/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2882896
>>2882886
When I posted some of my earlier pictures elsewhere, I was told that shoulders should be (kek) more sloped. Guess I overdid it. The pose may be hard to remain in for some time, but is certainly doable and conveys a certain motion.

>> with a leg bigger than the other
http://nsio.deviantart.com/art/Nsio-explains-Foreshortening-427366531
Do you wonder why the girl's palm is as big as her head?

>>2882911
Why, hello there, comrade.

>>2882918
Now, now, I don't see any bitching here. Bitching, in my opinion, is more like
> Fack off, you can't critiqize me! My picture haves no flaw! I'm da best drawer in za warudo!
>> Draws a shitty character with communist hat
>>> You are a faggot and you draw shit, I'm not gonna explain my opinion and point out precisely why I think so.

>>2882923
Even before your post, I drew her a skeleton as I see it. The supporting leg, as you might guess, is the one that has its toes pressed against an invisible ground (and the horizon should be somewhere around her ass, I guess?). It's strange that you say that her pelvis is sloped to the same side as her shoulders. Probably I should've given the right hip a lot more definition.

By the way, the horizontal angle between her legs should be about sixty degrees, and the left leg is slightly stretched towards the viewer.