/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1918957

maybe start adding variation in the edges? i think the forms do sort of read but you are probably doing yourself a disservice by trying to describe even smaller plane-changes instead of sticking to the landmark-planes. since you are working opaquely (with the added difficulty of color ontop) i think it would be better to start very simple, with a very primitive shape looking head, and then gradually add forms.

i can see that you were already thinking of planes and their angle to the lightsource, it definitely shows, but a more controlled systematic process would benefit you. i think. i suck at anatomy though, just my two cents.