/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2153604
seems a bit sloppy. the hair, the neck, the clothes, everything. try to be more clear, use refs if needed. especially when it comes to the clothes

>>2153602
neat, but a few issues.
1. the headshape was like a wonky egg. also the chin went too far back (you could say it's too wide?)
2. pull the eyebrows slightly more to the center.
-fix the hairline and the line on the head to fit the headshape better
-made the mouth slightly smaller

i may have done a bit too much but you get the point.