/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3371275
Eh, the skin fold (idk how to call it) in her armpit is kinda weird in that it should be created by latisimus dorsi. Or rather the interaction of the forms between lats and pecs. Besides, when you raise your hand high like that it causes the shoulder blade to move aside to increase the range of motion which also leads to muscles on the shoulder blades protrude more and somewhat overshadow the lats being in a slightly superior position. There shouldn't be anything there that would create such a depression or whatever. Well, maybe the mishmash of deltoids heads might but they are higher. The back\shoulder muscles kinda obscure the pecs for the most part, there might be a slight portion of it visible, like the part where it attaches to the shoulder bone going under deltoid, but that's about it. Maybe ribs showing up if the person is really, really, skinny. Or at least I think so, it's one son of a bitch of a pose to clearly see in one mirror, so most of this is conjecture from the top of my head so take this with a grain of salt. Ideally use a ref.

Also boobs tend to follow the shape of the rib cage, without support they would hang from the sides, especially if the rib cage is tilted backwards. This matters when the torso inclines. The roundness of the boob is aesthetically pleasing but at the same time it's kinda not realistic, boobs shift their shape a lot since they are like two chunks of fat attached to the body.

IMO the pose isn't really great for articulating that ass, but that's an opinion. The upper portion doesn't mesh with lower part organically, it would be more natural to stretch where you get your weight on one of the hip rather then pushing your entire torso in front. I know the purpose here is to bring the ass to the viewer buuut... It's kinda on the nose, you know? Or maybe I'm just being a virgin, lel.