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this is a repost simply because so much work needed to be done on it that it became a totally different painting. I deleted the last post and not i am posting this,.

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>>1531711

>> No.1531715

>>1531714
lol

>> No.1531725

These threads never fail to make me feel better about my own art.

>> No.1531727

>>1531725
post your art in this thread then. you are good.

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>>1531727

>> No.1531733

>>1531730
post an oil painting dummy.

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>>1531733

>> No.1531736

>>1531734
its decent. The first one is horrible

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>>1531736
I'd be interested in your critique of the first. I'm always willing to accept feedback from artists as talented as yourself.

>> No.1531741

>>1531739
the last one sucks too.

>> No.1531745

>>1531739
All your compositions are weak. Especially the first one and the last one. For pixel art its conceptually weak and the subject matter is trite. The colors blow chunks.

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>>1531741
I'm not interested in your approval. Did you have a critique?

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>>1531745
Saying 'composition is bad' or 'colors are bad' is not a critique. A critique would be explaining HOW the composition or colors are bad, and what changes could be made to improve them. Anyone can make blanket statements.

>> No.1531755

>>1531745
>>1531745
Here's an example:

This piece "blows chunks"
>>1531711
The composition is bad because it is off balance, with too much weight on the right and nothing on the left to balance it. It's conceptually weak because it's just a head-on portrait of a female with no interesting narrative. The very definition of trite subject matter. The colors blow chunks because the burnt sienna in the shadow is too saturated and steals attention from the figure, whose skin tones lack interesting variety. Additionally the anatomy of the hands is naive, they seem to be made out of rubber. you're suffering from wig-syndome again as well.

>> No.1531757

>>1531744
i like the narrative to this;)

>> No.1531760

illastrat, do us all a favor and kill yourself

>> No.1531778

>>1531711
illastrat, no one gives a shit

since you're refusing to even improve, just stop posting your shit

>> No.1531783

>>1531778
how can somebody refuse to improve? You act like niggaz get better over night. i already know i am getting better.

>> No.1531784

This thread is so autistic

all the work in this thread sucks

>> No.1531786

>>1531784
it does suck. thats whats funny. tanner is fighting shit art with shit art. its hilarious

>> No.1531789

>>1531783
improving by using shit colors and making shit paintings? if by improving you mean that, then good job illastrat

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>>1531789
every painting i make is not gonna be stellar.

<---this...is stellar and NEW

>> No.1531793

Stop doing eyes like that please

>> No.1531797

>>1531784
post your art in this thread then. you are good.

>> No.1531799

>>1531791
wha...wha...wha...what? I guess that painting is not an improvement. I cant hear ya/ll. WHAT?

>> No.1531800

>>1531791

I don't know Illastrat, everything else is shit but, i like how the pink contrasts agaisnt the green
but seriously, use a smaller brush

>> No.1531802

>>1531791
>background is a watermelon
nigger level over 9000

>> No.1531801

>>1531797
doesn't mean illastrat is good

>> No.1531805 [DELETED] 

>>1531801
does mean i am good....but you aren't and will never be better. unless you post your art.

>> No.1531824

>>1531805
Illastrat if you are not here for a critique, or will not take a critique, leave.

>> No.1531825

>>1531805
you're a faggot...

>> No.1531876

illastrat you are phenomenal and prolific. keep making.

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>> No.1531943

I swear you are a GCSE student. Most people tend to get past their shit portrait phase by the time they are 17

>> No.1531953

>>1531711
i am GOD

>> No.1531982

>>1531953
cunt dipshit or troll aka illastrat

>> No.1532014

>>1531711
please stop animu'ing everyone's eyes.

Also what is your obsession with generic celebrity women's glamour shots?

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Every time you see an illastrat thread on the front page don't reply in rage, just take a deep breath and if you have to reply don't forget to "sage".

>> No.1532067 [DELETED] 

>>1532063
Faggot

>> No.1532132

532014
Dat jus muah style

>> No.1532718

supa bump