/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2552295
really nice, if a wee bit stiff, but like dang cool design

>>2552754
mspaint and mouse is underrated, last time my tablet broke i spent a couple months figuring it out, it's actually kinda neat, you gotta be super gestural with your lines (at least i did, hahaha)

oh, and study arms/forearms/elbows a bit more, your walf dude's arm on the left (his right) is lookin funky
also i'd heavily suggest focusing on legibility, possibly through exaggeration, i can barely tell what's going on with the whole sword handle/blade thing there (you've also created an unfortunate tangent between the end of his snout and the blade part near his head)

>>2553235
>>2553281
minor suggestion, once you've found your line, go back an clean the finding lines up jus a smidge, don't gotta go full on cleanup mode but it'd help your sketches look a bit more presentable to non-art people (if that's a thing you care about, if not then no worry, especially if you plan on inking and/or painting over)

also the way the forearm connects to the upper arm in >>2553281 is a wee bit off, look up some arm muscle charts and pay attention to how the brachioradialus/extensor carpi radali (outer forearm muscles) both extend into the upper arm and slightly overlap the bicep and brachialis (muscle between the bicep and the tricep)