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experimenting w/ textures and colors, i think it turned out alright, but a little messy and aimless

experimenting w/ textures and colors, i think it turned out alright, but a little messy and aimless
>>6499800
cleaner, less shaky lines and bolder shading would go a long way and the colors are kinda bland, too. if you don't wanna learn rendering then use more dark colors and lines to add detail
same thing applies to the face, unironically take a look at something like JJBA's closeup panels and look at how much volume you can add to a face using just hatching. ofc you actually have to know the face's planes and all that before doing that otherwise it'll look off