/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Trying to paint faces crit plz

>>1744191
Added
>digitalbrushes.tumblr.com/
To the OP replacing the CGhub link since CGhub is now dead (rip)

Some 4 value play

>>1744199
Get a friend to sit for you, actually go to a life drawing session somewhere in your city and paint from the model, a friend is too concerned with likeness to be any good for practice

>>1744207
>replacing the CGhub link
good, I appreciate it

>>1744208
np.

Have a mech

>>1744209
Might have gone overboard on the blacks on this one

Another study

>>1744209
>>1744214
cool!

>>1744227
steps if anyone is interested

>>1744230
very interested looks very nice man do you mind saying a few words in regards to your workflow? specifically how you went from the second to the third to the fourth panel and your brush settings

>>1744227
Neato! Do you have a tumblr?

>>1744233
Thank you. Here's another step-by-step from a previous study, where I used the same method. I don't know what to say about my brush settings, to be honest. I grabbed a bunch of brushes from Jaime, Brachna and Peleng and I rarely alter them: http://www.pandemoniumart.net/brushes/

>>1744235
thanks http://thorstendenk.tumblr.com/

>>1744240

hey man u living in berlin atm?

love ur style btw but i think you would benefit from trying to leave your comfort zone a bit more.

and i mean that both creatively and technically. grab that mixer brush and see what you can do with it, for instance.

>>1744246
Looks to me like he lives in phoenix

>>1744191
yeah!

>>1744253

how so? nigga's german

narp

>>1744272
>That zig-zaging ocean vanishing point

>>1744240
thanks i'll look into them

i am such a fucking retard for drawing flat shit my whole life. it was a waste of time.
now that i checked out hampton i realized that drawing 3 dimensionally isn't all that hard. it basically just comes down to simplifying everything into basic shapes and working with those basic shapes and fleshing them out to make natural looking drawings is easier than i expected.

>>1744240
hey nice stuff you seem brettygood so want to ask do you get regular work? does it get easier to get some when you reach a certain level?

I need some help here with the composition, how do I paint the foreground with the worm and all?

Help me fix this before I go any further

>>1743929

Welp.

Been working on this for the last few hours, wondering what the most eye glaring things are.

>>1744452
Gesture drawing and value masses

>>1744453
Figure drawing studies

>>1744199

>>1744255
Think I'm done. What you guys think of the brushwork?

haven't painted in a while, edges still elude me.

>>1744469
Whybl is she made out of d20s? I hate it.

>>1744471
Her right arm looks dislocated from the socket. One of the reasons It gives me that impression is because the clothes on the upper body seem to be skintight.

>>1744474
Ah, thanks.

>>1744469
>What you guys think of the brushwork?
Hate it. It doesn't describe any forms, it's inefficient, it's too uniform, doesn't guide the eye, etc.

Add diversity, simplify your shapes, and guide the eye where you want it to go.

>>1744471
>edges still elude me
Well for starters you want to introduce some variance to your edges. Incorporate the full spectrum from hard, firm, soft and lost edges. Learn where you should use what type of edge and why. Zero edge diversity is bad.

>>1744469
Do you have the whole ref, I need it, for reasons.

h-how's it looking so far?

WIP

>>1744713
guy's position looks kinda awkward. otherwise i dig it

Self portrait of me in australia riding a kangaroo. Took >200 hours to make so plz be gentle

I'm a beginner. Can I get any critique/advice? Specifically looking for help with making the head symmetrical and also values.

>>1744731
excellent

>>1744713
gestrue of the horse could have more energy. the legs are almost parallel. look up images of galopping horses

sketch of what I'm working on, a rework of some ultra shitty sketch I did back in 2008

>>1744754sketch of what I'm working on, a rework of some ultra shitty sketch I did back in 2008

>>1744756
where I'm at now

Does anyone have those penis tutorials?

>>1744793
Assuming that by penis tutorials you mean guides on how to draw them.

>>1744810

>>1744811
>>1744810
are you the same anon who posted them for me last time ? I'm not the one who asked for them this time but, thank you for that anyway.

>>1744822
Hm. It might have been me. No probs, either way.

>>1744246
Thanks. Rocks, mountains and landscapes in general are a big weakness of mine, actually

>>1744340

Thank you. I do get regular work although it's not very well paid. I'm still able to make a living but I'm trying to up my game so I can land some better gigs someday.

>does it get easier to get some when you reach a certain level?

I wouldn't say it gets easier. Ideally your standards will always be way above your skills and when that's the case you'll always feel like your work is subpar. Obviously some aspects you practice a lot will come easier to you at some point but at the same time any door you'll close will open up two more, if that makes sense. It's like Einstein said "The more I learn, the more I realize how much I don't know.” It's a never ending ride

I wanna try and get everything right before I move on. Basically it's villagers welcoming back a hero who has slain a monster.
Perspective, proportions, anatomy, what have I ballsed up?

>>1744940
everything, learn to draw primitives in perspective first

Can sobody post a reference picture suitable for someone who hasn't drawn anything in his life ever, please? Thanks.

>>1744994
read the sticky

>>1744998
What's a Sticky?

>>1744994
>suitable for someone who hasn't drawn anything in his life ever

Oh no you don't we're not sugar coating anything for you. Make mistakes, get over that fear and start drawing.

>>1745007
nice bait ;^)

>>1744757
Dont make dark values with black

selfportrait on the right side
I love shading atm, even though I still suck at it, I am much better than before

>>1745009
>that feel when you can't tell whether it's time to draw or touch yourself inappropriately.

Start of something

>>1745061
Trust me once you start to realize that it's nothing but mere forms and a problem of dimensions you will forget that is even a person rather a difficult problem to solve.

Tried something new that time.

I know something's wrong with this but I don't know what. I tried to draw like a snowy-icy biome from imagination. bls halp

>>1744733
stop using that smudge/blur tool or whatever you're using. you're pillow shading, and that's a bad habit to get into. learn when to use hard and soft edges.

started doodling for the first time in awhile

not doing this for any rhyme or reason just something to do, crippled so gotta do something with my unlimited time, right?

only able to use the computer for this shit but i like how its going so far

gonna check out some gesture drawing instead of finding poses and just trying to recreate them in this basic mannequin way

morning sketches

>>1745223
some of these are really stiff. instead of drawing these figures joint by joint, do it in one swift line, then if you want longer gesture studies, add on the lines for the hips and shoulders, and the torso. watch proko's videos on gesture, hes on youtube

I really want to draw (tradicional) but I don't feel comfortable with my work place. It's been two days since I drew. What to do.

I'm doing a cover for a group of gamers I hooked up with not too long ago. It's taken me a while as I've never drawn this many characters on a page before and I'm OCD on making sure they're all rendered the same way. I also need some advice on how to get a rough, textured look for the stone castle in the background.

>>1745237
awesome, thanks and yeah i get the stiffness

only started doing this yesterday so to me looking vaguely human-like is a miracle

>>1744453
>Few hours
Holy fuck, what? Try to learn more about figure drawing.

:3

>>1745252
manyu problems here mate, compositional ones.

no center of attention, many tangents, i bet you can feel it ourself

>>1745066

>>1745310
do rule34 porn in that style, post on hentai foundry and watch the money pour in

>>1745310
Link to tutorial pls

>>1745310
I think I'm in love
>tfw actual humans don't look like this

>>1745334
>tutorial
da fuck you talking about?

>>1745368
How you paint like this man?

an idea i had, still wip

>>1745402
I had an idea.

you should zoom out to draw the straight lines so theyre not as long.
or use sai line tool.

Work in Progress.

Trying to figure out a sense of depth. Need to find more reference images to figure out color balance vs. distance.

now I gotta color this gay bullshit

>>1745415
your lines are fucking fantastic

>>1745415
OR JUST NOT DRAW IT

>>1745414
Part of the reason the depth looks fucked up is because you're using a lot of the same size/similar brush strokes

Thoughts? Never really tried drawing faces until yesterday
bonus pic:
one of the shittier cars I drew earlier today

>>1745464

>>1745467
draw from life more bruh

>>1745467
>>1745464
Good god I just realized how bad of potatos mine are compared to all of yours

i lik gay prons. send me gay prone pls

>>1745470
draw from life? h'wat

>>1745368
That's gorgeous.

>>1745450
why not?
Do you think it looks bad anon

>>1745451

perfect. Thanks for the second set of eyes.

Yeah, I know, it's stupid video game fan art. Just trying to fatten up my portfolio.

>>1744277
I-i its not a bad thing is it?

'Trying' to do a still life

quick studies

>>1744191


http://youtu.be/p1NGC3S5sEU

>>1745578
Dude, come on. You're picture is like a 12 year old making some fanfic about how more powerful their guy is than everyone else. Just to many things in the picture for anyone to take seriously. And his hair is too high, like his hair raises 6 inches into the air.

Create a focal point and limit limit the amount of those floating heads on the canvas. If you can't, then make them next to invisible. Darken them, hide them, but make the focal point those three people, becuase as you have it now, it's just distracting and unnecessary.

Also, movement makes alot of influence. See your heads going AWAY from the picture, than TO or AROUND them. Remember, everything in the pic is that guy's bitch, so they should complement him at all times. So make that no matter what happens, the viewer's eye is moving from one point to the next due to the direction everything is going, so that the viewer themselves, are his bitch. That way, this one picture tells whoever your trying to prove that you can draw that you know like 5 techniques they could never master and you glorified that guy's personality

>>1745310
Really nice, dood.

>>1745368
Hey, Flight Rising.

>>1745310
You used the same reference twice? You must really like that pose...

>>1745876
I missed the first one, anyone got a link/copy? I'm curious.

with fineliner - wasn't lazy with the feet, I just have difficulties with composition - so I drew one of his foot on top

>>1745876
you... are kinda dumb aren't you?

>captcha: bonar anyone

>>1745876
The one with the light pink hair with a bright moon behind her? Nah, I don't find them similar.

Btw J, how long does a half body like this >>1745310 usually take you?

first time doing something like this in a long time

>>1745949
>.>

About 5 - 7 hours or so to fully render it. The ones I have uploaded are just cropped on the figure and don't show the whole painting though. A finished painting is closer to 40 hours or so.

>Hiding on the dark corners of the internet

>>1745952
<3

>>1745946
you... are kinda projecting, aren't you?

>>1745952
saved :)

>>1745952
Fever!!

>>1745238
make your workplace comfortable mate. I do the same thing, I can't draw if there's a mess or clutter so I usually just clean my room before I draw

bored in school..

Painting is alot harder than drawing... How do I into values?

also what level of stabalizer becomes a crutch in sai? 1-2 feel shitty but anything above 5 for me feels too assisted.

>>1746035
Why did you post this? Did you want a critique?

also
>>1746048

>>1746048
>Hivemind filename

>>1745954
Dang, thanks for sharing!

>dark corners
heh tbh i think ic is pretty chill

/thread
Okay here's my attempt at getting back to imagination stuff. Feedback/anything would be great.

>>1746050
yes

>>1746064
I love it. The little touches of purple are great.
But why is it called "lies"?

>>1746069
Thanks! It was a typo, the entire psd was actually for line practice. Couldn't be bothered to fix it.
Or you know, >artsy explanation of deeper meaning within the painting.

>>1746071
Where can I see more of your works?

What am I doing wrong? I know there is something off about his eyes but I can't quite make it out. There are many other things that do look really off though. What is it?
My rendering is also shit but can't do much with this peleng's sketch brush pack.

>>1746104
It is a light and brushstroke study more than anything. Didn't get too caught up with capturing likehood. I say this because it seems like I am asking about having hardships to capture the likelihood, my problem is primarily with light, brushstrokes and volume.

>>1746104
Your angles are off Your study has him facing more upwards and your jaw comes out way too far.

>>1746110
You're going to have frustrations trying to capture the light right if you cant get the forms down.

The way light behaves is dependent on the forms shape and the texture of its surface. Don't be afraid to tackle both.

>>1746121
Then should I start this master study by doing a decent and accurate pencil sketch of the subject?

>>1746133
It certainly wouldn't hurt.

Just enough to get the proportions and shape down as a strong base.

>>1746035
You should pay attention in class.
>underage b&

>>1746145
What is post secondary.

>>1744572
That bit helped but I still feel like I'm just slopping mud around. Pic related.

>pleb content I know

The drawing part always comes easier, then I get to rendering and it falls down.

Been trying to get better at anatomy, I used a reference for the legs but not the upper body.

Thoughts? Could someone redline it maybe?

>>1746161
what in the mother fuck are you doing nigger

>>1744191
Does this gesture make sense?

>>1746292
he has t-rex arms and it's stiff

Some lanky insect dude.

Thoughts before I go further with it?

>>1746297
Ok, thanks.
Will try to fix and if not able to, move on to some studies...

just for fun

>>1746326
Needs a top hat and monocle.
Maybe an insect mustache too.

>>1746333
a segmented kinda blown up bug eye style monocle.

>>1746333
hah. I'll look into it.

just a quick abstraction city thing. maybe someone wants to finish this? or lasso tool/flip it, play with it whatever :) could be fun.

Yea or Nay on wings? I like the idea but it feels like I'm ruining his silhouette.

>>1746344
And the fucking picture

>>1746344

Make his wings parallel to the carapace "caps".

>>1746349
As in sticking out in the same directions as the caps from his body? Gonna give that a shot but I like the idea of having them like a coat tail.

Fits his image!

Training a bit by trying to make turn around sketches.

Off topic question. Does anyone else get 'depression' moments int heir art journey. As you progress along, you get hit with depression and cannot stand your work, and anything you try to do is just awful, but after a day or two you are back to normal studying again?

>>1746374
YES. Sometimes I just have the feeling I'm drawing like shittier than shit, then the next day I'm hyped as fuck for my art for no reason.

everything is so hard
I suppose that's why I keep doing it

*to the day that everything isn't so hard*

Anybody taking requests? I'm wondering if anyone can draw a Regular Show esque drawing with a dude that's dressed as batman being held onto by a giant hand almost his size and another hand shoving a football size oval batman symbol up his ass while he's screaming in pain... I need it for school

>>1746345
Calling it a night. Pretty happy with it so far.

>>1745310
Give your site, ffs

>>1745310
>>1745952
What's your site?

>>1746329
this is great, good job

>>1746244
Anybody else?

I'm trying to draw a female figure and was working on this. How am I doing?

>>1746420

Hey look, the guy from the /v/ thread

A little sketch I'm hoping to be done with by tomorrow. I'll be lowering the saturation on those middleground hills to give the scene more depth

Can someone explain to me colors in shadows? I'm having a hard time mixing the color I see. I'm using a simple palette, yellow ochre, ultramarine, white, black. Also tips on drapery are appreciated, thanks!

Can someone explain to me colors in shadows? I'm having a hard time mixing the color I see. I'm using a simple palette, yellow ochre, ultramarine, white, black. Also tips on drapery are appreciated, thanks!

>>1746580
>Can someone explain to me colors in shadows?
Colors in shadow are determined by the local color of the object, the colors of ambient light sources, and a few other situation specific lighting effects. Remember that if you can see something, and it isn't pitch black, then it is an ambient light source, and as such affects the colors of nearby objects.

A good 'rule' that often works is that the shadows will have the opposite color temperature of the primary light source (warm lights cool shadows, cool lights warm shadows), but this is often an oversimplification as eluded to earlier.

I'd read Gurney's Color and Light. Check out his blog too, as a lot of the information in his book is scattered throughout the blog.

I'd also check out these two:
http://androidarts.com/art_tut.htm
(super basic, and briefly covers a lot of topics some of which are relevant)

http://www.huevaluechroma.com/
(super in depth and complex; you'll likely have to revisit this multiple times)

>>1746580
Why don't you have a red in your palette?

>>1746586
sweet, thanks!

>>1746589
I do, cad red light, I havent been using it in this painting though...care to share with me how I can/should incorporate it? I've always just mixed by guessing but I'm starting to realize I need to actually understand what the hell I'm trying to do...thanks!

>>1746593
I wouldn't know how to incorporate it without seeing the still life myself. Guessing what colors to mix is fine so long as you understand color theory, but if you're really concerned (and since you're working with such a small palette), you can just make a test. If you're using a warm and cool version of a color (cadmium yellow and lemon yellow for instance), you should be aware of how each shade will mix with other colors in your palette.

so... this got rejected on HF, and I hang my head in shame. Thoughts? It's for a /d/ quest I was running, thought I'd do a drawing of the two leading girls... Perhaps I should just change the pose so I can manage the two a bit better, and go from there?

>>1746599
is there a chart or anything for telling what temperature certain colors are? Sorry if that's a dumb question, thanks again for the replies!

two hour pose

>>1746603
Check with whoever manufactures your paint. Otherwise it should just be obvious, refer to a color wheel to see which way it leans.

>>1746603

Colors don't work in absolutes, perception of color is affected by surrounding colors and will look different under different contexts. For example if you used a grey in a painting that has a lot of reds/oranges/yellows that grey will look cool by comparison but given a cool atmosphere that same grey value will appear warm by comparison even though its exactly the same. Pic related.

Not mine, but wanted to share; since its very good.

>>1746646
Looks like it was drawn from the scene in the show or manga or whatever,

>>1746646
Is this come kinda b8 m8?

Behind a bronze helmet
Man cannot conceal
when steel touches flesh
He will squeal.

>>1746420
nice

Working on a character portrait for a tabletop game

>>1746669
refrigerator

I haven't taken any lessons and I draw as a hobby, so any tips are appreciated.

>>1746785
read the sticky

>>1746611
>>1746617
thanks guys

>>1745530
>>1745415
Your dragons butthole is way too low.

>>1746787
will do. in the meantime, do you have any feedback on the work I posted?

>>1746793
There's hardly anything to say that isn't obvious.
It's very stylized so it's quite hard to give decent critique other than "it looks like a titan from SNK".

Proportions are very off (could be intentional, partly is, but there's glaring errors), most obvious being too wide mouth, cheekbones not going round the face and low eyes.
I see you wanted to make brow low and depressed expression, but you just lifted eyes too high to get the effect. That's why nose looks so long, and ears looks to be too low. And cranium looks like helmet due it being too wide and those cheekbones not going around the face. Also those eyes are too close to each others.

Lightining is inconsistent, actually there's no shadows at all, everything is just there to indicate form. This makes it flat.

And lastly, the head is quite wonky. There's no construction, so the jaw is uneven (and can't really tell where it starts, looks like there are two jaws inside each others). Cheek bones and nose are also uneven.

I could go on, more about anatomy, or composition, or hatching, but you get the point. You seemed to have fun with it, but it seems very limited. It's like you draw only what you can.

So I think you should pick Loomis fun with pencil, and start those head constructions (they're fun!). After that, see where you want to move with your learning about fundamentals (sticky), but learn that construction first.

TLDR; Read the sticky

>>1746812
alright, got it. thanks for taking the time to type all this down, and I'll definitely take a look at what you suggested.

>>1746420

Drew him as a kid

>>1746826
cute as hell

>>1746826
I love it

>>1746826
You always seem to work with only one lightsource but you're forgetting about the other lightsources that can exist even with just one lightsource: The surroundings, reflected light, ambient light etc.

Cole from InFamous wip.

>>1746898
You're already beginning to render and detail even though you haven't even finished to construct the whole figure.
1. Do a rough sketch of the figure
2. Sketch in everything else
3. Draw with confident lines on top of the sketch
4. Render

>>1746900
Whoops I already did steps 1 and 2 I just hid the layers.

>>1746340
Ill use it!

Doodle of today

>>1746900
>tfw working traditionally
>tfw construncting your drawing
>tfw you have to erase part of the construnction while applying the render
>tfw i cant get myself to erase the construnction and just try to remember it so i can skip the construnction and go straight to the render phase when i am drawing(using as little construnction as possible

What do you think, /ic?

Trying to do a study with a migraine and a runny nose, and exhausted.

>>1746997
does a favor and never post again

>>1747003
Do explain.

Very Creepy! Cool work, anon.

>>1747015
Don't mind him, he's just being a little faggot.
They pop up now and then. It's best to ignore them.

>>1746997
You forgot something.

Started master-study first time
whhaaaaaat doooees theese cooloors even meeean?

>>1747132

This is the point where most beginners are like FUCK IT IM DONE THIS IS STUPID AS FUCK but really you've like blocked the values in and that's it. You need to start pushing values and working in more detail and basically finish the other 75% of the work that goes into a master painting like that

It takes time and discipline man.

>>1747132
stop using the eyedropper tool

>>1747153
He should not work on details as long as his layed in colors, values and structures are off like this.

>>1747153
>most beginners are like FUCK IT IM DONE THIS IS STUPID AS FUCK but really you've like blocked the values in and that's it.
No no that's not like that. I just started and redraw the colors like 4-5 times which is quite depressing. I definitely going to finish it.
>>1747157
I don't even know what is it.

>>1747132
Your problem is that you're trying to figure out how light, form and materials work from a painter, who already had such an understanding of these things at the time this painting was made, that he began to warp and bend them for effect.
First learn how light works physically by reading about it and by doing tons life studies and then learn how masters controlled and bended those aspects of light.

http://androidarts.com/art_tut.htm
http://www.huevaluechroma.com/

>>1747178
Well I should finish it anyway.

>>1745310
Wakkawa?

Derpin

>>1747207

>>1747208

>>1747209

>>1746607
>>1746329
>>1745883
Nice!

working on this

>>1747241

really short ribcage and like no top chest at all

some pre-sketches for something bigger I'm working on

>>1744453
figure drawing yeah, work on your color choices as well and try to think about the type of mood you want to set with this piece. I assume you're trying to get some sort of sexual and alluring mood, so I would suggest more emphasis on the red. Cut out some of the background as well, crop it so she's more of the focal point, or at least try and find a way to put more attention on her by maybe tweaking with the colors and values around her.
try and mess with contrast as well, use harsher lighting and darker shadows. mess with it

>>1747241
I'm not sure what it is about the legs that feel awkward. I don't think I'm a huge fan of your style, it feels a little weird an uncanny. Her head feels unnatural

>>1746600
stop drawing

figuring out that construction works!

>>1744469
how am I doing now?

>>1747295
You seem to be on the right path, keep going

>>1747297
Colours look very artifical and there's some issues with the head (eyes too big and weird neck)
Solution: more painting from life and more Loomis

>>1747274
you're right. I took a step back and saw that the pose wasn't working, I went way too far ahead with that piece and it ended up being a polished turd.

seeing what I can do with traditional
first ink paint
maybe ill stick to the photoshoop....

I'm trying make an accurate drawing of velasquez's Rokeby Venus.
Anybody have tips on how to achieve a good proportional drawing on the first try, how does this process works for you guys ?

Old, but I haven't progressed at all so it's okay (ha).

My short term goal is to get nice gesture and nicer lines. Bagboss' work is very inspiring to me.

my first time drawing in a long time, i tried an anatomy drawing, and a quick sketch of a girl in a sundress, comments/critiques welcome and apreciated

first self portrait in months, ugh

engineering school has not been kind to my improvement. maybe ill fix it up tomorrow if im not too busy studying

>>1747531
>>1747531
the sundress

>>1747351
alright, round two. rough poses

>>1747538

For some reason the left one reads more like a malee than the one on the rigbt but if it is thdn his ass is too round.

>>1747547
left girl I'm trying to draw as more of a tomboy/reverse trap/ androgynous body type.

>>1747532
wut, are you a woman or a man ?

>>1747547
I just realized what it might be, her shoulders are broader than her hips now that I look at it.

>>1747531
Try not to study and draw such front-on poses anon, to draw people you need to start thinking in 3d (if that makes sense), and its hard to see the depth in a pose like that.

Also don't use an unnecessary amount of lines, keep it clean.

I'm also noticing you hide hands in both your posts. Stop that, its painfully obvious to everyone else and no matter what you do there'll come a time where you'll have to draw a hand, so you better get started now.

I'd recommend you read Hampton's Figure Drawing- Design and Invention. Goodluck m8

One of my ocs donut steel. still a work in progress obviously

>>1747594
>Shoe with dog attachment

>>1747598

Hahaha, yeah, I noticed that, I definitely need to clear that up. Thanks, your comment made me chuckle.

>>1747533
what's with her arms? Are they connected behind her back?

Oil pastel

>>1747677
well im grateful somebody else here is as bad as me.
I had some of them as a kid, they were horrible.

>>1747694
Oil pastels are great man, and thanks for insulting me so harshly, it is somewhat stylized

>>1744191
my hand.
What am I doing right/wrong?

>>1747677
nice dude

>>1747677
>Obviously the photography is, but do you think its art when someone takes a photo, copies it 1:1 or paints over it and claims its his work?
Might want to check out the "the rules of third"

>>1747709
looks good; thumb is wrong

"Man is a tricky fish to catch."

>>1747713
Thanks, I appreciate it
>>1747715
I'll keep that in mind, this is somewhat stylized however (not making an excuse, it's what I was going for)

>>1747736
if you're bagboss, i'm a huge fan of your stuff.

did this a couple of days ago.

>>1747751
lovely

ed boi

>>1747736
Question, do you ever take these things to a finish? I mean they're drawings but I assume they're studies for a bigger piece or a sketch for something else. I could just be ignorant to what you're trying to achieve but I am curious if these go any further.

>>1747751
"It's a view only a handful have seen so I feel guilty when I say I'm bored of it."

>>1747768
When I was younger I would do "finished" pieces; I don't know what happened to that person though.

>>1747769
I was actually trying to imitate your style to some extent when I did that piece. Had a lot of fun with it, too.

Where do you find the inspiration for your quotes?

>>1747715
not disagreeing with you but goddamn that bitch is ugly

>>1747774
hint: one of bagbosse's influences is moebius

>>1747771
So if you don't mind me asking, what's your intention with these?

>>1747774
I'm surprised people actually ask about the quotes. I just think of them during or after I finish drawing. Each quote comes from something I was thinking of specifically at the time so you'd have to ask about them individually.

>>1747778
Every one loves moebius but personally I vibe more with Gipi and Hugo pratt. I'm a big fan of "crude" lines.

>>1747780
I go to a vocational school for network support services; I draw just to keep myself from pulling my hair.

>>1747532
qt

>>1747784
Oh so it's a hobby then?
Not that that's a bad thing I just figured you had a commercial purpose in mind because I personally like these drawings I just don't know the application of them in a market.

>>1747784
I could honestly see these in a small gallery

>>1747786
Being a commercial artists sounds more fun than a nine to five. Money is a thing though and I feel silly when I say I enjoy living a "comfortable" life so what ever pays the bills.

It's not out of my mind completely though. If I never drew a comic at the end of my life I'd regret it immensely.

>>1747784
I can't think of a quote now, but when one comes up that really intrigues me, I'll shoot a message your way on tumblr or something about it.

>>1747791
are you planning to draw a comic commercially, or for personal reasons? I've been meaning to as well but all my projects crash after a few days or weeks after conception. I just get bored of it.

>>1747791
Yeah I think I've come to realize I really don't require much but for people who need that kind of thing I can see the security in it. Anyway, once again I like your stuff dude and I'll probably shoot you a message on tumblr or something later because I have a few questions if you don't mind me wasting your time ha ha

>>1747550
im a very rusty at drawing man

wip

just finish this ladies

>>1747951
Not too sure about the face, but the foliage looks good.

Anyone's opinion on this and how I could improve myself?

>>1746161
scrapped the first and started over.

>>1746161
Looks like you got lazy.

Amiryht?

>>1747972
I do't like to be that dude but those girls are ugly as shit.

>>1747975
Lazy? It's just an under drawing.

>>1747978
Ok

>>1747963
One of them has no neck and is holding her head with her hands. If that's intended...
Otherwise very nice. And sexist.

>>1747982
indeed is intentional, thanks.

>>1747972
They look like midgets, is that your intentions?

>>1747987
Nah. The request was two chicks from a cartoon, I tend to draw the heads larger. Is that throwing the proportions off?

>>1747963
this is your inspiration right?

>>1747994
not really but I like the geometry in the anatomy of las señoritas de avignon.

Here´s another one.

>>1746329
niiice

>>1747963
saved, awesome drawing

>>1747970
cool, the design of the animal is a bit weak and you could do so much more with the clouds, same goes for the mountains and the buildings.


i know the second panel is awful but whatever

>>1748003
forgot to post my image

>>1745415
fan fucking tastic

>>1745415
What a disgusting waste of talent, eh, whatever floats your boat I guess.

>>1747970
The dude's posture is weird, his legs are facing a different direction from his torso and his torso isn't naturally twisting with it. Try put his torso on the same 3/4 angle. Same for his head. it would add dimension and make him look more interesting.

>>1747968
I thought it was the opposite. Cheers!

Hello drawbros.

Rate my sketch.

>>1748015
I like.

>>1745728
Dear god, this.

>>1748029
The hands are cool, the overall 'sketch' seems pretty dirty and overly detailed.

>>1748003
thanks, yeah I guess I could have put more effort in the thinking of this. I didn't even plan the appearance of the beast, I drew it as it went
>>1748019
I don't know, I kinda wanted him to stand like this so his body looks sloppy and odd because he's manipulated by the eye in his chest or whatever
but you're right, some more dimension would be an improvment

and some dwarves

Something from imagination.
Tell me why its so bad

>>1747963
No estoy de acuerdo con las descripciones de la esquina para que una mujer sea hermosa y perfecta,

creo que lo hermoso en el cuerpo humano es la gran cantidad de variaciones que existen en la gran diversidad de personas que hemos existido sobre la tierra.

en terminos artisticos, me suena mas interesante que se retrate/dibuje/loquesea a una mujer con gran variedad de caracteristicas que lo descrito en la esquina

>just sayin

>>1747972
Started paint, went a lot better than last time, though that's not saying much.

What should I do with the mouth of the horse? Keep it all skeleton or rotting flesh?

>>1748069
Lo que me gusta es que el escrito esta construida como una receta de cocina. La cita en cuestión data del renacimiento.

>>1746430
>>1747214
>>1748003
thanks!

>>1748007
>bullet still in its shell after being fired
>mfw

>>1748082
utilizar Inglés aquí, o no vienen aquí

>>1748100
A+

>>1748046
something tells me you did't even try anon

>>1745310
fix your face knowledge.

>>1748082

eres una maldita perra de mierda, voy a apuñalarte y a jugar con tu sangre.

o

>>1748123
no u

>>1748112
Thanks for the paintover
I spent a couple of hours on it but im just too good at being shit.

>>1748181
>chest of a 12yr old boy
apart from that, very sexy

>>1748200
>delicious bite size boobies on a petite body

whats wrong withhhhh that

>>1748181
too good for /ic/

>>1748200
>not liking the dfc

New thread is up!

>>1748430

>>1748430

>>1748199
dont worry its a matter of realization that turns the motor

>>1747951
That's lovely. Nice job on the foliage like the other anon said but I think the big thing is to push the story a bit. If she's an android, why's she there? Is the foliage eroding the android side of her? Can you make her silhouette identify her a bit more as an android? Also, the leg thing at the bottom isn't really working.

>>1746639
Face looking awesome, hands/arms look awkward and stiff.

>>1747951
Stunning! Are a professional?

somehow i don't feel i belong here...

Anywho just fucking around in my sketchbook, I know most of my proportion is wrong, but I'm too tired right now.