/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3891639
Your knowledge about facial features and neck anatomy is absent. Puting symbols on loomis head is just not enough to make good looking head/face.
There is too much wrong stuff here so i'm not gonna go in detail cuz its pointless for you.

You should study head planes and forms of nose, mouth and eyes. Use simple forms and recreate them at various angles.
Do it with neck too, and then study anatomy of it. Once it done go and draw some heads from life or photos. My sketch isn't perfect cuz im beginner as well, but you shuld see the differences. Keep in mind that is stylized so its not great example of what i talking about.