/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6678211
The main issue are the arms, you chose a VERY HARD pose to draw. This guy is a fucking genius he just hung the arm around the barrel and call it a day lol that was clever >>6678333

I tried to do the hand grab as you intended, in my redraw. I think all the other options >>6678327 >>6678333 are better decisions.
I also shortened her legs a whole lot, but that's not wrong, that's your design and it is ok. It just didn't looked right in my redline so I resized her legs.

THEN, there's a whole other issue with the overall design and rendering, we can't barely discern her body shape and silhouette.I don't know where is everything. That's great camo though.
She's hot, but we can not tell. It's all lost in a mess of details.