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1666143 No.1666143 [Reply] [Original]

hello, there's no place to put abstracts so i'll put it here.


i've been playing with lots of visual noise, sort of hints of organisation so people can find their own way through the picture.

it has quite a lot of influence from all the printmaking i've been doing recently. particularly monoprints.

i've also been using greens because i don't usually like them. and as a bit of a shout-out to rousseau.

i made it square to help suggest a bigger space.

i still need to work back into it and sharpen up various things, that's why it looks right in the thumb but a bit blurry full size, i decided to include the full size one because you can always step back from your computer to get a bigger but sharper version, and you might have suggestions as to what i should sharpen what i should leave etc.

i'm probably not going to develop this into an actual painting.

ty, crits pls.

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1666208

>>1666143
>crit
>abstract
I don't know what to tell you OP

>> No.1666214

>>1666208
ok well..thanks for the bump i guess.

>> No.1666228
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1666228

I don't know much about abstract art. But i think i could be more visually pleasing if you played around with the value more. Right know the eyes kind of get tired right away because there is no place to rest in the image.

But again, i don't really know much about art that is not figuratif.

>> No.1666233

>>1666228
interesting. as i said i really wanted there to be lots of paths the viewer can follow through the image, following colour groups or implied lines or whatever but i think what you've done makes the image a little fatter which i think really works pretty well. ty.

>> No.1666238

>>1666208
I think you can critique abstract art, only you'd have have to be more experienced with abstract art yourself.