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/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

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observations?

>> No.1773134
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another

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>> No.1773159

>>1773132
It's a very interesting technique/style you have. The big breasts are a bit silly to me, they're everywhere nowadays to me, everyone's preggers, sorry, i rant. No, but i really like , technological, but still organiky. I only have ipad so i can't see all of it. But what i do see is very appealing to me, very much sth i gravitate towards as far as structural work goes. Bye now.

>> No.1773207

>>1773132
Can't really say anything until I know what you were try to do? Character designs? or something else??

>> No.1773246

>>1773207
yeah character design would be the easy answer but i think they are more like spontaneous embodiments of figures who look based in some "non real" world...

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heres another

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annd one last one

>> No.1773262

>>1773159
thanks! i appreciate your point on the tits and will definitely take it into consideration for future

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>>1773132
Interesting

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>>1773443
>this guy
Everytime.

>> No.1773471

>>1773132
I don't like it.

>> No.1773598

>>1773443
Ugh I really like the shit you draw, but the simple line art combined with slight single color watercolors is getting old really fast.

PLEASE try to evolve just a little bit while keeping the simplicity.

>> No.1773617

>>1773132
i'm guessing your a big matt brinkman fan, op?

i don't really care for the cluttered designs or poor gestural work and perspective use. that isn't to say you don't have potential to get better, i recommend doing some life drawing and applying what you learn to your personal drawings. also do thumbails to make the designs stronger.

>>1773443
please put on a trip so I can filter your awful posts.

>> No.1774151

>>1773443
/ic/ DOESNT LIKE YOU FAGGOT
FUCK OFF BACK TO TUMBLR

>> No.1774157

>>1774151
Speak for yourself, dipshit.

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>>1774151
>/ic/ is one person

He is a scholar, and a fine gentleman. His stuff reads well and his lines are as if they tell a story. If you can not appreciate flow and the fluidity of his gesture I am afraid that your success in art will be severely limited. Further more, fuck you sir.

>> No.1776161

I think they're neat, but the feet could use more detail or variation

>> No.1776249

>>1774158
If he want to show his work, then he should do it in draw thread or make tumblr/DA account;
there's no legit reason for him to be a filthy avatarfag.

>> No.1776250

>>1774151
Why don't you relax and get away from /ic/ for a bit? You seem to be taking this place very seriously as of late. Maybe watching a nice movie at the theatre will help you clear your mind again.

>> No.1776785

>>1773471
please try to explain why...
i am open to both negative and positive feedback

>> No.1776807

>>1774157
>>1774158
>>1776250
>taking obvious b8
lel

>>1776785
Not that anon, but I also don't like it.
Because of too many details (those white and black patterns all over the body) it looks more like flat doodle made in classroom rather than three dimensional shape. It's probably part of your style; in that case I simply don't like your style.
At least your silhouettes are quite clear.

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These are transdimensional jesters, I don't know if you know but that's what they are and I wanted to make sure you knew.

>> No.1776866

>>1776807
>Anonymous 07/12/14(Sat)00:15:23 No.17768
am that anon. just dont like it

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>>1773132
First thought was Nick Cave's soundsuits

>> No.1777184

>>1773132
Are you on drugs?

>> No.1777375

>>1776851
This man is correct.

>> No.1778038

>>1777123
Also, The Shrike from Hyperion.

>> No.1778438

>>1776851
>>1773132
Your gestures are fine. The problem a lot of people have is that they're confused by the detail. They have to look at these for more than a few seconds to understand it (everyone who will look at these probably will have that problem). It took me a while to figure out that we're looking at the back of this figure >>1773254

It would be nice to see these in color, either done by you or anyone else. And maybe they make a lot more sense in motion. You know how these "transdimensional jesters" are supposed to move, so keep in mind that you will be confusing a lot of stupid and smart people.