/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>5181063
>why is her ear in the first panel just a lump of flesh
I just didn't bother to draw it for some reason, I've fixed it now though.
>what is this hand abomination
>what the fuck is up with her left arm, it starts somewhere behind her back
fair

>Allthenoses:
So awhile back I decided "I want to try and aim for realism with my art" and this manifested in me trying to draw nostrils since you can always see them in real life. What you witness before you is my failed attempt at realism.

>what the fuck is up with his legs
It's an awkward angle with the cape but it actually kind of does make sense if you were to see an x-ray view

>What the fuck is up with the main chars eyes.
I'm not sure what you mean by this. I mean I know it's bad, but I'm not sure what specifically you're referring to.

>i hope you didn't trace this over some 3D model.
The horses are indeed drawn by me, but I must come clean: I made the wagon in Blender. Even the lines were generated by Blender.

Good feedback. I'll try to get better at construction.

>>5181088
Good feedback, thanks.

>>5181091
I'm gonna refine my schedule after the first issue so I can do form/anatomy studies and work on the comic in tandem. As of right now though, I'm just trying to get through the first issue as fast as possible so I can beat my deadline.