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>> No.3454679 [View]
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Hey guys, so I got this critique from the draw thread:
>>3454638
>Not the weeb poster but I strongly disagree here. The face was half drawn and mirrored, that's not the mark of someone who has their fundamentals down. Even with that cheat it still has a lot of problems. The nose is too close to the mouth and looks completely flat on her face. The face as a whole lacks dimension, the features don't look like they're set in a skull together due to the lack of definition of the eye sockets, cheekbones, and eyebrow ridge - obviously the cheekbones and sockets are undefined because nothing was drawn to indicate them, the problem with the eyebrows is they follow a straight line instead of curving with the ridge, missing a chance to create form. The cranium is too small and the face takes up slightly too much room on the head. It certainly isn't the worst start on a portrait I've seen but I think it's irresponsible to say it looks great. This person can still learn more.

I'm having trouble understanding how to give the face dimension? As well as tips for not relying on mirroring faces? When I draw normally, my artwork tends to lean to one side.

>> No.3454579 [View]
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How is the anatomy on this? I feel like the eyed may be to low on the face.

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