/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Working on Metroid Fusion fanart.

>>2421323
The flesh folds and lighting look really good. The folded cloth looks like it could use some work. It looks like a solid object and could be a little softer. I assume you didn't care to put effort into it though.

>>2421447
Keep it up.

>>2421469
Maybe clean up your drawings before posting. Erase sketch lines.

>>2421491
Work softer pencil lines please.

>>2421501
The grass is greener on the bottom side, for one. Also what that other guy said.

>>2421528
This is really cool.

>>2421581
There are many errors here, there are two very glaring mistakes here. The right guy has no heel on his standing foot and his head look like a deformed potato. Use reference or try constructing the body.

>>2421589
Keep up the good work.

>>2421619
Very nice.

>>2421676
Would pet.

>>2421683
Would not pet.

>>2421692
Fork brush addict here, cool stuff. Just needs more rendering.

>>2421722
Nice improvement.

>>2421753
Cool style.

>>2421876
Your character lacks darker shadows. The bottom of the neck looks really wierd. Otherwise cool stuff, not much to comment on.

>>2421878
Cute. Is it a burdglar?

>>2421880
Character design is neat, she just needs depth. Add some shadow/lightning.

>>2421881
Sweet. The eyes look good. I'd probably swap the hatching for solid coloring if were you.