/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3222082
Face is nice but I don't like the asymmetry of the bone structure, the head is missing volume at the back, front leg is too short at the thigh/quad, the crotch is too low (saggy pants effect), his left arm is too short/you don't show the bend in the elbow and forshortening well enough

sword is pretty thin and fragile compared to the real article and miniscule compared to the dagger (what shape even is the dagger? Unclear whether it is a symmetrical commando knife or bowie knife style blade, and the hilt, guard and pommel is all kinds of fucked up

The belt's perspective and curvature is wrong, especially where it vanishes over his hip, and the shape of the buckles is all warped (i can't tell if they're ovals). The coin chain belt is all out of wack too and would instantly slide down his legs and trip him up

I know he's not idealised but if you were going to improve him, give him thinner hips (he has birthing tier, more lats and traps (the armour cuirass would give that bulk too)

his left foot is all fucked up (ankle not bendy enough, heel way too flat and far back, ball of foot and toes are in the wrong place, the sole of the shoe doesn't make any perspective sense

neck area of the plate armour is a little fucked too

I like him though, would like to see him with better colouring and less scratchy, more purposeful lines