/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3347741
>>3350041
It is hard to distinguish the forms (waist vs hair, hair vs face, etc.). Remember than when using pencil it is no shamefur dispray to make lines stand out by drawing over them repeatedly as long as you're accurate. That is really one of the medium's advantages. You could also try drawing larger to begin with.

>>3350978
>>3351262
If you want to do a construction group, may I suggest starting with the head, eyes and hair, since these are sticking points of the style and almost everything else is exchangeable for one of the popular figure drawing books. In particular, getting the eyes to look right at the largest sizes is a nightmare.