/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6494209
Something feels off. and I don't know what.
I want to go for a more boxy feel on the clothing, but I can't get it how I'd like. When I do the rough drawing with just 3d shapes I feel a lot closer. But when I go to try line art I feel it loses all that quality.

Any idea why? I've been trying to figure this out for a while now.