/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2253281
The shoulder on the left is nonexistent, so you should fix that. The position of the head isn't flowing with the underlying gesture. Watch out for that, I do that a lot too. I should have stopped while constructing the face, yours needs a bit more work, so sorry about that. Its not to big of a deal, since its to stylized for you to take to much from it. I get you're going for a stylized look for your face, but I think you need to focus more on learning to construct more realistic face. It will help you make decisions on how and what to stylize if you understand how the features actually work. The gesture isn't bad, but you could push it a little more. You need to use more overlapping shapes on your legs if you're going to draw them in that perspective. Then again, I got lazy on my legs, so what do I know? Just keep drawing, try to finish this.