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Heyy what do you guys think about this? My first work on deviantart made with ms paint :D

http://maiikko.deviantart.com/art/Elsa-423075183

>> No.1619568

>>1619566
Study more Sacred geometry, I suggest looking into cymatics and referencing that as you will be studying from nature.

>> No.1619569

>>1619568
>http://maiikko.deviantart.com/art/Elsa-423075183

Oh, wait I thought you drew that star why the fuck didn't you just fucking post your drawing here? Fuck sakes.

>> No.1619571

>>1619568
I will do that, thanks :D

>>1619569
sorry xD

>> No.1619573

where the fuck is the draw thread

>> No.1619574

>>1619573
http://maiikko.deviantart.com/art/Elsa-423075183
you mean this?

>> No.1619585

>>1619569
He wants views to get his deviantart dick bigger so ofcours he will link to
it.

>> No.1619588

>>1619585
oh no, im pretty new here so.. my bad

>> No.1619591

any helpful criticism would be useful, thanks

>> No.1619594

>>1619566
Nice work considering its done in paint but you cant get far with paint you need photoshop or something like that

>> No.1619596

>>1619585
>He wants views to get his deviantart dick bigger so ofcours he will link to it.

This sort of mentality is cancerous, I admit I have the same urge to do that I mean sure OP may be proud of it and sure it may be the first drawing which makes OP feel special but we really need to know our place and the same goes for me as well.

>>1619591
Listen you. Deviant Art is great for sharing drawings and all but if you want honest critiques you participate here; try not to go around and posting your webpage. Becareful of the hugbox mindset from Deviant Art.

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>>1619596
Absolutely, those fuckers can't say anything REMOTELY constructive, everyone sucks eachother's dick. If DA is the first and only site you post your art on, you're fucking doomed.
Just look at what those fags did to pic related.

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>>1619623
Gets me every fucking time. And then I can't help but feel bad for the guy but man oh man. Thank you based Loomis, thank you /ic/.

>> No.1619686

>>1619623
lawl

>> No.1619695

>>1619566
This shit isnt art you fagget!

>> No.1619703

>>1619623
>>1619596
>>1619636
While I agree that you should not go to DA for crits/improvement or anything serious, I would suggest you keep posting work there--sometimes it's nice to just have plebs suck your dick after getting hammered by /ic/.

>> No.1619705

>>1619703
/ic/ sucks my dick better than DA...

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OP read the sticky and download the Vilppu Drawing Manual and the Preston Blair Animation book.

I'll dump some of Glen Keane's notes to help you out (he didn't do the designs for Frozen but they're pretty much in his style).

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>> No.1619741

>>1619715
Wrong thread?

>> No.1619746

>>1619623

How did actually manage to get worse

>> No.1619764

>>1619746
The DA cancer spread..

>> No.1619773

>>1619623
i really wanna find out who this is

>> No.1619774

>>1619773
http://gaiash.deviantart.com/
just found it if anyone wants to see

>> No.1619780

>>1619773

http://gaiash.deviantart.com/


It took me, like, what? 10 second, 11, tops.

>> No.1619782

>>1619780

But getting the quote right took me longer...

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>>1619774
>>1619780
Its been almost 10 years now.

>> No.1619796

>>1619787
All we can hope for is that he is enjoying what he's doing, because there is no progress. At all.

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>>1619623
I don't know what you are talking about, he improved tremendously in the last 3 years.

>> No.1619805

>>1619802
Wow, I didn't see that one.. That's really good!

>> No.1619808

>>1619623
How about we help this guy by spamming his shitty drawings with constructive criticism?
>Loomis motherfucker do you know it

>> No.1619809

>>1619808
>lets raid someone
filthy /b/astard

>> No.1619812

>>1619808
>http://gaiash.deviantart.com

You first. Just be wary of his MUH STYLE attitude as you can see on the comments section:
Anon:
>Please...stop
Mathew:
>Stop what? I can't stop without knowing what it is I'm meant to stop and why.
Anon:
>I presume drawing ,which almost anyone could infer, and I'm inclined to agree.
Mathew:
>Not a fan of my art? Or what I draw?
>:3
>Ponies everywhere


I want to get off. I want off this wild ride. I want off.

>> No.1619815

>>1619808
This guy obviously doesn't want to improve, or he doesn't want to try.
You would think that if he wanted to improve he would either improve or
given up on the course of 10 years. Some comments on his profile are hilarious.

>please ... stop.
>Stop what? I can't stop without knowing what it is I'm meant to stop and why.
>I presume drawing ,which almost anyone could infer, and I'm inclined to agree.
>Not a fan of my art? Or what I draw?

>> No.1619819

>>1619703
I laughed way to fucking hard at this, my head hurts now from laughing so hard. Still laughing because its true and I am found guilty of thinking like this. I am so glad I am not the only one.

>>1619705
Fuck my sides can't take much more!

>> No.1619820

>>1619812
>>1619815
his utub
https://www.youtube.com/user/GaiashKetoji

>> No.1619822

>>1619819
Happy I could be of service! :)

>> No.1619833

>>1619820
This guy...THIS FUCKING GUY. He is the pinnacle of an autistic man child.

>> No.1619832

>>1619820
Hundreds of videos with 10-20 views, hundreds of drawings no one
cares about. Just what keeps those people going?

>> No.1619851

>>1619802
>>1619820
>autist
>brony
>sucks at everything
I see a connection...

>> No.1619854

>>1619820

And he's a britbong

>> No.1619856

>>1619623
Now I'm starting to feel dangerously good about myself.

I need to post some new shit in the sketchbook thread to get anally rekt, that should keep me on track to improvement.

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>>1619854

>> No.1619862

>>1619808
>>1619812
Samefag of first post here.
I just put up something on his page... hopefully it's going to motivate him. Or not, he's autistic, he'll mostry bitch to his internet friends. Oh well.

>> No.1619878

>>1619862
Yeah, I would love to show him how much I improved because of /ic/ but it's none of my business to do so, he never asked for help (I think) ...though it's obvious he is the embodiment of a cry for help.

>> No.1619890

>>1619741
Naw, I'm just showing OP how this style is done.

And you can't go wrong with Vilppu.

>> No.1620002

>>1619715
Thanks a lot!! I just download those and they look very helpful. I'm now downloading the 16 DVDs of Vilppu Language of Drawing

>> No.1620234

>>1620002
From where?

>> No.1620242

>>1620234
t-torrents?..

>> No.1620248

pirate a better software OP alongside your vilppu download or just use pencil and paper for starting.

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1620521

>>1619623

True words.

So many artists I used to follow around 10 years ago have barley progressed at all in that time at DA. It also seems to fuck with peoples attitudes too.

Pic very related

>> No.1620554

>>1620521
DA is simply a site to share your artwork, every artist is individually responsible for his own improvement, the fucking site he posts his work on has shit all to do with that. The reason DA is flooded with so many shit tier artists is simply because it is the most popular art site on the internet and it's the first place every 12 year old Naruto fangirl will go to to share their art.

>>1619623
No one "did" anything to that guy. He's simply too autistic and / or stupid to be able to judge his own work critically, which is a skill any artist MUST have if he ever wants to improve. You can get as much great, constructive crits as you want, if you cannot or don't want to see your own flaws, you will never improve.

>> No.1620595

>>1620554

While I do agree with some of what you said, I wouldn't say its as simple as just a site to dump your work. Its the community and the hugbox culture that is so rampant there, and Id say you would have to be in total denial to say it had absolutely zero effect on people.

The culture of constant praise, defense of "muh style" and "all critics are haters" mantra that saturates that site is kind of like how parents who spoil their kids rotten and are in such shock when they become self-centered brats and go "I gave my kid everything they wanted, where did I go wrong?!". Out of all the communities ive been, DA is one of the most screwed up Ive ever seen and it does not help that their moderation staff is inconsistent, lazy and suffers from favoritism.

>> No.1620607

>>1620521

Shit that was depressing to read.

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>>1620521
Jesus Christ.

I think that guy also does shit for TGWTG.

>> No.1620713

>>1620521
Mein Gott.

I'm thinking of embarking upon a grand quest of discovering some other shitters like that. Getting to all of them would probably take a lifetime.

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>>1620595
Talking about the community... What the fuck happened to the weaboo girls? When I first saw them they were into yaoi pairings of shounen animus... now they are into Adventure Time yuri DA Fuck1!