/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2281252
These are pretty nice. I think though that they are rather stiff and lifeless at the moment.

Basically I feel that you are relying too much on 2d observation and a mechanical breakdown into straight lines. While you can still do this approach you should also in my opinion be thinking of hte volumes and the gesture and flow of the poses at the same time.

I did some drawovers to hopefully show this. Mostly they are rather minor changes, but those minor things are important. There are a few small proportion errors in your drawings and some things that need to be downplayed or simplified more, while others need more emphasis. Sorry that the linework and hatching is so sloppy, I never got the hang of digital for drawing. Hope it helps!