/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4322689
the metal rods look like slanted tree trunks- i assume you wanted them to look like rusted H beams? there's also no indication that this is the interior of anything, it looks like a still shot of a forest with moss and ferns (and the focus on the centipede doesn't help). you should work on making small sketches of the scene you want to show from different angles until you find something you like and that is readable before committing to painting in color. look up pictures of the interior of rusted vehicles like planes, trains, trucks, etc to get a better idea of how you would frame the setting of your picture