/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

that neck man.

>>1441510
what should i do with it? shorter, slimmer ,wider?

bump

>>1441514
look at some refs

>>1441570
that doesnt change my perspective, i try to style my work a bit, and measure by people's reaction if its aesthetic or not.

>>1441570
What about the way its colored btw?
I only had a week practice with it, so i pretty new to coloring, and am wondering how it looks to others.

>>1441573
MUH STYLE

>>1441573
just learn anatomy so you won't have to guess what a neck looks like and then ask people if it looks like a neck

>>1441588
Is the the area below her chin, or the are around her collar bones?
And is only the neck wrong, or is there more?

And what about the colors?

>>1441590
I meant to ask, is the area around her chin wrong, or the area around her collar bone?

>>1441588
And when you say, learn anatomy, you make it sound like the entire picture is wrong, or did you mean i should learn the anatomy of the neck only?

>>1441593
Both, to be honest.

Here, this should help in the neck area:
http://melissadalton.deviantart.com/art/Neck-Reference-Updated-126765591

But yes, you should learn anatomy all over. You're mimicking it, you have a sort of comic book look going on right now, but frankly it's obvious you don't really understand how the bones and muscles work.
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You have a good start. I like the values in the costume, but you could do so much better. Keep working, keep studying. You have nothing to lose and everything to gain.

I get what you were going for, but that looks like one massively untrimmed bush, man.

She has an extra boob.

First thing to FIX.

>>1441776
>She has an extra boob.
I think that was on purpose.

Just the thought of someone accidentally drawing 3 boobs is hilarious, though.