/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2338554

I think it'd have better atmosphere if you darkened some of the values further away from the subject (guessing the intended subject is the man on the boat) and maybe with the guy waiting with the torch as a secondary focal point. Might not hurt to have that torch be more of a light source on the surroundings rather than just the guy holding it, as well. Right now a lot of stuff seems to just float there without the lighting really bringing it together.

This is a super half-assed example but it's what I mean, sans any unified lighting.