical. There was no vertical measuring

>>1876667
You're saying there was horizontal measuring but no vertical measuring. I'm saying there's vertical measuring, but no horizontal measuring. If you take a ruler, hold it vertical, and measure the spacing between landmarks, you're taking vertical measurements. Vertical measurements are shown with horizontal lines. They can be a point, a short segment, or a long line. Horizontal measurements are shown with vertical lines.

All that's besides the point because I'm just rambling about semantics.

Don't know if this right place to ask, but i'm looking for the thread(i hope archived) where anon posted works of other anons who posted in threads like this one.

>>1876679
It's "work you saved from /ic/" or so, think the last one 404'd.
You can always make a thread :)

doing a lot of character sketches these are fun

>>1876686
Need a lot more lighter tones and highlights on that pic. Darks should be darker too, since the light sources are so close, contrast is kind of off.

Really like it, though.

>>1876693
thanks !
>Darks should be darker too, since the light sources are so close
could you please explain this ?

guys.

If i study form some reference should I zoom it out a lot to see simplifed tones ? just as i would squint ? i mean i prefer to zoom it out but dont know if thats good for me.

>>1876676
I think I've having a similar problem.

>>1876695
It won't hurt you in any way :)
Just keep in mind why you are doing the study. If you are doing a study to learn about edges or textures it would be weird to squint and/or zoom out.

>>1876698
thanks bby. Im learning to render in general.

You are allowed one leaf a day in the loomis asylum

A quick sketch I did for a draw Im gonna do later.

I know pen is bad to sketch in but it is what I had. Any suggestions for how it would have been better (besides not drawing in pen from the start)?

>>1876676
Oh shit I get ya now

Yeah

>>1876715
nice but the face could be more appealing.

Pretty funny how this sketch changed over time
One guy turned into 3
gonna add this into my folder of shit I should probably work on

>>1876804
center is best.

>>1876686
gaben push values
push like tight bitch gives babies
push that shit

>>1876802

if you do still lives like that always do a bit of the surrounding environment too so you can better judge the color and stuff.

>>1876804
2muchwow

Rocks are hard man.

So I made an insect study, and I want to create a dragon based off it's looks. I have two thumbnails so far.

[A] has just the dragon, and a sunset mountain range. Not sure about the colors, or if the image is too boring.

In [B] we're looking down on the ground, and that's gonna be a rider in the top right.

Do any of these thumbs have potential, or should I go do another 5-10?

>>1876812
no, rocks are soft.

>>1876804
why is there a golden egg above the character? it looks stupid. it's way too big and takes all the attention away from the character, in other words, it's distracting.

>>1876815
Always do as many as possible, I do kinda like A though. I'd try some more interesting angles.

>>1876694
thought this guy had a cool style for rough concept sketches so I did something similar.

>>1876880

wip

It's been almost a year since I took a break because of whatever reason. trying to get back into it.

quick 5 minute sketches. i grow stronger.

Just finished this. Seems like I haven't posted on /ic in ages

Went with the left of the two I posted earlier and trying to get the values and form down before I continue, I think I can handle the colors once I start.

How is it so far?

tried to push my values finally.

>>1876005
Fucking lol'd

sloppy sketch, what do you guys think?

Self portrait for Nov 1 complete, I think.

Any criticisms?

>>1877078
Train and understand the human ear.

>>1877078
needs moar values
the chin, cheekbones and forehead look flat as hell, other than that, you're doing good

>>1877078
I think you might need to learn head construction first. Im Not sure but this nose and nose shadow looks off.

Wow I'm bad. This is my first sketch for years though. Any tips for pencil drawing?

>>1876498
"Gallery-pseudoart-bullshit" doesn't sound too promising, I'll have to look up more info but thanks.

Just started studying figure drawing about a week ago. I've been reading a few of Loomis' books for about a week now and I can already see an improvement, as I do about three to four sketches a day. I'd love for someone to give me some advise, if at all possible with figure drawing.

>>1877180
What the hell?

>>1877180
>>1877181
Stop chicken scratching and also study from life.
+Keep working~ :)

>>1877189
I'm not exactly sure what you mean? Please elaborate, if you will. Also, thanks a lot for the feedback.

>>1877181
The torso you drew is too rectangular, in the original, the torso has a V-shape to it.

>>1877208
You should get confident and do one line instead of going over the same line over and over

>>1877212
>>1877213
Wow, You guys are fucking awesome. Thanks so much for the quick feedback.

>>1877181
Proportionas are way off.
You also have no idea about the form of that object

Thats why you draw countours instead of forms

Thats why you fail

Now take a simple oblect in real life. Likfe a flash disk or something

Take a pencil

now spend alot of time drawing it as realistic as possible. It may take a day or two(probably not but still a huge amount of time)

Start with a line drawing putting general shapes

Then draw inside countours to understand forms


then paint

if you don't wanna do that get the fuck out of ic becasue you don't wanna learn how to draw obviously

>>1877220
wut. A lot more hostile than what I was expecting. Even from /ic/

>>1877220
I still appreciate your response, but I didn't draw just the outline, it appears that way because I put the mannequin on a different layer because my line are sloppy and it's hard to tell what's going on sometimes due to the scribbling. As I said, I'm just starting; I don't claim to be good... At all.

>>1877221
Wuss. Although drawing flashdisks is a shit advice. Furniture is better.

>>1877235
Haha. More so because I didn't expect it, kinda came out of left field, but I appreciate the feedback regardless of how intense the critique is.

>>1876804
all ready been done bruh

>>1876399
>you need this
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9kQllLy_X4I&list=PLV2X3tgajVlFROS5fuIVKLGs78_fC4JTN

>>1877248

>>1877256
lol

>>1877256
but what do you really think

>>1877269
values are lookin good, something wrong with the structure of the mouth tho,
try flipping the image bruh

>>1876543
eh

>>1877076
nobody would ever carry such a small axe like that.

>>1876807
ok
>>1876891
Looks cool but his face is getting a bit misaligned. Check that against your ref before you do any more details.
>>1877176
You will be best off checking the sticky for anatomy before you start shading things in.
>>1877245
I like this so far, some edge control could push it a bit.

so simple yet so sexy hnnnggg

>>1875849
>>IRC : Server :
>irc://irc.rizon.net/
>Channel: #/ic/
Is anyone on there? I don't understand how to go to the /ic/ chatroom.

>>1877449

i tried going there several times, everyone there seemed completely unaware of what /ic/ is or was just permanently afk. complete mistery to me.

>>1877449
>>1877470
Guess it's dead then.

So I dug up my old cintiq, decided to try using it like an intuos and holy shit it feels so much better, I can see whole picture and have better control over all. Guess I should trade it for an actual intuos and retire my ep121. Or do you think this could be an effect of trying something new?

>>1877495
Just use both for a while

It's what I do with my children

>>1876684
Thank you, but i didn't save much from ic.

what am i doing with my life

>>1876553
salty.

You remember Hades from, Hercules?

Question

If I'm drawing a figure and it's standing on a high cliff, where will the horizon be?

>>1877580
where your camera is?

>>1877580
if ur looking up at the figure the horizon is low if your looking over the figure the horizon is high

>>1877582
>>1877583

The viewer is directly behind the figure

Work in progress, pls halp me.

>>1876487
you should have not make any cloth between the armor set and show the gap so it would be clear.

>>1877584
Still need camera angle relative to earth and attitude. Also what lens are in use?

>>1877608
that line should be tangent to earth, sorry

>>1877608

It's for this shitty animation i'm working on. I'm figuring what I want to do with it as I go. If she was standing on a tall cliff or something where would the horizon be? would it even appear in the image?

>>1877608
That is a very small earth, or otherwise the camera would be looking at the figure from the tip of Scotland to the bottom of England which is not likely.

Cliff height would hardly even affect the position of the horizon, the difference would be insignificantly small

I did this speed painting last night, I used Hiro as a reference

>>1877247
>deltora
my nigga

I'm thinking it's the hands and lower body that's off, but I can't figure out how to pose it.

>>1877608
>>1877617
>>1877620
Here it is to more relative scale

>>1877642

thanks I think I get it

working on midna. might color after i finalize lines, idk

>>1877585
2spooky
i think the only help you need is to finish it

>>1877617
It's up to you, really. You are the one staging tho shot, it's like photography, your goal is the best composition.

I just wanted you to know that it's there. In your case you would be ok if you just eye ball it in favor of best composition. But if one day you will decide to get serious about art you will at least know where to dig.

>>1877642
You guys are missing the point. Sure it wasn't to the scale, but the point is everything matters and all geometry is mathematically describable.

It's just something I went through. I couldn't even understand how far apart should vanishing points on horizon be. And no one explained that, every tutorial just didn't go that deep, even Scott in his gnomon dvd avoided it. But I felt something is different when I move them. Only later I figured it, piece by piece, from different sources, some stuff on my own. And this stuff is not that hard actually. It really bothers me that such information just isn't there, at least not on the surface. So I'm trying to go deep every time someone asks this questions, because hopefully they will remember that there is something underneath and go back to learn it one day.

suddenly the lighting is all fucked up. shit. gotta plan ahead.

>>1876715

ohhhh esdeath sama

>>1877660
Lefty confirmed.

>>1877753
Wut

>>1877753
Lefty here. Do elaborate.

>>1877584
The horizon line is equal to the eyeline of the 'viewer/camera' so the horizon line would be somewhere around your figures head.

zapzap

>>1877797
haha i like it how did you thought about shadows ? used 3d model ?

>>1877805

thanks anon. no all from head, there's probably plenty of subtle mistakes there

>>1877797
Wouldn't there be more overlapping of shadows from the multiple light sources?

>>1877824

yeah, there would be. there would also be darker shadows in the corners and narrow spots etc

>>1877797
this is neat, anon.

working on a value study to try and figure out the human form - more to come in the future

>>1877828

thanks man!

>>1876990
What medium? Looks really nice.
I've designed a couple of skateboards in the past, and I can't quite seem to find a good way to get a design on a board without directly painting on it.

>>1877855
spend more time on drawing, your proportions are really off

Feathers are hard

>>1877932
no they're soft

>>1877934

>>1877934
huehuehuehuehue, thx m8

>>1875849
So... IRC and /b/ being morons... well..
Somehow i told ya so, didn't quiet cut it did it now?

>>1877971
>>1877963
stap it pls

>>1877984
leave him alone, he's spreading it like he said he would.

>>1877251
Thanks, I still have some overlay layers laying around so I'm going to try other colours.

Something for Halloween. Crits?

Just going to share a page of my sketchbook.

>>1878014
u fuken ghey brah

Cooking by the Book -- Halloween style

>>1877176
>Any tips for pencil drawing?

Kneaded erasers are really great because you can use them to pick up some of the graphite without erasing the area in question away completely.

Other than that I agree with >>1877416 that there is some good information in the sticky, so you should check it out sometime.

>>1877180
>>1877181
I'd suggest giving these exercises a try, they really helped me to get nicer lines.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wgDNDOKnArk

Also always try to draw from your shoulder or elbow and not your wrist - that helps both with cleaner linework as well as putting less strain on your wrist, but might take some time getting used to.
Lastly, a lot of beginners hold their pen/pencil too tightly, so try to avoid that. It doesn't actually give you more control and can be bad for your hand/wrist.

>>1878073
that characters from silent hill and it's a girl, breh

>>1878076
her left foot seems off, but I really like this otherwise.

try the Fung Zhu method of
" bluring a photo and use the color and shapes"

I know I am too soon to to speed paint or using this fancy method

But really fun lol

Maybe to late to ask , but is this anything particularly wrong?

I am not familiar with environment

>>1878134
Your horizon is very high, so there's no sense of scale. Its too late at this stage to change that without a lot of work, so I would suggest moving the environment fogging closer to the foreground and being more mindful of where you place details. Remember to use lost edges in your shadows/periphery.

>>1878122
hey i liked that TV show. nice interpretations

>>1877569

it has potential anon!

>>1878134
flip canvas, you're painting with a bias, everything is pulling right.

>>1878156
bad paintover, the fuck man.

theres no scale or perspective, because the picture creates no opportunity for it. Don't design around your weaknesses, confront them, create environments with plausible architecture and learn perspective.

This scene would be 'zero point perspective', look it up.

>>1878236
POSE FIRST!!!!!
everything is meaningless with a shitty pose

_(:3 」∠ )_
concept design
anything particularly need to refine other than this vehicle can never land on ground

im doing this. Its my first creative enviroment thingy. I mostly just do stills and stuff. anyway i need some tips.

critiques please.

>>1878249
i-it was referenced

>>1878281

studying bouguereau
the face is driving me crazy

>>1878323
You are definitely not looking at the ref enough. The body is way too curved and the general proportions are off.
The face should be darker. But it's looking good otherwise.

>>1878327
that's right, thanks for your help

sp day

>>1877245
really cool

>>1878343
You really need to work on your faces. They all look the same.
Also try using a brush with more opacity to avoid that weird layered look you have.

An autoportrait.

>mfw my super shitty sketches are starting to get less shitty ;_;

I can't seem to get the likeness of the statue.can someone point out what's skewed about it ?Especially the face.

>>1878413
The angle of the ear and the space between this and the eyes, i think that is the problem

>>1878346
working on faces at the moment, I feel like high opacity brushes make my stuff look flat and it is harder to control, ill somehow switch over to them..

>>1878416
cheers m8

>>1878413
the eyes in yours taper 'upwards' towards the outer corners, they don't in the statue.

How is it looking design wise?

Stiff figure, almost no perspective. I wouldnt go with a purple since it shows off that hes a noble. Your color palette, the red, purple and yellow are not organized so they look childish. ( I recommend to practise without color picker some pcitures from a film or animation.). Same material everywhere, the Design is also nothing new. Oh and his proportion are.. ( eg. hands too small). Also a tip for his gesture ( http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2aOyLC0XhrY&list=UUaodMS2WS_cye2WmoC90Meg)), look how daarken made this figure standing pose.

>>1878448
Thanks for the critic man! Will look into it.

finished

>>1877873

It's all sharpie, huge pain in the ass. For more simple stuff I'll cut stencils and just spray it on.

>>1878413
what the fuck this is too fucking good what the fuck is going on HOLY SHIT.are u catbib or something what the fuck?

>>1878468
the girl on the right is still outside of the glass

>>1878413
he needs more hair.

Impressive work though

>>1878468
You're way above my skill level, but I'd suggest keeping more texture on the skin because the current rendering feels kinda like plastic. Unless you aim for that look, of course.

>>1878468
The beam closest to the girls looks like it's slanting to far away from the building, it's not at the same angle as the others if that was what you were trying to do.

>>1878468
no one in there right mind would lean on glass like that

>>1878468

>>1876377
i liked it before, you over worked and blended the hell out of it.

>>1876574
image related
the colors are ok but atomically its all sorts of silly. his shoulder nearest should be pulled more in front of him, the armpit more defined. His arm further away is quite slim. and his torso looks like he had major surgery at birth. and dont shy away from drawing hands and feet. i see TONS of potential.

>>1878014
lame

>>1878014
lol why would you sign that garbage, go back to deviant art

Not sure what to do with the ground around the tree to the right.

>>1878581

Whatever you do, I wouldn't do too much. Don't want to drag the compositon down into a corner. If you had to add something, I'd put like dead leaves, some on the snow, others almost buried in it, etc. And maybe a patch of mud or two. And just get everything to look a little wet, like maybe the snow was there for a few days and is beginning to melt, so around the edges where it goes into mud or grass the snow can look more porous.

As for me, drawing a late Halloween thing because whatever.

Wondering what to do on this one.

I've been getting into blackletter script lately. I want to do something fancy with the swashes and a border.

Anybody a type wiz on here?

>>1878581
I'd definitely leave it. The dark of the tree and it's forground kind of slide into the lights of the snow.

Work it!

>>1878351
I clicked it and realized it was a GIF. Do a small series of these .

Would have looked better if the hair was less stringy. If you're going for that minimalist/designy/pop-art look that is

>>1878598
>guy posts webcomic char on /co/
>looks cute, might have to check it out when it launches
>he's already making inflation art of his character

>>1875849

ref and mindless doodling

>>1878598
>>1878641
My sentiments are the same anon. OP, I am disappoint.

>>1878641

That's an awful lot of words for someone who's not critiquing or helping others with their work.

>>1878731
You're right, anon. Shouldn't have even brought it up, I have no right to judge. It's just something that's going to sour the comic for me a bit.

Though I must say, >>1878598 , if it's going to be that kind of comic you could make a killing just from setting up a patreon. Look at how much money some of those artist are making off their very poor adult comics, and your art is at a far higher level than theirs.

>>1877935
Penelope?

>>1878251
get the proportions of the rider correct firstly. or else nothing else you design will look good in relation.

I feel like I'm getting worse.

oh damn this thread is in autosage mode :(

there's clouds in the sky today!

>>1878908
Ooo i like that

>>1878876
I enjoy that composition

>>1879005
maybe the blueish reflection on helmet should be slightly brighter. but nice, i like the golden ball reflections

just started this. not sure where to take it

I made art with your arts